讀后續(xù)寫2則：小狗幫助治療焦慮癥、帶小狗回家-2022屆高考英語寫作備考

1、讀后續(xù)寫2那么：小狗幫助治療焦慮癥,帶小狗讀后續(xù)寫：小狗幫助治療焦慮癥原題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短 文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Sally had anxiety disorder trouble that made her fail to speak in social situations. F m a nurse and use Bella to help children in my community, to bring them comfort and confidence the way only a dog can. I thou

2、ght back to the day when F d first brought Bella to the school.That morning in January, her teacher led us to a room. Sally hasn, t spoken outside her home in two years/ she told me. Her parents have taken her to doctors, but nothing has worked. A little girl stood shyly just inside the doorway. Her

3、 eyes brightened when she noticed my dog.This is Bella/ I said. She does tricks. Would you like to see?z/Sally nodded. I motioned with my hand. Bella lay down and then rolled over. Sally s eyes lit up. I showed Sally the hand signals for various commands. She was a natural with Bella, maybe because

4、she couldn, t rely on the spoken word herself. Bella sensed that and responded. Soon Sally was able to put Bella through her paces all on her own. I could see her standing taller, more sure of herself each time we met.One morning in March when she was working with Bella, I heard a tiny voice, barely

5、 a whisper, “Good dog. H Sally didnt take her eyes off Bella, but I wanted to jump for joy. Sally spoke a little more each weekz only to Bella at first, but then to me. Later, she started giving voice commands with her hand signals and her confidence rose.Nowz five-year-old Sally stood nervously in

6、front of her kindergarten class, with Bella, my trained dogz sitting calmly by her side. All the eyes of her classmates were focused on Sally. They were waiting for her to speak. It was June-only one week of school left-but they had never heard her voice. Not once.Paragraph 1:But not a word came out

7、.Paragraph 2:The next week, she told me she wanted to try again, looking up at me with determination.寫作思路分析通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章主要講了薩莉患有焦慮癥，這使她在社交場合不能 說話。作者是一名護(hù)士，用貝拉來幫助社區(qū)里的孩子們，給他們帶來撫慰和信心，只 有狗才能做到這一點(diǎn)。在小狗貝拉的幫助下，薩莉逐漸可以在社交場合說話了。一天， 在幼兒園里，大家都在等待著薩莉說話。續(xù)寫局部分為兩段，第一段開頭是：但是，薩莉一個(gè)字也沒有說出來，所以后文 應(yīng)該是講述薩莉一言不發(fā)的尷尬場景。第二段開頭是：第二

8、個(gè)星期，她抬頭堅(jiān)定地看 著我，告訴我她想再試一次。本段應(yīng)該寫薩莉再次嘗試，成功地把自己的好朋友小狗 貝拉介紹給了自己的同學(xué)們。參考范文Paragraph 1:But not a word came out. Sally had been so excited about putting on a dog show for her class. She had been quite familiar with the hand signals and had practiced for weeks. Now her eyes found mine. I nodded encouragingly.

9、 She took a deep breath and opened her mouth. Her mouth - then her whole body - seemed to close in on itself in defeat 在失敗中自我封閉.Sally stood off to the side 站至I邊去，head down. I felt awful. Sally returned to her seat, not looking at anyone, not even Bella.Paragraph 2:The next week, she told me she want

10、ed to try again, looking up at me with determination. I asked whether she was sure and suggested it would be OK if she waited till next year. She refused and insisted giving her presentation that day. Then we headed to Sally7 s classroom. The kids were sitting in a circle on the floor listening to t

11、he teacher. We walked to the front of the room. I shook Sally s hands and stepped back. For a few seconds, she stood silently, staring at her classmates. Finally she whispered, “This is Bella.” Then, a little louder with more confidence. Bella.”讀后續(xù)寫：帶小狗回家原題第二節(jié)（總分值25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完

12、整的短文。續(xù)寫的 詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。We first set eyes on Spot on a hot June afternoon in Texas. The black-and-white dog made her way to the farm where my aunt and my uncle were preparing for their outdoor wedding ceremony. Spot walked behind them all day long and made herself at home in the small farm house. At the

13、end of each day, they had to push Spot out of the front door before they left.Their attempts to find Spots owner or a new home proved fruitless, so they invited Spot to the party. Spot had a good time with the guests. And my cousin was also drawn toSpot. While my uncle and my aunt chatted with frien

14、ds and family, my cousin played with his new friend-Spot. My aunts eyes returned repeatedly to the happy scene of a kid and a dog, a natural combination.My uncles home had been a dog-free home. My cousin would get down on his knees at the dinner table, raise his arms above his head, bow up and down

15、and say, “Daddy ! Please, may we get a dog? Even that failed to change my uncle1 s mind, and he always refused firmly. So my aunt was really sad as she watched my cousin play with Spot happily.When my aunt and my uncle were sitting on the sofa and enjoying plates of beans and cookies, my uncle sudde

16、nly said something that surprised my aunt. We could live with Spot. What do you think? Hardly believing her ears, my aunt seized the moment before it vanished（消失）,“Yes!”Then they told the news to my cousin. He was really excited about the news. Hugging the dog, he repeated over and over, Spot, you r

17、e coming home with us!”Then after the party was over and the guests all left, they collected their new pet and asked my parents to send them to the airport. Rolling through the Texas countryside with hot air blowing through the open car windows, they sang along to the radio at the top of their lungs

18、, Who let the dogs out? Woof, woof, woof, woof, woof. They didnt really care who let them out. Spot would fly to their home and start a new journey soon.Paragraph 1:But it turned out that carrying Spot home was not easy.Paragraph 2:Letting my aunt and my cousin fly home first, my uncle started findi

19、ng information about cars for rent.寫作思路分析從原文得知，這是非常炎熱的德克薩斯的六月，有一只小狗不知道怎么回事來到了我們 的農(nóng)場，我的堂弟非常喜歡這只小狗，但是他的爸爸不喜歡狗，不斷請求之后，他的爸爸終 于同意養(yǎng)這只小狗。文章最后，我們送堂弟一家三口和小狗去機(jī)場，他們要回家。從給出的第一句話 “But it turned out that carrying Spot home was not easy. 可知, 小狗不能坐飛機(jī)，第一段可以解釋原因，一家人的反響，尤其是堂弟的心情。以及解決的方 案。從給出的第二句話 “Letting my aunt and

20、my cousin fly home first, my uncle started finding information about cars for rent.可知，堂弟和嬸嬸先坐飛機(jī)回家，叔叔打算租車, 然后開車帶小狗回家。第二段可以寫，叔叔租車帶小狗回家的準(zhǔn)備工作，路上的經(jīng)歷，最后 成功回家的感受，一家人的反響。參考范文Paragraph 1:But it turned out that carrying Spot home was not easy. They quickly discovered that all airlines refused to fly dogs in the hot summer. They were afraid that Spot might get hurt on the plane in such terrible weather. Hearing the news, my cousin expressed great disappointment. But a promise was a promise. Just as firmly as he had refused t