(整理)高考書面表達指導課件

1、(最新整理)高考書面表達指導2021/7/261(最新整理)高考書面表達指導2021/7/261來冬梅2015屆高考英語書面表達指導2021/7/262來冬梅2015屆高考英語書面表達指導2021/7/2622012年高考書面表達回顧 假定你是李華,從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（the internet)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。 內容主要包括： 1.自我介紹（包括英語能力）； 2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家） 3.希望獲準。2021/7/2632012年高考書面表達回顧 假定你是李華,從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（2013年高考書面表達回顧

2、 假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結（Chinese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代買，要點包括： 1.外觀（尺寸、顏色、材料） 2.象征意義 3.價格2021/7/2642013年高考書面表達回顧 假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結2014年高考書面表達回顧 一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”。請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。1.家庭；2.工作；3.業(yè)余生活。2021/7/2652014年高考書面表達回顧 一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是2015年高考書面表達2021/7/2662015年高考書面表達2021/7/266高考書面表達的題材特點題材貼近現(xiàn)實生活和學生實

3、際生活生活化學校生活求職申請環(huán)境保護人際關系興趣愛好熱點話題文娛體育旅游交通飲食健康文化習俗2021/7/267高考書面表達的題材特點題材貼近現(xiàn)實生活和學生實際生活生活化學Writing寫作水平要提高科學方法來支招follow me2021/7/268Writing寫作水平要提高科學方法來支招follow me循序漸進練寫作詞匯短語句型謀篇漂亮、地道阿來2021/7/269循序漸進練寫作詞匯阿來2021/7/2691. 這個工作很難。B. The job is quite _ .The job is quite difficult/ hard/ tough. challenging詞匯是基礎2

4、021/7/26101. 這個工作很難。B. The job is quite 2. 這個很(好）。B. The (thing) is very _The (person) is very _ clever/ bright/ smart/ handsome/ cute/intelligent/ easy- going / gentle/ . perfect/wonderful/excellent/outstanding/.2021/7/26112. 這個很(好）。B. The (thing) is 3. 我很喜歡。C. Im fond of I like very much.B. I enjo

5、y very much.D. My favorite is2021/7/26123. 我很喜歡。C. Im fond of I li4.電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。Computers are very important in our life.Computers play a very important role in our life. Computers are of great importance in our life.2021/7/26134.電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。2021/7/2611._(眾所周知)，there is a famous saying “

6、Everything depends on ones attitude”.As is known to us2. _ (我認為) , Kobe is really a super basketball star.As far as I am concerned句型是關鍵2021/7/26141._(眾所周知)，ther3. 不但而且 In London, you can _ taste delicious food _can visit some famous tourist attractions _. not onlybut as well4. 毫無疑問_China is a develo

7、ping country with a long history. There is no doubt that2021/7/26153. 不但而且 not onlybut as5.認為是重要的/必要的。I think (consider) _important / necessary to do something.6.該是的時候了。_ we took actions to protect and beautify our environment.Its high time that It 的用法不可忽視哦it2021/7/26165.認為是重要的/必要的。6.該是的時候了。Its抄改連擴抓

8、審書面表達書面表達六步法2021/7/2617抄改連擴抓審書面書面表達六步法2021/7/2617六個步驟1、審題文字信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時態(tài)2、抓要點：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句話的要點3、擴展成句：用一些簡單句、不同句型、不同句式或 高級詞匯將要點擴展成句4 連句成文：注意：主語和謂語背景（適當增加時間、地點等）邏輯關系開頭與結尾語篇銜接5、檢查修改6、規(guī)范抄寫 （單詞拼寫、大小寫、標點、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等）2021/7/2618六個步驟1、審題文字信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時態(tài)2、抓要點：大家來判斷、給分Which composition feels more attractive

9、, why?2021/7/2619大家來判斷、給分Which composition feel2021/7/26202021/7/2620漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面2021/7/2621漂亮的書寫是寫作得分的亮點影響給分的因素之一：作文的卷面20影響給分的因素之二：文中所采用的語言材料人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝A. 詞匯的選擇靈活新穎，出奇制勝；B. 句型結構運用靈活多變 ；2021/7/2622影響給分的因素之二：人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝A. 詞匯的選擇靈活新影響給分的因素之三：行文的流暢 上下貫通、一氣呵成正確而巧妙地使用好連接詞2021/7/2623影響給分的因素之三：行

10、文的流暢 上下貫通、一氣呵成2021/Tom was ordinarylooking _very popular in his school because of his kindness.but連接亦重要2021/7/2624Tom was ordinarylooking _ 高考大綱中常用的連接詞 also; besides; moreover; furthermore, in addition; what is more; but; however; though, on the other hand; on the contrary; 1. 表示遞進2. 表示轉折關系阿來2021/7/

11、2625 高考大綱中常用的連接詞1. 表示遞進2. 表示轉折關系 since; as; because (of ); so; thus; consequently; therefore; as a result; if ;on condition that ; as long as 3. 表示因果關系4. 表示條件關系阿來2021/7/26263. 表示因果關系4. 表示條件關系阿來2021/7/262 when; while; after; before; until; as soon as; 5. 表示時間關系阿來2021/7/2627 when; while; after; before

12、;above all; first(ly); second(ly); then; next ; finally; in the end in other words; that is to say; 6. 表示特定的順序關系7. 換一種方法表述阿來2021/7/2628above all; first(ly); second(l for instance; for example; like; such as; in fact; actually; as a matter of fact; to tell you the truth;8. 進行舉例說明9. 用于陳述事實阿來2021/7/262

13、98. 進行舉例說明9. 用于陳述事實阿來2021/7/262 luckily ; happily; vividly; obviously; eventually; surprisingly; consequently; “總而言之”， “總的來說”: on the whole; in short; to sum up; in general; in brief; in a word; above all;10. 其它常用到的副詞11. 對一個話題進行總結阿來2021/7/2630 luckily ; happily; vividly To rid students of the situat

14、ion, here I address some effective measures to relieve pressure. First of all, spare time for relaxation. Some music and physical activities bring you leisure. In addition, you can turn to the psychologist for help if necessary, for they can always give practical advice.學生習作一2021/7/2631 To rid stude

15、nts of the Above all, the school is no more than one mile the distance from our house, so its really convenient. Exactly speaking , Im confident that I can treat my British brother as if he were at his home. Above all Exactly speaking學生習作二學生習作三2021/7/2632 Above all, the school is no抓住要點 開門見山 完美收關適當擴

16、展文章有竅門2021/7/2633抓住要點開門見山 完美收關適當擴展文章有竅門2021/假定你是某國際學校學生李華。今年暑假將有15名英國學生來你校參加“游學”（Study Abroad）活動。學校現(xiàn)從學生中招募15個義務接待家庭。請你根據(jù)以下要點用英文給負責此項目的Mr.Dean寫一封申請信。1. 你的家庭情況；2. 你家的居住條件及與學校的距離；3. 你家作為接待家庭的優(yōu)勢。注意 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當增加情節(jié)以使行文連貫； 3. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。寫作天天練 高分有希望2021/7/2634假定你是某國際學校學生李華。今年暑假將有15名英國學生來你校要

17、點1. 家庭情況2. 居住條件3. 與學校的距離4. 優(yōu)勢(advantage)2021/7/2635要點1. 家庭情況2. 居住條件3. 與學校的距離4. 優(yōu) Dear Mr. Dean, Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. . Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua2021/7/26362021/7/2636Possible version Dear Mr. Dean, I

18、ts nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. After I consulted with my parents, my family would like to be a host family to one of them. We have the following advantages. First of all, my dad is a university teacher, and my mom is a saleswoman in

19、 a shop. We all can speak English, so it will be easy for us to communicate with our great guest. Second, we have a spare room with a washroom and shower for our guests convenience. Third, my home is within easy reach of the school, and it normally takes about 10 minutes by subway or 25 minutes by b

20、us. Whats more, my mom is good at cooking. I believe my guest will have a pleasant stay with my family. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours. Li Hua(121 words)2021/7/2637Possible version 2021/7/26371 天天“315”- 高考“ 135 ”2 背誦范文寫作復習建議阿來2021/7/2638寫作復習建議阿來2021/7/2638書面表達我最好2021/7/2639書面表達我最好2021/7/263

21、9Thank you2021/7/2640Thank you2021/7/2640 Dear Mr. Dean, Its nice to learn that 15 students from Britain will come to our school for a Study Abroad program. And Im writing to be admitted as one of the host families. Firstly, my mom is a happy housewife, so she can pick us up on time. Located not far

22、 from our school, with all conditions are fully equipped, I think our family couldnt be better for this activity. Secondly, Im outgoing and I can speak English well. So communication is not a big deal. Also, my father cooks well, which will definitely makes him or her feel at home. All in all, its t

23、he best chance that I can meet a foreigner face to face. I would appreciate it if you could offer me an honor. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua(123 words by 閆丹彤)學生習作一2021/7/2641 Dear Mr. Dean,學生習作一2021/7/假設你是李華,正在帶領來自英國某中學的交換生參觀你校的圖書館。請你根據(jù)以下要點，用英語為他們做一個簡短的介紹：1.圖書館的環(huán)境：前有花園，后有教學樓，內有各種書籍

24、、報刊雜志等；2.借閱規(guī)定：一次至多借5本，保留10天；3.開放時間：周二到周日8：30-21：30，周一閉館。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你學校的名稱。與您交流Homework2021/7/2642假設你是李華,正在帶領來自英國某中學的交換生參觀你校的圖書 Boysandgirls, MayIhaveyourattention,please?Thebuildingwearevisitingisthelibrary.Asyoucansee,infrontofthelibraryisabeautifulga

25、rdenandtheteachingbuildingisrightbehind it.Whenyougetintothelibrary,youwillseemanyshelvesfullofbooksondifferentsubjects.Therearealsonewspapers andmagazinesnearthereadingzone.Accordingtotherules,everystudentcanborrowuptofivebooks atatimeandkeepthemfor10days.Thelibraryisopen from8:30amto9:30pmfromTuesdaytoSundayand