非謂語動(dòng)詞與寫作課件

眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞(或者介詞短語等)對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換，不僅句型多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得1一、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句1．這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.→AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(過去分詞作定語)2．這是一家工廠。月產(chǎn)成千上萬輛小汽車。Thisisafactory.Itproducesthousandsofcarsamonth.→Thisisafactory,producingthousandsofcarsamonth.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)--精品--一、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句--精品--23．消防隊(duì)員及時(shí)趕到。他們對(duì)我們幫助很大。Thefirefighterscamehereintime.Theyhelpedusalot.→Thefirefighters'cominghereintimehelpedusalot.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)4．我們應(yīng)該多講英語。我們認(rèn)為這是很重要的。WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.→WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(不定式作真正賓語)--精品--3．消防隊(duì)員及時(shí)趕到。他們對(duì)我們幫助很大。--精品--35．我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平？這是個(gè)問題。HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish?Itisaquestion.→HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.(不定式短語作主語)→ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.(不定式短語作表語)--精品--5．我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平？這是個(gè)問題。--精4二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句1．這里曾有一家化肥廠，位于城市的南邊。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.→Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,pollutingtheenvironment.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中分別由which引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)定語從句，重復(fù)且單調(diào)，將第二個(gè)定語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語后，不僅表達(dá)多樣，而且言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句--精品--52．當(dāng)我們趕到校門口時(shí)，已經(jīng)8點(diǎn)了。我們見到老師時(shí)，不得不為遲到而向她道歉。

Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Whenwesawourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.→Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Seeingourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中有兩個(gè)由連詞when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，將第二個(gè)狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語后，就避免了“原句”中重復(fù)使用同類從句的問題。--精品--2．當(dāng)我們趕到校門口時(shí)，已經(jīng)8點(diǎn)了。我們見到63．我們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一門外語是必要的。同時(shí)我們也認(rèn)為，中學(xué)生掌握一門外語是可能的。Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkitpossibleforthemtomasterone.(不定式作真正賓語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中先后出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)從句，冗長(zhǎng)、累贅、難讀。而采用動(dòng)詞不定式替換第二句中的從句后，言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--3．我們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一門外語是必要的。同74．由于老師的幫助，我英語進(jìn)步了。因?yàn)槲矣⒄Z進(jìn)步了，我相信我能考上更好的大學(xué)。

Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.

→Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”兩處重復(fù)出現(xiàn)由because引導(dǎo)的從句，讀起來很別扭。換用“with＋現(xiàn)在分詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”后，讀起來給人的感覺大不一樣。--精品--4．由于老師的幫助，我英語進(jìn)步了。因?yàn)槲矣?5．為了趕上同班同學(xué)，李東不遺余力地學(xué)習(xí)。為了好好學(xué)習(xí)，他從不玩電腦游戲。LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessothathecanlearnbetter.→LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessoastolearnbetter.(不定式作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”兩處重復(fù)使用sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，換用不定式作狀語后，殊途同歸，但效果好多了。另外，此處的soastolearnbetter也可以用介詞短語withthepurposeoflearningbetter作目的狀語。--精品--5．為了趕上同班同學(xué)，李東不遺余力地學(xué)習(xí)。為9

三、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文(根據(jù)一般表達(dá)寫出該短文的高級(jí)表達(dá))北京市有大量的出租車司機(jī)，他們每天全心全意地為乘客服務(wù)，對(duì)北京市的交通發(fā)揮著重要作用。他們起早貪黑，賺錢養(yǎng)家糊口。有一次，我下車時(shí)不小心把手機(jī)忘在了車上，但當(dāng)我和司機(jī)同志聯(lián)系上之后，他立即開車把手機(jī)送到了我的家門口，讓我感動(dòng)不已。--精品--三、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文(根據(jù)一般表達(dá)寫出10一般表達(dá)：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.--精品--一般表達(dá)：--精品--11高級(jí)表達(dá)：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook.Onhearingwhathadhappened,thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome.Seeingmycellphoneagain,Iwastooexcitedtosayaword.--精品--高級(jí)表達(dá)：--精品--12Ⅰ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句1．Weweretouchedbytheteacher'swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard.______________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ididn'treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain.______________________________________________________________________________________________--精品--Ⅰ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句--精品--133．Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry.________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.__________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher.__________________________________________________________________________________________________--精品--3．Theboycametoschoollate14答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher'swords,wedecidedtoworkhard.2．Nothavingreceivedherletter,Ihadtowriteagain.3．Theboy'scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry.4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftimesoastofinishtheworkearlier.5．Seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground,Iwentovertohelpher.--精品--答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher's15Ⅱ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句1．Whenwearrivedatthecompany,wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst.Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees,wefounditwasnecessarythatweshouldlearnaforeignlanguage.→__________________，wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst.Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees,wefound__________________________________________.答案：Arrivingatthecompany;itnecessaryforustolearnaforeignlanguage--精品--Ⅱ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句--精品--162．Itookpartinthemeeting,whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.→Itookpartinthemeeting________________lastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanager____________________________yesterday.答案：heldinBeijing;comingtoourcompany--精品--2．Itookpartinthemeeting,173．Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.→____________________________________，theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.答案：Onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse--精品--3．Assoonastheysawafewpe184．Motherwenttoworkinahurry,andshedidn'thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.→Motherwenttoworkinahurry____________________.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays,__________________.答案：withouthavingbreakfast;comingbackhomeverylate--精品--4．Motherwenttoworkinahur19Ⅲ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文大城市里高樓大廈林立，房?jī)r(jià)越來越高。一方面，很多人無房居住，另一方面，大量房子卻賣不出去。不少人即使買了一套住房，恐怕也要一輩子辛辛苦苦工作來還銀行貸款。我們希望政府采取措施，關(guān)心這些收入不高的人群。--精品--Ⅲ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文--精品--20一般表達(dá)：Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities.Theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeople.Theyhavenohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyoubuyanapartment,I'mafraidyouhavetopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank.Youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife.Ihopeourgovernmenttakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthepeople.Theirincomesarelow.--精品--一般表達(dá)：--精品--21高級(jí)表達(dá)：

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities,withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday.Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyouhaveboughtanapartment,I'mafraidyouhavetotrytopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank,workingharddayandnightallyourlife.Idohopeourgovernmentcantakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblem,showinggreatconcernforthepeoplewhoseincomesarenothighenough.--精品--高級(jí)表達(dá)：T22眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得單調(diào)乏味，句子與句子之間的關(guān)系顯得松散；而文章中過多地出現(xiàn)復(fù)合句又顯得累贅，讀起來費(fèi)勁。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞(或者介詞短語等)對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換，不僅句型多樣，句子活潑，而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--眾所周知，作文中出現(xiàn)過多的簡(jiǎn)單句會(huì)讓人覺得23一、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句1．這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.→AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(過去分詞作定語)2．這是一家工廠。月產(chǎn)成千上萬輛小汽車。Thisisafactory.Itproducesthousandsofcarsamonth.→Thisisafactory,producingthousandsofcarsamonth.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)--精品--一、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句--精品--243．消防隊(duì)員及時(shí)趕到。他們對(duì)我們幫助很大。Thefirefighterscamehereintime.Theyhelpedusalot.→Thefirefighters'cominghereintimehelpedusalot.(動(dòng)名詞作主語)4．我們應(yīng)該多講英語。我們認(rèn)為這是很重要的。WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.→WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(不定式作真正賓語)--精品--3．消防隊(duì)員及時(shí)趕到。他們對(duì)我們幫助很大。--精品--255．我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平？這是個(gè)問題。HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish?Itisaquestion.→HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.(不定式短語作主語)→ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.(不定式短語作表語)--精品--5．我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平？這是個(gè)問題。--精26二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句1．這里曾有一家化肥廠，位于城市的南邊。它每天釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.→Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,pollutingtheenvironment.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中分別由which引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)定語從句，重復(fù)且單調(diào)，將第二個(gè)定語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語后，不僅表達(dá)多樣，而且言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句--精品--272．當(dāng)我們趕到校門口時(shí)，已經(jīng)8點(diǎn)了。我們見到老師時(shí)，不得不為遲到而向她道歉。

Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Whenwesawourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.→Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Seeingourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.(現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中有兩個(gè)由連詞when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，將第二個(gè)狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)換為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語后，就避免了“原句”中重復(fù)使用同類從句的問題。--精品--2．當(dāng)我們趕到校門口時(shí)，已經(jīng)8點(diǎn)了。我們見到283．我們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一門外語是必要的。同時(shí)我們也認(rèn)為，中學(xué)生掌握一門外語是可能的。Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkitpossibleforthemtomasterone.(不定式作真正賓語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”中先后出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)從句，冗長(zhǎng)、累贅、難讀。而采用動(dòng)詞不定式替換第二句中的從句后，言簡(jiǎn)意明。--精品--3．我們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一門外語是必要的。同294．由于老師的幫助，我英語進(jìn)步了。因?yàn)槲矣⒄Z進(jìn)步了，我相信我能考上更好的大學(xué)。

Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.

→Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”兩處重復(fù)出現(xiàn)由because引導(dǎo)的從句，讀起來很別扭。換用“with＋現(xiàn)在分詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”后，讀起來給人的感覺大不一樣。--精品--4．由于老師的幫助，我英語進(jìn)步了。因?yàn)槲矣?05．為了趕上同班同學(xué)，李東不遺余力地學(xué)習(xí)。為了好好學(xué)習(xí)，他從不玩電腦游戲。LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessothathecanlearnbetter.→LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessoastolearnbetter.(不定式作狀語)簡(jiǎn)析：“原句”兩處重復(fù)使用sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，換用不定式作狀語后，殊途同歸，但效果好多了。另外，此處的soastolearnbetter也可以用介詞短語withthepurposeoflearningbetter作目的狀語。--精品--5．為了趕上同班同學(xué)，李東不遺余力地學(xué)習(xí)。為31

三、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文(根據(jù)一般表達(dá)寫出該短文的高級(jí)表達(dá))北京市有大量的出租車司機(jī)，他們每天全心全意地為乘客服務(wù)，對(duì)北京市的交通發(fā)揮著重要作用。他們起早貪黑，賺錢養(yǎng)家糊口。有一次，我下車時(shí)不小心把手機(jī)忘在了車上，但當(dāng)我和司機(jī)同志聯(lián)系上之后，他立即開車把手機(jī)送到了我的家門口，讓我感動(dòng)不已。--精品--三、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換短文(根據(jù)一般表達(dá)寫出32一般表達(dá)：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.--精品--一般表達(dá)：--精品--33高級(jí)表達(dá)：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook.Onhearingwhathadhappened,thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome.Seeingmycellphoneagain,Iwastooexcitedtosayaword.--精品--高級(jí)表達(dá)：--精品--34Ⅰ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句1．Weweretouchedbytheteacher'swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard.______________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ididn'treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain.______________________________________________________________________________________________--精品--Ⅰ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡(jiǎn)單句--精品--353．Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry.________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.__________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher.__________________________________________________________________________________________________--精品--3．Theboycametoschoollate36答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher'swords,wedecidedtoworkhard.2．Nothavingreceivedherletter,Ihadtowriteagain.3．Theboy'scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry.4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftimesoastofinishtheworkearlier.5．Seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground,Iwentovertohelpher.--精品--答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher's37Ⅱ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句1．Whenwearrivedatthecompany,wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst.Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees,wefounditwasnecessarythatweshouldlearnaforeignlanguage.→__________________，wewereshownaroundtheworkshopsfirst.Whenweweretalkingtotheemployees,wefound__________________________________________.答案：Arrivingatthecompany;itnecessaryforustolearnaforeignlanguage--精品--Ⅱ.運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句--精品--382．Itookpartinthemeeting,whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.→Itookpartinthemeeting________________lastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanager____________________________yesterday.答案：heldinBeijing;comingtoourcompany--精品--2．Itookpartinthemeeting,393．Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.→____________________________________，theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.答案：Onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse--精品--3．Assoonastheysawafewpe404．Motherwenttoworkinahurry,andshedidn'thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.→Motherwenttoworkinahurry____________________.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays,__________________.答案：withouthav