Unit 3 Family Matters Developing ideas-高中英語外研版必修第一冊

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Unit3Familymatters如何寫記敘文？Lookandanswer:1Whatbroughtbacktheauthor'slovelymemory?2Whathappenedintheauthor'smemory?

3Whyisitalovelymemory?Becauseitshowsthelovebetweentheauthorandhermother.記敘文是通過對人物的描寫和對事件的敘述使讀者了解人物和事件的一種文體。內(nèi)容一般包括記敘文的六要素，即who,when,where,why,how,result。Anoldphoto.Theauthorwantedtosurprisehermotherwithhome-madescrambledeggsonhermother'sbirthday.Unluckily,theeggswereburnt,buttheyendeduplaughingaboutitandeatingthemallanyway.

明確體裁話題確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱

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Writeashortstoryaboutthismemory.首段：舊照片引出回憶中段：回憶十年前媽媽生日尾段：今年媽媽生日的期許記敘文:舊照片的回憶一般過去時(shí)為主；第一人稱為主1.一張舊照片引發(fā)回憶2.回憶往事：媽媽生日我為她做攤雞蛋失敗媽媽依然開心3.今年到來的生日我要好好做攤雞蛋remember,unforgettable,suddenly,happen,comeacross,experience,lateron;話題詞匯Someusefulexpressions敘述故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)Onmywayto.../WhenIwas...,Icameacross...Iwas...onMondaymorning.回憶往事，敘述經(jīng)過（did）LastnightIwasbusy...whenI...3.介紹故事的結(jié)果或感想（did/do/does）...isanunforgettableexperience.Ilearnedfromtheexperiencethat...Tiredasweare,westillfeltquitehappy.回憶類記敘文話題句式Thereisasmallbikelyingquietlyinourgarage.ItisquiteoldandIcannolongerrideit,butIstillkeepitthere,asitbringsbackasweetmemory.Manyyearsago,itwasaSundaymorningonmysixthbirthday.Myfatherboughtmeanewbike.Icouldnotwaittogetonitandlearnhowtoride,soIbeggedmyfathertoteachmeinthegarden.AfterIsatonthenewbike,myfatherhelpedmeputmytwohandsonthehandlebarsandmyfeetonthepedals.Sample（1）Then,hepushedthebikesothatthepedalsstartedtomove.Iwasscared!Butmyfatherkeptencouragingme.Icouldcyclearoundthegardenshortlyaftermyfirsttry.Itwasamazing.Butunluckily,IwassobusywavingathimthatIdidn'tseeasmalltreeinfrontofme.Ihititandfelloffthebike.IthurtalotandIstartedtocry.Myfatherencouragedmetostandup,bebraveandtryagain.Gradually,Iwasabletoridethebikemoreskillfully.Ikeptridingthebikeuntilitwastoosmallforme.Itisstilloneofmymostpreciouspossessions,fornotonlywasitmyfirstbike,butasymbolofmycourageaswellasmyfather'slove.AndIlearntthatlovehasgreatpower.

Sample（1）Iloveyouandthankyousomuchforeverythingyoudidforme.Thankyouforsomanyyearsofmyeducationandtraining.I'mverygratefultoyoufortakingcareofme.Inmyheartaremanybeautifulmemories.Ialwaysmadeyouangry,butyouwerealwaysveryunderstanding.WhenIwassick,youwerealwaysineverypossiblewaytakingcareofme.WhenIfailedtheexamination,youalwaysencouragedmetocheerupandnottoloseheart.Youalwaysencouragedmetohelpotherswhoareintrouble.WhenIdidgooddeeds,youwerealwaysthinkinghighlyofme.Iamreallythankfultoyouforyourteachingmehowtobe“arealperson