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GGUConsultingA.文書的種類概PS alStatement),StatementofPurposeEssays:PHS alHistoryStatement);DSStatement)CV PS：主客觀論證，說 給Essays:顯示軟實力PS的價值和作“以理服人”的情1、學習給力，優(yōu)雅過資考2、搬磚熟練，來之有貢獻 1、學習還行，學業(yè)完成2、能力優(yōu)異，順利就業(yè)B.PS的一種結(jié)構(gòu)（結(jié)構(gòu)可以很多：為什么學這個 /淵源/特殊/直接學習背科研（或者準科研）1+收科研（或者準科研）2+收實習+收課外活今后的規(guī)劃+為什么要 的項B.PS的一種結(jié)構(gòu)（學術型版：為什么學這個 /淵源/特殊/直接學習背科研（或者準科研）1+收科研（或者準科研）2+收科研（或者準科研）3+收行業(yè)insightshow研究計劃+點教授（希望跟哪幾個教授合作，為什么B.PS的一種結(jié)構(gòu)（工作型：為什么學這個 /淵源/特殊/直接學習背科研（或者 +收科研（或者實習）2+收課外活合理的職業(yè)規(guī)劃（也可以開門見山，放到第一 為什么要 的項B.PS的一種結(jié)構(gòu)（工作型，變形：為什么學這個 /淵源/特殊/直接學習背Quality1+對應的故事/論證（科研/實習 Quality2+對應的故事/論證（科研/實習 力Quality3+對應的故事/論證（科研/實習 力合理的職業(yè)規(guī)劃（也可以開門見山，放到第一 為什么要 的項B.PS ）Afteraseriesofhardandinterestingexperience,Irealizedthepowerandbeautyofstatistics.Thisshouldbethecenturyofstatistics,andI,ayoungChinesegirl,whoiseagertodosomethingtoenlarge(maybeonlyalittlebit)human’sunderstandingofthenature,decidedwithdiscretiontodevotemyfuturelife researchinthisfield.ThisiswhyIwanttoapplyforthePhDprograminXXX.B.PS ）Myfirstmotivationforhel emedicalchallengesviaelectricalengineeringcamefromthepainandhelplessnessIexperiencedwhenIwas15.Mygrandfather,whohadlivedwithusallthroughmychildhoodyears,passedawayfromcancer.Asaboy,Iwitnessedthebattlehefoughtagainstcancer.Yearsofradiationtherapyandsurgeryreducedmygrandfather,onceastrongman,toaweakbody.Icanneverforgettheimageofhimbreathingheavilyinhissleepwithbarelyanyhaironhishead.Withastrongdesiretohealpeoplewithcancer,Idecidedtodevotemyselftothestudyofelectricalengineeringandbiomedicalscience.B.PS ）IamChuanTianfromXXXXXUniversity,Beijing,China.InChinese,themeaningof“Chuan”and“Tian”aremountainsandfields,respectively.Mountainsandfieldsinspiredmyfatherwhenhewasayoungpilot,andthat’swhyhechosethisnameforme.Hehopedtothinkofhisdearsoneachtimehesawthelandscape.PerhapshedidnotforeseethathisdecisionresultedinmyindissolublebondwithGeotechnicalEngineering.B.PS ）Atthecrossroadafteralongwarming-upjourneyinnanoscience,alecturemademesettletheorientationofmyPhDresearches.ThisisafantasticlectureregardingmetamaterialsandplasmonicsmadebyProf.XXXinthe2010XXXConference,whereIwitnessedhowthenanotechnologyrealizedaRussianScientist’sdreamofnegativerefractiveindexafternearlyhalfacentury,andhowthenegativerefractiveindexmetamaterialscreatedthemagicsuperlenses,hyperlenses,opticalcloakandsub-wavelengthdevices.AfterpleasantandenlightenedcommunicationswithProf.XXXinfourdaysconference,Ideterminedtoexplorethenumeroustreasuresinthisarea.ThisiswhyBerkeleyXXXisuniqueforme:itisthelighthouseformynavigationaswellasthedreamlandIsailedB.PS ）Iwasfirstattractedtothebeautyof tativefinanceduringmysophomoreyearwhenIsawtheheadlines,"Topquantseesbrightfutureformathematicalfinanceasittacklesproblemsthrownupbythecrisis"inRiskMagazine.Followingaquantfinanceprogramheldby ,Igainedamuchdeeperappreciationofhowthe tativemethodologycanbeappliedtosolvingcommoditiestradingandriskmanagementproblems.Ihavealwayslovedthewell-definedworldof ysis,andhopetomakethatmyfuturestudyandB.學習背景例子IntensivestudyingofsciencesubjectsinhighschoolpreparedmetocompetesuccessfullyforadmissiontoXXXUniversityin2009,rankingtop10outof80000.Tofurtherenhancemytativebackground,IchosePhysics,which,thoughmandatoryforengineeringstudents, monforthoseinfinance.Igotperfectmarksinthatcourse,andtheprofessorputmeintheChinaUndergraduatePhysicsContest.Afterjustasemester’sstudyofadvancedPhysics,IwashonoredwithFirstPrize.Thoughmanyofmycoursesconcentrateoneconomicsandfinance,Imanagedtokeepanedgeovermypeersbyretainingamathematicalandscientificmindset,whichIappliedtothefinancialworld.Togetclosertomycareergoalinassetmanagement,Ineedtoadvancemyunderstandingof tativetoolsandhandlethecombinationofeconomic ysis,mathematicsandcomputersciencewhichare increasinglyvitalinthefinancialindustry.B.學習背景例子Aschemistryisoneofthemostbasicsubjectsofenvironmentalscience,Ichosechemistryasmybachelor’sdegree.DuringmytimeatXXXUniversity,Istudiedhardtobuildastrongfoundationofknowledgeandlookedforvariousopportunitiestolearnmoreaboutthefieldofenvironment.Ihavegainedalotinmycollegeyears,notonlyinacademicability,butalsoinleadership.B.學習背景例子Imyselfamastudentwhohasbenefitedfromsystematicbilingualeducation.SinceIwasinjunioroneofNanjingForeignLanguageSchool,IhavereceivedsystematicEnglisheducationandtrainingwhilealsostudyingChinese.Inaddition,majoringinEnglishLiteratureinmyundergraduatestudynotonlyallowedmetoacquiremoreexperienceinbilingualacquisitionasapractitioner,butalsolaidastrongfoundationformystudyinyourmaster’sprogramandformyfuturecareerdevelopment.B.科研經(jīng)歷例子Myfirststepintothesemiconductorworldstartedfromthephysicsarena,whereIdevelopedcapabilitiesforexploringnanoscalemechanismsthroughmicrostructurefabrication,characterizationandsimulation.Attractedbythemagicideaofemployingthechargeaswellasthespinofelectronsinsemiconductors,Idelvedintothe sofdilutedmagneticsemiconductors(DMS).Understandingtheoriginofroom-temperatureferromagnetisminGaN:MnDMSisoneofthemostchallengingproblemsinspintronics,whereamainobstacleisthelackofananoscalemagneticcharacterizingmethod.To ethisissue,Iproposedtwonewmethodsusingamagneticforcemicroscope(MFM)andanatomicforcemicroscope(AFM)toinvestigatethenanoscaleetchedartificialmicrostructuresandnaturaldislocationpitsintheGaN:Mnthinfilm.IthencreatedasimulationoftheMFMandAFMdataandconfirmedthelongrangemagneticorderinourMOCVDgrownroom-temperatureferromagneticGaN:Mn,whichexcludedmanycontroversialferromagneticoriginsinGaN:MnDMS.TherepresentativepapersubmittedtoPhysicalReviewLettersummarizedmyworkonthistopic( B.科研經(jīng)歷例子Withasolidfoundationofknowledgefromtheclassroom,IenteredthelaboratoryinmysophomoreyeartoconductresearchinthefieldofMicro-Electro-MechanicSystems(MEMS).Aftermasteringvariousfabricationmethodsincludingelectronbeamlithography(EBL)andreactiveionetching(RIE),Imadesomefunctionaldevicesandstudiedthescallopeffectindeepreactiveionetching(DRIE)bybuilding tativemodels.Throughaprocessofcontinuousoptimization,Isuccessfullyconstructedμmscalemicrofluidchannelswithmutiple100nmscalenanogridgatestocontroltheflowofthefluids.Aftercompletingthisresearch,Ireceivedaninvitationtopresentmyworkatthe9thIEEEInternationalConferenceonNano/MicroEngineeredandMolecularSystems(IEEENEMS’14).Inadditiontothis,wealsofiledaChineseInventionpatenttoprotecttheseresearchresultsbecauseofstrongpossibilityforapplyingthemintheindustry.B.科研經(jīng)歷例子AsIlearnedmoreaboutthisfield,Igraduallyrealizedthatnewmaterialswillbringrevolutionaryprogresstoourworldsomeday.Therefore,Idecidedtostepoutofthefieldoftraditionalsilicon-baseddevices,andjoinedProfessorZhongfanLiu’sgroupintheCenterforNanochemistry,aleadingresearchinstitutionfor2Dmaterialsandtopologicalinsulators(TIs)inChina.Forthisproject,Iinvestigatedtransparen basedonTIsurfacestates,whichexhibitedrobusttransportcharacteristicsbecausetheelasticbackscatteringofnonmagneticimpuritieswasprohibited.Topromotethetransmittanceaswellasthecontributionofsurfacestates,IfabricatedtopologicalinsulatorBi_2Se_3nanostructuresusingselective-areVanderWaalsepitaxywithmygroupmembers.Asaresult,lighttransmittanceinthishigh-performanceTItransparentflexibleelectrodewasimprovedby30%inabroadrangeofconditionscomparedwithourpreliminarytrials,andwasevenhigherthanITO’stransmittanceinthenear-infraredregion.Uponcompletionofthisresearch,wesubmittedourresultsforpublicationanditwasincludedinthe2013editionofAdvancedMaterials.B.科研經(jīng)歷例子Afterstudyingtheoptical,mechanical,andtransportcharacteristicsofthetopologicalinsulatorBi_2Se_3thinfilmatroomtemperature,IwasthencurioustoexploresomeoftheintrinsicqualitiesofBi_2Se_3underultra-lowtemperatures.So,inmycurrentproject,Iexploredmagneto- inaBi_2Se_3HallbardevicewithapartnerfromtheInstituteofPhysicalElectronicsinPekingUniversity.ByutilizingthenewlaboratoryskillsthatIdevelopedfrommypreviousproject,IsuccessfullypreparedasinglecrystalBi_2Se_3thinfilm,characterizeditssurfacemorphologywithatomicforcemicroscopy(AFM),fabricatedaHallbardevice,andthenmeasureditstransportcharacteristicsinultra-lowtemperatures.Tosolvethephasecoherencelengthsaturationproblem,Iusedsomeoutsidereferencesanddeterminedtheinfluencesofelectron-electroninteractionsandtheheatingeffectbycheckingtheR-TandI-Vcurves.Now,withtheweakantilocalization(WAL)andhighmagneticfielddatathatwecollectedduringultra-lowtemperatures(40mK),wehavecompletedourresearchandarepreparingtoreportourresults.B.科研經(jīng)歷例子Asa ,Ienjoyfriendlycompetition.InFebruary2013,IledtwoteammatestotakepartintheNationalCollegeMathematicalContestinModeling.Duringthiscontest,ourteamusedgraphtheorytobuildamodelforidentifyingthemostimportantprofessorfromanacademicdatabasebasedprimarilyonpeercitation.IimplementedthemodelinC++andalsonoticedthatthisapproachcouldsimilarlybeappliedtoidentifyingthemostinfluentialusersinasocialnetwork,andsincewehadtime,ourteambuiltanotherapplicationbasedonthisobservation.Becauseofourefforts,wewontheMeritoriousWinnerAward.Thisexperiencegavemeconfidenceinmymodelingskillsandsurprisinglyhelpedmeprepareformycurrentinternship.B.科研經(jīng)歷例子Tolearnmoreaboutthescientificlanguageeducationresear ethod,inJulyof2015,IwenttoXXtoworkontheWordGenerationprojectunderProfessorXX’ssupervision.ThisprojectaimedtoimproveEnglishlearningefficiencyandstudents’abilitiestouseacademiclanguagetoexpresstheirownsonsocialissues,especiallyfocusingonstudentswithbilingualbackgrounds.Duringthisexperience,Imainly yzedsyntaxuse,vocabulary,andstudents’ -takingabilitiesinessayswritteninthisteachingproject.TocontributetotheWordGenerationproject,Idiscoveredthatthisprojectplacedsignificantemphasisonlearningacademicvocabularyandlessemphasisonlearninggrammarandsentencestructures.Asaresult,duetodeficienciesingrammarknowledge,studentsexperienceddifficultiesinlinkingacademicwordstologicalthoughtswhileexpressing s.MyinsightsreceivedpraisefromProfessorXX.Thisresearchexperienceallowedmetograspbasicmethodsofeducationalstudyandenhancedmyunderstandingoffeaturesofbilingualstudents’languagecognition.Moreimportantly,influencedbytheUnitedStates’outstandingresearchcapabilitiesinliteracyresearch,Irecognizedthattherewasagreatgapbetweenmeandtheserenownedexperts,strengtheningmydeterminationtopursuefurtherstudy.B.實習經(jīng)歷例子Ibelievethattherichentrepreneurshipandbusinessexperiencesofmyundergraduateyears,particularlyintheTMTindustry,arequiteuniquewithinyourapplicantpool.AsaCo-founderofaC2Cplatformforonlinetutoringandacademicconsultancy,Ihaveadeepunderstandingofthevaluationandgrowthprocessofacompanyfromanowner’s,ratherthaninvestor’s, .Inadditiontoleadingmyowncompany,IcreatedtheStart-upClubatTsinghuaUniversityfromscratch,devotingmyselftostimulatingentrepreneurialspiritatTsinghua.Bringingtogetheracollectionofpromisingstart-upprojects,Iworkedonbuildingteamcohesion,coordinatingtheteamasawhole,handlingemergencies,maintainingacloserelationshipwiththeuniversity,andcompetingwithotherclubsforresources.Startingandmanagingbothacompanyandastudentorganizationhavetaughtmetheartofbeingaleader,acapabilitythatwillbevitaltothesuccessofmycareer.Ihopeeventuallytobearesourcefortheothermembersofyourcommunity,sharingmyfirsthandexperienceswithstudentsandteachersinyourprogram.B.實習經(jīng)歷例子Realizingthatpursuingacareerinthefinancialsectorentailsboththeoryandpractice,IchallengedmyselftotakeaninternshipattheInvestmentBankingDivisionintheheadofficeofChinaConstructionBank,oneofthelargestbanksinChinabymarketcapitalization.Duringmyinternship,IwasplacedinateaminPrivatePlacementBondsinthefixed edivision.OurteamleaderwasoncerequiredtosurveythestatusquoofPrivatePlacementBondsinChina.Hegotstuckbecausethedatawasnotinastandardformatreadilyamenableto ysisin Excel.Basedonthesourcedata,IdevelopedaC++programthatautomaticallyandaccura ytransformedthemassivedatasetintothestandardformatinasplitofasecondandclearlymarkedtheplacesformissingdatawheremanualinputwasnecessary.Theteamleaderwasdeeplyimpressedbymyproblem-solvingskills.Iwasabletorevisethecontractsandreviewthesofthebondsandclarifytherisksbehindthemusingthefinancialdata.At ofmyinternship,theteamleadersaidIwasthebestinternhehadeverseen.Moreover,mycolleaguesspokehighlyofmyquickresponseandteamwork.B.課外活動例Nevertheless,truecreativitydoesnotcomefromsciencealone;itcomesfromthecombinationofhumanityandscience.Havingnotonlyastrongcuriosityinscience,Ialsohavehumanisticcareforthepeoplearoundme.ThoughIgotthepreciouschancetostudyatXXXUniversity,Iunderstandthatmanytalentedkidsdonothavethechancetopursueeducationbecauseofpovertyorsocialbias.Withthestrongwishtodecreaseinequalityandreciprocatetosocietywithmyknowledge,Iactivelyparticipatedinthevolunteerteachingactivityformigrantchildren,spendingdaysteachingthemEnglish.ThefeelingofcontentIfeltwhenthekidsfinallylearnedhowtousethephrase,“assoonas”tomakeasentencewasnolessthanwhatIfeltwhenIlearnedthings.Ialsofelttheneedtogiveattentionandhelptooldpeoplewhosechildrenwerenotbytheirside.Therefore,IspentmytimevisitinganoldretiredprofessorofXXUniversityeveryweekend.Whensharingwithhimstoriesofmycampuslifeandcookingdinnerforhim,itfeltjustlikecaringformyowngrandfather.Varioustypesofvolunteerworkenlargedmyhorizonandletmeviewtheworldfrombroaderangles.VolunteerexperienceattheCross-StraitExchangeAssociationletmeperceivethediversityofcultureandsociety.PekingMarathon’svoluntaryservicealsoledmetofeeltherobustnessandactivenessoflife.Moreover,myinternshipinthecosmeticandpharmaceuticalindustrymademeperceivethemeaningofcaring,givingmeastrongerdesiretocreatebetterproductsforB.今后的規(guī)劃+為什么要 Throughmypreviousstudiesandresearchexperiences,Ihaveconstructedastrongbackgroundinenvironmentalengineeringaswellastheapplicationofpetroleumwork，andhavealsofosteredproficiencyinnumericalsimulationaswellasexperimentalstudies,whichwillleadmetoexcelinfutureresearch.Atthesametime,Ihavedevelopedaclearergoalandplanformyfuture:Iwishtodedicatemyselftotheresearchinthefieldofenergyengineering.Thus,IenvisiontheM.S.programinMechanicalEngineeringattheMITEnergyInitiativeasanidealplatformtofurtherextendmyknowledge.Researchonadvancedfluidmechanics,conductedbyProfessorXXXXXX,largelyoverlapswithmylong-lastinginterestsandpreviousresearchexperiences.IamalsointerestedinProfessorXXXXX’sresearchonmicrobialfuelcell.IdeeplyhopethatIwillhavetheinvaluableopportunitytopursuemygraduatestudiesattheMechanicalEngineeringDepartment.B.今后的規(guī)劃+為什么要 IplantoleverageontheMasterinFinanceprograminPrincetontorea yobjective.Princetoniswell-recognizedforitsacademicrigor.Beyondastrongemphasisoncomputationalmethods,theprogramhighlightsacomprehensiveapproachtofinance,coveringfinancialeconomics,corporatefinanceandotherareasnecessarytomycareer.Thesmallclasssizeprovides alizedlearningopportunity,inparticular,themaster’sresearchprojects,whichcanenhancemyproblem-solvingabilityinadvancedtopics.Further,thecohesivenetworkswithalumniandprofessionals,supportedbyAdvisoryCouncilandCorporateAffiliates,willoffermeauniqueadvantagebothwhenhuntingforplacementintheUSandwhenstartingmyownbusiness.IamconfidentthatIcanbuildonmy competenceandmywell-roundedexperienceinMFin,toexcelinthejobmarket,andto aleaderinthefuture.C.Essay,1、WhoamI,I=quality1+quality2+quality32、quality1+論證4、quality3+5、WhoamIWhatIamgoingtoC.Essay,C.Essay,C.Essay,C.Essay,C.Essay,C.Essay,C.Essay,軟實力v.硬實力——包括但不限于力（足球隊長、分工歸責、）道德困境——本課程的目標/主旨——通過一節(jié)課的時間，讓大家清楚地知道如何在申請中去展示自己的軟實軟實力在申請中 ——PS中的必要段落；各類Essay ——同等硬件條件下脫穎而出的籌需 關注和思考的體并不定需要高大上的背，也是把大的目的勞占己有相對言，因 力取得的成績遠如你這段歷中獲得東西么重（whichis,描述過程>描述結(jié)果）。 說服他人（理性分析的體并不定需高大的背，也是把大的目的勞占己有相對言，因 力取得的成績遠如你這段歷中獲得東西么重（whichis,描述過程>描述結(jié)果）。 方法（充分溝通說服他人（理性分析Academicandworkexperienceaside,Iamalsoabigfanofsoccerandamnowthehonoredcaptainofourschool’ssoccerteam.TheteamwasincrediblyweakwhenIfirstjoined,butovertimeIgraduallyledittosuccess,themostsignificantachievementinmylife.Hereishowithappened.AsIhaveenjoyedplayingfootballsinceIwasveryyoung,I’vedreamedaboutwinningthechampionshipintheTsinghuaAnnualSoccerCompetitionsinceIenteredtheuniversity.Tomysurprise,however,whenItriedtobuildaclassfootballteamIfoundthathardlyanyonewasreallyinterested.EventhoughIeventuallypersuadedenoughclassmatestojoinin,nooneattendedourroutinetraining.Asaresult,wewereknockedoutinthefirstroundmyfreshmanyear.Afterthisfailure,Iknewifwewantedtowinsomethinginthenextfewyears,weneededtobearealteam.AsthefamousfootballcoachBoraMilutinoviconcesaid,‘a(chǎn)ttitudeiseverything.’Ibelievedthatthemostimportantthingtodowastomakeeveryoneontheteamenjoyplayingfootballratherthantoforcethemtojointhetrainingsession.IroutinelysharedlegendarystorieslikeTheMiracleofBern,TotalFootballandRobertoBaggioonthe1994WorldCupwithmyteammates.Itriedtoshowthemthebeautyofsoccerincludingcourage,innovationanduncertaintybyorganizingFA LeaguegamewatchingpartiesonFridaynights.SteadilyIfelttheatmosphereofplayingsoccerbeingintegratedintoourschool,andoursoccerteamfinallymanagedtogettothesemi-finalroundinmysenioryearinTsinghua.Itwasahugeachievementinourschool’ history.Eventhoughwedidn’tmakeittothefinalgame,inmyteammates’regretfuleyesandcomfortingwords,Isuddenlyrealizedwehadtruly earealteam–winningthegamehad ourteam’sgoalratherthanmyownpursuit.Inalltheseyearsastheteamcaptain,Ineverusedmypowertogiveorders;insteadIsharedmyunderstandingandloveofsoccerwithmyteammates,whichultima myschool.AfterallthisIrealizedthatsometimesleadershipdoesnothavetoentailordersorpower.Instead,goodleadershipisoftenaboutsincerityandconstancyofinsistence.This mademerecognizetheimportanceofhardworkandperseverance,butalsoremindedmeoftheoverridingimpactofteamunityandspiritonagroup’ssuccess.Toachieveanythingasaleader,onemustfirstwinovertheheartsandmindsofthepeopleoneisleading.In2011,Ileda3-memberteamintheNationalUndergraduateElectronicDesignContest,whichchallengedstudentstobuildtwocarsforracingonarectangulartrack.Indesigningthesensorcircuits,thebiggestchallengeformewastofindawaytomakeacarturnprecisely90degrees.InspiredbytheGPSinsmartphones,Itriedanewwaytomakethecarturn90degreesthatnoonehadeverusedbefore–usingadigitalcompass. y,Isoondiscoveredwhynoonehadusedthismethodbefore.Althoughwetestedourcodeandcircuitscountlesstimes,thedigitalcompassjustwouldn’tworkonceitwasplacedonthecar.WewereperplexedandwealmostmissedthedeadlinebeforeIrecalledaquitefundamentalparcelofknowledgefrommyelectricalmachineryclass:partofthemotorweusedincludedapermanentmagnet,whichwouldinterferewiththemagnetometerofthedigitalcompassiftheywereplacedtooclosetogether,sothedigitalcompasscouldn’tworkonthecar.Forcedtoabandontheseeminglybrilliantideaofusingadigitalcompass,wedevelopedanewmethodofturningthecarbycontrollingthedifferencebetweentheleftwheel’samountofrotationsandthatoftherightwheelofthecar.Drawingupontheresearchliterature,wefoundoutthatthiscouldbeachievedsuccessfullybyusingaservomotorandaservomotorencoder.Sowelearnedhowtousetheservomotorquickly,builtthedrivecircuitandthesensorcircuitfortheencoderandfinallyenabledthecartoturnata90°anglebeforethedeadline.necessaryinordertoavoidsituationswherepartsworkininsolationbutnotintandem.Moreover,justaseachpartmustcometogethertoformacoherentmachine,sotoomustindividualscometogethertoformacoherentteam–teamworkandcollaborationarekeyingredientstosuccessasanengineer.為什么需要描述“失敗——如果不費吹灰之力，你就可以得到你要的一切，那么你 不會成熟和成長寫作關于“失敗”的事例的關鍵 得——我們都曾失敗過多次（不管是因為 還是客觀原因），但是我們應該感謝這一切；失敗意味著你曾經(jīng)嘗試過，而難能可貴的是你可以從錯誤中不斷學習、不斷成長。Ihavelearnedmanythingsfrommyvariousexperiences,butoneinparticulartaughtmethatstayingthepathtowardsrightcanbemoredifficultthanitWhileIwasworkingasaleaderformystart-upproject,Ilearnedthatsometimesonemustresponsibilityforthegroup,evenifitmeansabandoning alintegrity.Whenmyteamngapresentationtoshowourproject,theventurecapitalmanagersuddenlypointedoutacrucialmistakeinourdata ourteam.However,duringthismomentofcrisis,shekeptsilent.Themanagergrewirkedbyourfailuretoaccountforthemistakethathehadspotted,andtheenvironmentgrewtense.ShouldIpointouttheculprit,infrontofourpotentialinvestor?MyhonestydemandedthatIdoso,yetmyobligationtomyteamrequiredthatIkeepsilent.Afterall,speakingupmightmakethemanager wasnotunited.Andafracturedteamisariskyinvestment.FinallyIrealizedthattheonlywaytoreassurethemanagerandmoveforwardwouldbetostepupandsaythewrongdatawasmyfault.ButIhesitated.Itwasnotmyfault,whyshouldIlieonlytohurtmyself?Afterafewminutesoffreezingsilence,themanagerbecamesoangryand fortablethatherefusedtoworkwithus.IthinkthefrustrationIfeltatthattimewastheworstinmylife.IsufferedalotfromtheshamethatIfailedtotakeresponsibility.Thisunforgettableexperienceinspiredmetorecognizethatinordertoachievethegoalofateamorcompany,theremustbesomeonetotaketheresponsibility,evenifheorshemayfeelMyexperiencehastaughtmethatsometimes, ngtherightthingisfarmorecomplicatedanddifficultthanitseems.Managingthepushesandpullsofmyinnermoralityandmyteam’scollectivegoalscanbeadelicatebalance,wheresometimesthereisnoclearanswer.Lookingback,IwishthatIhadacteddifferently;butthatwishhasalsomotivatedmetomaketherightdecisionthenexttimesuchadilemmacomesaround.Nexttime,Iwillbeready,andwhenthetimecomes,Iwillact. 我安慰、自我激發(fā)、咬牙、克己甚至是突圍堅持是偉大/有意義成功的前奏，是取得成績的必要條件行文所描述的堅持，必須是在客觀條件下，按照普遍的價值觀，大多數(shù)申請者都會放棄的情況，而你選擇了繼續(xù)前進：不僅要展示自己的勇氣和精神，同樣要展示自己的自信、思辨等其他品質(zhì)，以及不斷向生活I’vehadmanychancestodelvedeeplyintotheareaofscience,butoneresearchprojectstandsoutinparticular.Thisprojectinvolvedaninvestigationofthetoxicitylevelsofrecycledwater,andhowthatinturnaffectstheenvironment,whichtaughtmeaboutpersistenceinthefaceoffailure.Thepurposeoftheresearchprojectwastoevaluatethetoxicityofsecondaryeffluentinordertodeterminereusedwater’simpactontheenvironment.First,wesurveyedtheavailablescientifi eratureonsecondaryeffluentandsettledontheuseoftheDaphniaMagna,atypeofflea,asthetoxicityindicateorganism,andwecultivatedtheorganismsforfourmonths.Beforewecouldemploythefleastotestthetoxicityofthesecondaryeffluent,however,disasterstruckwhenthefleasbegandyingindrovesforunknownreasons.Monthsofhardworkdisappearedpracticallyovernight,andwewereindangeroffailingtomeetourdeadline.Insteadofpanicking,however,Isearchedquicklyforpossiblereplacements,anddiscoveredthatwecoulduseZebrafisheggstoachievethesameresultwithoutfallingbehindschedule.Despiteoursetback,wewereabletoproceedwiththeexperime