中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作03快樂成長與思考感悟課件

PARTTHREE第三篇

寫作妙解篇話題寫作（三）

快樂成長

與思考感悟PARTTHREE第三篇寫作妙解篇話題寫作（三）快樂成1【話題點(diǎn)睛】成長的話題包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。成長話題的作文可能涉及的要點(diǎn):（1）成長過程中,家長、老師、朋友對你的關(guān)懷與幫助,以及你的感恩與感悟。（2）成長過程中遇到的煩惱與困惑。如學(xué)習(xí)緊張、考試壓力、處理同學(xué)關(guān)系、代溝等。（3）提出解決問題的方法與建議。例如,培養(yǎng)自信,樹立遠(yuǎn)大目標(biāo),多與家長、老師溝通,向身邊的朋友傾訴等。【話題點(diǎn)睛】成長的話題包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。2詞匯集錦1.煩惱類—havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetroubleindoing;feelstressed;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesbmad…2.愉悅類—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…3.行動類—express;communicatewith;invitesbto;takepartin/joinin;discusswith;encouragesbtodo;allowsbtodo;share…with…;geton/alongwellwith;growup…詞匯集錦1.煩惱類—havetoomuchhomewo3常用表達(dá)1.Weallwanttogrowhappilyandhealthily.2.You’dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadoftoomuchmeat.3.Sharingwithfriendshelpsmebringbackmyconfidence.4.It’sdifficultforustogetonwellwithourparents.5.I’mnotallowedtoplaycomputergames.6.Withyourhelp,I’vemadegreatprogressinEnglish.常用表達(dá)1.Weallwanttogrowhapp4基礎(chǔ)寫作根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子1.我最大的問題是沒有很多時間用于我的愛好。My

isthatIdon’thavemuchtime

.

2.作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會如何與他人融洽相處。Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearnhowto

.

3.每個人都有自己的做事方式,所以我們應(yīng)該相互理解。Everyonehashisownway

,soweshould

.

4.太多的家庭作業(yè)使學(xué)生對學(xué)習(xí)失去興趣,這也對他們的健康有害。Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudents

study.It’salso

.

5.當(dāng)我取得進(jìn)步時,我的父母總是很開心并且鼓勵我做得更好。WhenI

,myparentsarealwayshappyand

.

biggestproblemformyhobbiesgeton/alongwellwithotherstodothingsunderstandeachotherloseinterestinbadfor/harmfultotheirhealthmakeprogressencouragemetodobetter基礎(chǔ)寫作根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子biggestproblemf56.當(dāng)你處于困境時,你應(yīng)該向老師尋求幫助。Whenyou

,youshould

help.

7.在我看來,似乎現(xiàn)在的孩子們更依賴他們的父母了。It

methatkidstoday

theirparents.

8.放松并不是浪費(fèi)時間,畢竟生活不應(yīng)該只有學(xué)習(xí)和工作。Relaxingisn’t

.Anyway,lifeshouldn’tjust

andwork.

areintroubleaskyourteacherforseemstodependmoreonawasteoftimebeaboutstudy6.當(dāng)你處于困境時,你應(yīng)該向老師尋求幫助。areintr6典型分析伴隨著身心的日益成長,如何與父母相處是初中生必須要面對和解決的問題。假如你是YangLing,下面是一封你的筆友May給你發(fā)來的e-mail,請你根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信,與她交流看法,并幫她排憂解難。DearYangLing,I’mafraidI’vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,“Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.”“Putonmoreclothes.”“Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?”andsoon.I’mannoyed（煩惱）.WhatshallIdo?Yours,May典型分析伴隨著身心的日益成長,如何與父母相處是初中生必須要面7[提示詞語]listento,mother’slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile[寫作要求]（1）語句通順,書寫工整;（2）可用所給提示詞語,也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;（3）詞數(shù):80-100。[提示詞語]listento,mother’slov8【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn):針對來信幫May分析并解決與媽媽相處的問題。要弄清:（1）May的問題;（2）你的分析;（3）你的建議;2.時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時;3.人稱:第一人稱;4.重點(diǎn)詞匯及句型:（1）asateenager,getalongbetterwithsb,careabout,communicatewith;（2）if條件狀語從句;（3）Ihope表達(dá)自己的愿望?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】9【寫作架構(gòu)】【寫作架構(gòu)】10【佳作欣賞】DearMay,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalkstoomuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit’snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother’slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoherandbefriendlytoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother’s,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn’ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.Remember:Mumistheonewhoalwayslovesyouthebest!IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.Yours,YangLing【佳作欣賞】11【名師點(diǎn)評】1.本文是一封書信,格式正確。作為一封回信,針對來信問題有分析有建議,很全面。2.運(yùn)用了“Herearesomeideasforyou.”,順理成章地引出分析和建議。正確合理地使用了祈使句和賓語從句。【名師點(diǎn)評】12實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A

[2018·襄陽]人非圣賢,孰能無過?作為一名學(xué)生,在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中你是否也曾犯過錯誤、做過傻事?在認(rèn)識到自己所犯錯誤或明白所做的傻事后,你又是如何改正的呢?請根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示,以“TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp”為題,用英語寫一篇短文。[寫作要點(diǎn)提示]（1）簡述你犯過的一次錯誤或做過的一件傻事;（2）談?wù)勀闶侨绾卧谒说膸椭禄蜃约旱呐ο赂恼?（3）你從中吸取了哪些教訓(xùn)或收獲了哪些成長的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A[2018·襄陽]13[注意事項(xiàng)]（1）詞數(shù):90左右;（2）短文應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié),以使行文連貫;（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;（4）已給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp

[注意事項(xiàng)]14AOne

possible

version:TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUpEveryonemaymakemistakes.Mistakesmakeusgrow.Ifwelearnfromourmistakes,wewillhavelearntanothersecrettosuccess.Althoughmistakesareannoying,aslongaswefacethembravely,wewillsucceedsoonerorlater.TherewasonceatimewhenImadeamistakeinaMathsexam.Becauseofcarelessness,Ifailedtheexam.WhenIwasdepressed,itwasmyMathsteacherwhogavemeahandandtoldmethatmistakescouldalsoteachmealesson.WhatshetoldmeencouragedmetofacemyMathsproblembravely.Finally,myMathsgradesimproved.Takingmyexperienceintoconsideration,everyonecanconquertheunavoidablemistakesinourlifesolongaswehavefaithinourselves.Treasurethemistakes,andyouwillwinthetreasure.AOnepossibleversion:15B

[2017·上海]面臨困惑的時候,經(jīng)歷變化的時候,感覺挫敗的時候,遭遇逆境的時候……來自內(nèi)心的堅(jiān)持、他人的幫助、社會的關(guān)愛和科技的發(fā)展等,總能讓人常懷希望。請選取一個方面談?wù)勀愕睦斫猓山Y(jié)合自身或他人的經(jīng)歷）。[注意]短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）

Jgetoutofdifficulty

Jgive…ahand

Jneverlosehope

B[2017·上海]16BOne

possible

version:There’salwayshope

Hopeisalwaysthere,inourhearts.Justkeepitinmindandwe’llachieveallourdreamsoneday.

WhenIwasinGrade7,IalwaysdidverybadlyinMaths.AndIevengotapoorseveninaMathstest.Thatmademefeelverysad.Iwantedtogiveitupatthattime,butmyparentsandmyteachertriedtoencourageme.Theysaidtome,“Neverlosehope!Webelieveyou’llbecomethetopstudentlaterifyoudoyourbesttostudyMaths.”Ifollowedtheiradvice,andIputmyheartintoMathsallthetime.Finally,Isucceeded!NowadaysI’mconfidentinallmysubjects.

Forme,thekeytosuccessissimplebutpowerful—there’salwayshope.BOnepossibleversion:17PARTTHREE第三篇

寫作妙解篇話題寫作（三）

快樂成長

與思考感悟PARTTHREE第三篇寫作妙解篇話題寫作（三）快樂成18【話題點(diǎn)睛】成長的話題包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。成長話題的作文可能涉及的要點(diǎn):（1）成長過程中,家長、老師、朋友對你的關(guān)懷與幫助,以及你的感恩與感悟。（2）成長過程中遇到的煩惱與困惑。如學(xué)習(xí)緊張、考試壓力、處理同學(xué)關(guān)系、代溝等。（3）提出解決問題的方法與建議。例如,培養(yǎng)自信,樹立遠(yuǎn)大目標(biāo),多與家長、老師溝通,向身邊的朋友傾訴等。【話題點(diǎn)睛】成長的話題包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。19詞匯集錦1.煩惱類—havetoomuchhomework;alone;feellonely;bestrictwith;feelbored;sleepy;betiredof;nervous;worried;havetroubleindoing;feelstressed;sad;unhappy;afraid;beafraidofdoing;beafraidtodo;drivesbmad…2.愉悅類—happy;happiness;glad;excited;love;enjoy;beproudof/takepridein;bepleasedwith;amazing;becrazyabout;laugh;smile;cheer;surprise…3.行動類—express;communicatewith;invitesbto;takepartin/joinin;discusswith;encouragesbtodo;allowsbtodo;share…with…;geton/alongwellwith;growup…詞匯集錦1.煩惱類—havetoomuchhomewo20常用表達(dá)1.Weallwanttogrowhappilyandhealthily.2.You’dbettereatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadoftoomuchmeat.3.Sharingwithfriendshelpsmebringbackmyconfidence.4.It’sdifficultforustogetonwellwithourparents.5.I’mnotallowedtoplaycomputergames.6.Withyourhelp,I’vemadegreatprogressinEnglish.常用表達(dá)1.Weallwanttogrowhapp21基礎(chǔ)寫作根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子1.我最大的問題是沒有很多時間用于我的愛好。My

isthatIdon’thavemuchtime

.

2.作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會如何與他人融洽相處。Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearnhowto

.

3.每個人都有自己的做事方式,所以我們應(yīng)該相互理解。Everyonehashisownway

,soweshould

.

4.太多的家庭作業(yè)使學(xué)生對學(xué)習(xí)失去興趣,這也對他們的健康有害。Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudents

study.It’salso

.

5.當(dāng)我取得進(jìn)步時,我的父母總是很開心并且鼓勵我做得更好。WhenI

,myparentsarealwayshappyand

.

biggestproblemformyhobbiesgeton/alongwellwithotherstodothingsunderstandeachotherloseinterestinbadfor/harmfultotheirhealthmakeprogressencouragemetodobetter基礎(chǔ)寫作根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子biggestproblemf226.當(dāng)你處于困境時,你應(yīng)該向老師尋求幫助。Whenyou

,youshould

help.

7.在我看來,似乎現(xiàn)在的孩子們更依賴他們的父母了。It

methatkidstoday

theirparents.

8.放松并不是浪費(fèi)時間,畢竟生活不應(yīng)該只有學(xué)習(xí)和工作。Relaxingisn’t

.Anyway,lifeshouldn’tjust

andwork.

areintroubleaskyourteacherforseemstodependmoreonawasteoftimebeaboutstudy6.當(dāng)你處于困境時,你應(yīng)該向老師尋求幫助。areintr23典型分析伴隨著身心的日益成長,如何與父母相處是初中生必須要面對和解決的問題。假如你是YangLing,下面是一封你的筆友May給你發(fā)來的e-mail,請你根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信,與她交流看法,并幫她排憂解難。DearYangLing,I’mafraidI’vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,“Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.”“Putonmoreclothes.”“Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?”andsoon.I’mannoyed（煩惱）.WhatshallIdo?Yours,May典型分析伴隨著身心的日益成長,如何與父母相處是初中生必須要面24[提示詞語]listento,mother’slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile[寫作要求]（1）語句通順,書寫工整;（2）可用所給提示詞語,也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;（3）詞數(shù):80-100。[提示詞語]listento,mother’slov25【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn):針對來信幫May分析并解決與媽媽相處的問題。要弄清:（1）May的問題;（2）你的分析;（3）你的建議;2.時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時;3.人稱:第一人稱;4.重點(diǎn)詞匯及句型:（1）asateenager,getalongbetterwithsb,careabout,communicatewith;（2）if條件狀語從句;（3）Ihope表達(dá)自己的愿望。【思路點(diǎn)撥】26【寫作架構(gòu)】【寫作架構(gòu)】27【佳作欣賞】DearMay,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalkstoomuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit’snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother’slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoherandbefriendlytoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother’s,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn’ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.Remember:Mumistheonewhoalwayslovesyouthebest!IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.Yours,YangLing【佳作欣賞】28【名師點(diǎn)評】1.本文是一封書信,格式正確。作為一封回信,針對來信問題有分析有建議,很全面。2.運(yùn)用了“Herearesomeideasforyou.”,順理成章地引出分析和建議。正確合理地使用了祈使句和賓語從句?！久麕燑c(diǎn)評】29實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A

[2018·襄陽]人非圣賢,孰能無過?作為一名學(xué)生,在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中你是否也曾犯過錯誤、做過傻事?在認(rèn)識到自己所犯錯誤或明白所做的傻事后,你又是如何改正的呢?請根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示,以“TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp”為題,用英語寫一篇短文。[寫作要點(diǎn)提示]（1）簡述你犯過的一次錯誤或做過的一件傻事;（2）談?wù)勀闶侨绾卧谒说膸椭禄蜃约旱呐ο赂恼?（3）你從中吸取了哪些教訓(xùn)或收獲了哪些成長的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A[2018·襄陽]30[注意事項(xiàng)]（1）詞數(shù):90左右;（2）短文應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié),以使行文連貫;（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;（4）已給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp

[注意事項(xiàng)]31AOne

possible

version:TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUpEveryonemaymakemistakes.Mistakesmakeusgrow.Ifwelearnfromourmistakes,wewillhavelearntanothersecrettosuccess.Althoughmistakesareannoying,aslongaswefacethembravely,wewillsucceedsoonerorlater.TherewasonceatimewhenImadeamistakeinaMathsexam.Becauseofcarelessness,Ifailedtheexam.WhenIwasdepressed,itwasmyMathsteacherwhogavemeahandandtoldmethatmistakescouldalsoteachmealesson.WhatshetoldmeencouragedmetofacemyMathsproblembravely.Finally,myMathsgradesimproved.Takingmyexperienceintoconsideration,everyonecan