高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作(三)課件

作文高分突破概要寫作

32021屆高考英語作文高分突破2021屆高考英語1浙江省新高考英語寫作

概要寫作實(shí)例講解1

AdolescentsleepDeficit浙江省新高考英語寫作概要寫作實(shí)例講解1Adoles2Summarywritingprocess:Step1:Readforthemainideaofthewholepassage

Step2:Analyzethestructureofthewholepassage

(What'stherelationshipbetweeneachparagraph?)

Step3:Locate(確定)themainideaofeachparagraph

Keepimportantdetails/LeaveoutunimportantinformationStep4:Writethesummaryinyourownwords(language)Summarywritingprocess:Step13請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：

Mostteensneedabout8tomorethan9hoursofsleepeachnight.Therightamountofsleepisessentialforanyonewhowantstodowellintestsorsports.Andlackofsleepaffectseverythingfromaperson'sabilitytopayattentioninclasstohisorhermood.Italsodamagesteens'abilitytodotheirbestinathletics.Unfortunately,researchshowsthatmanyteensdon'tgetenoughsleep,andmorethan20%ofhighschoolstudentsfallasleepinclass.Untilrecently,teenswereoftenblamedforstayinguplate,oversleepingforschool,andfallingasleepinclass.Butrecentstudiesshowthatadolescentsleeppatternsactuallydifferfromthoseofadultsorkids.Thesestudiesshowthatduringtheteenyears,thebody’sbiologicalclockistemporarilyreset,tellingapersontofallasleeplaterandwakeuplater.Thischangemightarisefromthefactthatthebrainhormonemelatonin(褪黑素)isproducedlateratnightforteensthanitisforkidsandadults.Thiscanmakeitharderforteenstofallasleepearly.Thesechangesinthebody'sbiologicalclockareinlinewithatimewhenthey'rebusierthanever.Formostteens,thepressuretodowellinschoolismoreintensethanwhentheywerekids,andit'shardertogetbywithoutstudyinghard.Andteensalsohaveothertimedemands—everythingfromsportsandotherextracurricularactivitiestofittinginapart-timejobtosavemoneyforcollege.Earlystarttimeinsomeschoolsmayalsoplayaroleinthissleepdeficit(不足額).Teenswhofallasleepaftermidnightmaystillhavetogetupearlyforschool,meaningthattheymayonlysqueezein6or7hoursofsleepanight.Acouplehoursofmissedsleepanightmaynotseemlikeabigdeal,butcancreateanoticeablesleepdeficitovertime.請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：Mo4Mainideaofthewholepassage?

2.Thestructureofthepassage?

Teensdon'tgetenoughsleepanditsreasons.Para.1:thephenomenonofteenagers'lackofsleep

Para.3Reason2:Teens'busyschedule

Para.2Reason1:adolescentsleeppatternsPara.4Reason3:earlyschoolstarttimeMainideaofthewholepassage5Mostteensneedabout8tomorethan9hoursofsleepeachnight.Therightamountofsleepisessentialforanyonewhowantstodowellintestsorsports.Andlackofsleepaffectseverythingfromaperson'sabilitytopayattentioninclasstohisorhermood.Italsodamagesteens'abilitytodotheirbestinathletics.Unfortunately,researchshowsthatmanyteensdon'tgetenoughsleep,andmorethan20%ofhighschoolstudentsfallasleepinclass.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.1

說明：Unfortunately后的內(nèi)容是本段的主題句，第二句話是本段的主要信息。綠色的部分是次要信息，刪去。原因如下：第一句話與文章的主題“缺乏睡眠”關(guān)聯(lián)不大所以刪去；第三、四兩句是對第二句話的解釋說明，可以刪去；最后一句話的后半部分是對前半部分的支撐證據(jù)，可以省去。Tip1:在一個段落中，通常However,Unfortunately,But,Actually…等表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞后的內(nèi)容通常是為該段落的主題句。Tip2:與文章主題無關(guān)或關(guān)聯(lián)不大的信息是次要信息，概要中不涉及。Tip3:要學(xué)會分析句間關(guān)系。段落中說明或解釋的一些支撐信息一般作為次要信息，概要中不涉及。：Mostteensneedabout8tomor6第一段要點(diǎn)概括：1.睡眠缺乏的表達(dá)方式有：sleep-deprived,lackofsleep,sleepinsufficiency,sleepdeprivation,sleepdeficit,inadequatesleepSleepinsufficiencyamongteenagersisagreatthreattotheiracademicandathleticperformance.Althoughadequatesleepisveryimportanttostudyefficientlyandperformwellinsports,researchersindicatemanyteensaresufferingsleepdeficits.Researchshowsthatmanyteenagerslackenoughsleep,whichisvitaltotheiracademicsandathletics.2.段落大意可概括為:2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第一段要點(diǎn)概括：1.睡眠缺乏的表達(dá)方式有：sleep-de7Untilrecently,teenswereoftenblamedforstayinguplate,oversleepingforschool,andfallingasleepinclass.Butrecentstudiesshowthatadolescentsleeppatternsactuallydifferfromthoseofadultsorkids.Thesestudiesshowthatduringtheteenyears,thebody'sbiologicalclockistemporarilyreset,tellingapersontofallasleeplaterandwakeuplater.Thischangemightarisefromthefactthatthebrainhormonemelatoninisproducedlateratnightforteensthanitisforkidsandadults.Thiscanmakeitharderforteenstofallasleepearly.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.2

說明：紅色劃線部分為該段的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，第二句為主題句，第三句是解釋主題句的重要信息。綠色的部分是次要信息，刪去。原因如下：第一句話是例舉缺乏睡眠的具體例子，不是該段落的重點(diǎn)；最后的兩句話是對第三句話的具體說明，屬于次要信息；2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Untilrecently,teenswereoft8

第二段段落大意可概括為：Studiesindicatethisproblemisduetotheteenager'sdifferentbiologicalclock,meaningthattheyarenaturallylatesleepersandlaterisers.

Themajorreasonbehindsleepdeficitsinteenagersistheirbiologicalclock

whichcausesthemtostayuplate.Teens'varyingsleeppatternsaretheresultofchangestothebody'sbiologicalclock,makingthemnightowls.2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第二段段落大意可概括為：Studiesindicate9Thesechangesinthebody'sbiologicalclockareinlinewithatimewhenthey'rebusierthanever.Formostteens,thepressuretodowellinschoolismoreintensethanwhentheywerekids,andit'shardertogetbywithoutstudyinghard.Andteensalsohaveothertimedemands—everythingfromsportsandotherextracurricularactivitiestofittinginapart-timejobtosavemoneyforcollege.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.3

說明：紅色劃線部分為該段的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，第一句為主題句，后兩句是解釋主題句的兩點(diǎn)重要信息。綠色的部分是兩點(diǎn)重要信息的具體說明，屬于次要信息，概要寫作時無需包含進(jìn)去。

第一句的句意是：這個變化（指上一段提到的睡眠模式的變化）正好發(fā)生在他們最忙碌的時候。inlinewithatime意為“與某個時段保持了一致“2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Thesechangesinthebody'sbi10

第三段段落大意可概括為：Meanwhile,busyandchallenginghighschoollivesleavethemlesstimeforsleep.

Greaterstudypressuresandtighterschedulesdeprivethemoftheirsleeptime.Moreover,teenshavetolessentheirsleeptimetocatchupwiththeirbusyandchallengingschoollife.2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第三段段落大意可概括為：Meanwhile,busya11Earlystarttimeinsomeschoolsmayalsoplayaroleinthissleepdeficit.

Teenswhofallasleepaftermidnightmaystillhavetogetupearlyforschool,meaningthattheymayonlysqueezein6or7hoursofsleepanight.Acouplehoursofmissedsleepanightmaynotseemlikeabigdeal,butcancreateanoticeablesleepdeficitovertime.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.4

說明：紅色劃線部分為主題句綠色的部分屬于次要信息，概要寫作時無需包含進(jìn)去,原因如下：

第2句的句意基本與主題句一致，故概要寫作時無需重復(fù)；最后一句是次要的細(xì)節(jié)信息，概要寫作時可不包含。2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Earlystarttimeinsomeschoo12

第四段段落大意可概括為：Reducingsleeptimeforearlyclassesisanotherreasonfortheirsleepdeprivation.Additionally,earlymorningclassescontributetosleepdeficits.

Also,earlyschoolschedulesaddfueltoadolescentsleepinsufficiency.2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第四段段落大意可概括為：Reducingsleepti13完成概要寫作:用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~把每段的要點(diǎn)連接在一起。注意詞數(shù)，不超過80詞。通讀一遍，看要點(diǎn)之間是否獨(dú)立，內(nèi)容是否連貫，邏輯是否通順。檢查語言的表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，有無語法、拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)的錯誤。2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件完成概要寫作:用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~把每段的要點(diǎn)連接在一起。202114Possibleversion1:

Althoughadequatesleepplaysancritiricalroletostudyefficientlyandperforminsports,researchersindicatemanyteensaresufferingsleepdeficits.(要點(diǎn)1)Themajorfactorlyingbehindisthechangeofadolescentbiologicalclock,

whichcausesthemtosleeplate.

(要點(diǎn)2)

Meanwhile,busyandchallenginghighschoollifeleavesthemlesstimeforagoodsleep.(要點(diǎn)3)Earlymorningclassesarealso

toblameforitscontributiontoteens'sleeploss.(要點(diǎn)4)

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Sleepinsufficiency,

agreatthreattostudents'academicandathleticperformance,isquitecommonamongteenagers.(要點(diǎn)1)Studiesindicatethisproblemisduetoteenagers'alteredbiologicalclock,meaningthattheyarenaturallylatesleepersandlaterisers.(要點(diǎn)2)

Furthermore,morepressuretostudyandtighterschoolschedulesdeprivethemoftheirsleeptime.(要點(diǎn)3)Reducingsleeptimeforearlyclassesisanothercauseofadolescentsleepdeprivation.(要點(diǎn)4)

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2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Possibleversion2:Sleepi16Possibleversion3:

Researchesshowthatmanyteenagerslackenoughsleep,whichisvitaltotheiracademicsandathletics.(要點(diǎn)1)Thechangeofteens'bodybiologicalclockmakingteenagersnightowls,mayaccountforthisproblem.(要點(diǎn)2)Anotherreason

isthatteenshavetolessentheirsleeptimetocatchupwiththeirbusyandchallengingschoollife.(要點(diǎn)3)

Additionally,schoolearlyschedulesaddfueltoadolescentsleepinsufficiency.(要點(diǎn)4)

(63words)2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Possibleversion3:Researc17浙江省新高考英語寫作

概要寫作實(shí)例講解2

Issensitivityalwaysbeneficial?2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件浙江省新高考英語寫作概要寫作實(shí)例講解2Issen18Summarywritingprocess:Step1:Readforthemainideaofthewholepassage

Step2:Analyzethestructureofthewholepassage

(What'stherelationshipbetweeneachparagraph?)

Step3:Locate(確定)themainideaofeachparagraph

Keepimportantdetails/LeaveoutunimportantinformationStep4:Writethesummaryinyourownwords(language)2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Summarywritingprocess:Step119請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：

Sensitivityis,forthemostpart,seenasanoverallpositivehumancharacteristic.Butit'snotnecessarilyalwaysbeneficialtoanindividual.Whiletherearecertainlytimesthatbeingsensitivecanbeadvantageous,thereareothertimesinwhichbeingoverlysensitivecanabsolutelyinfluenceaperson.Sensitivepeopleareabletoseefromavarietyofperspectives.Theyalmostlivevicariously(間接感受到地)throughotherpeople'semotions,especiallywhendealingwithpeopletheytrulycareabout.Thisleadstodeeperhumanconnections,astheirlovedoneswillseehowmuchthesensitivepersonreallycaresbyhowtheyreactinagivensituation.Thereinforcementasensitivepersongivesalovedonejustbytheirresponsemakesitclearthatthepersontrulyenjoysseeingothershappy.Whenthingsaren'tgoingsowellforyourfriends,you'llfeeltheweightoftheworldonyourshoulders.Obviously,youjustwanteveryonearoundyoutobehappy---butthatwon'talwaysbethecase.Whileit'sobviouslyreasonabletobeupsetwhenyourfriendisfeeling,overlysensitivepeopleareunabletoseparatethemselvesfromthesituationandrealizethesadnessoftheirlovedonesisnottheirsadness.Sensitivepeoplepickupontheoverallmoodofaplaceoreventimmediatelyandinstantlyfindthemselvesinthatsamemood,regardlessofhowtheyfeltwhentheywalkedin.Thisallowsthemtofitintoavarietyofsocialsituations,astheyunderstandtheappropriatewaytoactwherevertheyfindthemselves.Butsometimes,thisisnotagoodthing.Sensitivepeopleareincrediblyintunewithminorfluctuations(波動)inanenvironment,sosomethingassimpleasachangeinvolumeorbrightnessinareacanhaveanegativeeffectonasensitiveperson.Whenasensitivepersonexperiencespain,it'salmostimpossibleforhim/hertoletitfallaway.2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：Sensit20Mainideaofthewholepassage?

2.Thestructureofthepassage?

Themeritsandweaknessofsensitivity.Para.1:theintroductiontothetopic:Sensitivityhasbothmeritsandweaknesses.Para.2:MeritdeepconnectionwithpeoplePara.4:MeritfitinsocialsituationquicklyPara.3:Weakness

unnecessarysufferingfortheirfriends'unhappinessPara.5:Weaknesseasilyinfluencedbythesurroundings2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Mainideaofthewholepassage21Sensitivityis,forthemostpart,seenasanoverallpositivehumancharacteristic.Butit'snotnecessarilyalwaysbeneficialtoanindividual.Whiletherearecertainlytimesthatbeingsensitivecanbeadvantageous,thereareothertimesinwhichbeingoverlysensitivecanabsolutelyinfluenceaperson.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.1

說明：紅色劃線部分是本段的主題：敏感總體被認(rèn)為是一種積極的性格特點(diǎn)，但敏感也不總是給人帶來好處。綠色的部分是對紅色劃線部分的解釋，所表達(dá)的意思基本與前面的內(nèi)容一致，無需概括到概要中。Tip1:在一個段落中，通常but后的內(nèi)容是該段落的主題。但有的時候，but或while的前后內(nèi)容會是陳述一件事情的兩個方面，那么在寫概要時，兩個方面都要涉及。Tip2:

要學(xué)會分析句間關(guān)系。如果前后兩句話表達(dá)的內(nèi)容幾乎相同，或后一句是前一句的解釋，那么概要寫作時，只要保留第一句話的內(nèi)容就可以。2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Sensitivityis,forthemostp22Sensitivitygenerallybringsbenefitstopeople,whilesometimesbeingoverlysensitivecanbeharmful.Para.1要點(diǎn)可概括為：Generallyperceivedasapositivehumanpersonality,sensitivitycanalsoaffectpeoplenegatively.Sensitivityisacomplicatedpersonality,sometimesbringingsomebadinfluencetopeopleotherthanbenefits.Sensitivitygenerallybringsb23

Sensitivepeopleareabletoseefromavarietyofperspectives.Theyalmostlivevicariously(間接感受到地)throughotherpeople'semotions,especiallywhendealingwithpeopletheytrulycareabout.Thisleadstodeeperhumanconnections,astheirlovedoneswillseehowmuchthesensitivepersonreallycaresbyhowtheyreactinagivensituation.Thereinforcementasensitivepersongivesalovedonejustbytheirresponsemakesitclearthatthepersontrulyenjoysseeingothershappy.說明：本段講述敏感的好處。紅色劃線部分是本段的主題；藍(lán)色劃線部分是解釋主題的兩點(diǎn)重要信息，即促成deeperhumanconnection的兩點(diǎn)原因：1.能多角度看問題，感受別人的情緒；2.別人能看出他們對自己的關(guān)心。綠色部分是對上一句的解釋，表達(dá)的意思基本與上一句一致，屬于次要信息。

段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.2

Sensitivepeopleareab24Sensitivepeople,withagreatsenseofempathyandsincerecareforothers,aremorelikelytoget

deeplyconnectedwithothers.Para.2要點(diǎn)可概括為：Onaninterpersonallevel,assensitivepeopleareveryunderstandingandcaring,theycanbuildstrongerbondswithothers.Itiseasierforsensitivepeopletodeepenconnectionswithothersastheycanwellunderstandothers'emotionsandreactwithgreatconcern.

Tip3:在寫概要時，需要對原句的信息進(jìn)行整合提煉。如在表達(dá)為什么敏感的人更容易與別人有deeperconnection的時候，可以把兩點(diǎn)原因進(jìn)行整合提煉，即：有同理心(empathy)及對別人的關(guān)愛(sincerecare)。Sensitivepeople,withagreat25

Whenthingsaren'tgoingsowellforyourfriends,you'llfeeltheweightoftheworldonyourshoulders.Obviously,youjustwanteveryonearoundyoutobehappy---butthatwon'talwaysbethecase.Whileit'sobviouslyreasonabletobeupsetwhenyourfriendisfeelingdownandyou'redoingyourbesttohelpthemoutofthesadness,overlysensitivepeopleareunabletoseparatethemselvesfromthesituationandrealizethesadnessoftheirlovedonesisnottheirsadness.說明：本段講述敏感的害處。紅色劃線部分是本段的主題，藍(lán)色部分是對主題的進(jìn)一步說明：敏感的人會承受巨大的壓力，且不能從別人的負(fù)面情緒中抽身；

綠色部分的內(nèi)容是次要信息，無需概括到概要中。

段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.3

Whenthingsaren'tgoings26Meanwhile,theymayalsoeasilytaketheirfriends'negativeemotionspersonallyandthereforesufferunnecessarily.Para.3要點(diǎn)可概括為：Nevertheless,theymayfeelresponsiblefortheirfriends'negativeemotionsandeasilygetdrownedinthosebadmoods.However,theyaremorelikelytobeburdenedwithnegativemoodsfromotherpeople,andworsestill,hardtogetthemselvesoutofthebadfeelings.Meanwhile,theymayalsoeasil27

Sensitivepeoplepickupontheoverallmoodofaplaceoreventimmediatelyandinstantlyfindthemselvesinthatsamemood,regardlessofhowtheyfeltwhentheywalkedin.Thisallowsthemtofitintoavarietyofsocialsituations,astheyunderstandtheappropriatewaytoactwherevertheyfindthemselves.說明：本段的結(jié)構(gòu)與第二段的結(jié)構(gòu)一致，講述敏感的另一好處。紅色劃線部分是本段的主題；藍(lán)色劃線部分是解釋主題的兩點(diǎn)重要信息，即敏感的人容易fitindifferentsocialsituations兩點(diǎn)原因：①quicklypickupamoodofaplace②knowhowtoactaccordingly段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.4

Sensitivepeoplepickup28Sensitivityenablespeopletoperceivetheemotionalatmosphereofasocialsetting,andthustoblendineasilywithproperact.Para.4要點(diǎn)可概括為：Bybehavingappropriatelywithagreatsenseofcertainatmosphereofasocialplace,sensitivepeoplearemoreadaptivetodifferentsituations.Thankstotheirquickcomprehensionoftheatmosphereandproperbehavior,sensitivepeoplecaneasilygetadjustedtodifferent

socialoccasions.Sensitivityenablespeopleto29Butsometimes,thisisnotagoodthing.Sensitivepeopleareincrediblyintunewithminorfluctuations(波動)inanenvironment,sosomethingassimpleasachangeinvolumeorbrightnessinareacanhaveanegativeeffectonasensitiveperson.Whenasensitivepersonexperiencespain,it'salmostimpossibleforhim/hertoletitfallaway.說明：紅色劃線部分是本段的主題。藍(lán)色劃線部分是解釋主題的重要信息。第二句話是并列句，前半部分表原因，后半部分是不良的后果，故后半部分是主要信息。最后一句話是對主題的進(jìn)一步說明，也是主要信息，概要中要提及。段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.5

Butsometimes,thisisnotag30However,theymayalsooverreacttoaslightchangeintheenvironmentandhavedifficultygettingoverthepainitcauses.Para.4要點(diǎn)可概括為：Meanwhile,theyareoverlysensitivetoevenminorchangesaroundthemandunnecessarilyimposethemselvesintobadmoods,stuckinpain.Unfortunately,someslightchangescanleadtotheirnegativeemotionsandtheymayfindthemselvestrappedinthosebadmoods,unabletoletitgo.However,theymayalsooverrea31最后完成概要寫作:用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~把每段的要點(diǎn)連接在一起。注意詞數(shù)，不超過80詞。通讀一遍，看要點(diǎn)之間是否獨(dú)立，內(nèi)容是否連貫，邏輯是否通順。檢查語言的表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，有無語法、拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)的錯誤。最后完成概要寫作:用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~把每段的要點(diǎn)連接在一起。32

Sensitivityisacomplicatedpersonalitywithmeritsandweaknesses.(要點(diǎn)1)Interpersonally,assensitivepeopleareunderstandingandcaring,theycanbuildstrongerbondswithothers.(要點(diǎn)2)However,theymayalsoeasilytaketheirfriends'negativeemotionspersonallyandthereforesufferunnecessarily.(要點(diǎn)3)Meanwhile,sensitivityenablespeopletoquicklyperceivetheatmosphereofasocialsetting,andthustoblendineasilywithproperact.(要點(diǎn)4)Unfortunately,someslightchangesaroundthemmaycausetheirlastingnegativefeelings.(要點(diǎn)5)

(73words)Possibleversion1:Sensitivityisacomplicate33

Generallyperceivedasapositivepersonality,sensitivitycanalsoaffectpeoplenegatively.(要點(diǎn)1)Sensitivepeople,withtheirempathyandsincerecareforothers,candeeplyconnectthemselveswithothers.(要點(diǎn)2)However,theymayalsobeunnecessarilyburdenedwiththeirfriends'negativeemotions.(要點(diǎn)3)Thankstotheirquickcomprehensionoftheatmosphereofaplace,sensitivepeoplegetwelladjustedtodifferentsocialoccasions.(要點(diǎn)4)Buttheymayalsooverreacttoaslightchangeintheenvironmentandhavedifficultygettingoverthepain.(要點(diǎn)5)

(76words)Possibleversion2:Generallyperceivedasap34Sensitivitysometimesbringsbadinfluencetopeopleotherthanbenefits.(要點(diǎn)1)Sensitivepeoplecanbondwithothersastheycanwellunderstandothers'emotionsandreactwithgreatconcern.(要點(diǎn)2)However,theymayfeelresponsiblefortheirfriends'negativeemotionsandsufferaswell.(要點(diǎn)3)Meanwhile,capableofsensingtheatmosphereofaplace,sensitivepeoplearemoreadaptivetodifferentsocialsettings.(要點(diǎn)4)Unfortunately,theirsensitivitytoevenminorchangesmayalsocauseunnecessarybadmoods,leavingtheminpain.(要點(diǎn)5)(76words)Possibleversion3:Sensitivitysometimesbrin35作文高分突破概要寫作

32021屆高考英語作文高分突破2021屆高考英語36浙江省新高考英語寫作

概要寫作實(shí)例講解1

AdolescentsleepDeficit浙江省新高考英語寫作概要寫作實(shí)例講解1Adoles37Summarywritingprocess:Step1:Readforthemainideaofthewholepassage

Step2:Analyzethestructureofthewholepassage

(What'stherelationshipbetweeneachparagraph?)

Step3:Locate(確定)themainideaofeachparagraph

Keepimportantdetails/LeaveoutunimportantinformationStep4:Writethesummaryinyourownwords(language)Summarywritingprocess:Step138請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：

Mostteensneedabout8tomorethan9hoursofsleepeachnight.Therightamountofsleepisessentialforanyonewhowantstodowellintestsorsports.Andlackofsleepaffectseverythingfromaperson'sabilitytopayattentioninclasstohisorhermood.Italsodamagesteens'abilitytodotheirbestinathletics.Unfortunately,researchshowsthatmanyteensdon'tgetenoughsleep,andmorethan20%ofhighschoolstudentsfallasleepinclass.Untilrecently,teenswereoftenblamedforstayinguplate,oversleepingforschool,andfallingasleepinclass.Butrecentstudiesshowthatadolescentsleeppatternsactuallydifferfromthoseofadultsorkids.Thesestudiesshowthatduringtheteenyears,thebody’sbiologicalclockistemporarilyreset,tellingapersontofallasleeplaterandwakeuplater.Thischangemightarisefromthefactthatthebrainhormonemelatonin(褪黑素)isproducedlateratnightforteensthanitisforkidsandadults.Thiscanmakeitharderforteenstofallasleepearly.Thesechangesinthebody'sbiologicalclockareinlinewithatimewhenthey'rebusierthanever.Formostteens,thepressuretodowellinschoolismoreintensethanwhentheywerekids,andit'shardertogetbywithoutstudyinghard.Andteensalsohaveothertimedemands—everythingfromsportsandotherextracurricularactivitiestofittinginapart-timejobtosavemoneyforcollege.Earlystarttimeinsomeschoolsmayalsoplayaroleinthissleepdeficit(不足額).Teenswhofallasleepaftermidnightmaystillhavetogetupearlyforschool,meaningthattheymayonlysqueezein6or7hoursofsleepanight.Acouplehoursofmissedsleepanightmaynotseemlikeabigdeal,butcancreateanoticeablesleepdeficitovertime.請閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：Mo39Mainideaofthewholepassage?

2.Thestructureofthepassage?

Teensdon'tgetenoughsleepanditsreasons.Para.1:thephenomenonofteenagers'lackofsleep

Para.3Reason2:Teens'busyschedule

Para.2Reason1:adolescentsleeppatternsPara.4Reason3:earlyschoolstarttimeMainideaofthewholepassage40Mostteensneedabout8tomorethan9hoursofsleepeachnight.Therightamountofsleepisessentialforanyonewhowantstodowellintestsorsports.Andlackofsleepaffectseverythingfromaperson'sabilitytopayattentioninclasstohisorhermood.Italsodamagesteens'abilitytodotheirbestinathletics.Unfortunately,researchshowsthatmanyteensdon'tgetenoughsleep,andmorethan20%ofhighschoolstudentsfallasleepinclass.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.1

說明：Unfortunately后的內(nèi)容是本段的主題句，第二句話是本段的主要信息。綠色的部分是次要信息，刪去。原因如下：第一句話與文章的主題“缺乏睡眠”關(guān)聯(lián)不大所以刪去；第三、四兩句是對第二句話的解釋說明，可以刪去；最后一句話的后半部分是對前半部分的支撐證據(jù)，可以省去。Tip1:在一個段落中，通常However,Unfortunately,But,Actually…等表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞后的內(nèi)容通常是為該段落的主題句。Tip2:與文章主題無關(guān)或關(guān)聯(lián)不大的信息是次要信息，概要中不涉及。Tip3:要學(xué)會分析句間關(guān)系。段落中說明或解釋的一些支撐信息一般作為次要信息，概要中不涉及。：Mostteensneedabout8tomor41第一段要點(diǎn)概括：1.睡眠缺乏的表達(dá)方式有：sleep-deprived,lackofsleep,sleepinsufficiency,sleepdeprivation,sleepdeficit,inadequatesleepSleepinsufficiencyamongteenagersisagreatthreattotheiracademicandathleticperformance.Althoughadequatesleepisveryimportanttostudyefficientlyandperformwellinsports,researchersindicatemanyteensaresufferingsleepdeficits.Researchshowsthatmanyteenagerslackenoughsleep,whichisvitaltotheiracademicsandathletics.2.段落大意可概括為:2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第一段要點(diǎn)概括：1.睡眠缺乏的表達(dá)方式有：sleep-de42Untilrecently,teenswereoftenblamedforstayinguplate,oversleepingforschool,andfallingasleepinclass.Butrecentstudiesshowthatadolescentsleeppatternsactuallydifferfromthoseofadultsorkids.Thesestudiesshowthatduringtheteenyears,thebody'sbiologicalclockistemporarilyreset,tellingapersontofallasleeplaterandwakeuplater.Thischangemightarisefromthefactthatthebrainhormonemelatoninisproducedlateratnightforteensthanitisforkidsandadults.Thiscanmakeitharderforteenstofallasleepearly.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.2

說明：紅色劃線部分為該段的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，第二句為主題句，第三句是解釋主題句的重要信息。綠色的部分是次要信息，刪去。原因如下：第一句話是例舉缺乏睡眠的具體例子，不是該段落的重點(diǎn)；最后的兩句話是對第三句話的具體說明，屬于次要信息；2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件Untilrecently,teenswereoft43

第二段段落大意可概括為：Studiesindicatethisproblemisduetotheteenager'sdifferentbiologicalclock,meaningthattheyarenaturallylatesleepersandlaterisers.

Themajorreasonbehindsleepdeficitsinteenagersistheirbiologicalclock

whichcausesthemtostayuplate.Teens'varyingsleeppatternsaretheresultofchangestothebody'sbiologicalclock,makingthemnightowls.2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件2021屆高考英語作文高分突破概要寫作（三）課件第二段段落大意可概括為：Studiesindicate44Thesechangesinthebody'sbiologicalclockareinlinewithatimewhenthey'rebusierthanever.Formostteens,thepressuretodowellinschoolismoreintensethanwhentheywerekids,andit'shard