考研英語作文三段寫作技巧三

名人代言的非模板式表達(dá):第二段Obviously,themessagethepicturetriestoconveyisthatcelebrityendorsementcouldbringaboutpotentialproblemsdespiteitsmanyadvantages.Thatis,withoutregulations,itcouldbeusedbythosewithbadintentionstotrickpeopleintobuyingcommoditiesthatareeitherpoorinqualityorharmfultopeople'shealth.第三段Withcelebrityendorsementincreasinglyusedbycompaniesandmanufacturesinoursocietytopromotetheirproducts,we,ascustomers,shouldalwayskeepaclearmindandmakesensibledecisions.Meanwhile,itisalsoourgovernment'sresponsibilitytomakelawsandregulationsforcelebrityendorsementtoensuretherightsofcustomersandcreateasafeandsoundenvironmentforthedevelopmentofadvertisingbusiness.“個(gè)人能力和質(zhì)量”的寫作步驟某種質(zhì)量對(duì)成功很重要:可能出現(xiàn)的主題辭:1.順境與窘境(FavorableCircumstancesandadverseCircumstances)2.勤勞(hardworking,diligence,painstakingefforts3.慎重(prudenceanddetermination4.堅(jiān)持/毅力(perseverancepersistence,determination)5.熱忱和樂觀(enthusiasmandoptimism)6.博學(xué)和求知(learnednessandseekingknowledge/pursuitofknowledge)7.活力(vitality8.身強(qiáng)體壯充滿活力(burstingwithvitalityandgoodhealth9.獨(dú)立(independence)10.感恩(gratitude,gratification)11.創(chuàng)新(creation,innovation,criticalmind,criticalthinking)12.鼓舞(encouragement)13.真摯(sincerity)14.寬容(humanity,love,understandingandtolerance)15.白滿和謙虛(Beingself-satisfiedandbeingmodest)16.英勇(courageandbravery17.敬業(yè)精神(professionaldedicationandprofessionalethics)18.業(yè)務(wù)水平(competence19.磨難(sufferingandhardship)第二段的寫作:…第一句:…Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwithcreationorinnovationwhenitcomestothecultivationofindividualcharacteristics./forthepersonalgrowth.或許:Theauthorofthepictureattemptstoconveywithacertainamountofconfirmationthedistinctlyclearmessagethatthespiritofcreationseemstounderliealmostallhumansuccesses.或許Thishumanqualityispartandparceltothepersonalgrowthanditsabsencewilldefinitelyleadtoone'spoorperformanceandlowerachievement.…第二句:…Putitanotherway,withoutit,onecouldhardly/barelytastevictory/achievetheirgoal.或許:Putitanotherway,theadventurespiritisakeyingredientofthemodernrecipetosuccess,eitherforindividualsorforanation.或許:Tobesure,withoutthecouragetoengageinunknownjourneyandtoembraceunexpecteddetoursorsetbacks,wewouldhavenoanyadvancetospeakof.Fairlyspeaking,peopleororganizationbeingabletodothenextbigthingmusthavethisurgetotakeontheunfamiliarorunexpectedroute.And,adventurespirit,whichthispicturehighlighted,indeedconstitutesoneofthewheelsonwhichhumansocietyevolves.…第三句:…Dueattentiontothisqualityisattachedbyindividualsandeventhewholesociety.或許Onmypersonallevel,independenceistrulythefundamentalattributeoftopperformers,whichseparatethehighachieversfromtherestofthepack.或許:Inourera,also,thisqualitymakessomeoutstandingcompaniesorpeoplestandout.…第四句…Peoplewithspiritofindependencecannotonlyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.或許舉例:谷歌有名的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)企業(yè)依賴其不行匹敵的產(chǎn)品獲取了一系列優(yōu)秀的成就。正是冒險(xiǎn)精神使這個(gè)公司為其股東和民眾創(chuàng)建了巨大的價(jià)值。換句話講:假如沒有創(chuàng)建精神谷歌是不行能獲取這些優(yōu)秀的成就。曼德拉的例子版本一曼德拉一位巨人和偉大的英豪因?yàn)樯钚湃松缺粴埲痰年P(guān)押了27年最后把白己的祖國(guó)改造成了一個(gè)開放的社會(huì)能夠說是世界上最有說服力的對(duì)于堅(jiān)毅意志的例了他用他一世的經(jīng)歷告訴我們:不論什么時(shí)候不論在哪里不論怎樣面對(duì)挫折時(shí)的剛毅和面對(duì)夢(mèng)想的執(zhí)著都是通向成功的重要原則版本二NelsonMandela,oneofthemostrecognizableAfricannamesinhistory,wasamanpossessingunmatchedcapabilitytoendureandtoforbear.Heinsistedonloveandforgivenessdespiteofhavingbeenputbehindbarsfor27yearsforhisunwaveringbeliefinhumanequality.Hislifeperfectlyillustratestheimportanceoffortitudeandperseveranceinachievinggoalsanddreams.曼德拉歷史上被人記著的最出名的非洲名字擁有無可匹敵的忍受能力。只管因?yàn)樯钚湃松榷魂P(guān)押了27年卻深信愛和寬容。他的生命完滿的證了然剛毅和執(zhí)著在實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)和夢(mèng)想中的重要性。馬云的例子版本一:13.ThesuccessstoryofMaYun,founderofChina'sonlinetradingempire--Alibaba,bestillustratestheimportanceofinnovationinrealizingpersonalambitionandcreatingvalueforthesociety馬云中國(guó)電了商務(wù)帝國(guó)阿里巴巴的首創(chuàng)人阿里巴巴的年銷售額已經(jīng)達(dá)到白億他的成功故事完滿的例證了在實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人理想和為社會(huì)創(chuàng)建價(jià)值時(shí)創(chuàng)新的重要性。版本二:14.MaYun}thecreatorofTaobao,whomakesthemostprofitabledayfore-commerceintheworld一Singles'Day,bestillustratestheimportanceofinnovationinrealizingpersonalambitionandcreatingvalueforanation.馬云淘寶網(wǎng)這類嶄新的B2C商業(yè)模式的創(chuàng)新者創(chuàng)始了全世界互聯(lián)網(wǎng)收益最高的網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物節(jié):雙十一他完滿地例證了在實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人理想和為社會(huì)創(chuàng)建價(jià)值時(shí)創(chuàng)新的重要性。Hisincredibleachievementsoriginatingfromthecriticalthinkingevenpoliticalheadsbothdomesticandabroad:LiKeqiang,theChinesepremier,attractsattentionwasreportedtoconversationwithhimandmorecompanyinUK.recently,BritishPrimeMinisterCamerontriedtoconvinceandcuriosityofhaveheldclosehimtolisthiscompanyinUK.他那些源白于創(chuàng)新思想的成就甚至惹起了國(guó)內(nèi)外政治領(lǐng)袖的好奇和關(guān)注。據(jù)報(bào)導(dǎo)中國(guó)總理李克強(qiáng)都和他有親近的談話。近來甚至英國(guó)首相都試試著說服他到英國(guó)開企業(yè)?！詈笠痪洹璉notherwords,weretherenothespiritofihdepehdehce,wewouldnevertastetherealhappinessofthesuccessfullife.換句話講假如沒有獨(dú)立的精神我們就不行能獲取成功的愉悅。第三段的寫作:(超級(jí)無敵崇高結(jié)束段)Thepicture,tosomedegree,makesusreflecttheconventionalsuccessandenlightensustowonderthemeaningoflifeanditspermanentspiritualvalues.Thespiritofindependenceiswidelyacknowledgedastheessentialtraitthatwillentitleusnotonlythematerialwealthorrankofpowerbutalsothewaytomakelifemeaningful.So,thesurestwaytohaveameaningful,happylifeistosetgoalsmatteringtousandtotheworldandcommitourselvestostrivingforitwiththisquality.從某種程度上講這幅圖畫使我們?nèi)シ词鹘y(tǒng)的成功啟迪我們?nèi)パ芯可囊饬x和那些永久的精神價(jià)值。獨(dú)立的精神是一種一定的質(zhì)量能使我們不單能夠獲取物質(zhì)財(cái)產(chǎn)和權(quán)力還可以讓我們找到使生命更存心義的道路。因此獲取幸福和充滿意義的生活的最靠譜的方式就是找到對(duì)白己和對(duì)這個(gè)世界都重要的目標(biāo)在這類精神的陪伴下白己不停地努力。版本二:Toalargeextent,wearecompelledbythisdrawingtoreflectontheconventionalsuccessesthattakeupaninappropriatelylargeshareofourenergyandtime.Itinspiresustoexploretherealessenceoflifeandtoderiveguidancefromtheever-lastingmoralvaluesthattrulymatter.Thisdrawing,inaway,enlightensusonthelimitsofoldbeliefsofsuccess,whichcarriesmuchlessvaluethantheimmortalvaluesthatindeedcarriesweighttoaman'slife.從某種程度上講這幅圖畫使我們?nèi)シ词鹘y(tǒng)的成功啟迪我們?nèi)パ芯可囊饬x和那些永久的精神價(jià)值。版本三:…第一句:…任何能真實(shí)獲取幸福的人都一定擁有這類精神這類精神不單能產(chǎn)生物質(zhì)財(cái)富和一般意義的成功而且能讓我們獲取真實(shí)的存心義的人生。15…第二句:…因此我們一定記著:獲取幸福和