考研英語(yǔ)沖刺作文部分

沖刺作文部分

1.歷年考試主要涉及一些generaltopics,如愛(ài)心(2001)、成長(zhǎng)(2003)、

代溝(1992)、友誼(1994)、家庭(2005)、承諾(1998)、崇拜(2006)、

健康(1996)、資源利用(2000)、文化交流(2002)等話題?？忌孕∫?jiàn)大,

從圖片細(xì)節(jié)中提煉升華出大型宏觀主題加以議論，分析原因、利弊并得出建議。

命題中的圖片和圖表往往是單個(gè)或局部情況，但只追逐個(gè)別現(xiàn)象，分析就沒(méi)有了

深度，往往要追溯到總體情況。即使2006年考題圖畫中有英國(guó)球星Beckham的

發(fā)型,也要升華到對(duì)普遍的偶像崇拜(idolworship)現(xiàn)象的評(píng)價(jià)，而非僅僅針

對(duì)Beckham個(gè)人。命題從來(lái)不在個(gè)別事件、具體環(huán)節(jié)或細(xì)枝末節(jié)上做文章，決不

會(huì)細(xì)到介紹北京經(jīng)濟(jì)適用房建設(shè)情況或點(diǎn)評(píng)《滿城盡帶黃金價(jià)》。

2.內(nèi)容貼近日常生活和簡(jiǎn)單社會(huì)常識(shí)：

考題要顧及到全國(guó)考生的知識(shí)水平，不同專業(yè)考生的知識(shí)共性，不可能考察太專

業(yè)或太偏的話題。所以內(nèi)容以個(gè)人生活體驗(yàn)為主，如愛(ài)心、成長(zhǎng)、友誼、養(yǎng)老、

健康等等；稍微復(fù)雜一點(diǎn)的話題如環(huán)保、保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物、文化交流也只需要考生

大致地通過(guò)常識(shí)進(jìn)行判斷、分析和點(diǎn)評(píng)，點(diǎn)到為止就可以，關(guān)鍵要在語(yǔ)言的精確

度和精彩度上下工夫。大作文寫作時(shí)間只有30-40分鐘，不可能象論文一樣挖

掘詳細(xì)的數(shù)據(jù)、考證具體年代地點(diǎn)或提出標(biāo)新立異的思想。2000年“世界商業(yè)

捕魚簡(jiǎn)史”命題有點(diǎn)難度，但考生無(wú)須關(guān)注商業(yè)捕魚的歷史變遷和具體現(xiàn)狀，不

用借助數(shù)據(jù)或案例，只對(duì)兩張圖片中魚群的多少進(jìn)行大致對(duì)比，并指出人類過(guò)度

開發(fā)資源的問(wèn)題就到位了。160-200字的字?jǐn)?shù)限制也只能讓考生分析到一般深

3t考生的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度要走經(jīng)過(guò)設(shè)計(jì)的“主流”路線：

圖畫作文和圖表作文的主旨好像是個(gè)謎語(yǔ)，命題人已經(jīng)把自己的觀點(diǎn)傾向濃縮到

了圖片中，通過(guò)圖畫圖表來(lái)使主旨模糊化，需要考生在5分鐘內(nèi)審題，進(jìn)行常

識(shí)判斷并加以破解。主旨往往具有“positive”的傾向，考生需要在圖畫寓意中

發(fā)現(xiàn)哲理或是思考問(wèn)題的積極解決方案。絕不可能向國(guó)外考試那樣，學(xué)生可以通

過(guò)腦筋急轉(zhuǎn)彎給出另類的觀點(diǎn)。在構(gòu)思的時(shí)候往往要走‘‘主流”路線，才能提供

符合命題人思路的正確觀點(diǎn)，從而順利得分。考生準(zhǔn)備了一年英語(yǔ)，不可能憑借

奇思異想過(guò)度冒險(xiǎn)。例如：2001年“愛(ài)心是一盞燈”話題，考生通過(guò)構(gòu)思要得

出助人為樂(lè)的判斷，如果考生論證出要對(duì)自己有愛(ài)心，為了個(gè)人利益而不顧他人,

必然按跑題處理。2004年“終點(diǎn)又是新的起點(diǎn)”，考生必須破解出堅(jiān)持不懈、

發(fā)展與進(jìn)步的主旨。如果考生持個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為終點(diǎn)不一定是新的起點(diǎn)，并加以

論證，這樣的寫作注定要失敗，因?yàn)檫`背了命題人的初衷。2005年考題主旨是

養(yǎng)老，如果考生認(rèn)為父母都要象美國(guó)老年人那樣獨(dú)立生活，不依賴子女，這種嶄

新的觀念是不會(huì)被考官接受的。2006年偶像崇拜主題，考生要以成熟的主流心

態(tài)，寫出'擇其優(yōu)而學(xué)之，避免盲目崇拜’的觀點(diǎn)，如果考生持認(rèn)為花300元

理個(gè)小貝頭很值，展現(xiàn)個(gè)性，結(jié)果就會(huì)由于“不懂事，不明事理”而被閱卷老師

以跑題處理。

4.命題不會(huì)涉及時(shí)事政治或敏感話題：

正是因?yàn)槿粘Ｉ钤掝}容易判斷是非，所以考官盡量通過(guò)主旨濃縮來(lái)讓考生進(jìn)行

猜謎。而時(shí)事政治話題錯(cuò)綜復(fù)雜，是非曲直一時(shí)難以斷定，觀點(diǎn)傾向缺乏普遍共

識(shí)，不方便作為考題，否則爭(zhēng)議不斷，難為了命題人和閱卷者。敏感的話題還怕

冒政治傾向錯(cuò)誤的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，更不會(huì)讓考生去亂發(fā)議論。最近考生在網(wǎng)站上猜測(cè)考題,

居然猜向了伊朗朝鮮核試驗(yàn)、聯(lián)合國(guó)秘書長(zhǎng)改選、泰國(guó)政變、天下圍攻陳水扁、

處決薩達(dá)姆、恐怖事件等。說(shuō)實(shí)話，這些政治時(shí)事離考研命題太遙遠(yuǎn)了，國(guó)際時(shí)

事并非考試關(guān)注焦點(diǎn)，而國(guó)內(nèi)民生動(dòng)態(tài)到是還有參考價(jià)值，部分民生環(huán)保問(wèn)題如

何解決是讀報(bào)瀏覽的關(guān)鍵。某些話題雖不是政治話題，但不利于安定團(tuán)結(jié)，也不

一定成為考題，如腐敗猖獗、失業(yè)人數(shù)增長(zhǎng)、愛(ài)滋病擴(kuò)散、自殺現(xiàn)象增多、惡搞

藝術(shù)作品、家庭暴力、離婚率提高等等。有些話題涉及到隱私，也屬于討論的禁

區(qū)，如性問(wèn)題，同性戀問(wèn)題?；蛟S若干年以后，中國(guó)民眾的意識(shí)形態(tài)足夠開放了，

這些網(wǎng)絡(luò)話題也就可以在考試中探討了。

5.命題中的“和諧社會(huì)”傾向：

在以上分析的基礎(chǔ)上，我們重新審視歷年考題的命題，發(fā)現(xiàn)以中老年教授組成的

命題團(tuán)隊(duì)普遍趨向常規(guī)主流觀點(diǎn)。那么考題圍繞著時(shí)代背景和主流思想，已經(jīng)逐

漸形成了以“和諧社會(huì)”為核心的命題思路。只不過(guò)總體以和諧作為公式的話題

可以分成和諧的三個(gè)不同層次：

個(gè)體和諧發(fā)展：

自信的重要性、節(jié)儉與浪費(fèi)、如何看待成功、夢(mèng)想與現(xiàn)實(shí)、抄襲（plagiarism）

與誠(chéng)信、高分低能現(xiàn)象、職業(yè)選擇和規(guī)劃、

個(gè)人、他人與社會(huì)的和諧共處：

個(gè)性與團(tuán)隊(duì)合作、如何看待競(jìng)爭(zhēng)、網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利弊、偽劣商品問(wèn)題（fake

commodities-商家為牟利而危害社會(huì)）、亂收費(fèi)問(wèn)題、如何看待中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)

日和洋節(jié)

人類與自然環(huán)境的和諧：

私家車的利弊（噪音空氣污染、交通阻塞）、環(huán)境污染話題（空氣、水、噪

音、土壤、人類食品）、亂砍濫伐問(wèn)題、人類對(duì)歷史古跡的破壞及保護(hù)

另外，不論何種命題，都要從簡(jiǎn)潔的圖畫中尋找線索并推理解決。針對(duì)很少練習(xí)

圖畫作文構(gòu)思的考生，建議近期可上網(wǎng)查尋一下中國(guó)新聞漫畫網(wǎng)，尋找一些幽默

諷刺圖畫，練習(xí)快速推理，查找問(wèn)題所在，同時(shí)進(jìn)行相關(guān)詞聯(lián)想，熟能生巧。稍

加練習(xí)，便會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)一些慣性推理技巧，考試時(shí)就會(huì)大大減輕緊張感，從容不迫地

進(jìn)行構(gòu)思和創(chuàng)作。

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：本題以總體評(píng)分法，通篇分檔計(jì)分，計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：

20—17分內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列的各項(xiàng)要求：清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連

貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。

16—13分內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列的各項(xiàng)要求；比較清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，

文字基本連貫；句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯(cuò)誤較少。文章長(zhǎng)

度符合要求。

12-9分內(nèi)容切題，基本包括題中所列的各項(xiàng)要求；基本清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)

涵：句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有一些錯(cuò)誤。文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。

8—5分內(nèi)容基本切題，基本包含題中所列的各項(xiàng)要求，語(yǔ)句可以理解，但

有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯(cuò)誤。文章長(zhǎng)度基本符合要求。

4一1分基本按要求寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。

0分文不切題，語(yǔ)句混亂，無(wú)法理解。

第一章

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一語(yǔ)天然萬(wàn)古新

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?多媒體multimedia

,惡性循環(huán)viciouscircle

?厄爾尼諾現(xiàn)象ElNinophenomenon

,防偽標(biāo)志anti-fakelabel

,防洪工程flood-preventionproject

?風(fēng)險(xiǎn)投資venturecapital；riskinvestment

?瘋牛病madcowdisease

?扶貧povertyalleviation

?反彈道導(dǎo)彈條約Anti-ballisticMissileTreaty(ABM)?

?反腐倡廉combatcorruptionandbuildacleangovernment

?福利彩票welfarelotteries

?福利分房welfare-orientedpublichousingdistributionsystem

?復(fù)合型人才inter-disciplinarytalent

?個(gè)人所得稅personalincometax

?高新技術(shù)產(chǎn)業(yè)開發(fā)區(qū)highandnewtechnologyindustrialdevelopmentzone

,國(guó)民生產(chǎn)總值grossnationalproduct(GNP)

,國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)支柱產(chǎn)業(yè)pillarindustriesinnationaleconomy?

?國(guó)內(nèi)生產(chǎn)總值grossdomesticproduct(GDP)

一.說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象

1.Recentlythephenomenonofhasarousedgreatconcernand

shouldbegivenenoughconsideration.

2.Recentlytheproblemofhasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublic

attention.

3.Avirtualepidemicoftheisnowunderinthesociety

4isanotherofthenewandbittertruthswehavetofacenow.

5.Manisnowfacingwithabigproblem,whichisbecomingmoreand

moreserious.

6.Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleare

concernedabouttheproblemof

7.Inthepastfewyears,atendofhasbeenbecomingmoreandmore

clear.

二.發(fā)表現(xiàn)點(diǎn)與看法

1.IfullyagreewiththestatementthatThereasonsarechieflyasfollows.

2.AlthoughmanypeoplebelievethatIdoubtwhethertheargumentbears

muchanalysis.

3.Althoughthepopularbeliefisastudyindicates

4.somepeoplesuggestButwhatthesepeoplefailtounderstandis

5.fromapersonalperspective,Ipreferto

6.Itistruethatbutapointisbeingleftoutofour

consideration.

7.Inordertoanswerthequestionofapersonmustweightwosides.

三..對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)

l.Differentpeoplehave(hold)differentviews(opinions/pointsofview)onthis

issue(problem/matter/question)

2.Somebelieve...Othersthink,Stillothersclaim(assume9have,hold,claim,

believe,maintain,takeastandon)

3.Theyarequitedifferentfromeachotherininterpretingtheissue.

4.AsfarasIamconcerned(AsfarasIknow)

5.1havetotakeotherfactorsintoconsiderationifIamconfrontedwithsucha

difflcultchoice.

四.主題句常用句型

Litisimportant(necessary,urgent,difficult,easy,convenient,comfortable,

expensive,desirable,advisable)forsb.todosth.(that)

Eg.

Itisinevitablethatthenaturalresourcesthroughouttheworldarediminishing

asthedemandforthemisontheincrease

Itisobviousthatthestrengthofacountry'seconomyisdirectlyboundupwith

theefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.

Itisurgentforthegovernmenttotakemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateinour

country.

Itisdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreationcenters,

cinemas,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeettheincreasingneedsofthepeople.

2.Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas

3.Intheageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysasignificant

role.

4.Nothingismoreimportantthan

5.onecannotemphasizetheimportanceofsomuch

6??Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatexercisesareagoodwaytokeephealthy.

五.原因解釋

1.Itmaybeattributedtothefollowingthreepoints.

2.Thedeteriorationofecologicalsystemmaybeattributedtothefollowing

leadingfactors.Firstofall,...

Secondly,Lastbutnotleast...

3.Acarefulanalysisofthechartsabovemayexplainwhythenumberofspecies

ofwildlifeisonthedeclineandtherateofwildlifeextinctionisaccelerating.

4.Itisnoeasyjobtofindthereasonforthistendencywhichinvolvesseveral

complicatedfactors.

5.Therearemanyreasonsresponsibleforthisinstance,andthefollowingarethe

typicalones.Foronething,Inaddition,Themainreasonisthat

6.Oneofthereasonsthatisgivenfor...isthat

7.AfurtherreasonwhyIadvocateanattitudeof...isthat

8..Anincreaseindemandcauses(resultsin/leadsto/produces)higherprices,

whichaggravatespeople'sfinancialburden.

六.列舉、舉例表達(dá)方式

l.Forexample,womenareholdinghigherpositionsinpoliticalandeconomic

power.

2.Forinstance,theeconomicstatusofthepeoplehasbeengreatlyimproved.

3.Take...forexample,...

4.Acaseinpointis….

S.Thefollowingexamplemaywellillustratethepoint,(show,demonstrate)

6….isagoodcaseinpoint.

7.Thischartshows(diagram,table,graph,form,picture,cartoon,bars)

七.結(jié)論性

1.Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveatthe

conclusion

2.Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat

3.Tosumuptheaboveargument,Ithinkaproperattitudetowardsis

that

4.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillchoosetobecausethechoicefitsmy

personalityandmylife-longbelief.

5.judgingfromalltheevidenceavailable,wemaysafelycometotheconclusion

that..

6.Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthe

negativeones.

Therefore,Iwouldlike

八.后果性

1Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethatwill

beputindanger.

2.wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationofJf

allowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto

3.Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddo

is

4.Inordertocrackthenuts,youneedconfidence,perseveranceandalso

courage.Whatismoreimportant,carefulconsiderationshouldbegiven

beforeyoucarryoutmeasures.

九.建議性“

1.ItishightimethatHerearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetaken

immediately.

2.Althoughitisaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcan

makethesituationbetter.ThemostimportantisAnotherway

isstillanotherwayis

3.NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofButthe

commonrecognitionoftheimportanceofmightbethefirststepon

therightway.

4.Manysolutionsareofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnonis

adequateenough.Theproblemsshouldbestudiedindepth.

5.However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.

Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater.

6.Butthisproblemisverycomplicated.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononly

onewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.

經(jīng)典句子

1)Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyinthenewspaperaboutthe

picture_Simplydesignedasitis,the

symbolicmeaningthepictureconveysisdeepandprofound.Justas

thepictureshows,.

2)Drawingscanbeusefultools;asimplepicturemayrevealaprofound

truth.Theillustrationabove,forinstance,isfarfromcomplicated,

andyetcarriesdeepimplications:.Needlesstosay,

3)Withtheremarkabledevelopmentineconomyinourcountry,itis

obviousthatourlivingstandardshavebeengreatlyimproved.However,

toourgreatsurprise,theeconomicdevelopmentatthesametimeleads

tosevereenvironmentalpollution.Therefore,wearepossiblyheading

foravarietyofenvironmentaldisastersthoughitisnotourdesire

todoso.

4)Withthereformandopening-uppolicyinourcountry,peopleall

overthecountryarebecomingbetterandbetteroff.However,the

opening-uppolicyatsametimecontributestothefactthatmany

talents/technologistsandscientistsaregoingabroadfortheir

furtherdevelopment.Asamatteroffact,thebraindrainmeansagreat

lossofhumanresourcestoourcountryaswellastothedevelopment

oftheourcountry.

5)TakethefirstPresidentGeorgeWashingtonforexample.Itis

honestythathelpshimtowinhisfather'strust.Anothercasein

pointisthecriminalswhohavejustbeenarrestedbythepolice.It

theytellthetruth,theywillbemorelikelytostayinprisonfor

feweryearsthantheydeserve.Otherwise,theywillbepunishedmore

severelybylaw.

6)Sincethesocialproblemisquitetroublesome,weshouldtake

effectivestepstochangethecurrentsituation.Foronething,it

ishightimethatthepeoplealloverthecountryrealizedthe

seriousnessoftheproblem.Foranother,thegovernmentshouldissue

strictlawsandregulationssoastoputtheproblemundercontrol.

Onlywhenthegovernmentandthecitizensjointheirhandsinthe

effortscanwehopetosolvetheproblemsatisfactorily.

7)Allthathasbeendiscussedabovepointsoutanindisputablefact

that.Inotherwords,weshould,withoutanydoubt,

.However,isnottobetestifiedbythe

tongue;insteaditismanifestedinaction.Inotherwords,weshould

nothesitateamomenttotakeactionsinourdailylife.

8).Throughtheanalysisabove,itisobviousthatthepositiveaspects

faroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onething

iscertain:thethingitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusage

towhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetooursociety.

9)Tosolvetheproblem,boththegovernmentandsociety,Ithink,

shouldmakeasustainedeffort.Inotherwords,ifthegovernmentand

thesocietyworkhardtochangethecurrentsituation,thereiscertain

tobeanencouragingprospectinthefuture.Otherwise,theprospect

willberatherdepressingindeed.

10)Suchchangeshavehadapositiveimpactonindividualsaswell

asonthesociety.Ontheonehand,theyarefairlybeneficialtothe

rapiddevelopmentofourcountry.Ontheotherhand,theycontribute

favorablytotheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards.

11)Itgoeswithoutsayingthattoday'sremarkabledevelopmentin

ourcountrycallsfor/appealstothechangeofthecurrentsituations

becauseproblemslikethesenotonlygreatlydisappointthepeople

butalsohamperthefuturedevelopmentofourcountry

批判危害性的框其

總共寫十七個(gè)句子.

第一段四個(gè)句子,第一句宏觀描述圖畫，并談圖畫看似可笑但發(fā)人深思.

第二句寫出圖畫最強(qiáng)烈的視覺(jué)效果,第三句是主題句,談?dòng)枚畟€(gè)單詞的

爆發(fā)力句型談該現(xiàn)象對(duì)個(gè)人的發(fā)展和進(jìn)步有破壞性,并引發(fā)思考,第四句

是用貶義詞批判這個(gè)現(xiàn)象是強(qiáng)烈的指責(zé).

第二段七個(gè)句子,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現(xiàn)象的總的有兩到三個(gè)點(diǎn)

危害或者原因，第二句談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)危害，用“notonly,but

also"的五星級(jí)句子，通常是談對(duì)個(gè)人身心健康的危害性，第三個(gè)句子

談第二個(gè)危害，通常是用一個(gè)豪華級(jí)的比較級(jí)的句子,讓老師耳目一新,

通常是談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象對(duì)社會(huì)的危害.第四個(gè)句子談對(duì)家庭或?qū)W校的危害.第

五個(gè)句子談一個(gè)代替“forexample”的十五個(gè)單詞的好句子，意思是說(shuō)

沒(méi)有更好的例子來(lái)證明正如下文.第六個(gè)句子是例子群體的出現(xiàn),談根據(jù)

一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明,80%以上的人只要從事經(jīng)歷過(guò)這個(gè)消極的現(xiàn)象一定會(huì)對(duì)個(gè)

人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句話是預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì)的二十五個(gè)單詞的鉆

石級(jí)的句子,談以下預(yù)測(cè)趨勢(shì),表明這種現(xiàn)象再這樣下去,就會(huì)導(dǎo)致惡劣

的結(jié)果出現(xiàn),甚至是毀滅性的后果.

第三段六個(gè)句子，第一個(gè)句子是下個(gè)結(jié)論,談解決問(wèn)題的必要性.第二個(gè)

句子是第一個(gè)建議談的是加強(qiáng)立法懲治這個(gè)現(xiàn)象，第三個(gè)句子談提高人

們的覺(jué)悟關(guān)于著這個(gè)現(xiàn)象能提高人們對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的覺(jué)悟.第四個(gè)句子談

個(gè)諺語(yǔ),談一下實(shí)踐我的建議的重要性.五個(gè)句子談解決的任重道遠(yuǎn).第

六個(gè)句子是解決問(wèn)題之后的美好的未來(lái).

批判危害性的框架(適用大學(xué)生的心里問(wèn)題).|

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(A)whichhasinducedheightenedconcernsandshouldcall

forimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofAasthefocusofpublicconcernmainly

resultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,familialandsocial

development.

第二段

(1)Asfortheissueof卜__itiscommontohearonTVandradiothatso

manycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsinmaintainingthe

nationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,Ainourschoolsandpublicplacescannolonger

beignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandardshavegreatly

improved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemstofallfarbehind.

Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,BandCareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesasA.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,Ainourlifeshouldberegardedassocial

malignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithoureffortstobuild

upaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewhohave

everexperiencedthesituationofAwillseverelyaccusethe

phenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureof_____________

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheotherhand,apublicizingeducationalcampaignshouldbe

carriedouttoenhancepeople'sawarenessabouttheharmfulnessofA.

(4)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.

(5)Althoughthefightagainstitisalong-standingandtremendoustask,

oureffortswilleventuallypayoffifwetakeactionswithourhandsand

brain.

預(yù)測(cè)范文一

第一副圖一個(gè)學(xué)生在瘋狂的做作業(yè),頭上冒汗,匆忙做完一些題，又馬上做另外

一些，面色憔悴

一第二副也描述了這個(gè)學(xué)生在考試那天居然在住院，而且身心憔悴，并聲稱不想

再上學(xué)

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(excessiveburdens)whichhasinducedheightenedconcerns

andshouldcallforimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofstressfulassignemntsasthefocusof

publicconcernmainlyresultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,

familialandsocialdevelopment.

第二段

(1)AsfortheissueofoverburdensitiscommontohearonTVandradio

thatsomanycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsin

maintainingthenationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,stressfulworkinourschoolsandpublicplacescan

nolongerbeignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandards

havegreatlyimproved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemsto

fallfarbehind.Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,becomingwornout

anddevelopinganxietydisordersareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesastoomuchpressure.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,toomanyburdensinourlifeshouldberegardedas

socialmalignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithourefforts

tobuildupaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewho

haveeverexperiencedthesituationofexceedingworkwillseverely

accusethephenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureofourcitizens.

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheother