讀后續(xù)寫(xiě) 兄弟之間應(yīng)寬容以待 課件-2023屆高三英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

2021年浙江三地市統(tǒng)測(cè)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)兄弟之間應(yīng)寬容以待原文重現(xiàn)

Carterenjoyedridingtheschoolbushome.Theridehomegavehimsometimetorelaxafterabusydayoffifthgrade.Heusuallysataloneandenjoyedthattoo.Withfoursiblings(兄弟姐妹)hedidn’tgetmuchtimealone.Sometimeshesatwithhisyoungerbrother,Jackson,butJacksonwassickathometoday.Thebusstoppedandthetallestboyinhisclass,Dexter,steppedofffollowedbyhisyoungerbrother,Billy.Asthebuspulledaway,Carterlookedbackoverhisshouldertowatchtheboys.Dexterwasyellingandwavinghishandsathislittlebrother.BillysaidsomethingCartercouldnothear.Dexteryelled,gavehisyoungerbrotherahardpushandknockedhimtotheground.Billywasonthegroundwipinghiseyes,butDexterwalkedaway.Carterturnedinhisseat,feelingdisgusted(反感的).Hehatedseeinglittlekidsgetpickedon(欺負(fù)).ThesightofBillyonthegroundcryingwasburnedintohismemory.Hetriedtothinkofsomethingelse.Hethoughtofthemodelcarhewasworkingonathome,a1967Corvette.Hestartedbuildingitoveraweekagoandjustfinishedputtingittogetherlastnight.Tonight,assoonashefinishedhishomework,hecouldstartpaintingthecar.Thatwashisfavoritepart.Healreadyhadtheperfectcolorofbluepickedout.Hehurriedoffthebus,ranthroughhisyard,andrushedthroughthekitchenwithaquickhellotohismom.Shewasmakingdinner,whichsmelleddelicious.Heranupthestairstwoatatimeandrushedintohisroom.“Surprise!”hisbrotherJacksonsaid,throwinghisarmsintotheair.“Whatareyoudoinginmyroom?Ithoughtyouweresick!”“Ifeelbetter!”“What’sonyourface?Areyoubleeding?”“No!I’mnotbleeding.”Jacksonwipedhisface.“It’sprobablyjustpaint.Look!LookwhatIdid!”HepointedatthedeskinthecornerofCarter’sroom.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Paragraph2:Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfists.

1.WhatdidCarterseeonhiswayhome?2.HowdidCarterfeelwhenhesawthesight?3.WhatdidCarterthinkoftogetridofthebadfeeling?HesawDexterpickingonhisyoungbrother.Hefeltdisgustedandhatedit.Hethoughtofhismodelcarandhewantedtopaintitblue.理解材料4.WhatdidCarterseewhenherushedintohisroom?HisyoungerbrotherJacksonpaintedhismodelcarred.理解材料Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror…1.

OpeningOnhiswayhome,CartersawDexterpickonhisyoungerbrotherBilly,whichmadeCarterfeeldisgusted.ThesightofBillycryingonthegroundwasburnedintoCarter’smemory.Hetriedtothinkofhismodelcartogetridofthebadfeelingandwantedtopainthiscarblue.CarterrushedintohisroomandsawhisyoungerbrotherJackson,whosefacelookedlikebleeding.Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfists…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

EndingParagraph1:Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.Accordingto“Areyoubleeding?”inthetextand“horror”here,wecanlearnthatJacksonpaintedthemodelcarred,sothisparagraphshouldbemainlyabouttheconflictbetweenCarterandJackson.Paragraph2:Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfists.Accordingto“unfoldedhisfists”here,wecaninferthatCarterforgaveJacksonintheend.研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索？

Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.HisCorvette!Jacksonhadpainteditred.Anawfuldullshadeofred!“Whywouldyoudothat?”Cartershouted.Cartercouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsidehim,_____________________(他的雙手攥成了拳頭獨(dú)立主格).Frightenedbytheloudvoiceofhisbrother,Jacksonloweredhisheadandmurmured,“I...Ijustwantedtogiveyouasurprise!”______________________________________________________________________________(卡特突然意識(shí)到，他剛剛的所作所為與德克斯特在街上的行為一樣。it作形式主語(yǔ))

Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfists.__________________(想到比利坐在地上抹眼淚，而德克斯特卻揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)而去的情景

動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)),Cartersteppedtowardthedeskwherethecarwasstilldrying.Heapologizedtohisbrother,“I’msorryforyellingatyou,butIhadplannedtopaintitblue.”Hearingthis,JacksonsmiledandembracedCartertightly,“Let’spaintittogether!Together!”___________________________________________________(他們剛涂完這輛獨(dú)一無(wú)二的汽車(chē)，媽媽就喊他們吃晚飯了。Nosoonerthan)Therewasnodenyingnowthatsiblingscouldgetonwellbybeingtolerantofeachother.根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分。獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)動(dòng)詞-ed形式作狀語(yǔ)。動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)。asDexterwalkedaway是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。固定句式Itsuddenlydawnedonsb.that…，意為“某人突然意識(shí)到……”。固定句式Nosooner…than…，意為“一……就……”。where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾desk。固定句式Therewasnodenyingthat…，意為“不可否認(rèn)。此句為文章的點(diǎn)睛之筆……”

，點(diǎn)明了文章的主題——兄弟姐妹間要寬容相待。

Carterlookeddownathisdeskinhorror.HisCorvette!Jacksonhadpainteditred.Anawfuldullshadeofred!“Whywouldyoudothat?”Cartershouted.Cartercouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsidehim,hishandscurlingintofists.Frightenedbytheloudvoiceofhisbrother,Jacksonloweredhisheadandmurmured,“I...Ijustwantedtogiveyouasurprise!”

ItsuddenlydawnedonCarterthat

whathedidjustnowwaslikeDexter’sactiononthestreet.

Cartertookadeepbreathandthenunfoldedhisfists.

PicturingthesceneofBillysittingonthegroundandwipinghiseyesasDexterwalkedaway,Cartersteppedtowardthedeskwherethecarwasstilldrying.Heapologizedtohisbrother,“I’msorryforyellingatyou,butIhadplannedtopaintitblue.”Hearingthis,JacksonsmiledandembracedCartertightly,“Let’spaintittogether!Together!”

Nosoonerhadtheypaintedtheuniquecarthantheirmomcalledthemtohavedinner.Therewasnodenyingnowthatsiblingscouldgetonwellbybeingtolerantofeachother.范文賞析——精彩語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)塊（車(chē)）開(kāi)走抹眼淚一步兩個(gè)臺(tái)階跑上樓他低下了頭漸漸明白想象那個(gè)場(chǎng)景朝著桌子走去向他的弟弟道歉相處融洽對(duì)……寬容pullawaywipe

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