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Inmanypartsoftheworldchildrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimes.Whyisthishappening?Howshouldchildrenorteenagersbepunished?青少年審題--C-WHY\針對的人：childrenorteenagers（十幾歲的年輕人ACWHY-ABC二、想觀點：教育知識大量接觸信息小孩被父母寵壞解決：教育、社會價值觀參加社區(qū)服務(wù)三、寫開頭段（改寫影響客觀事實1、換表達：youthcrime/youngJuveniledelinquencyhas eanincreasingprobleminsomecommunities(T)THenumberofyoungoffendershasbeenontheriseinsomecommunities.(T)Manysocietieshaveseenyouthcrimeincreasing.2、背景：解決問題：tackle/solve/address/copewithItisimportanttoaddressthisproblem./reversethisdisturbingtrend/reversethisworryingtrend社區(qū)服務(wù)：communityservices參加社區(qū)法律課程：lawcoursescommunityservicesandlawcoursescanhelpreformtheseyoungoffenders.(T)communityservicesandlawcoursesarehelpfulforustoreformtheseyoungoffenders.(T)這個事情對。。是重要的：helpsbdoJuveniledelinquencyhas eanincreasingprobleminsomecommunitiesanditisimportanttoaddressthisissueeffectively.Communityservicesandlawcoursescanhelpreformtheseyoungoffenders.(T)想觀點：A（）B買一些必須用品（具體化：生活日用品、文化用品舉例：偷、輟學解釋）C容易（不必擴展結(jié)果題目要求是原因）A生活貧窮 Thesechildrenmayliveinpoverty.解釋：詞伙：沒工作jobless/unemployed獲得：financialsupportfromthe句型 IsNotableto/unabletodoTheirparentsarepossiblyunemployedandnoteligible（qualifyunable）toreceivefinancialsupportfromtheernment.B生活基本用品：basicnecessitiesCannot/unabletoThisiswhy)theyarenotabletoaffordbasicnecessitiesandmaintainareasonablestandardofliving（并列句為避免單調(diào)）.(B)舉例：食品、房子、文具schools（學校用品）Forexample,theycannotpayrent（房租）,bills（費用）orfood,andpurchaseschools.(例子)結(jié)果：退學dropoutofschool為了賺快錢：mtakeeasymoneybreak mit句型：chooseto/belikelyTheconsequenceisthatsomechildrenmaydropoutofschoolandchoosetocommitcrimesinordertomakeeasymoney.(T)整合（代詞連接詞紅色中心句子：A+Cmanychildrenwhohaveviolatedlawsmaylivein（二）（主體段二觀點：A孩子接觸到中關(guān)于和的案例和畫面（原因?qū)υ絹碓铰槟菊J為是解決問題方式glorifythe夸大）B傾向于模仿其中的行為（解釋：解決問題利用參與到幫派活動破壞公務(wù)）C更容易（無擴展結(jié)果）A接觸exposedto場景 scene、violentAnotherreason（句子段落間聯(lián)系）isthatteenagerstodayareexposedtointhemedia/screeneveryday.(A)解釋:詞伙：對不夠明白desensitisedto.../insensitiveto解決問題（糾紛）的一種resolves/settles/resolvedisputes/handlerelationshipproblemssusceptible、impressionable句型：12beregarded/considered/seenasThese（增加與前句聯(lián)系）impressionableyoungviewers（ ）havebeendesensitizedtoandevenregardasawayofdealingwithrelationshipproblems.(解釋)B-imitate/aggressive句型：chooseto/belikelyThey(viewers)willchoosetocopythebehaviourtheyseeonTVoringamesandengagein(參與)aggressivebehaviourinreallife.involvedingangs：leadto/resultin/cause/isthecauseof/releatedto/contributeto/responsiblefor...poorbehaviourinvolvedinpoorThiscanleadtoteenagersareinvolvedinpoor（三）

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