讀后續(xù)寫：沙發(fā)下的蛇學(xué)案-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

“Usualboringday!”ThiswouldbetheanswerfromRomanifsomebodyaskedhimhowhisdaywas.Thesedayshefoundeverythingboring,nothingexcitedhim.

Onedayhewaslyinginhisroomasusual.Suddenlythelightwentoff.

Hisroomwasratherhotwithoutanairconditioner.Thoughhedidnotwanttoleavehisroom,hehadto.Unwillingly,helefthisroomandcametothelivingroom.Thelivingroomwasslightlycoolasithadtwohugewindows.

Hisyoungbrotherwasplayingwithhisfriend.Theywererollingonthefloor.HewaslookingoutfortheTVremote,butcouldn'tfindit.Hegotupandsearchediteverywhere,butremotewasnowhere.Helookedathisbrotherwhowasstilllyingonthefloorplaying.

Heaskedhim,“Whereistheremote?”

“UndertheSofa”hisbrotheryelled.

Hetriedtolookthrough,butitwasdark.Heputhishandunderthesofa.Hetouchedsomething,grabbedit,andtookhishandout.OMG!Itwasasnakeinhishand!

Afterseeingthathisbrotherstartedtoyell,“Snake,snake!”Momcameassoonassheheardtheirshouting.Shetoowashorrifiedtoseeasnake.Shewassoscaredthatsheevencouldn'tspeakaword.Twokidsweretryingtohideintoeachother'sback.“Whatanoldtrick!”Romanthoughtandthrewitoverkids.

Asthesnakelandedonthefloorneartothekids,itstartedmovingfromtheleftsidetotheright.OnlythendidRomanrealizethatthesnakewasreal,notatoy.Hethrewthesnakeoverkidsbecausehethoughtitwasafakesnakeandkidswereplayingsometricks.

Thistimemomalmostgotaheartattack.Nowhewasscaredtoo.Thesnakewasonly10metersawayfromthekidsandwasstaringatthem.Theyevencouldn'tcallarescueteam.Theremightbesomedeadlydamagebeforetheirarrival.Therewasnotmuchtimetothink.Itwastimeforquickaction.Paragraph1：AsRomanwasfartherfromthesnake,hejumpedtothewindowandgrabbedthecurtain.Paragraph2：Aftertherescueteamcaughtandtookthesnakeaway,everyonewentinsidethehome.

參考范文：AsRomanWasfartherfromthesnake,hejumpedtothewindowandgrabbedthecurtain.

Hepulleditsohardthatthecurtainwastornoffimmediately.Withouthesitation,hethrewthecurtainatthemovingsnakeandcoveredit.Thenhegrabbedthetwoextremelyfrightenedkids'armsandpushedthemoutoftheroom.Themomentthekidswentouttheystartedscreaming.Romanwentinsidetheroomagainandbroughthismomout,whowasstandingstill,frozenwithfear.Later,hecalledtherescueteam.

Aftertherescueteamcaughtandtookawaythesnake,everyonewentinsidethehome.

Everythingreturnedtonormalexceptthatthetwokidswerestillscared.Romanfeltguiltyandevenangrywithhimself.Howcouldhehavethrownthesnakeattwokids?Butforthequickaction,itwouldhavehurtthem!Hewentuptothekids,pattingthemonthehead,andsaidcarefully,"I'msosorry.ImistookitforafakeoneWell.."Afterashortpause,hesaidinanexcitedvoice,Shallweplaysomegametogethernow?"Thekidsburstintoasmile."whatathrillingday!"Romantextedhisfriendlaterthatdayandasenseofachievementandhappinesswelledupdeepinhissoul.Itwashisquickmindandfacingthemistakebravelythatbrightenedtheboringday.

下水好文1AsRomanwasinfartherfromthesnake,hejumpedtothewindow.

Shockedandscared,healmostpassedout.However,hetoldhimselftostaycalm.Tryingnottoattractthesnake’sattention,heheldhisbreath,andtiptoedinextremesilence.Allofasudden,thesnakebegantomovetowardsthekids.Andthekidsweretoofrightenedtomoveasinglestep.Seeingthechildrenwereindanger,Romancommandedhisbrothertostoptrembling,foundtheremotecontrolandsmashedthesnake.“Moveoutofthehouse!”heyelledinatremblingvoicewithhisheadcocking,andhemadeeveryefforttodistractthesnake’sattention.Meanwhile,thekidsandtheirmomsrushedoutofthehouseandhitsafeground.ThenRomandashedtowardshiscellphone.下水好文2AsRomanwasinfartherfromthesnake,hejumpedtothewindow.

Suddenly,hefoundthemissingTVremoteandpickeditup.Amorefrightenedcrysoundedfromhisbrotherringingbyhisear.Thesnake,whichwasonlytwometersawayfromthetremblingkids,lockeditseyesonthem.Thecircumstance/situationwassourgent.Romangazedatthesnakeandheldtheremotetightlyinhishandwithhispalmssweating.Asthesnakemovedwithitsenormousmouthopen,heheavilythrewtheremotetothecreatureinaninstant.Fortunately,hesucceededinhittingthesnakeandithissedandrolledonthefloorpainfully.Everyonebreathedasighofreliefandkeptfarawayfromit.Romanthencovereditwithahugebasin.補充心理描寫例句，供參考1．DeathwouldbeareliefWhatworriedhimthemostwasthethoughtofhisparentsnotknowingwhathappenedtohim,notknowingwhetherhewasdeadoralive（心理描寫）2．Anevencrazierideakeptpoppinginto(不斷進(jìn)入)hishead（心理描寫）3．Twonightslater,Stanleylayawakestaringupatthestar-filledskyHewastoohappytofallasleep（動作描寫，心理描寫）4．Theywalkedforwhatseemedlikeaverylongtime,andstillnevercameacross

(時間漫長，心中焦急)5．Awaveofterrorrushedoverhimwhenhesaw(恐懼，心理描寫)6．ThefearmadehimdizzyHetookabreath,summonedhiscourage,andcontinued（恐懼，克服恐懼，心理描寫）7．Heheardhisownheartheat（激動，緊張，害怕等強烈的情緒）8．Hefeltthescreamexplodeinsidehim(恐懼，心理描寫)9．StanleycouldhearhisheartbeatEachbeattoldhimhewasstillalive,atleastforonemoresecond（恐懼，心理描寫）10．Hefeltasifhewaswalkinginadream,notquiteabletocomprehendwhatwasgoingonaroundhim（心理描寫）11．TwitchhadbeenarrestedforstealingacarHeclaimedhecouldbreakintoacar,disconnectthealarm,andhot-wire(短路點火)theengine,allinlessthanaminute（人物，動作描寫）12．HesatthereawhileandcaughthisbreathAshegotbacktohisfeet,

(動作描寫)

13．You'dalreadythrownupeverythingthatwasinsideyourstomach（病痛）14．Histhroatfeltas