讀后續(xù)寫：美好品質(zhì)類-True generosity講義-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項

試題呈現(xiàn):

TrueGenerosity

Whenatornadotoucheddowninasmalltownnearby,manyfamilieswereleftcompletelydestroyed.Afterwardallthelocalnewspaperscarried

manyhuman-intereststoriesfeaturing

someof

thefamilies

whosufferedthehardest.

OneSunday,aparticularpictureespeciallytouchedme.Ayoungwomanstoodinfrontofanentirelyshatteredmobilehome,adepressedexpressiontwistingherface.Ayoungboy,sevenoreightyearsold,stoodatherside,eyesdowncast（=depressed).Clutching(緊握)

atherskirtwasatinygirlwhostaredintothecamera,eyeswidewithconfusionandfear.

Thearticlethatwentwiththepicturegavetheclothingsizesofeachfamilymember.Withgrowinginterest,Inoticedthattheirsizescloselymatchedours.Thiswouldbeagoodopportunityto

teachmychildren

tohelpthoselessfortunatethanthemselves.Itapedthepictureoftheyoungfamilytoourfridge,explainingtheirdifficultytomyseven-year-oldtwins,BradandBrett,andtothree-year-old

Meghan.

"Wehavesomuch.Andthesepoorpeoplenowhavenothing,"Isaid."We'llsharewhatwehavewiththem."Ibroughtthreelargeboxesdownfromtheroomupstairsandplacedthemonthelivingroomfloor.Meghanwatchedseriously,astheboysandIfilledoneoftheboxeswithcannedgoodsandfoods.

WhileIsortedthroughourclothes,Iencouragedtheboystogothroughtheirtoysand

donate

someoftheir

lessfavorite

things.Meghanwatchedquietlyastheboyspiledupdiscardedtoysandgames.

"I'llhelpyoufindsomethingfor

thelittlegirl

whenI'mdonewiththis,"Isaid.

Theboysplaced

thetoys

theyhadchosentodonateintooneoftheboxeswhileIfilledthethirdboxwith

clothes.MeghanwalkedupwithLucy,herwornfadedmuch-lovedragdollhuggedtightlytoherchest.Shepausedinfrontoftheboxthatheldthetoys,pressedherroundlittlefaceintoLucy'sflat,painted-on-face,gaveherafinalkiss,thenlaidhergentlyontopoftheothertoys.

"Oh,Honey,"Isaid."Youdon'thavetogiveLucy.You

love

hersomuch."

Meghannoddedseriously,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears.'"Lucymakesme

happy,Mommy.Maybeshe'llmakethatotherlittlegirlhappy,too．"

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Theboyshadwatched,open-mouthed,astheirbabysisterplacedherfavoritedollinthebox.

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Astonished,IrealizedthattheboyshadalsorecognizedwhatlittleMeghan’sgesturemeant.

精彩片段:Afterawhile,Bradclosedhiseyes,grittinghisteeth,thenturnedaroundandmadeabeelineforhisbedroom.LookingatBrad.withoutthinkingtwice,Brettfollowedhisstepclosely.Amomentlater,thetwinsreturnedwiththeirfavoritetoysintheirhand.Insteadofunwillingness,theydelightedlyputthemintheboxasiftheywerethepersonswhoreceivedthegift."ldohopeitcouldworklikeacharmandcheerthemup."Bradsaidwithasmile(82words)精彩片段:l,whohadwantedtoteachmychildren.hadbeentaught.Takingthecuefrommylittleones,Iremovedmyoldjacketfromtheboxofclothesandreplaceditwiththenewgreenjacketwhichwasjustboughtlastweek.lhopedtheyoungwomaninthepicturewouldloveitasmuchasIdid.lt'seasytogivewhatwedon'twantanymore,buthardertoletgoofthingswecherish,isn'tit?However,thetruespiritofgivingistogivewithyourheart.(91words)精彩片段:Foramoment,Istoodthere,paralyzed.ljustcouldn'tbelievewhathadhappened.Afterawhile,Ikissedeachofthemontheirfaceandsaidtothem,"OK,let'schoosetheclothestogether".Ismiledatthemwithpridethinkingtomyself,"Howkindheartedmychildrenare!"ItreallysurprisedmealotthatlhadbeentaughtbymychildrenasIhadintendedtoteachthem.Sometimeswhatreallyinspirespeopleisnotthecoldthingsbutthewarmheartlikemychildren's.(87words)精彩片段:Afterawhile,Istrokedtheirheadsgentlyandnoddedwithappreciation.ThenItookoutmyoldclothesandputanewinit.laskedmykids,"Haveyoumadeupyourmindtodonatethesethings?""Yes,definitely!"Theyrepliedwithoutasecondthought,castingadeterminedlookatme.Weallsmiledheartily.Atthistime,weallknewthegenuinededicationistodonateourtruelove.(87words)參考范文:Theboyshadwatched,open-mouthed,astheirbabysisterplacedherfavoritedollintheboxWithoutaword,Bradroseandwenttohisroom.Hecamebackcarryingoneofhisfavoriteactionfigures.Hehesitatedbriefly,clutchingthetoy,thenlookedoveratMeghanandplaceditintheboxnexttoLucy.AslowsmilespreadacrossBrett'sface.Thenhejumpedup,eyestwinklingasherantofetchsomeofhisprizedMatchboxcars.Then,theboysturnedovertolookatmeandtheboxwithourlessfavoriteclothes.Astonished,IrealizedthattheboyshadalsorecognizedwhatlittleMeghan'sgesturemeant.l,whohadwantedtoteachmychildren,hadbeentaught.Takingthecuefrommylittleones,Iremovedmyoldjacketfromtheboxofclothes,IreplaceditwiththenewhuntergreenjacketthatIhadfoundonsalelastweek.Lhopedtheyoungwomaninthepicturewouldloveitasmuchasldid.It'seasytogivewhatwedon'twantanymore,buthardertoletgoofthingswecherish,isn'tit?However,thetruespiritofgivingistogivewithyourheart.下水文1：Theboyshadwatched,open-mouthed,astheirbabysisterplacedherfavoritedollinthebox.RecallinghowmuchMeghancherishedLucyandfellasleepwithLucy'scompanyeverynight,theycouldhardybelievewhatcameintotheirsight,astonishmentwrittenontheirfaces.Meghanwasalittlesad,thinkingofherdeparturewithLucy,butherdeterminedlooksuggestedthatshewouldneverforgetwhatshehaddone.Afteramomentofreflection,BradandBretttenderlygatheredtheirbabysisterintotheirarmsandkissedhergently.Havinggiveneachotheraknowinglook,thetwoboysrosetotheirfeetandmadeadashfortheirbedroom.Soon.theyreturnedwiththeirfavoritetoyshuggedtotheirchest,excitementandprideshiningintheireyes.(111)Astonished,IrealizedthattheboyshadalsorecognizedwhatlittleMeghan'sgesturemeant.Deeplytouched,IsuddenlyrealizedthatthelessonIwantedtoteachmykidswasactuallyalsomeantforme.OnourwaytotheDonationCentre,thethreealmostcouldn’twaittosharetheirdonationswiththefamilies,picturingtheirsurprisedlookwhenofferedthetoysandclothes.Infact,yoursmallkindnessnotonlybroughtthelessfortunatewarmthandhappiness,butalsomadeyourdayencouragingyoutocarrythisact/gestureofkindnessforwardintothefar,farfuture.(81)下水作文2:Thebovshadwatched,open-mouthed,astheirbabysisterplacedherfavoritedollinthebox.Timeseemedtostop.Butsuddenly,theyrosetotheirfeetnearlyatthesametime,thenexchangedaknowingsmile,andturnedaround,racingbacktotheirroomhurriedly.Withinamomentortwo.Brad,sadbutdetermined,walkedoutwithamodelplane,hismostcherishedbirthdaypresen