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授課班級(jí)：8年級(jí)1班授課教師：劉堯勝四川省周麗名師工作室綿陽(yáng)市張燕子工作室成員梓潼縣初中英語(yǔ)工作坊坊主梓潼縣潼江中學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教師Unit4What’sthebestmovietheater?SectionB3a-3cWhereisit?Whatdoyouknowabouttheplace?GUESS:thefastestthemostcrowdedthemostcreativethemostquietlyWhydoesthewritergotoGreenwoodPark?activitiesHowmanypartscanwedivideitinto?Tellusyourreasons.Beginning總起

Ending總結(jié)BodythefastestthemostcrowdedthemostcreativethemostquietlyFindoutthebeautifulsentences.opinionsconjunctionTomeetToseeToenjoyToreadTorelax?BeginningBody

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IntroductionopinionsconjunctionInZitong,therearemanygoodplacesandthings.QiqumountainTwoBombsCityYonghui

supermarketSlicepowderYangfeichanghotpotFreetalk:Pleasetalkaboutyourhomelikethis:IthinkthebestplaceisQiqumountainbecausetheairisthefreshestanditisgoodforhealth.Write：

你的朋友peter將到你的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，他想提前了解一下你家鄉(xiāng)的情況，請(qǐng)寫一封信回復(fù)并邀請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順聯(lián)貫。2.文章中使用含最高級(jí)的句子。3.適當(dāng)使用聯(lián)詞。4.字?jǐn)?shù)60-80單詞。TomeetToseeToenjoyToreadTorelax?BeginningBody

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IntroductionopinionsconjunctionMarkingLaddersForyoutoconsider(需要注意的地方)Objectives:focusonstructure,content,grammar&language(目標(biāo)：關(guān)注篇章結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)言)

Self-check(自我檢查）Peer-check（搭檔檢查）Teacher’sassessment(教師評(píng)價(jià))StructureandContent(篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容)

Ihavewrittenthreeparagraphs.(我寫了三段)

Para1:Ihavewrittenthetopicsentence.(第一段：我介紹了作文話題)

Para2:Ihavewrittensomethingaboutactivitiesthatpeopledointhatplaceandsomeopinions.(第二段：我介紹了一些人們?cè)谀莻€(gè)地方做的活動(dòng)并發(fā)表了觀點(diǎn)。）

Para3:Ihavegivenaconclusiontomywriting.(第三段：我進(jìn)行了收尾)

Ihaveusedlinkingwordsandsentencestomake

theideaflow.(我使用了連接詞、句讓文章更流暢)

Mywritingistidyandclear.(我的書寫干凈、整潔)

Grammarandlanguage（語(yǔ)法和語(yǔ)言）I

haveusedthepresenttenseproperly.(我正確使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))

Ihavecheckedthespellingsofthewords.(我已檢查了所有單詞的拼寫)

Ihavecheckedmywordcountisbetween60to80.(我已檢查了作文的字?jǐn)?shù)在60詞到80詞之間)