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ContinuationWriting

七市州調(diào)考優(yōu)秀作文23.5 AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye.ItwassuchalovelyonethatGradycouldn’tresiststeppingforwardtogetclose.Hethrewaglanceatthebearcub,pettinghisheadgently,withexcitementoverflowinginhismind.Hewasoverwhelminglyimmersedinplayingwiththebearcub,notrealizingwhatwashappeningaroundhim.”Grady,itistimetogoback.”Behindcamehisfather’svoice.Reluctantashewas,hedecidedtofollowhisfather.Allofasudden,hisfathershouted,”Watchout!” Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim.Nervousandfrightened,Gradystoodstill,notknowingwhattodo.Atthecriticalmoment,hisfathergrabbedhisarm,runningandclimbingontoatreetogether.Ittookseveralminutesbeforethebearleft.Climbingdownthetree,tearsrollingdownhisface,hethrewhimselfintohisfather’sarms.Notuntilthendidherealizehowmarvellousitwastounitewithhisfamily.ItwasatthatmomentthatGradydecidedtoenjoythecampingwithhisfamily.WhatmakesagoodpieceofContinuationwriting?

1.

straighttothepoint(主題,觀點）2.completecontent 3.appropriate

(恰當?shù)?wordsandphrases4.diverse（多樣的）structures 5.logicalconnectionsbetweensentences6.neathandwriting

continuationwritingskill1facialexpressionsphysicalresponsespatsbontheshoulderwinkatsbwithabiggrincastaglimpseattrembleheavilyalookofconcernspreadingacrosshisfaceonthevergeofcollapsingleapwithgreatjoysparklewithenthusiasmChi-biMarukocriedbitterly,tears__________________________.streamingdownherface/cheeksMarblesmiledfromearto_____,________

hiswhiteteeth.

showingear

Waitinganxiouslyfortheteachertoannouncetheresultoftheexam,I________atthepaperheldintheteacher'shands.Uponhearingtheresult,Ifeltthatmyheart_______________.Overwhelmedwithdisappointment,Ihidthepaperand_______________myhead,thinkingwhatIshoulddonextsinceIhadalreadytriedmybest.Atthatmoment,Iwasseizedbyasenseofsadnessandcouldn'thelp____________.staredbeathard/sanklowered/hungcryingbitterly嘟囔：whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說：stutter/stumble/stammer宣布：announce/declare保證：promise/assure建議：offer/propose/suggest；問與答：ask詢問/answer回答/reply回復(fù)喊叫：cryout喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim驚叫（因高興、憤怒、痛苦、驚訝等發(fā)生的喊叫）其他的說：add補充說道=continue繼續(xù)說道/retort反駁道；explain解釋道/state陳述道；/protest抗議道/sob哭訴道/agree同意地說/comfort安慰道/blurtout脫口而出/insist說的具體詞閃爍（某種感情色彩）：shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinklewith+excitement/joy/pride等表示感情色彩的名詞各種哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burstintotears/burstoutcrying/fightbacktears抑制住淚水睜大眼睛：one’seyeswidened/grewwide眼睛的具體動詞露出笑容：asmileappearedon/spreadacrosshisface煥發(fā)光彩：one’sfacelitup/brightened/glowed臉紅：flush/burn（withembarrassment）各種笑：smile微笑/laugh出聲笑/chuckle輕聲笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer譏諷地笑/beam笑容滿面/grin露齒笑臉的具體動詞各種打：pound/thump/punch猛擊;beat連續(xù)擊打；slap打耳光；tap/pat輕拍各種抓：seize；grasp；grab;clutch;takeholdof;catchholdof;holdonto其他的動作：pull拉/掏；push推；reach伸；drag拽；pinch捏wipe擦；rub揉；hug/embrace/holdsbinone’sarms擁抱；press按壓；roll搖；pickup撿起手的具體動詞sit坐；lie躺；bend/stoop彎腰；leanagainst..倚靠；drop/hang/lowerone’shead低頭各種心跳：beat/thump/pound/pump(withexcitement/fear)其他動作：miss/skipabeat漏跳了一拍；break心碎；melt融化；ache疼dash/rush沖；risetoone’sfeet站起來;struggletoone’sfeet吃力地站起來;jumptoone’sfeet跳起來;kneeldown跪下;getdownononeknee單膝跪地;slip滑到；sneak/creep偷偷走；crawl爬；wobble/limp/stagger/stumble搖搖晃晃地走身體的具體動詞心臟的具體動詞腳的具體動詞continuationwritingskill2naturalenvironmentThemanstoodfrozentothespotwiththerain__________downfromthedarkness.pouring

Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.

Showthereaderseverything,tellthemnothing.——ErnestHemingway——continuationwritingskill3diverse（多樣的）structuresA、BandC(動作鏈)Themomentthebellrings,anumberofstudentsputdowntheirpens,closebooksand

rushtowardsthedininghallrapidly.A+B+非謂語Overwhelmedwithdisappointment,Ihidthepaperandloweredmyhead,thinkingwhatIshoulddonextsinceIhadalreadytriedmybest.

Atthecriticalmoment,hisfathergrabbedhisarm,runningandclimbingontoatreetogether.形容詞及其短語作狀語Embarrassedandnervous,Irushedoutofthehouse.Nervousandfrightened,Gradystoodstill,notknowingwhattodo.Concernedabouttheexamresult,shecanhardlyfallasleeplyingbedawake.

Aboutteno'clockinthemorning,exhausted

andhungry,Iwasdraggingmyselfalongthestreet.

倒裝句so...that...Notonly...butalso...as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句Innoway/Bynomeans/neverOnly+狀語（介詞短語/副詞/狀語從句）Somovedwashethathecanhardlyspeak.Never/Innoway/BynomeanswillIgiveup.Panickedaswewere,ElliandIscreamedatthetopofourlungs,andwavedourfistsathiminanattempttoscarehimaway.Notuntilthendidherealizehowmarvellousitwastounitewithhisfamily.With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨立主格Hethrewaglanceatthebearcub,pettinghisheadgently,(with)excitementoverflowinginhismind.Shecriedbitterly,(with)tearsstreamingdownherface/cheeks.begrateful/thankfultosbforsthexpress/voice/conveyone'sgratitude/thanks(concern/congratulations)tosbapologizetosbforsthmakeanapologytosbforsthbeconcerned/worriedaboutcongratulatesbon