15征稿作文2022年中考英語滿分作文賞析

15征稿作文NO.1（2022?廣東廣州?中考真題）你校將興建新圖書館，學(xué)校英文報(bào)以“MyGreenSchoolLibrary”為題向?qū)W生征稿。請根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你所設(shè)計(jì)（design）的綠色圖書館。MyGreenSchoolLibraryWhatdoesJthoklfk??-coJθurLshapeWhatmakesitgreen?-ImtEriHK的斜）“energyt能源）Whatc^nwed。the珀？注意：.可在思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)拓展信息；.詞數(shù)80詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary.【滿分作文賞析】MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary.Itisgreen.Itisbuiltentirelyfromrenewableresources.Itisround.Whenyousitinside,youwillfeelverywarm.Itiscomposedofwastepaperandsolarpanels.Allitsenergycomesfromthesun.Youcanreadallkindsofbooksinit.Youcanalsolistentomusicinit.Ifyouaretired,youcanalsorestinside.【解析】.題干解讀：本文主要以“MyGreenSchoolLibrary”為題，并根據(jù)題干中的思維導(dǎo)圖介紹你所設(shè)計(jì)的綠色圖書館，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第二人稱和第三人稱為主。主要是根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖中的提示描述自己設(shè)計(jì)的綠色圖書館，寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022?湖北宜昌?中考真題）假如你學(xué)校的校園廣播《英語之聲》欄目以“1love"為主題征稿，請你投稿。稿件內(nèi)容：口熱愛的主題口熱愛的理由口適當(dāng)?shù)母形蚋寮螅海?）請補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80詞左右。Ilove IlovereadingIlovereadingverymuch.IrememberitwasfiveyearsagothatIbecameinterestedinreading.Atthattime,Ijoinedareadingclubonline.Iwasgladtofindthereweresomanybooksformetoread.Myteacherencouragedmetoreaddifferentkindsofbooks,andthensharemyfeelingswithotherreaders.Ifoundgreatfunsharingideas.Eversincethen,readinghasbeenmyfavoritehobby.Fromreadingbooks,Icannotonlylearnalotfromthem,butalsoopenanewworldforme.Itmakesmerelaxedandbringsmealotoffun.Ithinkmoreandmorepeoplewilllovereadinginthefuture.【解析】.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜歡閱讀”為題寫一篇短文。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段先引出自己喜愛的事情，接著描述自己喜愛它的原因和經(jīng)歷；第二段描述自己從中得到的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.3（2022?江蘇蘇州?中考真題《蘇州日報(bào)》英文?？浴癙racticemakesPerfect”為題向中學(xué)生開展征文活動(dòng)，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：你對該諺語的理解；你生活中的一個(gè)事例（例如：運(yùn)動(dòng)、樂器、家務(wù)、學(xué)習(xí)等方面）；你的感悟，注意：1.詞數(shù)100，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；內(nèi)容需涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesPerfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“PracticemakesPerfect”?ImeanPracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatweshouldpracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain.We’llbeabletoperformitperfectly.ThepracticeoflearningEnglishisagoodexample.WearenotlivinginanEnglishspeakingcountry.So,inordertolearnitwell,weneedextrapractice,suchasreadingEnglishbooks,goingtoEnglishcorners,orcommunicatingwithforeigners.Youcan’tmasterEnglishjustbysittingatyourdesk.Asanotherexample,ifwewanttobeskilledinusingthecomputer,wealsoneedtopracticeusingit.Somechildrenbecomelittleexpertsincomputer,justbecausetheyplaywithiteveryday.Onthecontrary,ifwejuststicktobooks,wewillstillfeelconfusedwhenusingcomputers.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthatpracticemakesperfect.【解析】.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“熟能生巧”這句諺語展開描述。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段引出主題，介紹自己對這句諺語的理解；第二段從學(xué)習(xí)英語以及學(xué)習(xí)使用電腦這兩個(gè)方面，解讀這句諺語。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.4（2022?浙江溫州?中考真題）假如你是陳華，你的英國朋友Tracy在她學(xué)校成立了中國音樂社，她在為社團(tuán)成員安排下學(xué)期的活動(dòng)，寫郵件征求你的意見。請根據(jù)她設(shè)計(jì)的活動(dòng)（見下表）回復(fù)郵件，提出你對這些活動(dòng)的看法和理由，并為她補(bǔ)充至少一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。ActivitiesfortheChinesemusicclub?ListentotraditionalandmodernChinesemusic.?SharestoriesofChinesesingers.注意：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；(2)詞數(shù)：110詞左右；開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTracy,Gladtohearfromyou.It’sgreattoknowyou’vegotaChinesemusicclubinyourschool.Hopeyou’llenjoyChinesemusicandhavefun.Yours,ChenHua【滿分作文賞析】DearTracy,Gladtohearfromyou.It’sgreattoknowyou’vegotaChinesemusicclubinyourschool.ListeningtotraditionalandmodernChinesemusicisagoodwayfortheclubmemberstoknowmoreaboutChinesemusic,becausetheycanexperiencethebeautyofChinesemusicpersonally.SharingstoriesofChinesesingerscanhelpthembetterunderstandthebackgroundofthesongs,soit’ssurelyameaningfulactivity.Besides,youcanintroducevariousChineseinstrumentstotheclubmembersindifferentways.TherearemanytraditionalmusicalinstrumentsinChinadifferentfromthoseinwesterncountries.TheycanlearnaboutChineseculturethroughtheseinstruments.Hopeyou’llenjoyChines