專題09-2021新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫典例分析09-After-a-Quarrel

專題092021新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫典例分析092021新高考英語AfteraQuarrel目錄01表達積累02原文分析03續(xù)寫擴展04續(xù)寫賞析01表達積累表達積累1.忍不住傷心地哭了2.她母親的責(zé)罵3.在街上漫無目的地徘徊4.手頭沒有錢5.我請客

couldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullythescoldingfromhermotherwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetwithnomoneyinhandI’lltreatyou表達積累6.一碗面條7.默默地哭著8.只是被你的好意打動了9.擦去她的眼淚10.把我趕出了家

abowlofnoodlescriedsilentlywasjusttouchedbyyourkindnesswipedhertearsdrovemeoutofthehouse表達積累11.毫不在乎12.太無情了13.表達對某人的感激14.驚呆了，說不出話來15.飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的雙手

showednocareforissomercilessexpressedyourgratitudetospeechlessandnumbwithshockweatheredhands表達積累16.讓我覺得很感激17.道歉18.眼淚順著他們的臉頰流下19.亮晶晶的眼睛20.興奮的跳了起來

mademefeelindebtedmakeanapologytearsstreamingdowntheircheekstwinklingeyesjumpwildlyintotheairofexcitement02原文分析AfteraQuarrelJennywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotevenpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shesighedandhadtoleave.原文分析Jenny和媽媽吵架離家出走，在街上游蕩，傷心，餓。Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes...butIdon’thavemoneyonme…”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman,“comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.原文分析老板請她吃了一碗面條?！癗othing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJennyasshewipedhertears,“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymother,drovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”原文分析女孩和老板聊天關(guān)于感恩。Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”O(jiān)nthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.原文分析Jenny決定向媽媽道歉。Paragraph1：

Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback._______________________________________________________________________原文分析自己獨自在傷心的回憶中，續(xù)寫回憶媽媽的種種。說明上一段Jenny回家之后沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽，媽媽回來了，續(xù)寫女孩如何和媽媽感情歸好。03續(xù)寫擴展Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Shewonderedwherehermotherwas…Sherememberedhermother’scaring…Shewassosad…Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Shesawthatwashermother…Hermotherwaslookingforher…Sheapologized…句子潤色當(dāng)她敲門時，她發(fā)現(xiàn)門是鎖著的，她媽媽不在。Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.thedoorwaslocked句子潤色又累又傷心，她在房前坐下。TiredandsadTiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.句子潤色“我媽媽會在哪里？”她想，“她還在生我的氣嗎？”？“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Wasshestillangrywithme?”shewonderedBeangrywith句子潤色爭吵的情景又出現(xiàn)在她的腦海里。Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.thesceneofappearedinhermindThesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermindagain.句式的多變句子潤色她記得她對母親的粗魯。rudenessSherememberedherrudenesstohermother.句子潤色意識到母親的責(zé)罵都是因為她，母親真的很關(guān)心她，她覺得很慚愧，眼淚開始順著臉頰往下滾。Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.feltratherashamedtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks句子潤色她抬起頭，看到了她母親熟悉的面孔。raisedherheadSheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother.句子潤色“你來了！我一直在找你，”她說，既疲倦又松了一口氣。。tiredandrelieved.“Hereyoucome!I’vebeenlookingforyou,”shesaid,tiredandrelieved.句子潤色珍妮情不自禁地投入母親的懷抱。Jennycouldn’thelpthrowingherselfintohermother’sarms.throwingherselfintohermother’sarms句子潤色“媽媽，我很抱歉，謝謝你為我所做的一切?！彼硎玖苏\摯的歉意和深深的感激。expressedhersincereapology“Mum,I’msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme.”Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.greatgratitude句子潤色聽了這話，她媽媽微笑著輕輕地拍著她的背。HearingthisHearingthis,hermothersmiledpattingherbackgently.pattingherback04續(xù)寫賞析續(xù)寫賞析Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Wasshestillangrywithme?”Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalota