高考英語讀后續(xù)寫誤會故事類+粗魯男孩

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習誤會故事——粗魯男孩1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文TheRudeBoyJamesSeltonwasoneoftherudestboysinthevillagewherehelived.Ifapersoninthestreetwaswelldressed,hewouldcryout,“Dandy(花花公子)!”Ifaperson’sclothesweredirtyortorn,hewouldthrowstonesathim,andannoyhimineveryway.Oneafternoon,justastheschoolwasdismissed,astrangerpassedthroughthevillage.Hisdresswasplainandsomewhatold,butneatandclean.Hecarriedacane(手杖)inhishand,ontheendofwhichwasabagandheworeabroad-brimmed(寬邊的)hat.NosoonerhadJamesseenthestrangerthanhewinkedtohisplaymates,andsaid,“Nowforsomefun!”Hethensilentlywenttowardthestrangerfrombehind,and,knockingoffhishat,ranaway.4續(xù)寫原文Themanturnedandsawhim,butJameswasoutofhearingbeforehecouldspeak.Thestrangerputonhishat,andwentonhisway.AgaindidJamesapproach,butthistime,themancaughthimbythearm,andheldhimtightly.However,hecontentedhimselfwithlookingatJamesamomentintheface,andthenpushedhimfromhim.Nosoonerhadthenaughtyboyfoundhimselffreeagainthanhebegantopelt(連讀投擲)thestrangerwithdirtandstones.ButJameswasveryfrightenedwhenthemanwasstruckontheheadbyabrick,andbadlyhurt.Alltheboysranaway,andJamesskulked(偷偷摸摸走動)acrossthefieldstohishome.Ashedrewnearhishouse,hissisterCarolinecameouttomeethim,holdingupabeautifulgoldchainandsomenewbooksforhimtosee.ShetoldJames,asfastasshecouldtalk,thattheiruncle,whohadbeenawayseveralyears,hadcomehome,andwasnowinthehouse;thathehadbroughtbeautifulpresentsforthewholefamily;thathehadlefthiscarriageatthetavern(客棧),amileortwooff,andwalkedonfoot,soastosurprisehisbrother,theirfather.5段首句Paragraph1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Paragraph2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了JamesSelton是他住的村子里最粗魯?shù)哪泻⒅唬?jīng)常捉弄他人。一天下午，放學時，一個陌生人經(jīng)過村子，James開始捉弄這個陌生人，用磚塊擊中陌生人的頭部并受重傷。James嚇壞了趕緊回家，妹妹告訴他，他們的叔叔離開這里多年，現(xiàn)在回到家里，并給他們?nèi)屹I了漂亮的禮物。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她說，當他穿過村子時，一些壞男孩向他扔石頭?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懯迨迨軅那闆r和James的擔心和害怕，不敢回家。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他的叔叔走到他跟前，但當他看到他的臉時突然停住了?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼慗ames的叔叔認出來他。James向叔叔坦白了自己的一切，如釋重負，決定改掉自己低賤無理的舉止。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索意識到——害怕——羞愧——坦白——改正12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①.意識到：realize/beawareof/becomeawareof②.交談：talkwith/chatwith/haveachatwith③.坦白：confess/acknowledge/admit情緒類①.愉快地：happily/merrily/cheerfully②.羞愧：shame/disgrace13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.(運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和賓語從句)[高分句型2].Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.(運用了倒裝結構，with的復合結構，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Shesaidwhilehewascomingthroughthevillage,somewickedboysthrewstonesathim.Hewasbadly/severelyhurtandthewoundwasjustovertheeye.Hearingthis,Jamesimmediatelyrealizedthatitwashethathurthisuncle.Shamefulandfrightened,hedarednotstepintothehouse.Atthattime,heheardhisfathercallinghimtocomein.“Whatmakesyoulooksopale?”askedCaroline,changinghertone.Withpalmssweating,hehadnochoicebuttoobey.Insidetheroomsatthestranger,orratherhisuncle,withhisforeheadboundup,talkinghappilywithhisfather.WhatasenseofshamedidJamesnowfeel!Hangingdownhishead,hewalkedtoward/approachedhisuncle.16范文呈現(xiàn)Hisunclewentuptohim,butstoppedsuddenlywhenseeinghisface.Thenhecried,“Oh!It’syou!”Butwhenhisunclesawthepuzzledfather,heimmediatelyexplainedthathejustmetJamesinthestreet.Inaflash,Jameslearntthathisunclewasreadytoforgivehim.Butfacingsuchakinduncle,hecouldn’tconcealhisguilt.Havingconfessedwhathehaddonetohisuncle,Jamesfeltrelieved.Heneverforgotthislessonsolongashelived.Itcuredhimentirelyofhislowandinsolent/rudemanners.17范文譯文她說，當他穿過村莊時，一些邪惡的男孩向他扔石頭。他受了重傷，傷口剛好在眼睛上方。聽到這些，詹姆斯立刻意識到是他傷害了他的叔叔。他既羞愧又害怕，不敢進屋。這時，他聽到父親叫他進來?！笆鞘裁醋屇隳樕@么蒼白？”卡羅琳改變了語氣問道。手掌冒汗，他別無選擇，只好服從。房間里坐著一個陌生人，或者更確切地說是他的叔叔，他的前額被捆起來，和他的父親愉快地交談著。詹姆斯現(xiàn)在感到多么羞愧??！他低著頭朝叔叔走去。18范文譯文他的叔叔走到他面前，但看到他的臉時突然停了下來。然后他喊道：