英語新教材導學人教必修第一冊講義Unit1SectionⅦReadingforWriting-建議信Word版含答案

SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建議信本單元的寫作任務(wù)是讀一封建議信，了解建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)和語言特征，然后再寫一封建議信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2018DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplaysputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Iremendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtoputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbeeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①remendvt.建議②unhealthyadj.不健康的③encouragevt.鼓勵④usefuladj.有用的⑤advicevt.忠告，建議⑥inone’ssparetime閑暇⑦lookforwardto盼望，期望⑧beworriedabout對……擔心⑨beattractedto喜愛⑩beaddictedto對……上癮?concentrateon集中精力于?begoodfor/dogoodto對……有益處?makefriends交朋友?hearfrom收到……的來信?enjoyoneself/havefun玩得愉快Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封建議信。1.要交朋友首先要做一個朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友誼需要時間和投入(effort)。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：thepurposeoftheletterParagraph2：thesuggestionsthatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’shopeStep2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tip/advice/suggestionn.建議②situationn.情況③makefriends交朋友④havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困難⑤takeone’sadvice接受某人的建議⑥sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦⑦callfor需要⑧putone’sheartinto全心全意2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.③要交朋友為什么不先做一個朋友呢？(whynot)Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個好主意嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?⑤正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusemasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮點表達1.建議信開頭常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublemunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人交流方面有些麻煩，你也可能經(jīng)常感到孤獨。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。2.表達建議常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參加一個俱樂部？如果你這樣做的話，就會交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)該盡力與人交談。這樣，你會感覺好點。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看書或聽音樂將會是個不錯的主意。通過這樣做，你會使自己平靜下來。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)該先和她談一談。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來，你們應(yīng)該互相幫助。3.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.如果你遵從以上建議，隨著時間的推移，人們會更加了解你，會愿意和你交朋友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我相信，如果你聽從我的建議，你會和同學們相處好的。寫作技巧連句成篇，行文連