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續(xù)寫原文Myfatherwasthekindofpersonwhocouldneverpassbysomeonewhoneededhelp.Hewasafirmbelieverinthemantra(箴言):Whatgoesaroundesaround.Hebelievedthatsomedayhemightneedhelp,andsomeonewouldreturnthefavor.ButIdidn’tquitebuyit.Oneweekend,myfatherandItookatriptoFlamingGorgeReservoir(水庫).WelovedtofishatFlamingGorge.Weownedacabinboatthatwasaboutfifteenfeetinlength.WeputourboatinatSheepCreekMarina(游艇停泊港).Ourgoalwastogoasfarnorthaspossible,spendtheweekendinourboat,andfishuntilwehadourlimit.HeadingtowardtheWyomingsideofthereservoir,wetraveledsomedistancebeforewebegantofish.Frankly,thefishingwasn’tverygood,butwelovedbeingoutontheboattogetherinsuchabeautifulplace.Suddenly,wesawamanonthefarshorewavingatus.Immediately,myfatherfiredupthemotorandwenttowardtheothersideofthereservoir,wherethemanwasstillwavingatus.Whenwearrived,Iwasamazedtoseeabeautifulbigyacht(游艇)pulledontotheshore.ThemanintroducedhimselfasMatandthenthankeduswarmlyforingtohisassistance.Hisbatterywasdead,andhewonderedifwecouldhelphim.Wedid,andsoonhisbigmotorroaredbacktolife.Matandhisfamilywereverygrateful.Welostanhouroffishing.Beinganimpatientteenager,Iwasabitannoyedattheonehourloss,butweweresoonbackoutonthereservoir.Thenextdaythefishingdidn’timprove.Asamatteroffact,itwasterrible,sowedecidedtocallitquitsandgobacktothemarina.Wewereabouttwomilesfromthemarinawhenwefoundourselvesfightingastrongheadwindthatslowedourprogress.Thewaveswerekickingup,andsuddenlyourenginedecidedtoquit.Paragraph1:

Wetriedtogetitrunning,butitsimplywouldn’tstart.Paragraph2:

Onourwayhome,Isawanoldladywavingatourcarbytheroadside.原文本詞匯積累：cabinboat客艙船4.afirmbeliever忠實(shí)的信徒5.inlength/width/height/size長度/寬度/高度/尺寸為......6.onthefarshore在遙遠(yuǎn)的海岸7.passby經(jīng)過而不被注意或采取行動8.returnthefavor回報恩情9.fireupthemotor發(fā)動發(fā)動機(jī)10.buyit買賬11.takeatripto去旅行afollower信徒12.travelsomedistance走了一段距離apractitioner實(shí)踐者13.headtoward朝......方向前進(jìn)itquits認(rèn)輸，停止15.findoneselfdoing/done發(fā)現(xiàn)自己......16.slowone’sprogress放慢進(jìn)度personification原文句子積累：2.Hisbigmotorroaredbacktolife.大發(fā)動機(jī)轟鳴著發(fā)動起來了。...wefoundourselvesfightingastrongheadwindthatslowedourprogress.當(dāng)我們發(fā)現(xiàn)自已在與一股強(qiáng)大的逆風(fēng)作斗爭時，我們的前進(jìn)速度減慢了。Thewaveswerekickingup(海浪在翻騰),andsuddenlyourenginedecidedtoquit.HowtoshowtheCHANGEoffeeling/attitude/action?1.Thepreviousannoyancegavewayto/wastotallyreplacedwithamixofgratitudeandshame.ItwasnotuntilthenthatIcametounderstandwhatfather'smantratrulymeant.2.Insteadofbeingabystander,IurgentlyaskedDadtopulloverandinquiredherwhatIcoulddotohelp.HowtohighlighttheTHEME?CONTRAST1.Thefishingwasn’tverygood,butweharvestedmorethanthefishpractice(踐行)ofmyfather'smantraandfulfillment(滿)fromarandomactofkindness.2.Itdawnedonmethatfatherwasmoreofapractitioner(踐行者)thanjustabelieverinthemantra.AndIwasfirmlyconvincedofitsmoral(需意)andwouldspendtherestofmylifelivingit(活學(xué)活用).What’sthewayoutwhenstrandedwith(陷于某種困境)adeadbatteryatsea?switchtothebackupballgethookedtoaboat1.Asluckwouldhaveit(說來也5),Mattookabackupbatterywithhimincaseofthatthesamethingwouldhappen.Aftermeticulously(細(xì)致地)checkingourboat,heinstalled(安裝)theswitchedbattery,andjustforashortwhile,ourboattrembledalittlebitandrevived.2.WewerewaitingforastrokeoflucktofalluponuswhentheMatsshoweduprightinfrontofus,intheirbeautifulyacht.Hepulledupalongsideandjumpedtoourstocheckifhecouldhelp.Asthebatterywasdead,hefetchedarope,hookedourboattohisanddrove/navigatedusbacktotheshore.下水范文1Wetriedtogetitrunning,butitsimplywouldn’tstart.Whateverwetried,itfailed.driftingusintoanendlessflowofdesperation.Worsestill,amidthefiercewindandroughwaves,wefearedourtinyboatwouldbeoverthrew(情緒體現(xiàn)危機(jī))Asluckwouldhaveit,wewereabouttogiveintofatewhenafancyyachtcameintooursight,ontheprowofwhichwasMatwavingexcitedlyatus.(轉(zhuǎn)機(jī))Hepulledupalongsideus,andafterknowingwhatwasgoingon,Matjumpedtoourstocheckifhecouldhelp.Asthebatterywasdead,hefetchedarope,hookedourboattohisandnavigatedusbacktotheshore.(救助過程)Alongtheway,somethingbegantochangeinmyheart.(轉(zhuǎn)變鋪墊)Onourwayhome,Isawanoldladywavingatourcarbytheroadside.Judgingfromherwrinkledfaceandexhaustedfigure,Iguessedshewasinurgentneedofourhelp.(f接+情況描述)Quicklywepulledoverandloweredourwindows,askingifwecouldbeofsomehelp.(行為轉(zhuǎn)變)Itturnedoutthatshehadwaitedhereforabout8hourstohitchhiketothecitycenter.(問題描達(dá))Wereadilyinvitedherinandchattedhappilyonourride.(行為轉(zhuǎn)變/救助經(jīng)過)Whenshearrived,shekeptsayingthanks,hereyesglintingwithgratitude.ItwasthenthatIcametorealizetherealmeaningoffather'smantraandthatfatherwasmoreofapractitionerthanjustabelieverinthemantra.AndIwasfirmlyconvincedofitsmoralandwouldspendtherestofmylife.下水范文2：Meanwhile,thehowlingwindconstantlywipedourtiny"boatseeminglytoengulfus.NeverbeforeinallmylifehadIwentthroughsuchterribleexperiencenorhodIbeessoindescribablyandincrediblyhopelessandhelpless.Afternumerousfailedendeavors/Ithrewmyhandsintheairindismay,floatingontheoceanofdespair.Abruptly,weheardapowerfulsoundofthemotorAmazingly,thepreviousbeautifulbigyachtcameintooursightandtheoldmansaved