高三期末調(diào)研南京市鹽城市讀后續(xù)寫-小島探險講義

鹽城市、南京市2024高三英語期末調(diào)研讀后續(xù)寫歷練與成長：神秘島嶼的探險之旅?InthetownofGreenfield,agroupofthree

adventurous

spirits—Jack,Simon,andLucas—haddiscoveredanancientmapinJack’sgrandfather’shouse.Themap,yellowedwithage,describeda

mysterious

islandthathadthelegendary(傳說的)SilverFalcon,a

statue

thatwassaidto

award

itsfinder

enormous

wisdomandfortune.Astypicaleighthgraderswiththeexcitementofdiscoveryanddreamsofgreatness,theydecidedtheywouldbetheonestodiscoverthishiddentreasure.Theyagreedtostartthissearchduringthe

upanding

springbreak,keepingtheirplansasecretfromtheadultswhowouldundoubtedly

discourage

suchadangerousadventure.Thedaysthatfollowedwerefilledwithpreparation.Theyreadbookson

survival,learnedaboutthestarsfor

navigation,andtestedtheircourageinsmallerwoods.Theboyswereunitedbytheirunshakable

resolve

andthepromiseofanadventurethatcouldchangetheirlivesforever.Asspringbreakbegan,theysetoutjustasthesunpaintedtheskywithcolorsoforangeandgold.Theyfeltamixtureofexcitementandslightnervousness.Theycarriedbackpacksfilledwith

supplies

andtheancientmapthattheyhopedwouldleadthemto

glory.Thebeginningoftheirjourneywasfulloflaughterandsongsaroundthe

campfire,butasdayspassed,thetrip'srealitysetin.Thepathgrewmoredangerous,andthemapsguidedthemthroughthickwoodsandmuddywetlands.Theylearnedtoworktogetherastheirfriendshipwastestedbyconstantchallenges.Slowly,theisland

drewnearer.Aconflict

arose

whentheyreachedthefootofMountVeritas,thefinal

barrier

beforereachingtheisland.Lucas

twisted

hisankle,andtheslightestmovementsentsharppainsshootingthroughhisleg.Withtimerunningout,JackandSimonhadtomakeachoice:shouldthey

pushon

andriskLucas’wellbeingorturnbackafteringsofar?Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.

WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.一、文本分析這篇短文介紹了三個充滿冒險精神的少年尋找一個傳說中藏有巨大智慧和財(cái)富的神秘小島。在旅途中，他們面臨了許多困難和挑戰(zhàn)，但也因此加深了彼此之間的友誼。然而，當(dāng)他們到達(dá)神秘小島前的最后一道屏障時，Lucas

扭傷了腳踝，他們必須決定是繼續(xù)前進(jìn)并冒險危及

Lucas

的健康，還是在已經(jīng)走了這么遠(yuǎn)的情況下回頭。Themainideaofthisarticleisthatthreeadventurousteenagerssetouttofindamysteriousislandaccordingtoanancientmap.Duringtheirjourney,theyfacedmanydifficultiesandchallenges,buttheirfriendshipalsodeepenedasaresult.However,whentheyreachedthefootofMount,Lucassprainedhisankle,andtheyhadtodecidewhethertocontinueforwardandriskLucas'shealthorturnbackafterhavingesofar.二、命題點(diǎn)分析

本次寫作是考生比較熟悉的問題解決型寫作。讀完文本，考生首先要做出判斷：是繼續(xù)前進(jìn)還是返回。從續(xù)寫的第二段提示句可知，他們選擇了繼續(xù)前行。如果繼續(xù)前行，考生需要解決的問題就是如何帶著受傷的Lucas到達(dá)探險目的地。這時要呼應(yīng)前文提到的生存技能的學(xué)習(xí)。最后的提示句可知并沒有得到他們想要的東西，那么他們從探險之旅收獲了什么應(yīng)該是續(xù)寫的點(diǎn)睛之筆。三、續(xù)寫策略1.

提取關(guān)鍵詞根據(jù)第一句話“Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.”可知關(guān)鍵詞是“knowingglances心照不宣的眼色”，從第二句“WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.”可知關(guān)鍵詞是“

reaching，foundnofortune”。2.根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞提問回答1)

Whatareknowingglances?

They

should

pushon.2)

HowdidtheyreachtheSilverFalcon?UsedthesurvivalskillsandemergencyhandlingskillstohelpLucasrelievehispain.Carrywithhandsandbackhim.

3)

Howdidtheyfeelwhentheyfoundnofortunethereatall?

Disappointedbutrewarding4)

Whatdidtheygetfromthisadventure?Bynotgivingupandpushingthroughdifficultiestoreachourdestination,

they

gainfarmorethanjustmaterialtreasures,

developvaluablequalities,experiencepersonalgrowth,andachieveadeepersenseoffulfilmentandpride.3.

組織語言完成寫作Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.

Theycouldn'tgiveuphalfwaynorleavetheirpanionbehind.Theydecidedtomoveon.So,theyusedemergencyhandlingskillstheyhadlearnedpreviouslytohelpLucasrelievehispain.Thenthey

had

Lucassitontheir

crossed

handsandcarried

him.Whentheyweretired,theytookturnstocarryhimontheirbacks,stepbysteptowardsthedestination.Alongtheway,theyencouragedandhelpedeachother,andfinallyovercameallthedifficultiesandarrivedatthedestination.（82words）WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.

Lucaswasdisappointed.

They

had

takenpains

allthewaytothedestination,onlytofindthatthestatuedidnotgivethemthelegendarywisdomandfortuneasareward.However,JackandSimonfelt

thisadventure

wasrewarding.Theirfriendshiphadbeentested,whichwasmoreimportantthananywisdomandfortune.

Althoughtheydidnotreceivetheexpectedreward,

they

experiencepersonalgrowth,andachieveadeepersenseof

fulfillment

andpride.(75words)四、官方范文Atcrossroads,JackandSimonexchangedknowingglances.

Theyrealizedtheycouldn’tleaveLucasbehindandthatthestatuecouldwait,buttheirfriendshipcouldnot.Withgreatdeterminationandstrengthenedbonds,theyconstructedamakeshiftstretcherandcarriedLucasthroughthelastlegoftheirjourney.Astheyreachedthetopofthelasthill,theislandrevealeditselfinallitsglory.Itwasmoreimpressivethantheycouldhaveeverimagined.TheSilverFalconstoodinthecenter,itswingsshininginthesunlight.

WhenreachingtheSilverFalcon,thethreeboysfoundnofortunethereatall.

Atthattime,theyrealizedthetruetreasureoftheirjourney.Itwasn'taboutthewisdomorfortunetheSilverFalconcouldbri