公開課：應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信

課程名稱：應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容：建議信基礎(chǔ)寫作書面表達（滿分25分)假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友Mike與父母一道來到中國。他發(fā)現(xiàn)自己所學(xué)的漢語根本就不夠用。因此，他給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件，向你請教如何提高漢語聽說能力。請給他回一封郵件。要點如下：

1.郵件已收到，理解他所遇到的問題。

2.提出如下建議：在課內(nèi)課外要多說漢語，多注意電視節(jié)目主持人的發(fā)音等3．祝愿他學(xué)習(xí)取得進步。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。一、欣賞與學(xué)習(xí)（見鞏固練習(xí)第一題）Outline提綱Style體裁格式：

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文章結(jié)構(gòu)要點：StructureandPoints:第一段：

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DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceOutline提綱Style體裁格式：

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文章結(jié)構(gòu)要點：StructureandPoints:第一段：

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RaisetheproblemAdviceWishesFirstpersonPresenttenseLetterDearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceUsefulexpressions:1.Iamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceon….2.Hereismyadvicefor…3.itisimportanttodosth.4.themore…,thebetter….5.itshouldbeagreatideatodosth.6.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogress.7.Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.8.Firstly,….Secondly,….Inconclusion,….Learntomakesentences.（見鞏固練習(xí)第二題）1.我收到你的來信詢問我關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)壓力的問題，我深感遺憾。（Iamsorryto….）_________________________________________________2.勞逸結(jié)合很重要。（combine…with…）_________________________________________________3.強烈建議你保持均衡的飲食習(xí)慣。（keepabalanceddiet）_________________________________________________4.適當(dāng)?shù)膽敉膺\動是一個好主意。（outdooractivities）__________________________________________________5.你吃的健康食品越多，你的身體就會越好。__________________________________________________Doyouknowanyotherusefulexpressions?Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonpressure.Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.Themorehealthyfoodyoueat,thebetterhealthyouwillhave.Forthebeginning1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…2.Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyopinionabout…Forthemainbody1.Istronglyadvise/suggestthatyoushould…because…2.IfIwereyou,Iwould…Fortheending1.Ihopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelptoyou.2.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.

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假設(shè)你是李華，你的筆友Tony寫信告訴你他最近在學(xué)習(xí)中的一些困難。他感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，正常生活也受到影響，如睡眠不足，身體也開始亮起了紅燈。請你給他寫一封信，給他提供幫助。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢。Learnwritealetterofadvice.（見鞏固練習(xí)第三題）Outline提綱Style體裁格式：

Tense主導(dǎo)時態(tài)：

Person中心人稱：

文章結(jié)構(gòu)要點：StructureandPoints:第一段：

第二段：

第三段：

RaisetheproblemAdviceWishesFirstpersonPresenttenseLetterPara1.Raisetheproblem問題1：___________________________________________問題2：___________________________________________Para2.Adviceonhowtodealwithpressure.建議1：___________________________________________建議2：___________________________________________建議3：___________________________________________Para3.Wishes___________________________________________havesomesleepingproblemshaveabadhealthItisimportant