2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫 非同尋常的流浪狗Rufus 講義素材

讀后續(xù)寫試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Thereoncewasastraydog(流浪狗)namedRufuswhowasthemostamazingdogonKumquatStreet.Hecouldhearaladybugblowingitsnose.Hecouldseeapillbugeatingablacklicoricecandyatmidnight.Rufuscouldevensmellacaterpillarthathadn’twasheditsfeet.YouwouldthinkthatRufus,beingsoamazing,wasalsohappy.Buthewasn’t.Yousee,therewasonethingthatkeptRufusfrombeingadoptedbyhisfavoritehuman.Andthatwas…Rufusbarkedbackward.Here’swhathesoundedlike:"Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Rufuscouldstandbeinglaughedatbyeverysquirrelandcatintheneighborhood.Whathecouldn’tstandwasthathisbarkkepthimfromlivingwithJanieJohnson.JanieneverlaughedatRufuswhenhebarked.Morethananythingelse,Rufuswantedtobeherpet.Hewantedtoplaycatchinheryardeverydayandsleepatthefootofherbedeachnight.ButJanie’sfather,Mr.Johnson,wouldn’thearofit."What?Adogthatbarksbackward?We’dbethelaughingstocks

ofKumquatStreet!WeJohnsonsdidn’tgetwherewearetodaybyadoptingdogsthatbarkbackward.No,Janie.It’soutofthequestion."“I’msorry,”JanietoldRufusonemorningastheysatonherfrontporch.”IkeeptellingDaddyhowgreatyouare.Hejustwon’tlisten."“Krab-krab!”saidRufus.“Yes,sometimesheisbad-tempered,"saidJanie"I’llkeeptrying,though.Don’tworry.”ButRufusdidworry.ThateveninghetalkeditoverwithhisfriendBillBulldog."Idon’tthinkMr.Johnsonwilleverlikeme,"Rufussaid."AslongasIbarkbackward,he’llneverletmeliveinhishome."“Haveyoutriedtreatment?”askedBill.Rufussaid,"I’vetriedeverything.Nothinghelps.It’sjustthewayIbark."“You’reagreatdogRoof.Anyonecanseethat,"saidBill."Itjusttakessomehumanslongertofigureitout,that’sall.Hey,wanttogowithmetoSuccotashStreet?I’veheardthattheirgarbageisfantastic.”Rufusyawned."No,thanks,"hesaid."I’lltakeanap."WhenRufuswokeup,itwaslateafternoon.Ashewaslyingthere,hissharpearsheardMr.Johnsonsaying,“It’salmostsuppertime.IsJaniestillroller-skating?WeJohnsonsdidn’tgetwherewearetodaybybeinglateforsupper.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

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JanieandRufus,Mr.Johnsonranup.________________________________________________________________________________試題分析1.主要人物:①Rufus:astraydog,themostamazingdogonKumpuatStreet,barkingbackward,notlikedbyMr.JohnsonbutlikedbyJanie②Janie:agirlwholikedRufus③Mr.Johnson:Janie’sfather,didn’tlikeRufus④BillBulldog:Rufus’sfriend2.視角：第三人稱3.主題：人與自然4.前文故事梗概:流浪狗Rufus有一個(gè)美好的愿望：有一個(gè)家，跟Janie住在一起，成為她的寵物。因?yàn)樗耐蠼械穆曇艉芴貏e，Janie的父親并不喜歡它，這讓它很苦惱。它跟Janie談過，也請(qǐng)好朋友BillBulldog幫忙。這都沒辦法實(shí)現(xiàn)它的愿望。終于，機(jī)會(huì)來了?！?.故事線分析：①Rufus線：unhappy→worried→尋找機(jī)會(huì)獲得信任（如何發(fā)揮它的amazing能力）②Mr.Johnson（父親）線：不接受→接受（口頭禪：WeJohnsonsdidn’tgetwherewearetodayby…）6.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:RufusrandownKumpuatStreettolookforJanie.①（與前一句銜接）Rufus有哪些舉動(dòng)②（過渡）在尋找Janie的過程中，遇到了哪些困難③（承上啟下）找到了Janie后，Rufus是什么表現(xiàn)第二段:AtthesightofJanieandRufus,Mr.Johnsonranup.①（與前一句銜接）Mr.Johnson是哪些表現(xiàn)②（過渡）因?yàn)镽ufus的超凡表現(xiàn)，Mr.Johnson接納了它③（收尾）皆大歡喜（以Mr.Johnson的口頭禪結(jié)尾）下水作文RufusrandownKumpuatStreettolookforJanie.Nothingcouldbemoreimportantthanfindinghisowner-in-future.Sensingthis,Rufusfeltitwashisdutytoaccomplishsuchagloriousmission,runningasfastashecould.Justasusual,hisbarkingbackward“Wob-wow,…Krab-krab”broughthimtheridiculefromtheanimalsintheneighborhood.Butthistimeheignoredthem,barkingloudjustforthesearchofJanie.ItwashisgreatsensesthathelpedhimfindJanie,wholayintheditch,moaning.Rufusranover,anddraggedhertotheroadside.waitingforhelp.SooncameJanie’sfather.(94words)AtthesightofJanieandRufus,Mr.Johnsonranup.ReliefcametoMr.Johnsonafteraquickcheck.NothingwaswrongwithJanie,thoughherleftanklehurtabit.BeforeherfathercouldscoldRufus,JanietoldhimthefactthathercarelessnessledtosuchanincidentandthatRufus’stimelyhelpeasedherworry.Onthewayhome,JaniesharedwithherfatherwhatRufusdidforher.Whenallcametothesurface,Mr.JohnsonshowedsincereapologytoRufus,saying,“WeJohnsondidn’tgetwherewearetodaybynotacceptingsuchawisecompanion!”(91words)參考范文RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.Helistenedfortheclickety-clickofJanie’sskates.Hesniffedforherspecialbubble-gum-and-peachesscent.Helookedforhersky-bluehelmet.Buthedidn’thear,smell,orseeheranywhere.Rufusstartedbakingasloudashecould.“Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Asquirrelgiggledinatree,“I’veneverheardanythingsosillyinmylife!”“Youdon’tevensoundlikeadog!”,yowledacat.Rusfusignoredthemallandkeptonbarking.Soonallyouheardintheneighborhoodwashisbark.Suddenly,JanieskateduptoRufus.“Oh,Rufus,IknewIheardyou!”criedJanie.(100words)AtsightofJanieandRufus,Mr.Johnsonranup.“Janie,”hesaid.“Whereonearthhaveyoubeen?”Janieexplained,“Itookwrongturnandgotlost,