新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫技巧與訓(xùn)練：助人類20篇

讀后續(xù)寫：助人型20篇

第1篇最后的心愿.............................................:

第2篇求職經(jīng)驗(yàn)...............................................、

第3篇避難所..................................................7

第4篇夜遇老人...............................................10

第5篇丟失的戒指.............................................13

第6篇救出小孩...............................................15

第7篇一封信和七美元.........................................17

第8篇遇到好人...............................................20

第9篇簡(jiǎn)單的感謝.............................................22

第10篇?jiǎng)?chuàng)造愛，傳遞愛.......................................24

第11篇圣誕老人..............................................26

第12篇外科醫(yī)生的信仰.......................................28

第13篇拍照..................................................32

第14篇五十個(gè)金幣...........................................35

第15篇披薩店員工救人.......................................39

第16篇捐贈(zèng)..................................................42

第17篇陌生人幫我修車.......................................45

第18篇特殊的駕車旅行........................................46

第19篇?dú)w還雨傘.............................................50

第20篇善意的力量...........................................51

第1篇最后的心愿

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Iwasrespondingtoacallfromasmallbrickflatinaquietpartoftown.IassumedIwas

beingsenttopickupsomeparty-goers,orsomeonewhohadjusthadafightwithalover,ora

workerheadingtoanearlyshiftatsomefactoryfortheindustrialpartoftown.

WhenIarrivedat2：30a.m”thebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloor

window.Undersuchcircumstances,manydriversjusthonk（按球!］歹I）onceortwice,waita

minute,thendriveaway.ButIhadseentoomanyweakpeoplewhodependedontaxisastheironly

meansoftransportation.

Unlessasituationsmelledofdanger,Ialwayswenttothedoor.

Thispassengermightbesomeonewhoneedsmyassistance,!reasonedtomyself.SoIwalked

tothedoorandknocked.nJustaminute,"answeredafrail,elderlyvoice.Icouldhearsomething

beingdraggedacrossthefloor.Afteralongpause,thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80s

stoodbeforeme.Shewaswearingaprintdressandapillboxhat,likesomebodyoutofa1940s

movie.Byhersidewasasmallnylonsuitcase.

Theapartmentlookedasifnoonehadlivedinitforyears.Allthefurniturewascovered_with

sheets.Therewerenoclocksonthewalls,noequipmentonthecounters.Inthecomerwasa

cardboardboxfilledwithphotosandglassware.

''Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar?”shesaid.Itookthesuitcasetothecab,then

returnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm,andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.

Shekeptthankingmeformykindness."It'snothing/1Itoldher."Ijusttrytotreatmy

passengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.'1

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；

4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked."Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?

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Wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,andit...

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Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.nCouldyoudrivethroughdowntown?"

Askedwhywedidn'ttaketheshortestway,thesmallwomantoldmeitwasthelastchanceforher

tovisitthecity.Wedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandherhusbandhadlived.Besides,

sheaskedmetoslowinfrontofaparticularbuildingorcornerandwouldsitstaringintothe

darkness,sayingnothing.Atlast,shesaidshewastiredandwantedtogotothehospice.

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wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,anditwasalowbuilding,wheretheold

ladywouldlivetherestofherlife.Twonurseswhomusthavebeenexpectinghercameouttothe

cabassoonaswepulledup.Iopenedthetrunkandtookthesuitcasetothedoorandthewoman

wasalreadyseatedinawheelchair.Whensheaskedhowmuchsheowedme,withoutthinking,I

saidnothingandbenttogiveherabug.Itwasmyassistancethathelpedoneofweakpeople

realizeherwish.

第1段:

她給了我一個(gè)地址，一個(gè)收容所，她問?！澳隳荛_車穿過市中心嗎？'‘當(dāng)被問及為什么我們不

走最短的路時(shí)，那個(gè)小女人告訴我，這是她去這個(gè)城市的最后一次機(jī)會(huì)。我們開車穿過她和

她丈夫住過的社區(qū)。此外，她請(qǐng)我在某幢大樓或角落前放慢腳步，坐在那里盯著黑暗，什么

也沒說。最后，她說她累了，想去臨終關(guān)懷醫(yī)院。

第2段：

我們默默地驅(qū)車前往她給我的地址，那是一幢低矮的建筑，老太太將在那里度過余生。我們

一停下車，一定在等著她，兩名護(hù)士就上了駕駛室。我打開后備箱，把手提箱拿到門口，那

個(gè)女人已經(jīng)坐在輪椅了。當(dāng)她問她欠我多少錢時(shí)，我什么也沒說，心想給她一個(gè)蟲子。是我

的幫助，幫助一個(gè)弱者實(shí)現(xiàn)了她的愿望。

第2篇求職經(jīng)驗(yàn)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

OnasunnySaturdayafternoon,Mattwentshoppingwithhisfamily.Theyfilledtwo

shoppingcartswithlotsofgroceriesthatwereenoughforawholeweek.Immersedin

warmsunlight,theyheadedtotheparkinglot.

Suddenly,Mattcaughtsightofastrangeman.Usually,itwascommontofind

somehomelesspeopleoutsideasupermarket.Atfirstsight,Mattthoughthewasjusta

homelessguy,buttherewassomethingdifferentwithhim.Hewassittingonasleeping

bagwithmultipleresumesneatlylaidout,alongwithasignthatread"needworkand

fbod.,,Theoldandpoorclothescouldnothidehisoptimismandeagerness.Thesign

arousedMatt'scuriosity.Mattaskedifhecouldseehisresume.Thestrangemanhopped

rightup,handedonetoMattpolitely,andthenstartedintroducingallabout

hisexperienceasifitwereaninterview.HisnamewasShawn.Infact,Shawnwasa

52-year-oldformercook.Matt,inhisthirties,alsoacook,foundShawnwasa

well-spoken,coolandfriendlyguywhoknewexactlywhathewantedandwasgoingafter

it.Shawn'seagernessdeeplyimpressedMatt.

Accustomedtoseeinghomelesspeopleaskforfoodandormoney,Mattfoundit

surprisingtowitnessahomelessguymakingeffortstofindajobdespitedifficult

circumstances.Themaninfrontofhimlookednothinglikeabeggarindepression.There

wasnotevenatraceofself-pityinhiseyes.Shawn'seffortsremindedMatthissituations

wherehehadnothingandhadtobusthisbutt（努力）togetworkandearnmoney.Right

nowandhere,Shawnwasdoingwhathehadexperienced,soMatthadalotofrespectfor

Shawn.Mattboughthimabottleofwaterandsomesandwiches.Shawntookwithshyness.

Then,MatttookapictureofhisresumetopostonFacebook,notknowingifanything

wouldcomeofit.

Soon,someonecameacrossShawn'spostandofferedhimajobasacookatasmall

downtownrestaurant.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫的短文詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為二段，每段的開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；

4續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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Shawnwasveryexcitedandgratefulforlandinganewjob.

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TogetherwithMatt,Shawndecidedtohelpmorepeoplelikehim.

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Shawnwasveryexcitedandgratefulforlandinganewjob.SomuchdidShawncherishthis

hardwonopportunitythatallhisenthusiasmwasclearlyshowninhisdailywork.Carefullyand

professionally,theenergeticcookstudiedandimprovedthemenu,makinggreateffortstohelpthe

restaurantretainregularconsumersthroughdeliciouscuisine.Withhislifeseeingatraceof

sunlight,Shawnincreasinglythankful,butthepoordaysconstantlyremindedhimhomeless

peoplelivinginmiseryandwantingforfoodlikehim.So,hecontactedMattandwantedtodo

more.

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TogetherwithMatt,Shawndecidedtohelporepeoplelikehim.Inspiredbythisspecialwayof

job-hunting,theycameupwiththeideaofhelpingmorehomelesspeoplewithskillstofindajob

throughpreparingresumesandpracticinginterviews.Drivingfromstreettostreet,whereverthey

wentandwhomevertheymet,theysharedtheirexperienceandplantedseedsofdreams.Forthem,

whatbroughtthemsenseofachievementwasnotjustgainingappreciation,butallthemoreso

helpinghomelesspeoplerebuildself-respect.

肖恩非常興奮和感激找到了一份新工作。肖恩非常珍惜這個(gè)來之不易的機(jī)會(huì)，他所有的熱

情都清楚地體現(xiàn)在他的日常工作中。這位精力充沛的廚師仔細(xì)而專業(yè)地研究和改進(jìn)了菜單，

努力幫助餐廳通過美味的菜肴留住普通消費(fèi)者。隨著他的生活看到一絲陽光，肖恩越來越

感激，但貧窮的日子不斷提醒他無家可歸的人生活在痛苦和想要食物像他。所以，他聯(lián)系

了馬特，想做更多。

肖恩和馬特一起決定幫助像他這樣的人。在這種特殊的求職方式的啟發(fā)下，他們想出了一

個(gè)想法，通過準(zhǔn)備簡(jiǎn)歷和實(shí)踐面試，幫助更多有技能的無家可歸者找到工作。從一條街到

一條街，無論他們?nèi)ツ睦?，無論他們遇到誰，他們都分享他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，播下夢(mèng)想的種子。對(duì)

他們來說，給他們帶來成就感的不僅僅是獲得贊賞，更重要的是幫助無家可歸的人重建自尊。

第3篇避難所

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Igotupat4amtoreceiveacallfrommydaughterwhoneededmyhelptogethomefromthe

snowymountain.AfterIhelpedhergetataxi,InoticedIwasoutofcigarettes,soIwenttothegas

stationupthestreettopurchasesome.ThereIsawayoungmanwrappedinathinblanket,trying

tokeepoutofthesnow.Iwentinandboughtmycigarettes.

AsIwalkedoutofthestation,thisyoungmanaskedmeforacigarette.Ipulledoutone,gave

himandleft.IjustwentforwardafewstepsandsuddenlyIrealizedthatIshoulddosomethingfor

him.Ireturnedandaskedhimifhewantedahotcoffee.Obviouslyhecouldn'thidehiseagerness

togetoneandsaid"yes,please^^.AgainIwentinthestationandboughthimanextralargecup.

WhenIwentbackhome,thepitifullookofthepoorguybeingoutinthecoldflashedbefore

myeyes.WithouthesitationIgrabbedmywarmcoatandhurriedtotheguy.Helpinghimputon

thecoat,Itoldhimtherewasashelternearbywherehecouldaskfbrhelp.Iaskedhimtopromise

mehewoulddoit.

Atabout6o'clock,Igothome.Seeingmydaughterarrivesafelyandgetreadyfbrbed,I

restedmyheavybodyonthesofawonderingabouttheguyatthegasstation.SoImadeacallto

theshelterandtoldthenicegirlonthephonethattherewasaguyoutinthecold.Toldthatthey

hadoneortwobedsleft,Iquicklygotintomycaranddrovetothegasstation.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AfterIfinallydrovetheguytotheshelter,hewasverygrateful.

Tenyearslater,Ireceivedastrangecall.

【答案】AfterIfinallydrovetheguytotheshelter,hewasverygrateful.Ihelpedhimgetsettled

inashelter,boughthimsomefoodandnecessities,andkeptsomemoney.Aftermakingsurehe

wouldmakeitthroughthewinter,Idroveaway.Iwassohappyonthewaybecausethepoorguy

waswarmandcaredfor.Wishhimagoodlifeinthefuture.Ididn'twanthimtorepaymebecause

itwasjustapieceofcaketome.

在我終于開車把那個(gè)人送到避難所后，他非常感激。我?guī)退谝粋€(gè)收容所定居下來，給他買

了一些食物和必需品，還存了一些錢。在確保他能度過整個(gè)冬天后，我開車走了。我在路上

很高興，因?yàn)檫@個(gè)可憐的家伙很暖和，很受照顧。祝他未來生活得很好。我不想讓他償還我,

因?yàn)檫@對(duì)我來說只是一塊蛋糕。

Tenyearslater,Ireceivedastrangecall.Ididn'tknowthenumber,andIdidn'trecognizethe

sound.Themanoppositesaid,"Doyourememberme?”IwasembarrassedbecauseIcouldn't

rememberanything.'*Youhelpedmethroughacoldwintertenyearsago."Hesaid.Ihadalight.

“It'syou.Howhaveyoubeen?'11enthused."I'mlivingagoodlifenowandIdon*thavetobe

hungryandcoldanymore."It'swarmtothinkofthatwinter,'*hesaid,“Thankyouforhelpingme

andgivingmehope.Ihavesetupseveralshelterstohelpmorepeoplelikemethatwinter,whichI

thinkisthebesttorepayyourkindness.n

十年后，我接到了一個(gè)奇怪的電話。我不知道號(hào)碼，也認(rèn)不出聲音。對(duì)面的人說，“你還記

得我嗎？"我很尷尬，因?yàn)槲沂裁炊疾挥浀昧??！笆昵澳銕臀叶冗^了一個(gè)寒冷的冬天。''他

說。我有一盞燈?！斑@是你的意思.你現(xiàn)在怎么樣了？"我很熱情?！拔椰F(xiàn)在過得很好，我不

用再又餓又冷了?！跋氲侥莻€(gè)冬天就很暖和，''他說，“謝謝你幫助我，給了我希望0那年冬

天，我建立了幾個(gè)避難所來幫助更多像我這樣的人，我認(rèn)為這是最好的辦法來報(bào)答你的好

意?！?/p>

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開?！拔摇痹谑昵暗囊粋€(gè)冬天遇到了一個(gè)饑寒交迫的人，感到非常同情,

所以給了他很多幫助，幫他度過了那個(gè)寒冷的冬天。十年后“我”接到這個(gè)人的電話，了解到

他現(xiàn)在過得很好.

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“在我最終開車送他去了收容所后，他非常感激我。”可知，第一段可描

寫作者幫他在收容所安置好，他非常感激。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“十年后，我接到了一個(gè)奇怪的電話“可知，第二段可描寫作者和這個(gè)人

相談甚歡，了解到這個(gè)人的近況并得知這個(gè)人建立了幾個(gè)收容所來幫助更多的人。

2.續(xù)寫線索：幫助安頓——回家——開心——接電話——相認(rèn)——感謝——回報(bào)

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①安頓好：getsettled/settledown

②建立：setup/build

情緒類

①感謝：showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②在意：minddoing/careabout

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Aftermakingsurehewouldmakeitthroughthewinter,Idroveaway.（動(dòng)名詞作賓

語）

[高分句型2]Ihavesetupseveralshelterstohelpmorepeoplelikemethatwinter,whichIthink

isthebesttorepayyourkindness.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

第4篇夜遇老人

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的

詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Kentwasamanagerofafurnitureagency.Hisestablishmentnearlywentbankrupt（彳到閉）

becauseofthewrongdecisionhehadmade.Hewassoregretfulanddepressedthatheplannedto

drivetoabaralonetoreleasehisemotions.

Itwasnearmidnightinanextremelycoldwinter,andthetemperaturewasminus9degrees

centigrade.Therewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Suddenly,afigureofanoldmadamenteredhis

lineofsight.Shewasstandingsidewaysnearaplatform,dressedinaplaincoat,dragginga

suitcase,andholdingaplasticbagintheotherhand.Theslightoldladywasseeminglymorethan

80.Shewastremblingincuttingwind.NowshekeptmotioningKentforaride.AlthoughKent

wassomewhatangryabouttheoldmadam'sdisturbing,hewouldn'tliketoleaveherinthecold

night.Henoticedshecoughedviolentlyandthoughtthatshemightbeillandreallyneededhelp.

Sohebrakednearher.

Themadamsaid,"Wouldyoupleasetakemeforaride?Icanofferdoublefare...nKent

inten-uptedher,"Iwillchargeyounothing!Comeon!”Themadampointedtoherluggageand

said,"Couldyouputmysuitcaseintothecar?uKentsteppedoutandputitinthetrunk.

Kentproceededtodrive.Hestoppedatapetrolstationwherehewantedtopurchasegallons

ofgasoline（汽油）.Duringtheintervaltheywaitedinaqueue,themadambeganhernarration,

"Couldyoupleasesendmetothecharityhouseinthesuburbs?Iwanttosendthemsomething.I

hadbeengivenhelpthere50yearsago.Thepresidentandworkerswereallgoodguys."Sheburst

intotears,"Nowthey'veallpassedaway.Thelifewastoughatthattime,butwealllovedand

caredabouteachother.Fveheldadesiretobebackthereagainforlong."Kentrealizedthe

madamwasrecallingasectionofthegoodmissingdays.Acomplicatedfeelingsurroundedhim,

andhedecidedtocancelhisplanandstaywiththeoldmadam.

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Afteratwo-hourdrive,theycametothegateoftheirdestination.

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Hearingthis,Kentlapsedintosilence,becauseheknewtheresthomewasforpatientswith

incurablediseases.

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Afteratwo-hourdrive,theycametothegateoftheirdestination.Itwasquietanddark.The

doorofthecharityhousewasclosedandaweaklightwentthroughtheguardroom.Kentgotoff

thecarandrangthebell.Anolddoorkeepercameout.Makingclearwhytheycame,theywere

invitedin.Theoldmadamhandedhersuitcaseovertothedoorkeeper,insideitbeingclothesarid

toysshecollected.Thentheylookedroundthehouseandleft.Onthewayback,theoldmadam

askedforanotherride,"Pleasesendmetotheresthomeinthetown,sir."

開車兩小時(shí)后，他們來到了目的地門口。那里安靜而黑暗。慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的門關(guān)著，一盞微

弱的光線穿過警衛(wèi)室?？咸叵铝塑?，按響了門鈴。一個(gè)老守門員走了出來。弄清楚他們?yōu)槭?/p>

么要來，他們就被邀請(qǐng)進(jìn)來了。老夫人把她的手提箱交給了看門人，里面是她收集的衣服和

玩具。然后他們環(huán)顧四周的房子，離開了。在回來的路上，老太太要求再騎一次，“請(qǐng)把我

送到城里其余的家里。先生?！?/p>

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Hearingthis,Kentlapsedintosilence,becauseheknewtheresthomewasforpatientswith

incurablediseases."Ihavebeenseriouslyillforalongtimeandwillsoondieoflungcancer.I

comeouttosaygoodbyetomylife.NowIwillhavenoregretsbeforedeath.Thanksforyour

help!'1Themadammadeanexplanationcalmly,withabrightsmileonherface.Kentremained

silentforawhile.Hewaschewingoverwhatthemadamsaid,andgladthathecouldhelpher

realizethelastdesire.

聽到這話，肯特就沉默了，因?yàn)樗鲤B(yǎng)老院是給不治之癥患者準(zhǔn)備的。“我已經(jīng)得了

重病很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間了，很快就會(huì)死于肺癌。我走出來是要和我的生活說再見了?，F(xiàn)在我在死

前就不會(huì)后悔了。謝謝你的幫助！“夫人平靜地解釋道，臉上掛著燦爛的微笑。肯特郡沉默

了一會(huì)兒。他在嚼著夫人說的話，很高興能幫助她實(shí)現(xiàn)最后的愿望。

【解析】

文章主要講述了Kent在寒冷的夜晚遇到了一個(gè)老人，并同意帶她郊區(qū)慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的故事。

續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：兩小時(shí)車程后，他們到達(dá)了目的地的大門。所以可以接著

寫：天色很暗，到處都很安靜，大門里的建筑里透出了微弱的光。Kent下車給門衛(wèi)說明情

況后，門衛(wèi)讓他們進(jìn)去。老人把裝滿衣服和玩具的箱子交給門衛(wèi)。他們圍著建筑四處轉(zhuǎn)了一

下，然后離開了。路上，女士要求Kent把她送到市里的療養(yǎng)院。

第二段的開頭是：聽了女士的話Kent陷入了沉思，因?yàn)樗蜡燄B(yǎng)院是專門為那些有不治

之癥的病人準(zhǔn)備的?？吹終ent的樣子，女士說:“我生了很嚴(yán)重病，已近是癌癥晚期，很快

就到生命的盡頭了。今天我是去和從前的生活說再見的，現(xiàn)在，我沒有遺憾了。非常感謝你。”

女士說話的時(shí)候面帶笑容，絲毫看不出悲傷。Kent此刻覺得很感激，感激他能有機(jī)會(huì)幫助

這位女士實(shí)現(xiàn)最后的愿望。

續(xù)寫時(shí)需注意情節(jié)要符合邏輯，基礎(chǔ)時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)。

范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)

系。作者在范文中使用了一些高級(jí)表達(dá)，例如：Theoldmadamhandedhersuitcaseovertothe

doorkeeper,insideitbeingclothesaridtoysshecollected.中使用了獨(dú)立主格；Themadammade

anexplanationcalmly,withabrightsmileonherface.中使用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；Hewaschewing

overwhatthemadamsaid,andgladthathecouldhelpherrealizethelastdesire.中what弓I導(dǎo)賓語

從句。這些表達(dá)的使用使文章色彩紛呈。

第5篇丟失的戒指

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的

詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

ThefirstthingEileenKoreynoticedwhenshegotintothecarthatWednesdayafternoonin

earlyMaywasasmalldiamondringinthetray（托盤）betweenthefrontseats.Ithadn'tbeenthere

before.Weeksearlier,shehadtakenthecarintohavetheairbagreplaced.Thecarbelongedtoher

daughterandson-in-lawandshewashelpingthemout.Nowshewaspickingitup.That'swhen

shesawthering.Korey,64,ofLakeOswegoquicklycontactedherdaughterandson-in-lawtoask

iftheyweremissingadiamondringorifanyoftheirfriendshadreportedlosingaring.Theyboth

wroteback,sayingtheyhadnoideawhatshewastalkingabout.

Koreytooktheringtotheservicedeskatthegaragetoaskifanywomentechniciansmight

haveleftaringinthecarwhiletheywereworkingonit.Thewomanbehindthecountersaidonly

menworkedonthecars.

Koreyaskedifthedeskclerkcouldgetinformationfromtheguywhohadreplacedtheairbag.

Overatwo-wayradio（對(duì)講機(jī)），Helbtsaidhe'dplacedtheringinthetraywhenitdroppedtothe

car'sfloorafterheopenedupthesteeringcolumntoreplacetheairbag.Hewasnotsurehowitgot

there.

Sheknewafriendwhowasajewelerandstoppedbytohaveherlookattheringtoseeifit

wasreal.Herfriendsaidthediamond,setinawhitegoldhand,wasworth$1,200andKorey

couldeasilysellitfor$500.Butshewouldn*tsellit.Aftermakingsuretheringdidn'tbelongto

anyoneinherfamily-oranyoneattheautoshopKoreytrackeddownthefirstownerofthecar

usingpaperworkshefoundintheglovebox.Herdetectiveworkledhertoadealershipin

Beaverton,andthecar'sfirstowners：DanielandAshleighHannah.TheHannahshadpurchased

thesmallringwhentheygotengagedandweresavingmoneytobuyahouse.

Paragraph1：

OneSundayafternoon,theyweredrivingtoaneventintheircarbuthadtostopatthebank

andusetheATMmachine.

Paragraph2：

Thecouplesearchedtheparkinglotandthecarforhours.Nothing.

【范文】

Paragraph1：

OneSundayafternoon,theyweredrivingtoaneventintheircarbuthadtostopatthebank

andusetheATMmachine.Ashleigh,showingherhusbandwheretoturn,gesturedwildlywithher

lefthandandfelttheringslipoff.However,whensearchingthecarcarefully,theyweren'tableto

findit.Theyfigureditfelloutoftheopendriver'ssidewindow.

一個(gè)星期天日下午，他們當(dāng)時(shí)開車去參加活動(dòng)，但不得不在銀行停下來使用自動(dòng)取款機(jī)。

阿什莉告訴丈夫去哪里轉(zhuǎn)，用左手瘋狂地做了個(gè)手勢(shì)，感覺戒指掉了。然而，當(dāng)他們仔細(xì)搜

查汽車時(shí)，他們卻找不到它。他們發(fā)現(xiàn)它從敞開的司機(jī)側(cè)窗里掉了下來。

Paragraph2：

Thecouplesearchedtheparkinglotandthecarforhours.Nothing.Later,backathome,the

Hannahhassearchedthroughthecarforhours.Nothing.Yearslater,Danielboughthiswifea

muchlargerengagementring.Finally,thismonthKoreymadecontactwithDanielHannah.They

met,andasarewardforreturningthering,shesimplyaskedthatDanielsendheraphotoofthe

momenthesurprisedhiswifewithherlostengagementring.OnMother'sDay,Ashleigh'sson

gaveherthering.Itdidn'tfitandwasmuchsmallerthanherreplacementring,butnoneofthat

mattered.

這對(duì)夫婦搜查了停車場(chǎng)和汽車好幾個(gè)小時(shí)。沒有什么內(nèi)容。后來，回到家里，漢娜已經(jīng)

在車?yán)锼阉髁撕脦讉€(gè)小時(shí)。沒有什么內(nèi)容。幾年后，丹尼爾給妻子買了一枚更大的訂婚戒指。

最后，這個(gè)月，科瑞和丹尼爾?漢娜取得了聯(lián)系。他們見面了，作為歸還戒指的回報(bào)，她只

是要求丹尼爾給她一張照片，這是他給妻子丟失的訂婚戒指的那一刻。母親節(jié)那天，阿什利

的兒子把戒指給了她。它不合適，比她的替代戒指要小得多，但這些都不重要。

【解析】

文章講述了EileenKorey在車修理后發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一枚戒指，但是問了她的女兒和女婿，

以及修理店的員工，他們都說不是自己的。后來她問了車的第一個(gè)主人，才知道戒指是他們

的。

續(xù)寫分為兩段。第一段的開頭是：一個(gè)周末的下午，他們開車去參加一個(gè)活動(dòng)，但當(dāng)時(shí)需要

在路邊停下，去自動(dòng)提款機(jī)上取錢。所以可以接著寫：丈夫取好錢后，妻子AshleighHannah

揮手讓他過來開車，因?yàn)閯?dòng)作太大，戒指從手指上滑落。但當(dāng)時(shí)他們沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)。第二段的開

頭是：夫妻兩在停車場(chǎng)和車上找了很久。所以可以接著寫：他們什么也沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)。回到家后，

他們又在車上仔細(xì)地找了幾遍，結(jié)果是一樣的。后來，他們不得不重新買一個(gè)訂婚戒指。當(dāng)

Korey聯(lián)系他們時(shí)，他們才知道原來戒指掉在車?yán)锪恕Ｒ娒鏁r(shí)，Korey把戒指還給了Daniel,

Daniel十分感激。他回家把戒指拿給妻子，雖然這個(gè)戒指比后來買的那個(gè)小得多，但是在

Ashleigh看來兩個(gè)都一樣的珍貴。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語

篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高級(jí)表達(dá)，

例如：Ashleigh,showingherhusbandwheretoturn,gesturedwildlywithherlefthandandfeltthe

ringslipoff.中使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；Theymet,andasarewardforreturningthering,she

simplyaskedthatDanielsendheraphotoofthemomenthesurprisedhiswifewithherlost

engagementring.中that引導(dǎo)虛擬語氣的賓語從句。這些表達(dá)的使用使文章色彩紛呈。

第6篇救出小孩

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的

詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Whenhis13-year-oldsoncamehomelatefromschoollastweek,JohnMorrissettefiguredhe

hadjustgoneon“oneofhisusualwalks”.Itwasn'tuntilthenextdaythatMorrissettefoundout

hisintellectuallydisabledboy,Michael,hadbeenfoundinaWinnipeggarbagebinas

temperaturesdroppedto—15℃.

Morrissettesaidhissonhadbeenbeatenbytwomen,thrownintheDumpsterandleftto

freeze.Hewasfoundafewhourslaterbyawomanwholethimout."Iwasveryangrywiththe

guyswhowoulddothistomyson,“MorrissettesaidinaninterviewThursday.€tYoucanseehe's

aharmlesschild.Hedoesn'ttalkmuch.Hekeepstohimselfandtwomenhavehurthim.,,

Theyoungteenagerwasn'tseriouslyhurt,butMorrissettesaidhe'snotlettinghimwalk

homealoneanymore.Thefather'sfaithinhumanityisalittleshaken.Morrissettesaidhecouldn't

believetherearepeople