2024屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫：不愛芭蕾愛拳擊追逐夢想課件

讀后續(xù)寫：不愛芭蕾愛拳擊題目：

Ballet

was

a

way

of

life

in

Kelly's

family.Her

elder

sister

Serena

was

now

dancing

at

a

top

college.

Though

Kelly's

mom

always

wanted

her

to

follow

in

her

sisters

footsteps

and

Kelly

herself

was

good

at

ballet,

her

love

for

ballet

had

faded

years

before

and

she

was

eager

for

a

new

challenge.

One

day

at

school,

as

Kelly

left

the

dance

studio

she

walked

past

the

gym,fascinated

by

boxers(拳擊手)training

inside

the

boxing

ring.

She

was

deeply

impressed

by

how

hard

they

hit

and

how

fast

they

moved.

In

fact

shed

long

been

attracted

to

boxing.

She

pulled

a

piece

of

paper

from

her

backpack.On

the

familiar

Oakwood

High

School

Club

Sign-up

Sheet

was

the

phrase:BOXING

CLUB

TRYOUT(選拔).That

was

what

Kelly

really

wanted

to

do.She

knew

her

mom

had

high

expectations

for

her

when

it

came

to

ballet.

Tired

of

trying

to

keep

up

with

her

sister,

Kelly

was

ready

to

carve

her

own

path.

The

next

day,

she

gathered

her

courage

and

told

Serena

about

her

new

passion.

At

first

Serena

didn't

understand

and

thought

she

was

just

joking.But

when

she

saw

Kelly

was

serious.

she

replied,“You

know

Mom

wants

you

to

be

a

ballet

dancer,right?Besides,

boxing

is

only

for

boys,

and

you're

so

good

at

ballet.Lean

into

your

strength,

Kelly."

“But

this

is

where

I

want

to

put

my

strength,”Kelly

insisted,“and

what

exactly

does

only

for

boys

mean,

anyway?

Boxing

is

a

sport

for

everyone!”

Gradually,

touched

by

her

determination

and

passion

Serena

began

to

understand

and

support

her.

Kelly

could

feel

it.Her

sister

was

going

to

respect

her

decision

no

matter

what.

But

that

was

nothing

compared

to

the

preparations

for

the

tryout,where

she

was

required

to

show

her

footwork

and

punching(擊打)abilities

with

other

candidates.Boxing

didn't

come

natural

to

Kelly,

but

she

had

made

up

her

mind

to

stick

with

her

choice.Para1：Then

Kelly

began

her

training

for

the

tryout,

keeping

it

a

secret

from

her

mom.Para2：The

following

Monday,

results

of

the

boxing

tryout

were

posted.范文：Para1：Then

Kelly

began

her

training

for

the

tryout,

keeping

it

a

secret

from

her

mom.

Every

day

after

school,

instead

of

practicing

dancing,

she

trotted

towards

the

gym

to

learn

the

basic

boxing

skills,

endeavoring

to

enhance

her

punching

abilities.

Nevertheless,

years

of

ballet

practice

made

her

initial

punches

not

powerful

enough

to

knock

others

over.

Exhausted

as

she

was,

/Despite

the

physical

challenges

and

exhaustion,

Kelly

derived(得到)

an

unprecedented

sense

of

accomplishment

and

contentment

that

she

hadn't

felt

in

years.

As

the

day

progressed,

finally

came

the

tryout

day.

On

the

boxing

ring,

courageous

and

determined,

Kelly

punched

her

opponent

hard

and

beat

him

eventually.

每天放學(xué)后，她不再練習(xí)跳舞，而是快步走向體育館學(xué)習(xí)基本的拳擊技巧。

然而，多年的芭蕾舞練習(xí)使她一開始的出拳不夠有力，無法擊倒別人。盡管身體上的挑戰(zhàn)和疲憊，Kelly獲得了多年來從未有過的成就感和滿足感。

隨著時(shí)間的推移，終于到了選拔賽的日子。在拳擊場上，好斗而堅(jiān)定的凱莉給了對手一拳，最終擊敗了他。筆記：

現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語；

“…as

sb

was,

雖然…但是…(克服困難句型)”；

銜接下段Para2：The

following

Monday,

results

of

the

boxing

tryout

were

posted.

The

instant

Kelly

spotted

her

name

on

the

list,

she

felt

a

mixture

of

delight

and

thrill

surging

through

her

and

all

her

dedicated

endeavors

paid

off.

Darting

towards

home

like

an

arrow,

scarcely

could

she

wait

to

share

the

exciting

news

with

Serena,

both

of

whom

resolved

to

reveal

the

secret

to

her

mom.

Learning

that

Kelly

was

admitted

into

the

Boxing

club,

Mom

fell

silent

for

a

while

and

replied

in

an

unexpected

way.

“I

am

so

proud

of

you.

Forgive

me

for

imposing

the

ballet

dream

on

you.

You

have

the

right

to

carve

your

own

path

and

pursue

what

you

truly

love.”

Hearing

these

words,

Kelly

embraced

Mom

tightly

and

a

radiant

smile

spread

over

her

face.

當(dāng)凱莉看到自己的名字出現(xiàn)在名單上的那一刻，她感到喜悅和激動涌上全身，她所有的努力都得到了回報(bào)。

她像箭一樣飛奔回家，迫不及待地想把這個(gè)激動人心的消息告訴塞蕾娜，她們倆都決定把這個(gè)秘密告訴她媽媽。

得知?jiǎng)P利被拳擊俱樂部錄取后，媽媽沉默了一會兒，然后以一種意想不到的方式回答?！拔覟槟愀械津湴?。原諒我把芭蕾夢強(qiáng)加給你。你有權(quán)利開辟自己的道路，追求你真正喜歡的東西?！?/p>

聽到這些話，凱莉緊緊地?fù)肀Я藡寢?，臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。筆記：the

instant…

一….就…;

混合情緒句型；

迫不及待句型；

某人終于理解了對方；

動作定格結(jié)尾最終自測：

________________________________________________________________________.

每天放學(xué)后，她不再練習(xí)跳舞，而是快步走向體育館學(xué)習(xí)基本的拳擊技巧。

然而，多年的芭蕾舞練習(xí)使她一開始的出拳不夠有力，無法擊倒別人。盡管身體上的挑戰(zhàn)和疲憊，Kelly獲得了多年來從未有過的成就感和滿足感。

隨著時(shí)間的推移，終于到了選拔賽的日子。在拳擊場上，好斗而堅(jiān)定的凱莉給了對手一拳，最終擊敗了他。Then

Kelly

began

her

training

for

the

tryout,

keeping

it

a

secret

from

her

mom_________________________________________________________.

當(dāng)凱莉看到自己的名字出現(xiàn)在名單上的那