高考英語復(fù)習(xí)第3部分寫作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練九讓寫作渾然一體的銜接與過渡及通知市賽課公開課一等獎省名師獲獎

學(xué)案九讓寫作渾然一體銜接與過渡及通知1/38銜接與過渡是高考英語書面表示主要評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，所以，在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾逻B接詞是非常必要。慣用連接(過渡)詞主要有：寫作利用探究一、表示起始關(guān)系過渡詞aboveall,tobegin/startwith,firstofall,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto,withthedevelopmentof...等。2/38[高考佳句]①Firstofall，thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection，whichisofgreatimportanceintoday’ssociety.(·全國Ⅱ，滿分作文)

首先，展覽主題是環(huán)境保護，這在當(dāng)今社會中主要意義。②Tostartwith，IhavebeenlearningandspeakingMandarinforabout17years.(·四川，滿分作文)

首先，我學(xué)說普通話已經(jīng)大約17年了。3/38【即時演練】完成句子1.________________theInternet，computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.

伴隨因特網(wǎng)發(fā)展，計算機在人們生活中起著主要作用。2.________________，themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.

總來說，你練習(xí)越多，用英語寫作就越熟練。答案1.Withthedevelopmentof

2.Generallyspeaking4/38first(ly)，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。二、表示時間次序過渡詞5/38[高考佳句]①Firstly，peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.(·江蘇，滿分作文)

首先，當(dāng)被要求做他們不想事情時候人們是可能感到是被迫。②Secondly,I’dliketosharemybookswithothersaswell.(·重慶，滿分作文)

其次，我也喜歡與他人分享我書籍。6/38【即時演練】完成短文3.________，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.________Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.________，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.

首先，我把全部書籍、報紙和其它散落在屋子里東西搜集起來放好，然后我掃去全部家俱上灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。答案Firstly；Then；Afterthat7/38三、表示并列關(guān)系過渡詞and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。[高考佳句]①Bydoingso，Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothers,butalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.(·浙江，書面表示)

經(jīng)過這么做，我不但能與其它人分享好觀點，而且學(xué)會了清楚地表示自己。②Shefinallyearnedrespectofthem，whoeventuallybecameconfidentaswellaswell-behaved.(·廣東，滿分作文)

她最終贏得了他們尊重，他們最終變得自信，表現(xiàn)也不錯。8/38【即時演練】翻譯句子4.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會升入重點大學(xué)。 _______________________________________________________5.游泳不但對身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們堅強意志。 _______________________________________________________答案4.Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.5.Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.9/38四、表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系過渡詞but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary等。[高考佳句]①However，asaproverbgoes，“Everycoinhastwosides.”(·江蘇，滿分作文)

然而，正如諺語所說，“每個硬幣都有兩面”。②Onthecontrary，thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth，sotheyareeagertoexperiencethefuturelifeontheMars.(廣東高考滿分作文)

相反，這些志愿者說，他們厭倦了地球上生活，所以他們渴望體驗未來火星上生活。10/38【即時演練】翻譯句子6.然而，使你最詫異是下述新功效。 _______________________________________________________7.相反，智能手機不但占用我們寶貴時間，而且對我們健康造成極大危害。 _______________________________________________________答案6.However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.7.Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.11/38because，as，since，for，thanksto，dueto，asaresultof，so，therefore，asaresult/consequence等。五、表示因果關(guān)系過渡詞12/38[高考佳句]①Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.(安徽高考滿分作文)

真相是每個人都會有事情看上去要變得糟糕時刻，所以你無須過分擔(dān)心。②Asaconsequence，childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.(福建高考書面表示)

結(jié)果，孩子們變得太依賴于父母，以至于他們沒有獨立思想和創(chuàng)造性想法。13/38【即時演練】翻譯句子8.多虧醫(yī)生及時治療，他獲救了。 _______________________________________________________9.所以，我提議應(yīng)該給我們更多時間用于體育運動和睡眠。 _______________________________________________________答案8.Thankstothedoctor’stimelytreatment，hewassaved.9.Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.14/38if，unless，incaseof，as/solongas，onconditionthat等。六、表示條件關(guān)系過渡詞[高考佳句]①I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.(浙江高考滿分作文)

若你們能考慮一下我提議，我將很高興。②Aslongaswesticktoourdreams，wewillbecomeawinnersoonerorlater.(湖南高考滿分作文)

只要堅持夢想，我們遲早會成為贏家。15/38【即時演練】翻譯句子10.只要你不氣餒，就一定會成功。 _______________________________________________________11.假如我們忽略我們未來，就像圖畫中這個人一樣，我們就會以失敗告終。 _______________________________________________________答案10.Aslongasyoudon’tloseheart，you’resuretosucceed.11.Ifweneglectourfuture，we’llendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.16/38what’smore，furthermore，moreover，besides，what’sworse，stillless，tomakemattersworse，worsestill，on(the)onehand...ontheotherhand...，foronething...foranother...等。七、表示遞進關(guān)系過渡詞17/38[高考佳句]①What’smore，I’moutgoingandwarm-hearted.(·陜西，滿分作文)

另外，我性格外向且待人熱心。②Ononehand，Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents，andontheotherhand，Icangainsomeexperiencefromit，whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.(山東高考滿分作文)

首先，我能經(jīng)過做這么事賺些錢來幫助父母，另首先，我能從中取得一些經(jīng)驗，這會對我未來生活有益。18/38【即時演練】完成句子12.________________，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.

另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣活動來豐富我們業(yè)余時間。13.________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.

更糟是，假如我們在電話上花費過多時間，我們會失去未來需要交際技能。答案12.Besides/What’smore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore

13.Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse19/38suchas，forexample/instance，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。八、表示列舉事實過渡詞[高考佳句]①Theyareofdifferentshapes，suchasdiamonds，butterflies，flowersandbirds.(新課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ滿分作文)

它們形狀各異，諸如像鉆石、蝴蝶、花、鳥。②Infact，Chinesehasneverstoppedtakingwordsfromotherlanguages，say，“ganbu”or“minzhu”fromJapanese.(江蘇高考滿分作文)

實際上，漢語從來就沒有停頓過從別語言中錄入一些單詞，比如，日語中“ganbu”或“minzhu”。20/38【即時演練】完成句子14.________________，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.

就拿北京來說吧，它是世界上最古老城市之一。15.________________，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.

也就是說，假如你想成功，必須相信自己。答案14.TakeBeijingforexample

15.Thatistosay21/38inmyopinion，inmyview，inmypointofview，asfarasIamconcerned，asforme，personally，Ithink...等。九、表示觀點過渡詞22/38[高考佳句]①AsfarasIamconcerned，theystandforlove，friendshipandunity.(新課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ滿分作文)

以我看來，他們代表愛、情誼和團結(jié)。②Ithinkthepictureconveysamessagethateveryonehashisorheradvantages.(北京高考滿分作文)

我認(rèn)為這幅畫傳達了這么信息：人人都有自己優(yōu)點。23/38【即時演練】翻譯句子16.就我而言，我喜歡財富，但我更看重健康。 _______________________________________________________17.按照我觀點，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場所抽煙。 _______________________________________________________答案16.AsfarasIamconcerned，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.17.Inmyopinion，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.24/38inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral，generallyspeaking等。十、表示總結(jié)過渡詞25/38[高考佳句]①Inaword，mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.(新課標(biāo)綱領(lǐng)全國滿分作文)

總之，我生活將會愈加豐富多彩。②Allinall，travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.(山東高考滿分作文)

總來說，旅游是充實自己、準(zhǔn)備迎接新挑戰(zhàn)最好選擇。26/38【即時演練】完成句子18.________________，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.

總之，一個好市民應(yīng)該恪守交通規(guī)則。19.________________，Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.

總來說，我發(fā)覺自行車比摩托車更令人喜歡。答案18.Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup

19.Onthewhole/Ingeneral27/38用方框內(nèi)過渡詞完成下面短文PassageOne單句跟蹤演練becauseof，first，second，asaresult，therefore，finally，inadditionInthepasttwentyyearsorso，greatadvanceshavetakenplaceintheworld.1.________，wehaveseenoneofthemostimportantadvancesinagriculture—theGreenRevolution.2.________thisadvancewecannowproducemorefoodwithlessland.3.________，industryhasbeenmademoreandmoreautomatic.4.________，fewerandfewerpeopleareneededtooperatefactoriesandoffices.5._______，28/38toexploretheunknownworld，moreandmoresatelliteshavebeenlaunchedandmoreandmoreastronautshavebeensentintoouterspace.6.________，newproductsofallkindshavebeenproduced.7.________，ourlifehasbecomemoreandmorecomfortable.答案1.First

2.Becauseof

3.Second

4.Therefore5.Inaddition

6.Finally

7.Asaresult29/388.________，onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.9.________，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.10.________searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchthecomputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.11.________，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon’thavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenatthesametime.PassageTwosecond，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，what’sworse，insteadof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known30/3812.________，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownonthecomputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.13.________，wecanbecheatedeasily.14.________，wecannotseethethingsindetail.15.________，16.________thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping，Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.17.________weshoulddevelopit.答案8.Asiswell-known

9.Ontheonehand10.Insteadof

11.Second

12.Ontheotherhand13.Asaresult

14.What’sworse

15.Inaword16.despite

17.So31/38通知慣用詞匯1.________n.通知2.________n.注意3.goona________去觀光4.havea________野餐5.givea________做演講6.havea________contest有一個演講比賽7.sign________(for...)報名(參加……)8.takean________partin主動參加……答案1.notice/announcement

2.attention

3.tour4.pinic

5.lecture

6.speech

7.up

8.active32/381.段首慣用語：(1)MayIhave/callyourattention，please?(2)Attention，please，everybody!(3)Ihaveanannouncementtomake.(4)Ihavesomethingtotellyou.通知慣用句式33/382.段中慣用語：(1)Therewillbeatalkthisafternoon.(2)TheStudentUnionhasdecidedthat...(3)Weshallhavealectureon...(4)Ithasbeendecidedthatwe’llpayavisitto...3.段尾慣用語：(1)Pleasebethereontimeanddon’tbelate.(2)Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.(3)That’sall.Thankyou.34/38通知(notice)是上級對下級、組織對組員布置工作、傳達情況或告訴公眾某件事情等時使用一個應(yīng)用文體，通常分為口頭通知和書面通知兩種。1.口頭通知是面對面地把信息傳達給對方。這種通知開頭應(yīng)有稱呼語，正式場所用Ladiesandgentlemen(女士們、先生們)，有時也能夠用Boysandgirls或Comradesandfriends(同志們、朋友們)等。開頭還常有提醒聽眾注意開場白，如“Attention，please.”或“MayIhaveyourattention，please？”或“Ihaveanannouncementtomake.”等；結(jié)尾常說“That’sall.Thankyou.”或“Thankyouforlistening.”等，以示禮貌?？陬^通知中無須說明公布通知日期和公布通知人或單位。通知慣用寫