牛津譯林版9A-Unit4-Growing-up-task11市公開課一等獎(jiǎng)省賽課微課金獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

Unit4GrowingupTaskThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost1/11Leadin

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whohasinfluenced...2/11AgeJobinalocalfactoryPersonality

Examples1._____ourTVtoafamily2._________orphans(孤兒)3._____moneytosomeoneinneed4.______bloodandbloodcells5.__________donatehisbody

myideasWhenIwasyoung,_______________.Now,Irealizethat_______________Myfatherinhisf_____kindandhelpful

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3/111.Whohasinfluencedthewritermost?2.Whatisherfatherlike?3.Whathasherfatherdonesince1990?4.Whatsurprisedthewriter?5.Whatdoesthewriterthinkofherfather?Pre-writinghaveaheartfullofloveTv/careforchildren/givemoneyto…Bereadytohelpanyonedonatebloodandbloodcellsdecidetodonatehisbodyformedicalresearchafterhisdeath4/11Pre-writing:Usefulexpressions...isthepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost...isinhistwenties/thirties/fortiesYouwillnotfindanythingunusualabouthimuntil......hasalwaysbeenkind/helpful/...Tomysurprise,...WhenIwasalittlegirl/boy,Icouldnotunderstand...NowIrealizethat…5/11假如你是Sandy,你學(xué)校正在舉行寫作比賽，主題是“Thepersonwhohasimpressedmemost",字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)字左右。內(nèi)容以下：While-writing:

Myuncle四十多歲，在當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)院工作

工作細(xì)心對待病人有耐心使我詫異是，他已經(jīng)決定...

樂于助人關(guān)愛一些失獨(dú)老人6/11MyUncleIntroduction

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age,jobPersonalitiesExamplesMyideas7/11評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)滿分得分內(nèi)容、信息全方面、完成任務(wù)5分語言（句子結(jié)構(gòu)、語法、用詞）5分行文連貫、邏輯3分（字?jǐn)?shù)、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等）2分總分15分While-writing:

Criteria8/11Post-writing:SampleThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle.Youwillnotfindanythingunusualuntilyoulearnmore.Asadoctor,heisbothkindandpatientwithpatients.Besides,heissocarefulthathehasnevermadeanymistakes.Hesays:"Asadoctor,Wecan'tbetoocareful."What'smore,hecaresfortheoldwhohavelosttheironlychildren.Tomysurprise,myunclehasdecidedtodonatenotonlyallhismoneybutalsohisbodyafterhisdeath.Howbraveandkind-heartedhisis!Allinall,Ihavebeenimoressedbymyuncle.Irealizethatheisamanhasaheartfulloflove.9/11H