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同等學(xué)力英語考試第二卷包括翻譯（30分鐘，20分）和作文（30分鐘。15分）。考試時候第二卷得分必須大于等于18分，才能算及格。翻譯翻譯分為中翻英（100-120漢字），和英翻中（80-100英語單詞）。對于兩種翻譯最重要的是單詞，所以這一點(diǎn)請大家自己努力提高。英翻中tips找主干1）如果英語句子主干很容易找到，主干前沒有修飾語時，順譯。2005年英翻中第二段。2）如果主干之間有較長的修飾限定語時，一定要分析清楚主干，一部分一部分的翻譯，然后綜合。時間狀語，可以直接翻譯到句首或者句末，不參加到匯總綜合中，以降低難度。例2005年第一段第一句3）句中出現(xiàn)thatwhichwhatwherewho這一類引導(dǎo)詞時，要明確知道他們引導(dǎo)的是從句。例2005年第一段第二句第二，遇上生詞怎么辦？1）分析詞性例2005年第二段第一句circulation2005年第二段第二句中entailsintegrate2)聯(lián)系上下文作文出題人，評卷人，考生出題人：出題內(nèi)容：常見社會話題，一般不會出很專業(yè)的東西。比如工作，住哪里出題形式：（一）提綱作文1）闡述觀點(diǎn)2）解決問題3）諺語警句型例，98年，WhyWeWork99年ThequalitiesoftheCross-CenturyTalents2000年WhichismoreImportant,WealthorHealth?01年theGreatestInventioninthePastCentury05年whetherCollegeStudentsShouldBeAllowedtoGetMarried.06年CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials07年WhoandHowtoTakeCareoftheSeniors?09年Myopinionaboutblog（二）看圖作文08年Self-confidenceistheKeytoSuccess.02年TheIncreaseintheNumberofChineseTravelingAbroad.（三）摘要作文03年Whatwillmoneybringus,fortuneormisfortune?04年TheGoalofLife（四）書信作文同等學(xué)力;英語;寫作同等學(xué)力作文評分原則：作文題采用總體評分（GlobalScoring）方法。閱卷人員從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面進(jìn)行綜合評判，就總的印象給出獎勵分（RewardScores），而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯誤數(shù)目累計扣分。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下表格：得分表達(dá)能力1411852切題與否切題切題基本切題基本切題思路紊亂內(nèi)容表述清楚清楚不夠清楚不清楚條理不清文字表達(dá)通順，連貫性較好連貫勉強(qiáng)連貫連貫性差談不上連貫語言表達(dá)能力表達(dá)靈活多樣；基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別錯誤表達(dá)靈活；有少量語法錯誤語法錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有些是嚴(yán)重錯誤嚴(yán)重語法錯誤較多語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多為嚴(yán)重錯誤總體印象切題，內(nèi)容豐富，語言流暢連貫，表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng)切題，內(nèi)容較豐富，語言流暢可讀基本切題，內(nèi)容能說明主題，語言基本可讀基本切題，表達(dá)能力差，文章勉強(qiáng)可讀思路紊亂，基本上不具備書面表達(dá)能力，文章不可讀

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4．字?jǐn)?shù)不夠酌情扣分：字?jǐn)?shù)149~140139~130129~120119~110109~100<99扣分123579作文模式：根據(jù)提綱先翻譯，如果沒有提綱自己審題時，先寫出提綱。但是現(xiàn)在的考題一般都有提綱，所以考生不需要在寫作內(nèi)容上費(fèi)神。作文字?jǐn)?shù)；150字，25分鐘，也就是10到15個句子。一般說來，第一段2-3個句子對情況進(jìn)行說明。后面的兩個或者三個段落，一般都是說明自己觀點(diǎn)。對每個話題一般正反面觀點(diǎn)分別三個。然后每個觀點(diǎn)加一個句子進(jìn)行拓展。需要總結(jié)的時候，2-3個句子足夠。作文但是一定要記得：盡量使用簡單的，以表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)。為自己降低難度。因?yàn)殚喚砝蠋煕]有時間仔細(xì)看你的內(nèi)容是否有深度。例：06年Directions:Inthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofnolessthanI50wordsabout"CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials".Youshouldwriteaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.PleaseremembertowriteitclearlyontheANSWERSHEET.Somecollegegraduateschoosetoworkasvillageofficials.1.

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3.Conclusion單詞和翻譯表達(dá)能力最重要準(zhǔn)備的過程，可以綜合參考過去的作文真題，先用中文把自己要寫的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，你就會看到寫作文，你自己最常用那些句式。然后去模式中找到最易于自己記憶的一個模式，這樣作文就變成了填空題，簡單多了。Withthedevelopmentoftechnic,itbecomestruethateveryfamilyhasacomputer.Theinternetgivesusmoreopportunitytocommunicatewiththeothersallovertheworld.AndBlogisoneofthewayforourcommunication.Inmyopinion,itisgoodforustohaveablogontheinternet.Wecanrecordeverythingwhichwewant,itwillbeagreatwealthforusinfuture.Andtheblogisalsoagoodplatformforustoshowourselves.Fromtheblog,wecanmakemorefriends,becausewecanknoweachotherfromourblog,fromtheblog,wecanfindtheguyswhohavethesimilarhobbiesorinterestings,andwecandiscussthesubjectwhichbothofuslike.Sometimesitisalsoanotherenjoymenttoreadthestranger’sblog,maybeyoucanfindyourpotentialfriendsinthisway.Ofcourse,theblogalsogivesusmoretroubleinourlife.Sometimestheblogbecomesthetoolofthecheater.Theyspreadthefakenewsorinformationbytheblog.Itisnoteasytoidentify.Andsomebadguyscangetyourinformationeasily,butyoudon’tknowwhattheywilldoforyou,andsomeofusarecheated.Theinfluenceofblogisactuallyadouble-edgedsward.Weshouldtrytomakethemostadvantagesandavoiditsharmfulnessatthesametime.Lettheblogbeahappyandusefulthingtoeveryone.

比較法開頭（1）Untilrecentlythegeneralattitudetowardday-dreamingremainedhostile.Day-dreamingwasviewedasawasteoftime.Oritwasconsideredanunhealthyescapefromreallifeanditsduties.Butnowsomepeoplearetalkingafreshlookatday-dreaming.Theythinkitmaycontributetointellectualgrowthandleadtotheattainmentofactualgoals.句型：Foryears/untilrecently…h(huán)adbeen/wasseen/viewed/regardedas….But(thatischangingnow)(peoplearetakingafreshlookatit).Withthe(growing/mounting)(demandfor/interestin/concernover)…,people….（2）Inrecentyearsthereisatendencytowardslivingaloneadramaticsteponthepathawayfromtheclose-knit,extendedfamiliessocommonjustafewdecadesago.Accordingtoacensusreport,householdsconsistingofjustonepersonhaveincreasedto14percentinthepastyear,comparedwith4percent20yearsago.Whyarepeoplelivingalone.句型：Inrecentyears,thereisa(steady/subtle/significantshiftof)(general/growing/healthytendencyto)(upward/welcome/undesirabletrendtoward)….Accordingtoapoll/study/survey,thereisXpercentof…,comparedwithYpercentlastyear.Why…?（3）throughoutourliveswearetyrannizedbypaper-andpencilteststhatpurportedlyrateourintellectandpredictfuturesuccess.IQtests,CETs,TOEFLs,GREs,job-aptitudequestionnairesallcalibrateourpotentialintheeyesoftheworld,andofteninourowneyeaswell.Butmostpsychologistsconcedethatreal-lifeachievementhaslittletodowiththesetestscores.AsGarrisonKillor,anotedpsychologistwrote,“smartdoesnotcountformuch.”句型：(Throughoutourlives)(Historically)(Traditionally),wetendto….Butmostscientists/researchers/doctorshavenowfoundthat….(4)Severyearsago,peoplewereoftenalittlesurprisedwhentheyheardthatacollegestudentwasdoingapart-timejob.“why?Maybeheisshortofmoney,“theythought.Nowadays,itisnotanuncommonoccurrencethatcollegestudentsareworkingastutors,salesmenandtourguides.Manystudentsputupadvertisementsonbulletinboardsorlamppoststosearchforoddjobs.Whydomanystudentsshowgreatinterestinapart-timeorasummerjob?句型：severalyears/decadesago,people….Now/today,….Why(dopeople…?)(hassuchchangetakenplace?)SolidificationDrill:topic:WhereShouldtheDyingSpendTheirRemainingTimeSomepeoplethinkahospitalisagoodplaceforadyingpatienttospendhisremainingtime.Otherpeoplebelieveitisathome.Whatisyouropinion?Usethesentencepatternswhichhavebeenintroducedabovetogiveanopeningtoyourcomposition.sampleThereseemstobeanincreasedtendencythatwhenapersonisdyingofaformofcancer,orotherkindsofincurablediseases,hisfamilywillsendhimtoahospital,nomatterhowmuchitmaycost.Theythinkthatthisisacorrectexpressionoftheirloveforhim,forhecanreceivethebestpossiblemedicalandsurgicaltreatmentatahospital.Despitetheirgoodintentions,however,Ibelieve,adyingpersonshouldspendhislastremainingdaysathome,withhisfamilyaroundandinthewarmthoftheirlove.比較法句型：Justassittinginthedriver’sseatofacarbecomesdrivingonlywhenwetakethesteeringwheelinhandandcontrolthecar’smovement,soourmind’smovementsbecomethinkingonlywhenwedirectthem.對立法開頭句型1：Whenaskedabout…,(thevast/overwhelmingmajorityof/most/many/quiteafew)people(say/think/believe/answer)that….But(otherpeopleregard/view/see/thinkof…as./Ithink/viewquiteabitdifferently.)對立法開頭1.Whenaskedaboutthebiggestproblemtoday,manypeoplesaythatitistheseriousenergycrisis.Theyareafraidthattheworldwillsoonrunoutofoilandrunshortoffood.Butotherpeopleholdoptimisticviews:theyregarditasanaturalresultoftheeconomicdevelopmentandbelieveitwillbeonlysolvedwithfurtheradvancesineconomyandtechnology.2.Whenaskedwhatkindofcareertheywillpursueupongraduation,mostofcollegestudentssaythattheywouldchooseajobwhichwillbringthemalotofmoneyandacomfortablelife.Workinginabigbankorcompanyiswhattheydesire.ButIthinkquitedifferently.Iwouldpreferacareerwhichwillhelprealizemypotentials.句型2：Thereisa(public/general/much)(debate/discussion/controversy)(today/nowadays)(on/about/over/asto)the(problem/issue)of….Thesewho(criticize/oppose/objectto)…(contend/argue)that….Theybelievethat….Butpeoplewho(advocate/favour)…,ontheotherhand,(maintain/assert)that….3.Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegestudents’doingapart-timejob.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Butpeoplewhoadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthat,bytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejoborsummerjob,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.4.Thereismuchdiscussiontodayaboutwhetherfasteconomicgrowthisdesirable.Thosewhocriticizeeconomicgrowtharguethatwemustslowdown.Theybelievethatsocietyisapproachingcertainlimitsongrowth.Theseincludethefixedsupplyofthenaturalresources,andthepossiblenegativeeffectsofindustryonthenaturalenvironment.Peoplewhowantmoreeconomicgrowth,ontheotherhand,arguethatevenatthepresentgrowthratetherearestillmanypoorpeople.Theymaintainthatonlycontinuedgrowthcancreatethecapitalneededtoimprovethequalityoflifeandprovidethefinancialresourcesrequiredtoprotectournaturalsurroundingsfromindustrialization.Solidification:人們普遍認(rèn)為青少年吸煙人數(shù)上升是經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展不可避免的結(jié)果。他們認(rèn)為：如果電視上沒有香煙廣告，香煙不是到處可買得到，孩子的零用錢不是很多的話，青少年不太可能染上吸煙的習(xí)慣。但我懷疑這是否是一個滿意的解釋。雖然有廣告和其它尚業(yè)因素的影響，我認(rèn)為主要原因是社會和個人因素而不是經(jīng)濟(jì)上的。Itiscommonlybelievedthattheriseinteenagesmokingistheinevitableresultofeconomicdevelopment.TheyarguethatiftherearenocigaretteadvertisementonTV,nocigarettesavailableeverywhere,andnoadequatepocketmoney,teenagersareunlikelytotakeupthehabitofsmoking.ButIdoubtthatitisasatisfactoryexplanation.Whileconcedingtheeffectofadvertisingandothercommercialfactors,Ithinkthattheprimarycauseissocialandindividualratherthaneconomic.Solidification:Topic:myviewondonatingblood【范文】MyViewonDonatingBloodPeople'sideasaboutdonatingbloodvaryfrompersontoperson．Somepeoplethinkthatitisglorioustodonateblood．Theyholdthisopinionbecausethosewhoareinurgentneedofbloodcanbesaved．However，othersholdthatitisfoolishforpeopletodonateblood．Intheiropinion，bloodisverypreciousandlosing200mlormoremaydoharmtotheirhealth．?dāng)?shù)據(jù)法開頭TeenagesmokingsoarsChinanowhasexperiencedanalarmingincreaseintheteenagesmoking.Inthepastdecadetherateofteenagesmokinghasalmosttripled:itrosefrom8percentin1982to23percentin1992.Atthesametime,theageofthesmokershasdropped:theybegantosmokeatanearlieragesomeasyoungas7yearsold.Evenworse,moreandmoregirlsaretakingupsmoking.Thestatisticslookdisturbing.Thefactorsforagreatriseintheteenagesmokingarecomplex.…..描寫法開頭Advertisements,perhaps,aremostomnipresentinabigcitysuchasShanghai.Theyshoutatusfromthetelevisionscreenandtheradioloudspeakers;wavetousfromeverypageofthenewspaperandmagazine,gazeatusfromtheroadsidebuildingsandpassingvehiclesalldayandsignaltousincoloredlightsallnights.Scarcelyadaypassesthatwecannotmeetanadvertisement.Facedwithafloodofadvertisements,somepeoplecomplainthat….驚語法開頭Eachyearthousandsuponthousandsofgraduatesfloodthejobmarket,wavingtheircollegediplomasandcertificates,expectingbetterjobsintheirmajors,onlytobefrustratedanddisappointed.Accordingtothecharts,only58percentofcollegegraduatesin1992couldfindjobsintheirspecialties,comparedwith89percentin1981whenChinahaditsfirstcollegegraduatesaftertheCulturalRevolution.Whydocollegegraduatesfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetarewardingjob?Onereasonperhapsthat….故事法開頭Theotherday,ImetMissLee,myoldclassmate,whotoldmethatshehaddecidedtoquitherjobasateacherattheendoftheschoolyearandtogointoacompany.Shesaidthatshecouldn’tmakealivinginherchosenprofessionandthatnotevenhermoonlightingtwiceaweekcouldputheroutofthefinancialquagmireshewasin.MissLee’scaseisnotunusual,itistypicalofthousandsofyoungteacherswhoarequittingtheirjobsinsearchofmorelucrativework.OnceinanewspaperIreadofacrowdofpeoplewhoremainedappallinglyindifferenttothepleaofamother.Asshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath.ThestoryisnotrareinnewspapersandonTV,andthecasualnessanddetachmentourpeoplenowhavedevelopedhasarousednationwideconcern.Ihaveafriendwholiesinahospital,slowlydyingofapainfulandincurabledisease.Althoughthereisnohopeofrecovery,thediseasesometimespermitsitsvictimtolingeronformanymonthsinevergreattorment.Myfriend,apprisedoftheoutcomeandknowingthatthehospitalexpensesareaseveredrainonhisfamily’slimitedfinancialresources,decidesthatdeathhadbettercomeatonce.Shouldthefamilymeethisdemanddespitetheenormousloveforhim?Shouldthedoctorruntheriskofprovidinghimwiththenecessarydrug?Suchadilemmaweoftenmeetinourdailylife.Onceuponatimetherewereabrotherandsistersquabblingoveranapple,witheachinsistingonthelargeslice.Justastheboyhadgainedcontroloftheknifeandwaspoisedtohackoffthelargershareforhimself,theparentssaid:“Holdit!Idon’tcarewhocutsthatappleintotwopieces,butwhoeverdoeshastogivetheothertherighttoselectthepiecetheywant.”Naturally,toprotecthimself,theboycuttheappleintotwopiecesofequalsize.Thetalemaybeapocryphal,butitsunderlyingmoralhascontinuingrelevancetoday.Therearesomesituationsinwhichtheneedsoftheprotagonistsarenotreallyinopposition.Ifthefocusshiftsfromdefeatingeachothertodefeatingtheproblem,everyonecanbenefit.問題法開頭Whatdoesittaketosucceedinone’sstudiesorcareer?Opinionsvarywidely.Givenapproximatelyequalcircumstances,someclaimthesuccessfactorislargelyamatterofluckbeingintherightplaceandtherighttime.Othersspeakofutterdevotiontowork,combinedwithadegreeofruthlessness.Stillothersmaintainthatitisundoubtedlyamatterofhowmuchintelligenceyouhaveorsimplyhowmucheducationyourmotherhad.Shouldascientistberesponsibleforhisdiscoveries?Opinionsvarywidely.Tosomepeople,theanswerisnegative.Theythinkthatthefunctionofthescientistinsocietyistosupplyknowledgeandthatheneedn’tconcernhimselfwiththeusestowhichhisknowledgeordiscoveriesmaybeput.Butotherpeoplearguethatascientisthasadutytomakesurethathisdiscoveryisusedfor,notagainst,society.“WhyhaveIchosentoattendcollege?Isthefour-yearacademiclifeworthwhile?”Ihaveputthesequestionstomyselfatmanytimesinthepasttwoyears.HaveIcomebecauseofparentalinfluence,orbecauseIhavesomegoalofmyownthatIwishtopursue?Afterponderingthesequestionsonmanyoccasions,IhavefinallyreachedtheconclusionthatIhavecometocollegenotformoneynorforfamebutforknowledge,forabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundme.Solidification:“我們?yōu)槭裁匆欢ǖ脤W(xué)這些愚蠢的東西？”我讀大學(xué)時聽到同學(xué)的所有抱怨和問題中，這種抱怨是最多的了。我會回答說，這些東西能開闊你的眼界，為今后的生活作好準(zhǔn)備?！皐hydowehavetolearnallthisdumbstuff?”O(jiān)fallthecomplaintsandquestionsIhaveheardfrommyclassmatesduringmycollegelife,thiswastheonemostfrequentlyuttered.Iwouldanswerthatitcanwidenyourmindandprepareyouforyourfuturelife.Solidification:我的朋友WilleamLevin博士是云南大學(xué)的社會學(xué)教授，他是一名獲獎教師，多產(chǎn)作家，寫過幾本自己研究領(lǐng)域內(nèi)受人推崇的著作。但他解釋說“我在小學(xué)七年級時不及格留過級”。他從學(xué)業(yè)的平庸中脫穎而出決不是偶然的。事實(shí)上，有許許多多人開始學(xué)習(xí)時普普通通，后來冒尖成為杰出的大學(xué)生或研究生。有四個因素導(dǎo)致這一點(diǎn)：能力、機(jī)會、突發(fā)事件以及一段準(zhǔn)備好接受變化的時期。MyfriendDr.WilleamLevinisprofessorofsociologyatYunnanuniversity,anaward-winningteacherandtheprolificauthorofanumberofrespectedbooksinhisfield.But“Iflunkedthesevengrade,”heexplained.Levin’sescapefromeducationalmediocrityisfarfromunique.Infact,therearethousandsofeducationallatebloomerswhogoontobecomebrilliantcollegeorgraduatestudents.Fourimportantfactorscanaccountforthis:capacity,opportunity,atriggeringeventandaperiodofreadinesstoacceptchange.如何通過句子開頭的變化使句子變得生動一些WhymanyyoungcouplesarereluctanttohavechildrenReluctancetohavechildrenisalsoattributedtotheincreasingdemandforpersonalitydevelopmentandself-fulfillment.Manyyoungpeopletraveltodifferentkindsofschoolsandlibrariesafteraday’sworktolearnforeignlanguagesandcomputers,todoresearchwork,andtoacquireknowledgeofdifferentkinds.thechancesofsuccessandtheopportunitiesforambition.Thusachildisoftenseenasaliabilityratheranasset.Finally,preferenceforhavingnochildrenalsohassomethingtodowithacouple’sfinancialcondition.Itisestimatedthat,amongotherexpenses,thepaymentfortheirchild’sdaynurseryalonecostsaboutRMB300amonth,abigchunkofthefamily’sincome.Tohaveachildrequirescouplestotightentheirbeltscuttingbackonfoodandentertainmentexpenses.Itisnatural,therefore,forthosewhowanttohaveaneasylifetogiveuptheideaofsettingasidemoneyforachild.1.近100萬的中國人在過去15年里去了美國。Thepast15yearsbroughtalmostonemillionChinesetotheUnitedStates.2.我們現(xiàn)在以把這件事忘得差不多了。Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.3.學(xué)生當(dāng)然需要作出不懈的努力。Continuouseffortsonthepartofthestudentsarecertainlyrequired.4.我們通過調(diào)查可以得出這個結(jié)論。Investigationledustotheconclusion.5.他氣得說不出話來。Angerchokedhiswords.任何語法成分和詞性來寫文章段落的起始句1.Displayedinthisfiercecompetitionishiscourageandtacticalskill.2.Learninganewlanguageoftenmeansademandingjib.3.Tobeabletofillleisurewhenoneisretiredisnoteasyformostofpeople.4.Equallyessentialtothehighestsuccessinlearningalanguageareintenseinterestpluspersistenteffort.5.Toooften,studentsstrayintothehabitofcheatingontest.6.Fromtheshortagearisesthedemandfornuclearpowerasanewsourceofenergy.7.Antipathytothecountrysidehasbeenassociatedwithpovertyandlabor.8.Suchisthecasewhenanewpolicyorlawisadopted.9.Whatisnecessaryworkforonemaybevoluntaryplayforanother.變化的實(shí)例a.Therearemanypeoplewhoprefertogobybike,becausetheyarenotsatisfiedwithbusservice.b.Thepublicpreferenceforridingbicyclesreflectstheirdissatisfactionwithbusservice.a.Therearemoreandmorepeoplewhorealizethecloseconnectionbetweenenergyandpopulation.b.Thecloseconnectionbetweenenergyandpopulationisincreasinglyrecognized.a.Therearefewandfewgreentreesinmanybigcites,whiletherearemoreandmoreconcretebuildings.b.Thenumberofconcretebuildingsinmanybigcitieshasenormouslyincreasedattheexpenseofgreenbelts.a.Therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms.b.Filmsarenowlosingtheirappealformanycitizens.a.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages.b.Housingshortagesbecomethesourceofgreatcomplaint.a.Inordertogetaharmoniousdevelopmentforallstudents,schoolauthoritiesshoulddesignanewprogram.b.Schoolauthoritiesshoulddesignanewprogramwhichwillpermitaaharmoniousdevelopmentforallstudents.a.Inordertopreventtheproblembecomingtooserioustosolve,wemusttakeanimmediatestep.b.Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.a.Inordertobuildastableandprosperousnation,peopleshouldmakenewefforts.NeweffortswillbringChinaintoastableandprosperousnation.a.Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,wecanhaveaplentifulsupplyoffoodandcommodities.b.Theadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasmadeitpossibleforustohaveaplentifulsupplyoffoodandcommodities.a.Withtheexpansionofindustry,naturalresourcesaregraduallyexhausted.b.Therapidexpansionofindustryleadstoaprogressiveexhaustionofnaturalresources.a.Withtheimprovementofstandardofliving,evenordinaryfamiliescanaffordcolorTVsets.ColorTVsetsarenowwithineasyreachofordinaryfamilieswhohaveenjoyedtheimprovedstandardofliving.a.MoreandmorepeoplenowprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.b.PeopleinincreasingnumbersprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.a.Moreandmorepeoplewhobecomemoreandmorerichcanaffordamotorcycle.b.Thegrowingnumberofpeoplewhobecomeincreasinglyrichcannowaffordamotorcycle.a.Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.b.Teenagesmokingistontheriseinrecentyears.a.Moreandmoreteachersareneededwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentofeconomy.a.Moreandmoretreeshavedisappearedinthecity.b.hereisasharpdeclineinthenumberoftreesinthecity.結(jié)論性結(jié)尾Inconclusion,Iwouldliketosaythatchangeisaproblemconfrontingmostofustoday.Thechangeswhichalreadytakenplaceineveryfieldofourlifeareirreversible.Continuationofthegrowthwhichhasalreadybegunisinevitable.Duringthisevolutiontherearegreatrewardstobewonbythosewhoarewillingtotaketheopportunitiesbeingoffered.Takingintoaccountalltherelevantfactorswhichaffectandcontributetotheattitude,wemaysafelyconcludethatwewon’tmakeadentintheattainmentofwomen’ssocialstatusandtheirequalopportunitiesineveryfieldifmen’sattituderemainsunchallenged.Tearshavebeenlikenedtotheclarifyingandbeneficialeffectsoftherainwhichcomesafterathunderstormonasultrysummerday.CharlesDickenswrote,“Heavenknowsweneedneverbeashamedofourtears,fortheyarerainupontheblindingdustofearth,overlyingourhardhearts.”and,indeed,theevidenceuponallsidessupportstheviewthatunderconditionswhichcallforit,acryisawonderfulrestorative.Solidification:總之，健康比財富更重要。那些有了錢卻失去健康的人，如同窮人一樣會感到不幸福及不幸。如果一個人要實(shí)現(xiàn)自已的理想，健康乃是成功中最重要的部分。Inconclusion,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.Thosewhoarerichbuttheirhealtharenomorehappyandfortunatethanthosewhoarepoor.Ifyouwantwishtocometrue,healthisthemostimportantingredientofyoursuccess.號召性結(jié)尾Itishightimethatweshouldurgeanimmediateendtothisdeplorablephenomenon.Ourcollegesanduniversitiesshouldbemorewillingtoshouldertheirresponsibilitiestostudentsandtheirfamilies.Buttoooften,theseresponsibilitieshavebeenevaded.Thiswecannotafford.collegecurriculashouldbegearedtotheneedsoftheeconomicgrowth.Itistimethatgovernmentanduniversitiesattachedmuchimportancetothemodificationofthesystemofourhighereducationandputanendtothecurrentwasteofcollegetalentondegreesandcertificates.Thereisnodoubtthatadequateattentionmustbepaidtotheimprovementofrecreativepossibilitiesintheneighbourhoodofthehome,andtheurbanenvironmentmustofferasmanyrecreationactivitiesaspossible.Foranimportantpartofthetimewhichwedonotpassinsleepingorworkingisusedforactivitiesataroundhome.Clearly,orderandstabilityisindispensabletoanation.Ifwearetomaintainafavorableenvironmentforsocialdevelopment,andifthenationistoremainprosperous,itisvitalthatwemakeamaximumcontributiontoitsorderandstability.solidification很明顯，我們不能等待他們改變主意。如果我們要確保第一流的青年人源源不斷充實(shí)進(jìn)教育事業(yè)，就有必要加深公眾對教育的理解，同時對獻(xiàn)身教育事業(yè)的人給予較高的經(jīng)濟(jì)待遇。Obviously,wecannotaffordtowaitforthemtochangetheirminds.Ifwewanttoinsureasteadyflowoffirst-rateyoungmindsintotheeducationfield,itisnecessarywewidenthepublicunderstandingofeducationandofferadequateeconomicrewardsforthosedevotedtoeducationaswell.事實(shí)證明型句型Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthatparentsareparticularlyinfluentialinthedecisionsoftheirchildrenaboutcollege.Parentswhodidnotthemselvesgraduatefromcollegeappeartohaveastronginterestinhavingtheirchildrenattendcollege.Infamilieswherebothparentsholdcollegedegrees,pressuretoattendcollegemaybelessobviousbecauseitissimplyassumedthechildrenwillalsoattendcollege.Everyyearwethrowawayincrediblequantitiesofbottles,cans,paper,andonandon.Buildingsaretorndownaroundus,andnewonestaketheirplace;theyarecheapertoreplacethantorepair.Allthefactslendsomesupporttotheviewthatwehaveenteredthe“consumersociety”,orratherthe“throwawaysociety.”Allavailableevidencepointstothefactthatsomemoreandmoreyoungpeoplearedeclaringtheirallegiancetotraditionalvalues.Thephysicaleducationprogramhasbecomeanindispensablepartsofcollegelife.Itcontributesdirectlytoaperson’sphysicalfitness.Personalexperienceleadsmetobelievethatitisofgreatvalueespeciallytoastudentwhoworkswithhisbrainmostoftheday,andhencecaneasilybecomeweakandvulnerabletodiseasebecauseofinactivity.Withthegeneralparticipationinsports,student’shealthhasmarkedlyimproved,sohastheefficiencyoftheirstudents.Physically,themostimportantvalueofexerciseisthewayittrainsyourheart.Studieshaveshownthatpeoplewhocontinuetoexerciselateintoadultlifelivelongerandarelesslikelytodiefromheartattacks.Drills:最后，并沒有任何現(xiàn)有的資料表明上課次數(shù)和課上表現(xiàn)有相應(yīng)的關(guān)系。一個人的課程成績是以他的努力和效率來決定的，而不是以他上幾次課來決定的。一個學(xué)生可能上課的次數(shù)很多，但是有誰知道他坐在教室里只是在白日作夢呢！Finally,noneoftheavailabledatashowsanyprovencorrelationbetweenattendanceandperformanceinacourse.One’scourseperformanceismeasuredbyhiseffortsandefficiencyratherthanbythetimesheattendsclass.Astudentmayhaveahighrateofattendance,butwhoknowswhetherornotheisjustsittingtheredaydreamingallthetime?必背句型(samplesentencesforimitation)(1)今昔對照法*Whiletenyearsagothenameofcreditcardswasonlyknowntoasmallnumberofpeople,theconceptof“buynowpaylater