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高一英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫高一英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫/高一英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫新題型寫作讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardtheloudnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat”Hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI’mthebankthief!”Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Arthurimmediatelyrealizedthattheyoungmanwasthebankrobber.SoArthurdidn’tstop,butcontinuedtorununtilhesawandcaughtataxiinfrontofhim.Hequicklyputthesuitcaseinthecarandsaidtothedriver,“PleasehurrytothePoliceStation.Ihaveacasetoreporttothepolice.Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief!’’ThetaxiracedawaytothePoliceStationlikeanarrow.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthursaidtothepolicewhohadbeenwaitingandwhohadalreadyreceivedtherobberyreport,Thissuitcaseisthatofthebankrobber.Itmaybefilledwiththemoneystolenfromthebank,Ihandittoyou.Pleasegetreadytoarresttheman.”O(jiān)nepossibleversion:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Andalsoatthemoment,Arthursuddenlyrealizedthattheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber.SoArthurdidn’tstop,butcontinuedtorununtilhesawataxi.Hestoppedit,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandsaidtothedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.Themanshoutingbehindisthebankthief!’’Thetaxiracedawaylikethewind.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurtoldthepolicewhathadhappened.Obviously,thepolicehadalreadylearnedabouttherobbery.Theyopenedthesuitcaseandtherewasalargesumofmoneyinside,asArthurhadexpected.ThenthepoliceaskedArthurtodescribetheyoungmanandtheothersuitcase.Later,withtheinformation,thepolicecaughttherobber.ThepoliceandthebankboththankedArthuralot.(Words153)Anotherpossibleversion:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”Thinkingofthewaytheyoungmanhadbehaved,herealizedtheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber.SoArthurranfasterandstoppedataxi.Themomenthegotintothetaxi,hetoldthedriverthemanshoutingbehindwasthebankthiefandaskedhimtodrivetothenearestpolicestation.ThedriverfollowedwhatArthursaidanddroveaway.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurthankedthedriveranddirectlywentin.JustasArthurwasdescribingwhathadhappenednearthebankontheParkAvenueandreportedtheyoungmantothepolice,heheardavoiceoutside,“Help!Help!”TothesurpriseofArthur,itwastheyoungman.HehadfollowedArthurinanothertaxi.Itturnedoutthattheyoungmanwasinnocentandinsidethesuitcaseswerejustsomeclothes.Arthurfeltembarrassedbutthepolicementhankedhimanyway.(Words:158)【范文點(diǎn)撥】原文所給關(guān)鍵詞分類:地點(diǎn):ParkAvenue,thebank人物:Theyoungman,people,thebankthief事件:suitcases,inthebackseat,loudnoiseofanalarm,robbery,theshouts在續(xù)寫時(shí),除了注意原文給出的關(guān)鍵詞,還需要注意以下線索:1.Whydidtheyoungmanlookworried2.WhathappenedButeveryonehadadifferentanswer.3.Arthurbecamefrightenedandwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.二、題型解讀1.題型介紹◆選材特點(diǎn)(1)所需閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在350以內(nèi);(2)多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主,故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。◆評(píng)分參考閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容:(1)與所給短文與段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度;(2)內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所給關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的覆蓋情況;(3)應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性;(4)上下文的連貫性。注意:(1)所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右(詞數(shù)少于130的,從總分中減去2分);(2)應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);(3)續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;(4)續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。2.考查能力讀后續(xù)寫是一種將閱讀與寫作緊密結(jié)合的考查形式,旨在考查學(xué)生的綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。與應(yīng)用文不同,故事續(xù)寫除了要求學(xué)生掌握豐富的詞匯和句式外,還注重學(xué)生的內(nèi)容構(gòu)思和情節(jié)銜接的能力。主要聚焦在以下四個(gè)方面:一是把握短文關(guān)鍵信息和語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)的能力。學(xué)生需要了解給定短文的主要內(nèi)容,清楚其關(guān)鍵詞和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的使用情況,并通過(guò)續(xù)寫短文表現(xiàn)出來(lái)。二是語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確性和豐富性。期望學(xué)生在詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的使用方面準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng),能夠根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要使用較為高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu),閱卷老師會(huì)感覺(jué)這個(gè)學(xué)生很有水平。三是對(duì)語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)的把控能力。考查學(xué)生對(duì)上下文邏輯關(guān)系的掌握情況,希望學(xué)生續(xù)寫的短文語(yǔ)句連貫、有序。四是創(chuàng)造性思維能力。這是對(duì)學(xué)生續(xù)寫短文內(nèi)容得要求,期望學(xué)生續(xù)寫的短文具有較豐富的內(nèi)容。該試題具有一定的開(kāi)放性,要求學(xué)生詳細(xì)和生動(dòng)地描述情景、態(tài)度和感情,符合課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的要求和學(xué)生的能力水平。3.續(xù)寫特點(diǎn)讀后續(xù)寫,簡(jiǎn)言之,就是閱讀完一篇還未寫完的文章之后,根據(jù)要求和提示把這篇文章未寫完部分補(bǔ)充完整,使之渾然一體。它一方面很好地考查考生對(duì)所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)的實(shí)際運(yùn)用能力,而另一方面,它也培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的發(fā)散思維能力。根據(jù)《考試說(shuō)明》該部分的規(guī)定,考生在續(xù)寫文章時(shí),要注意續(xù)寫部分“與所給短文與段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度”,“內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所標(biāo)出關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用情況”,“應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性”以與“上下文的連貫性”。根據(jù)這些規(guī)定,我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)讀后續(xù)寫有如下特點(diǎn):(1)讀后續(xù)寫不是隨心所欲,是要在引導(dǎo)語(yǔ)(開(kāi)頭語(yǔ))和提示詞的幫助下完成續(xù)寫部分。如《考試說(shuō)明》樣題中規(guī)定“應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)”。這些關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)類似于傳統(tǒng)寫作中的要點(diǎn)提示,如人物、地點(diǎn)、事件,但是不同點(diǎn)在于這些關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)并不是全用。這樣考生可根據(jù)自己的理解有很大的自主權(quán)。另外,所續(xù)寫部分不能脫離各自段落的首句開(kāi)頭語(yǔ),即:不能另起爐灶。這些開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)與傳統(tǒng)寫作中的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)類似,在某種程度上引導(dǎo)你的思路向哪方面發(fā)展。(2)續(xù)寫短文多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主,故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。這樣考生能夠根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ),順著原來(lái)文章的思路續(xù)寫文章,并適當(dāng)發(fā)散。(3)讀后續(xù)寫要求讀寫并重。與閱讀理解題一樣,讀后續(xù)寫同樣需要對(duì)本篇文章精確理解,這樣所續(xù)寫部分才不至于偏離主題,就這方面而言有點(diǎn)類似閱讀理解題中對(duì)文章后續(xù)發(fā)展的推斷,如“Whatwouldhappennext”。(4)所給文章的未完部分的思路和內(nèi)容并不一定是唯一的,考生可以根據(jù)自己對(duì)文章的理解,從而對(duì)文章的結(jié)尾有不同的詮釋。如《考試說(shuō)明》中讀后續(xù)寫的樣題的結(jié)尾,考生可以理解為這個(gè)年輕人是銀行搶劫者,而Arthur因此成為一個(gè)大英雄;考生也可以理解為這個(gè)年輕人不是一個(gè)銀行搶劫者,結(jié)果產(chǎn)生了誤會(huì)。4.續(xù)寫步驟(1)精讀文章,確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫作思路,通過(guò)精讀文章,找到該篇文章的寫作線索,如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等,這樣有利于考生“順藤摸瓜(結(jié)尾)”。(2)仔細(xì)審題,明確續(xù)寫要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有對(duì)此次短文續(xù)寫的具體要求,如字?jǐn)?shù)限制、使用幾處下劃線關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示,這樣考生做到“心中有數(shù)”。(3)回扣原文,揣摩續(xù)寫思路。根據(jù)文章后面的要求,再次快速回讀短文,抓住文章的思路,結(jié)合段首的提示語(yǔ),最終確定續(xù)寫段落的思路,同時(shí)結(jié)合文章劃線詞語(yǔ)提示,確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。(4)擬寫草稿,修改錯(cuò)詞病句。在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后,最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合提示語(yǔ)或者文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫草稿。擬寫時(shí),注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性,語(yǔ)言的豐富性,并通過(guò)句與句之間連接詞的正確使用,使上下文連貫。(5)標(biāo)出續(xù)寫部分中使用到的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。這一點(diǎn)可以幫助考生自己檢查關(guān)鍵詞的使用情況并根據(jù)情況做出修改。最后在謄寫文字時(shí),務(wù)必做到“字跡工整、清晰”。5.備考建議面對(duì)讀后續(xù)寫這一新寫作題型,在了解了其特點(diǎn)和寫作技巧之后,考生只要加以適度練習(xí),對(duì)此新題型可以做到得心應(yīng)手。1.充分利用記敘文故事類的閱讀理解或者完形填空。考生在做此類文章的試題時(shí),讀到適當(dāng)?shù)奈恢?,可以短暫停止,根?jù)已讀部分文章的脈絡(luò),對(duì)文章進(jìn)行發(fā)散思維,設(shè)想可能的幾種結(jié)尾,最后對(duì)照原文的結(jié)尾,看自己的設(shè)想是否與原文一致。2.經(jīng)常實(shí)施微型化訓(xùn)練,也就是對(duì)所讀文章的某一段落進(jìn)行設(shè)想。根據(jù)某一段落的首句提示,結(jié)合文章的上文對(duì)該段進(jìn)行合理設(shè)想,具體推斷該段可能要講述的內(nèi)容。3.與傳統(tǒng)寫作類似,續(xù)寫文章更加要注意句與句之間的連接詞,甚至是冠詞的暗示作用。如《考試說(shuō)明》的樣題中續(xù)寫部分的第二段“thePoliceStation”中的“the”表明在上一段中已經(jīng)提到,同時(shí)后面的and表明前后之間是并列關(guān)系。4.進(jìn)行適度專題化練習(xí)。俗話說(shuō),熟能生巧。對(duì)于讀后續(xù)寫這一新題型也是如此。通過(guò)適度地練習(xí),可以進(jìn)一步熟知該種題型的特色,更好地掌握該種題型的寫作技巧,更有效地調(diào)動(dòng)傳統(tǒng)寫作的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí),從而寫出一篇優(yōu)美的續(xù)寫短文。需要注意的是,后續(xù)寫補(bǔ)全的是語(yǔ)篇,而非單詞或短語(yǔ)。新題型寫作development1讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。TheworsttouristintheworldmaybeNicholasScottieofSanFrancisco.OnceheflewfromtheUStohishometowninItaly.Hehadsometroublesonhisjourney.Thenightbefore,hestayeduplatetodealwithsomeemails,sowhenheboardedontheplanehedecidedtohaveasleep.Hourslater,hewaswokenupbysomenoiseandhefoundtheplanehadlanded.Ashethoughthehadarrivedhome,Mr.Scottiegotofftheplane.HethoughthewasinRome.However,thetruthwasthattheplanemadeaone-hourstoptogetoilatKennedyAirportofNewYork.Mr.Scottiewaitedattheairportforsomewhile,butnobodywastheretomeethim,hethoughtmaybetheywereheldupbyheavytrafficwhichwasverycommoninRome.Hedecidedtogivehisfamilyaphonecall.Unfortunately,hefoundhehadlefthiscellphoneatthehotelinSanFrancisco.Therefore,hedecidedtogohomebyhimself.Whilehewaswalkinginthecity,Mr.Scottiefoundthattheold“Rome”hadchangedalot.Manyoldbuildingswerereplacedbyhighmodernones.HealsofoundthatmanypeoplespokeEnglishinsteadofItalianandthatmanystreetsignswerewritteninEnglish.Whatmadehimmostsurprisedwasthatdrivers’awarenessoftrafficsafetywasimprovedandhehardlyfoundanydriverspeedingontheroad.Allcarsweredrivinginline.Theconditionwaswidelydifferentfromthatinthepast.Hewasfeelingproud.Mr.ScottiknewverylittleEnglish,soheaskedapoliceman(inItalian)thewaytothebusstation.HehappenedtomeetapolicemanwhowasalsoborninItalyandansweredhiminthesamelanguage.Mr.Scottithankedhim,left,quicklyfoundthebusstationandgotonabus.Helookedoutsideofthebuswindow.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:Aftertwelvehours'travellingroundonabus,Mr.ScottithoughttohimselfthatRomehadchangedsomuchthatheevenfailedtofindhishome______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TogethimonaplanebacktoSanFrancisco,hewassenttotheairportinapolicecarwithsirens(警報(bào))on.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________新題型寫作development1Onepossibleversion:Aftertwelvehours'travellingroundonabus,Mr.ScottiethoughttohimselfthatRomehadchangedsomuchthatheevenfailedtofindhishome.Thebusdriverhadtoleaveworkandgohome,sohehandedMrScottieovertoanotherpoliceman.Mr.Scottieaskedthepoliceman,“Sir,couldyoutellmewhythepoliceemploysomanypeoplespeakingEnglishinsteadofItalianaspolicemen”Thepolicemansmiledandsaid,“I’msorrytotellyouthatyouareinNewYork,butnotRomenow.”However,Mr.ScottiedidnotbelievehewasinNewYorkwhenhewastoldso.TogethimonaplanebacktoSanFrancisco,hewassenttotheairportinapolicecarwithsirens(警報(bào))on.Thedriverwasspeedingontheroadanddidn’tstopevenwhentheredlightshined.Seeinghowthedriverdroveontheroad,Mr.ScottiewascertainthathewasinRomebecausepeopleinRomeusuallydroveinthatway.“Look,”saidMr.Scottietothepolicemansittingbesidehim,“I’msurethatI’minRome.That’sthewayinwhichpeopledrive.”新題型寫作development2讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Zigfried,alittlemouse,oncelivedhappilyina
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miracle.
Unfortunately,Zigfried'sfatherwascaughtbyacatwhenhewashangingaround.Yearslater,hismotherdiedbecauseofillnessandtheownerofthefarmhousemovedtothe
city.HappydayswereawayfromZigfriedfromthenon.Allthethingshadalreadybeenchangedtherewerenofoodanymoreinthefarmhouseandno
family,alltheroomswereempty.
Newyearwascomingagain,Zigfriedblewhisbreathonthefrostywindowofthefarmhouseandrubbedittoseetheoutside.Stillnobodycame.Maybetoday,hethoughthopefully.ItwasonlyafewdaysbeforeChristmasandhewaswaitingforamiracle.Amiraclelikedtheoldtimes,whichhehasbeenwaitingforalongtime.
Thisfarmhousehadbeenemptytoolong.ItneededafamilyZigfried'sstomachmadeanoise.Herealizedthathehadn'teatenanythingsinceyesterday.Hejumpedfromthewindowsill(窗沿),grabbedabagfromhishome,andwentnextdoortoFarmerMike's.
FarmerMike'shousehadbeenagreatplaceforthelittlemouseuntilthefarmermarriedawifewhohadacat.Zigfriedtrembledwhenhethoughtofit.Helookedaroundcautiouslyashestoleintotheroomwheregrainwasstoredandwasquitenervousashefilledhisbagwith
wheat.Hewasturningtoleavewhensuddenlyhefeltahotbreathabouthisear.Hisheartbeatwildly,andwithoutthinkinghestartedtorunandluckilyescapedthecat'spaws(爪子).注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:
ThenextafternoonZigfriedheardsomegoodnews
Paragraph2:
Thehousecamealivethenextfewdays.
新題型寫作development2Onepossibleversion:
ThenextafternoonZigfriedheardsomegoodnews:
anew
family
wouldbemovingintothe
farmhouse
soon.Zigfried'sgrannywouldarriveonChristmasEvetocelebratewithhim.Hehopedthatthefamilywouldcomebeforehisgrannycame.Beforelong,acarcameuptheroadleadingtothehouse,withbuttersandwiches,cheeseand
chocolate.Zigfried'sChristmas
miracle
didarrive!
Thehousecamealivethenextfewdays.
Zigfriedenjoyedeverysinglehourofthem.However,thedaybeforeChristmaswhenhewasdrinkinghotchocolatewithasatisfiedsmileatthedoorofhishome,heheardthediscussionofthechildrenofthefamilyaboutwhattheymightgetfor
Christmas.WhatA
catThesmilefrozeonhisface;hismouthfellwideopen.Afteralongwhile,heatlastfoundhisvoice:“Hey!WhoseChristmasmiracleisthis”
新題型寫作development3讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Itwasshortlyafteroneo'clockinthemorningandMr.Fairfaxwasreally
tired.Hehadbeendrivingforoverfivehours,headingforasmalltown
farawayfrom
home.TheweatherwasclearbutitwasdarkandMr.Fairfaxcouldnotfindahoteltospendthenight.Completelyexhausted,hedecidedtostop
bytheroadside
forafewhours'sleepatthewheelofhiscar.Hefellasleepalmostthemomentheclosedhiseyes.Butsoonhewasawakenedbyamantappingonthecarwindow.“Isay,youdon'thappentoknowthetime,doyou”thestrangerasked.
Mr.Fairfaxwounddownthewindowand
thrust
hisheadout.“It'saroundoneo'clock,”heanswered.Thenhewounduphiswindowandsoonfellbackintoadeepslumber.
Halfanhourlater,anotherguycameupandknockedonhiswindowwhoalsoinquiredaboutthetime.Onceagain,Mr.Fairfax
gatheredhisthoughts
andtoldhimthatitwasjustafteronethirty.
Whenthesamethinghappenedyetagain,Mr.Fairfaxbecameincreasinglyirritated.Sleep-deprived,hebegantoraisehisvoiceatthepasser-by:“It'stwoo'clock,Goddamnit!Andwhycan'tyougetyourselfawatchliketherestofus”
Thistimewhenhewas
windingup
thewindow,Mr.Fairfax
figuredout
howtomakesurenooneelse
disturbed
him.Hefoundsomepaperandapencilandwroteanotethatheplacedonthewindscreenofhiscar.Itsaid:“Idon'tknowwhattimeitis!”Amusedbyhisgoodidea,hehappilydriftedoffbacktosleepagain.
Notlongafterwards,thenotewasspottedbya
policeman
onhisnightpatrol.Intentonfulfillinghis
duty
toassistmotorists,hetappedonMr.Fairfax'scarwindow.
“Well,sir,”thepolicemansaid.“Nowitisfivepastthree!”注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:“ForthesakeofGod!”Withaloudnoiseoffisthittingthewheel,thecarwindowwaswounddown.Paragraph2:
“I'msorryMister,butIthinksleepinginthecarbytheroadsideisnotagoodchoice,”saidthepolice.
新題型寫作development3Onepossibleversion:
“ForthesakeofGod!”Withaloudnoiseoffisthittingthewheel,thecarwindowwaswounddown.
Mr.Fairfax
thrust
hisheadoutagain,startingatthemanbreakinghissweetdream,hiseyesredfromlackofsleep.“Howdareyou!”Mr.Fairfaxshouted,“Imaykillyouifyoudothisagain!”“Uh,Excuseme,”the
policeman
repliedtentatively.“Iwasjustdoingmy
duty.Youknow.”“Oh,please!Goahead,sir.Justdon't
disturb
me!”
Winding
upthewindow,Mr.Fairfaxwereeagertogobacktosleep.
“I'msorryMister,butIthinksleepinginthecarbytheroadsideisnotagoodchoice,”saidthepolice.
“Youthink”Mr.Fairfaxwasstillangry.“Yeah,soIwasthinkingyoumayspendtherestofthenightinmyoffice.It'snotfairfromherebytheway.”“Well,”Mr.Fairfaxstartedtofeeluneasy.“Ihavetosaythanksalot,really.AndI'malsosorryfortherudenessjustnow.”“Oh,that'sOK.ButI'mafraidyouhavetopayafineof$10forparking
bytheroadside,”Thepolicewroteaticketwithatrickysmile.
新題型寫作development4讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Itwas
Mother'sDay
andIwasshopping
atthelocalsupermarket
withmysonwhoisfiveyearsold,
Tenyson.Aswewereleavingafterfinishingourshopping,werealizedthatonlyminutesearlieranelderlywomanhad
fallenover
attheentranceandhitherheadonthegroundbadly.Herhusbandwaswithher,buttherewasbloodeverywhereandthewomanwasembarrassedandclearlyinshock.Fortunately,alotofpeoplestoppedtohelpout.
While
wewerewalkingtowardsthescene,Tenysonbecamevery
worried
aboutwhathadhappenedtotheelderlycouple.Hesaidtome,“Mom,it'snotmuchfunfallingoverinfrontofeveryone,”Seeingthattherewasaflowerstall(攤位)atthefrontofthesupermarket,headded,“Whyshouldn'twebuytheladya
flowerItwillmakeherfeelbetter.”Iwasamazedthathe’dcomeupwiththissweetidea.Sowewentoverandtoldtheflowersellerwhatwewanted.“Justtakeit,”shereplied.“Ican'ttakeyourmoneyforsuch
awonderfuldeed.”
Bynow
medicalstaff
hadarrived,andwerelookingaftertheinjuredwoman.Therewesawtheoldmanwasalsoingreathorror,buthetriedtocomforthiswifeandheldherhandstightlytoencouragehertobestrong.Wegavetheflowertothewoman'shusbandandItoldhimitwasfrommyson.Atthat,theoldmanstartedcryingandsaid,“Thankyouverymuch.”Hethenturnedtome,“Youhaveawonderfulson.HappyMother'sDaytoyou.”
Themanbentdownandgavehiswifetheflower,tellingherwhoitwasfrom.Regardlessof
being
badlyhurt,theoldladylookedupatTenysonwithloveinhereyesandgavehimalittlesmile.Andmysonwentdownhisbodytotheinjuredladyandtenderlysaid,“HappyMother'sDaytoyou,too.”注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ);3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所聽(tīng)到的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:
Afteramoment,theelderlyladywastakenintoanambulance,
Paragraph2:Oneyearlater,新題型寫作development4Onepossibleversion:
Afteramoment,theelderlyladywastakenintoan
ambulanceby
medicalstaff
andwassenttohospital.Thecrowdgraduallyscattered.
Tenyson
andIwenthome.Onourwayhome,heaskedme
worriedly,“Mon,willtheelderlyladybeOKsinceshewastoooldandshehadbadly
fallenover”Ilookedathimandsaid.“Theelderlyladywouldbefinesincethereweresomanypeoplecomingtohelpher.Andyoudid
awonderfuldeed,myboy.”
Oneyearlater,itwas
Mother'sDay
again.Aslastyear,Iwentshopping
atthelocalsupermarket
withTenyson.Suddenly,Tenysonsaidexcitedly,“Look,Mom.Itisthatoldwoman”Ilookedthatwayandsawtheelderlyladyandherhusband.Itseemedthatshehadrecoveredfromherinjury.Wewalkedtowardsthemandtheywerehappytomeetus,too.Theelderlyladyhuggedmysonandwhisperedtohim.“Iwillneverforgetthe
flower
yougiveme,mysweetboy.”
新題型寫作development5讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopper
andhavingagoodnoseforbargains.SowhenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale”,Imarchedintothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles,Iwandered,hummingtomyselfandenjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofa
sale.Allofasudden,there,atthebackofthestoresata
canoe(輕舟)exactlylike
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