高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：女孩全身投入圣誕演出最終大獲成功

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習女孩全身投入圣誕演出，最終大獲成功1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Asthe

Christmas

approached,Ifeltincreasingly

tired.Ads

started

thecountdown

(倒數(shù)):sixmore,fivemore,fourmore

shopping

days.ItwasimpossiblethatIwouldevergetthelast

gift

bought,thelastmealcooked.Russ’s

sense

of

tension

equalledmine.EvenBradbegantolookstressedashemovedthrough

countless

festivities.

Ofusall,only

Andrea,who

playsthe

flute

(長笛)

intheschool

orchestra,

remained

relaxed.Unsurprising,Ithought,sinceresponsibilityrestedsolightlyonher.Iwaspuzzled,though,by

asenseofdistance

abouther,andsheseemed

toavoid

whenIquestionedwhyshecamehomelatefromschoolorleftunusuallyearlyinthemorning.4續(xù)寫原文Ononeofthoselastmornings,Ibakedanddecoratedcookies.Therewereseveralinterruptions,andI

laid

behindschedule.Isetabouttidyingthekitchen.Iopenedthedishwasher,butitwasfull,andnotofcleandishes.Andreahadloadedthemachineafterbreakfastandforgottentostartit.Suddenlyitallseemedtoomuch:thedirtydishes,thetoo-tightschedule,Andrea’s

carelessness.Theholidayseasonwasoverwhelming.Itdidn’tseem

worth

it.Irushedtodothedishesbeforepickingupmydaughteratschooltodrivehertoherflutelesson.Ipulledupoutsideat3p.m.,stillannoyed.Ialmostweakenedatthesightofthefunny,half-skippingrun

ofher.She

jumped

happilyintothecar,

sharing

withschoolnews.Butasshesawmyface,her

happiness

gavewayto

curiosity.5續(xù)寫原文“What’swrong?”Itoldher:shecouldn’trememberanything;shewasuntidy,inconsiderate.“Idon’tknowwhatyou’rethinking,yougodreamingalong...”Wehadnearlyreachedthe

musicschool

beforeIranoutofthingstosay.Besides

me,Andreasat

quietly.Ididn’tlookather.

WhenIstoppedthecar,shegotoutandwalkedwordlesslyaway.ThenIfeltashamed.Iwaslabouringovereverydetailoftheholiday,tryingtomakesurenothingwasforgotten.Yetsomethingwasmissing.6段首句Para1:Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseitwasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

Para2：Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“AndreaHill’ssolo!”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以時間為線索展開，講述了作者受到“馬甲女士”的影響自己也開始穿著反光黃色安全背心撿垃圾，但是作者很快意識到一個人的力量是不夠的，于是作者想到創(chuàng)建網(wǎng)站來號召更多的志愿者加入到清除垃圾的行動中來，獲得了巨大的成功。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseitwasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

由此可知第一段內容應著重描寫我們一家人看著管弦樂隊表演時的情緒變化，可設想：聽著管弦樂隊的表演，圣誕節(jié)的氛圍越發(fā)濃烈，疲憊感都消失了，感覺這段時間的一切都很值得。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“AndreaHill’ssolo!”第二段段首“一切都很平靜直到音樂老師宣布了音樂會的終章，‘安德莉亞的獨奏表演’”說明應著重描寫我們對安德莉亞的態(tài)度轉變，可設想：當我們聽到這個消息的時候很激動，也終于明白了她早出晚歸，在家做事也心不在焉的原因。原來她一直在為我們準備這樣一份圣誕禮物，而我也找到了那份缺少了的東西。12續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索續(xù)寫部分應為故事的結局，即我們一家人去Andrea的學校聽她所在的樂隊表演，演出全程，我們都十分享受，沉浸在動聽的圣誕樂曲中。終于輪到演奏會的最后一首曲目，沒想到竟然是Andrea的獨奏曲，我終于明白了Andrea這段時間“早出晚歸”的原因。13續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：1.詞匯atmosphere

n.

氛圍；presentv.

呈現(xiàn)2.短語fadeaway消散；taketurns輪流；takeone’sposition找到某人的位置；burstout突然爆發(fā)14續(xù)寫素材Mytears

burstout

asAndrearoseand,totheapplauseofthat

hall,tookherpositiononthestage.

[分析]本句是一個主從復合句。主句主語是mytears，謂語動詞是burst；as引導的時間狀語從句表示伴隨，從句主語是Andrea，謂語動詞是rose和took，totheapplauseof...為插入語，指“隨著……的掌聲”。15Part3范文呈現(xiàn)16范文呈現(xiàn)Thatevening,werushedthroughourdinner

becauseit

wasthenightofthehigh-schoolChristmasconcert.

Alongwithotherfamilies,Russ,BradandItookourseatsinthe

hall.Isaw

Andrea,inher

beautiful

dress,sitdownathermusicstand.Asthe

orchestra

started,my

senseof

tension

beganto

fade

away.Ilistened,relaxedandmovedbythespecialatmospherethattheseyoungpeoplecreated.Oldandnewsongsaboutsnowanddeer

tookturns

with

Christmas

music.

Everythingseems

worth

it.17范文呈現(xiàn)Everythingseemedfineuntilthemusicteacherannouncedthefinalsection,

“Andrea

Hill’ssolo!”

Mytears

burstout

asAndrearoseand,totheapplauseofthat

hall,tookherpositiononthestage.Justbeforesheraisedthe

flute

toherlips,shelookedat

Russ,Brad

andme,andgaveusawidesmile.

Irememberedmydaughterpractising,

theextratimespentat

music

school;thedetailsignored,thelittlethingsundone.

Withherlove,shehadpresentedmewiththemusicandthemeaningoftheholidays.ThatwasAndrea’s

gift.18范文譯文那天晚上，我們匆匆吃完晚飯，因為那天晚上是高中圣誕音樂會。和其他家庭一起，Russ、Brad和我在大廳里就座。我看見安德烈穿著漂亮的裙子，坐在她的樂譜架旁。隨著管弦樂隊的開始，我的緊張感開始消退。這些年輕人營造的特殊氛圍讓我聽得很放松，也很感動。關于雪和鹿的新舊歌曲隨著圣誕音樂輪流播放。一切似乎都值得。一切似乎都很好，直到音樂老師宣布最后一節(jié)“安德里亞·希爾的獨