必修一U4表達(dá)正反觀點(diǎn)關(guān)于整形手術(shù)的不同看法

Advantages1.helppeopleremovescarsorburnmarks2.enhanceyourphysicalappearance3.boost(提升)yourself-confidence4.giveyoumorecareeropportunities.Disadvantages1.costalotofmoney2.maydoharmtopeople’shealthorevencausedeathiftheoperationsfail3.failtosatisfypeople’soriginalexpectations4.distort(歪曲)thevalueofbeauty必備句式：1.關(guān)于該問(wèn)題，觀點(diǎn)有分歧。Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonthepractice.

People’sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat...However,othersbelievethat...人們對(duì)...的觀點(diǎn)因人而異。有些人認(rèn)為...，然而其他人卻認(rèn)為...。2.支持30percentofthepeopleapproveofthepractice.Onefifthofthestudentsholdapositiveattitudetowardit.3.反對(duì)40percentofthepeopleareagainst/objecttothepractice.Twothirdsofthestudentsholdtheoppositeview.4.而且What’smore,...Inaddition,...5.總結(jié)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)Takingeverythingintoconsideration,Ipreferthat...Allinall,Iholdtheviewthat...易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)：1.主謂一致

訂正：Itfailtosatisfytheirexpectations.2.notonly...butalso...句型表示并列的理由3.訂正：Therearesomepeopleojecttothepractice.

定語(yǔ)從句成分殘缺。應(yīng)該改為：

Therearesomepeoplewhoojecttothepractice.4.

書面語(yǔ)：briefandinformative5.Ipreferthatsbshoulddosth.我更傾向于，某人應(yīng)當(dāng)做某事。

及尾段的辯證思維。6.一句話結(jié)束，使用句號(hào)。下一句首字母大寫。7.時(shí)態(tài)一般為現(xiàn)在時(shí)，除非某次過(guò)去的經(jīng)歷。8.beagainst=objectto9.書寫。整形手術(shù)現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越受歡迎了。至于我們是否該做，不同的人有不同的意見(jiàn)。Plasticsurgeryisbecomingmoreandmorepopularthesedays.Asforwhetherweshouldhaveit,differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.有些人贊成做整形手術(shù)。在他們看來(lái)，整形手術(shù)不僅可以幫助人們提升外表，還可以增強(qiáng)他們的自信。Somepeopleapproveofplasticsurgery.Intheiropinion,notonlycanplasticsurgeryhelppeopleenhancetheirphysicalappearance,butitalsoboosttheirself-confidence.另一方面，其他人則持消極的態(tài)度。首先，整形手術(shù)可能既昂貴又危險(xiǎn)。有些人隨后會(huì)遭受嚴(yán)重的疼痛，及嚴(yán)重的健康問(wèn)題。此外，人們可能會(huì)對(duì)整形手術(shù)上癮，所以他們不得不做更多的手術(shù)變得外在上完美。Ontheotherhand,othersholdanegativeattitude.Firstly,plasticsurgerycanbeexpensiveanddangerous.Somepeoplesufferterriblepainandhaveserioushealthproblemsafterwards.Moreover,peoplemaygetaddictedtoplasticsurgery,sotheycan’thelpgettingmoreoperationstobecomeperfectphysically.總而言之，我認(rèn)為人們?cè)谧稣问中g(shù)前，應(yīng)該權(quán)衡一下它的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。如果他們想提高他們對(duì)自己的外表的信心，他們不妨多找找內(nèi)在美，或者轉(zhuǎn)向健康的方式，比如鍛煉。Allinall,Ibelievepeopleshouldweighitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesbeforehavingplasticsurgery.Iftheywanttoimprove