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2009年大學生英語競賽C類的作文范文初賽TaskI
DearTbm,
Asyouknow,1'morganizingatwo—daydebatingcontestwhichistobeheldonMay1-2,1amworkingonaschedulefor
itnowandIwillhavetosenditbyE-mailtomorrow.Ineedsomenewideasurgently.Pleasehelpmeoutandgivemesome
freshideasbytomorrowmorning.Meanwhile,wouldyoupleasecontactsomeofourteachersandinvitethemtobejudge?Let
meknowtheirnamesbyFriday.Thankyou.
TaskII
ReportontheChangesofFashionforYoungPeopleinRecentYearsinChinaIntroduction
ThisreportsetsouttopresenthowfashionsforyoungpeoplehavechangedinrecentyearsinChina.Findings
Accordingtomysurvey,Ihavefoundthefollowingthreepoints:
1、Nowadays,theyoungareseekingforindividualityinsteadofuniformityintheolddaysandtheywant(heclothestobe
unique.
2、Thankstothemassdata,(heyoungpeoplearedeeplyinfluencedbythefashiontrendthroughouttheword.TheNorth
Koreanstyleinhugelypopularamongtheminrecentfiveorsixyears.
3、Thegeneraltrendistobecasualandsimple.Conclusion
Therefore,itcanbeconcludedthattheyoungpeopleinChinanowarelookingforindividuality,casualnessandtheywould
liketofollowthefashionabroad.
決賽TaskI
To:thePersonnelDirectorandtheTrainingManagerFrom:assistanttotheCustomerServiceDirectorDate:23June2009
Subject:decreasingsales
AsrequestedbytheCustomersServiceDirector,Ihavedoneasurveyconcerningourdecreasingsales.Thissurveyshowsthat
ourstaffarcnotinterestedinhelpingcustomersandtheyarcunhappyintheirjobs.Therefore,oursaleshavebeendecreasing
fbrseveralmonths.
Ithinkweshouldgivebonusestothebestsellereverymonthtoimproveourstaff'senthusiasm.What'smore,weshouldhave
somespecialoffereverydaytoattractmorecustomers.
TaskII
TakeMyAdviceonHowtoControlStress
Asthecompetitionbetweenstudentsincreases,moreandmorestudentsfeelstressfulabouttheircourse.AsfarasVm
concerned,wecantaketheinitiativetoreducethestress.
Firstly,makeaplanforeverydaystudy.Forinstance,youkeeplearningEnglishfbrtwohourseveryday,andwithinthetwo
hours,youwilllearn10newwordsandread2articles.Thiswayyoucanlearnmorethan1000wordsthreemonthlaterand
yourreadingabilitywillimproveaswell.Therefore,youdon'thavetostayuplatebeforetheEnglishexamination.Aslongas
youkeeplearningeveryday,youwillfindyouarewellpreparedfortheexamsalready.
Secondly,dosomethingelsetodivertyourmindbeforeexams.Forexample,ifyoucanplaypiano,playyourfavoritesongs
fbroneortwohoursandyouwillfeelrelaxed.
Toconclude,keeplearningregularlyandcultivateahobbyandyouwillfindyourselfrelaxedaboutyourcourse
2008年大學生?英語初賽
TaskINOTICE
TheAnti-AddictionSystem
NowinChina,theadoptionoftheanti-addictionsystemanda“realnamecheckingvsysteminnetbarshasledtoaheated
debateamongstudents.
Somesaythatstudents'self-disciplineisverylimitedandnowatleast14percentoftheurbanteenageplayersareaddictedto
theInternetandsomechildrenevenrepeatedlydisappearfromhometospendtheirnightsatlocalInternetcafes,andplaytruant
fromschoolalso.Therefore,theyhavefailedquiteafewschoolexams.Inthissense,thenewpolicycanpreventminors
developingonlineaddiction.
Othersclaimthattheanti-addictionsystemisonlyameanstoanendandcannotremovetherootoftheonlineaddiction
completelyandtheybelievethekeyistoguidetheminorstoimprovetheirself-controlandbalancetheirworkandplay.
Inmyopinion,thelacierpointhiishomefbrmebecauseiicuisiothechase.However,educationisalongprocessandtakes
time,whichmeansbeforeeducationproduceseffectsonchildren,somesupplementarymeasuresshouldalsobetakentospeed
uptheprocessandtheanti-addictionsystemisoneofthem
全國大學生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一【報告】寫作指導(dǎo)
例1
Directions:Youarepreparingfbrafieldreport,pleasewriteitinabout1OOwordswithsuchitemsasfollowing:?the
currentsituationoftheequipments②yourreasonandsuggestion
Subject:Buyingcomputersandvideotaperecorders.
*.這是一份實地考察報告,要求將所看到的狀況實事求是的反映出來。upontherequest表示在,“,的要求下,以
request表示要求一般比較正式。postgraduates即研究生
例2
2)detailedinformationsuchasdates,relatedpersonsandnumbersWORK-IN-PROGRESSREPORTFORTHE
MONTHOFMARCH,2002
From:Annylee,Head,AcademicDepartment
To:MrNgsik-hung,ChairmanShangHaiEvergreenAssociationRef:0091963Date:2April2002
I.ShangHaiSecondarySchool
II.Academicexchange
*.這是一份工作報告,這類報告應(yīng)注意言之有序,無論是說一件事的始未,或多項事的情況,都必須有條不紊,思
路清晰,并且言之有據(jù),引用的數(shù)據(jù)要準確,事實的真相要客觀地陳述。
例3
l)thecauseoftheaccident2)theresults
3)theresponseofauthority
ToLiMingFromLiuHua
Fortunately,therewerenocasualtiesamongthecrewsorpassengers,butbothshipssufferedbadlydamages.
Aspokesmanfortheportauthoritiessaidthatacommitteewouldbesetuptodeterminethecauseofthecollision.
*這是一份非正式報告,有幾點必須注意:開頭就交待清楚寫報告書的目的。詳細闡述調(diào)查經(jīng)過,盡量做到客觀公
正。
全國大學生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一一【海報】寫作指導(dǎo)
二、海報
海報是人們?nèi)粘I钪袠O為常見的一種招貼形式,多用于電影、戲曲、比賽、文藝演出等活動。海報中通常要寫
清楚活動的性質(zhì),活動的主辦單位、時間、地點等內(nèi)容。海報的語言要求簡明扼要,形式要做到機關(guān)報穎美觀。
海報的格式,通常有三部分組成,即標題、正文與落款。
海報的標題對于海報的宣傳極為重要。因比標題的撰寫晝做到簡潔明快,新穎醒目,抓住讀者的注意力,海報的
標題形式通常有兩種:一是直接使用“海報”(Poster)一詞;另一種則是根據(jù)海報的內(nèi)容,撰寫標題。
海報正文是海報的核心部分,它是對海報標題的具體描述。語言要求形象生動,簡明扼要。做到既有鼓動性,又
不夸大其辭。正文的常見表現(xiàn)形式有:簡介說明式,文學描述式,
美術(shù)設(shè)計式。
例1
Directions:YouarepreparingfbrafriendlyBasketballMatch.Writeaposterwhichasksfbr:
1)therightformofastandardposter2)writetheplaceandtimeclearlyYbushouldwriteabout100words.
POSTER
FriendlyBasketballGame
ThereisgoingtobeafriendlyandwonderfulbasketballmatchbetweenBeijingForestryUniversityBasketballTeamand
oursundertheauspicesoftheRecreationalandPhysicalCultureDepartmentofthestudents*unionofthecollege.Ithasbeen
decidedthatthisbasketballmatchwillbeheldatthestudents*activitycenterwhichcouldcontainatleast200peopleon
Saturday,Aug.23rd,2(X)4,at5:00p.m.Itisexpectedthatthecompetitionbetweenthetwoteamswillbekeenandsevere.All
ofyouarecordiallywelcometopresentthematch.TheRecreationalandPhysicalCultureDepartmentofthe
Students*Unionofthecollege.Thursday.Aug.21st.2004
由,,”舉辦”可以用詞組“undertheauspicesof,,”,另外,注意中英文通知中落款時間書寫位置的差別,中文一
般寫在右下角,英文寫在左下角。
例2
Directions:YouaregoingtowriteannoticeforanEnglish-speakingcontest.l)therightformofastandardnotice
2)tellthepurposeandcontentofthiscontestclearlyYoushouldwritenolessthan100words
English-SpeakingContest
Inordertocarryoutsomeafter-classoralEnglishpracticeactivitiesandimprovethestudents*abilityofspeakingEnglish,
theStudents'UnionoftheEnglishdepartmenthasdecidedtoholdadepartmentwideEnglishspeakingcontestatthe
students,activitycenteronSaturdaynextweek,i.eAug.23rd.2004.Everyonewhoiswillingtojoininmaytellyourname
andyourtopicofthespeechtoyourmonitor.WewillinvitefiveEnglishteacherstoworkasjudges.Thefirstsixwinnerswill
gettheawardsasanencouragement.Warmlywisheveryonetoattendandyourpresencewillcertainlyencourageandcheerthe
contestants.TheStudents,UnionofEnglishDepartment
*課外活動在英語里可表達為afterdassactivities,“inorderto,,”是表達“為了,,“”的一種常用句型。另外,書寫
通知的語言應(yīng)注意做到言簡意賅。
例3
Directions:Youarepreparingfbrapostertointroduceagreatplaceofinterest-GoldCoastofAustralia.Pleasewriteitin
about100words.WELCOMEtoGOLDCOASTofAUSTRALIA
TheGeldCoastistheundisputedtouristcapitalofAustralia.Eachyearaboutthreemillionpeoplevisittheholidaycity
thatrivalsthemostfamousworldresorts.Andwecanalmostpromisesunshine,threehundredsundrencheddaysayear.
Ayearlyaverageof25degreesVelsiusandawinteraverageof21degreesCelsiusarenaturersguaranteefbrafabulousholiday.
ThereisnothingwecannotdoontheGoldCoast.WorldclassattractionsincludeSeaWorld,Dreamworld,WildlifeSanctuary,
andthesurfingbeaches.
HOTLINE:(075)921655MOBLIE:(018)754211FAX:(075)921472
*這是一張澳大利亞“黃金海岸”張貼的公告,供大家參考使用。請著重注意一下有關(guān)聯(lián)系方式的書寫格式
全國大學生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)——【通知】寫作指導(dǎo)
全國大學生英語競賽小作文寫作指導(dǎo)一一通知寫作指導(dǎo)
一、通知
通知是上級對下級、團體對個人部署工作、傳達事情或召開會議時所用的一種文體。同級單位有事情要進行討論
或協(xié)商,也可以互發(fā)通知。通知分兩種:一種是以布告形式,把事情通知有關(guān)人員;另一種是以書信形式,把相關(guān)事
情傳達給有關(guān)人員。一般說來,通知正文上面正中的地方往往有Notice或NOTICE一詞作為題目,正文的下面是發(fā)
出通知的單位名稱。有時,發(fā)出通知單位的名稱也可寫在正文之前。發(fā)出通知的E期一般寫在左下角;發(fā)出通知的人
或單位的名稱,可以寫在右下角。這兩項有時也可以省略。發(fā)出通知的單位和通知對象一般都用第三人稱,但若正文
前用了稱呼語,則應(yīng)用第二人稱表示被通知的對象。
例1
Directions:Ifyouaretheorganizerofatourandyoushouldgiveanoticetotellthetouristssomethingaboutit.It
shouldinclude:1)Whereisthedestinationofthetour.2)Whatshouldthetouristspayattentionto.Youshouldwriteno
lessthan100words.
NOTICETOTOURISTS
Accordingtotheschedule,thetouringpartywillvisittheSummerPalaceandTianAnmenSquaretoday.Youcan
leaveyourbaggageintheLeftBaggageOfficeandpickituplaterthisafternoonifitistooheavytocarrywithyou.Thereceipt
ofthebaggageshouldbekeptcarefullybecauseyouwillneedit.WewillcometotheSummerPalacefirstandfinishthetourat
2pm.ThenwearegoingtothedestinationofTianAnmenSquarewithoutparking.Sopleasedon'tgetoffthesightseeingbus
duringthejourneyuntilthedriversaysthatitistimeforfoodanddrinksortoilets.Pleasebeontime!
*這是一張旅行團張貼的布告,告知游客當天的活動以及注意事項?!靶欣罴拇嫣帯苯蠰eftBaggageOffice,這
是美國英語。英國人管行李叫l(wèi)uggage,與此相對的,行李寄存處便是LeftLuggageOffice。領(lǐng)取行李,美語toclaimbaggage,
英國人說toreclaimluggage0旅游車是sightseeingbus或coach.
例2
Dircctions:Thcrearesomethingimportanttotellthepassengersoftheplane.Writenoticeabout:
1)Reconfirmationthereservation
2)What'sthevalidityofanormalfareticket.3)Abouttherefund.
Youshouldwriteabout100words
ImportantNotice
RECONFIRMATIONIfyoubreakyourjourneyformore(han35hoursatanypointandholdacontinuingorreturn
reservation,pleasereconfirmyourintentionofusingthereservation.
VALIDITYAnormalfareticketisvalidfbroneandahalfyearsfromthedateofissueifnoneofanyportionofithas
beenused,orfromthedateofcommencementifthecarriageiscommenced.Whenindoubt,pleasecheckwiththecarrier's
officeconcerned.
REFUNDTherefundshouldbemadenotlaterthan19daysafterexpirydateoftheticketandonlyrefundedinthe
samecountry.
*以上是乘坐飛機的注意事項,包括來回票機座的確認問題(reconfirmation)、機票的有效期問題(validity)
以及退票事項(refund)。在飛行前應(yīng)著重注意這些瑣碎的問題。
Youshouldwriteabout100words
NOTICE
JontlysponsoredbytheStudents,UnionandtheYouthLeagueCommittee,aprofessionallecturenaming“Howthe
TariffschangedafterChinaenteredintoWTO“'sunionandTheYouthLeagueCommittee
*在表示聯(lián)合發(fā)起時,用Jointlysponsors加合作單位名稱
例4
Directions:YouareasecretaryoftheDean'sOffice.ProfessorWangTingisabsentforhealthreasons.Writea
bulletintotellthestudents.Afewofdetailsshouldbeclear:
I)whyprofessorWangTingcan'tcometowork.2)whowillsubstituteforher3)howlongthesituationwillbekept
Itshouldbenolessthan100words.
BULLETIN
ProfessorWangTing,EnglishteacherofGradeThree,istemporarilypreventedfromcomingtoclassforhealth
reasons.ProfessorXuZhiyuanwillsubstituteforhertoinstructListeningEnglishfortwoweeks.Thefirstweek,amoviewill
begiventopractisethelisteningEnglish,andthesecondweek,therewillbeaclass
discussion.ProfessorLiChaoshanwillsubstituteforhertoinstruct
ConversationalEnglishforthreeweeks.Thelastweekisfbrthefinalexamination.Thetopicofthisweekwillbe”The
SocietyandTheHumanrightsw.Youshouldcollectsomematerialsandprepareenoughbeforetheclass.Pleasetelleachother
aboutthemessageandgototheclassontime.Dean'sOffice
*“代課”用substitute表示。substilute可用做名詞,例如hisorhersubstitute。Substitute也可用做動詞,有兩
種表示法:tosubstituteBwithA或tosubstituteAforB.“上課”,大學里一般用instructo
例5
Directions:TheResidentsJCommitteeneedstoholdameetingtodiscussthesecurityintheresidentialarea,writea
noticetotelltheresidentsthat:1)whythemeetingisnecessary.
2)Thelimeandplaceofthissecuritymeeting
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2
NOTICE
Itisreportedbyseveralinhabitantsfromthisresidentialareathatsomestrangerswithdirtyclothes(oneofthemhasa
scarontheface)havelatelyhauntedthisarea.Somestealingshavehappenedfromlimeiotime.Sothe
Residents''tforgettotakethenotebookswithyou.TheResidents'Committee
*“居民區(qū)"用residentialarea或resideniialquarters來表示,“居委會”有兩種譯法,一是theResidents,Committee,
另一個是theNeighborhoodCommittee,兩者皆可。
例6
Directions:Youaretheleaderof(henewPublicSecurityTeam,youshouldtelltheresidentsaboutthesecurity
situationoftheresidentialarea.Thedetailsincluding:
1)thepurposeofthisnewPublicSecurityTeam.2)Howtocontactwiththeteam.Youshouldwriteabout100words
BULLETIN.
Recently,therehavebeenseveralburglariesinourresidentialquarters.Afewofmuggingshavebeenreportedbythe
inhabitants(oo.Apublicsecurityteamhasbeensetupinordertomaintaintheorderandsecurityofthisresidentialarea.
Everyoneandeachhouse
*城市尤其是大城市人員流動頻繁,犯罪率比較高,“撬門”是burglary,“偷盜”是theft,“攔路搶劫”是mugging,
"掏包”是pickpocket,警衛(wèi)或保安人員,是security“萬一”的含義。Shouldyoubeintrouble,pleasecall110.
例7
Directions:YouareaguardoftheGuardroomResidentialArea.Youwanttonoticesomethingtotheinhabitantsof
thisarea.Thefollowingsshouldbeclear:1)What'sthepurposeofthisnotice?
2)Whatshouldtheinhabitantsdoifthesituationmentionedhappens?Youshoaldwriteabout100words
NOTICE
Itisreportedfromtheinhabitantsandresidentsinourresidentialareathatafewpersonscametohouseholdstosell
gasfromlimetolime.TheypretendedtobetheworkersoftheGasCompanyandenteredintotheinhabitants,homeonthe
pretextofexaminationofthegasline.Thiskindofsituationshavehappenedseveraltimes.Thisactivityisillegitimateand
shouldbeforbidden.TheGasCompanydidn'tsendanyonetocheckthegasorgaslinelately.Shouldsuchpeoplecomeagain,
pleaseimmediatelycontactthesecurityguards.Wewillcomeoverandinterfere.Theemergencynumberis64492889.Youcan
callatanytimeyouneed.Guardroom.PlesidentialArea
*小區(qū)居民,是residents或inhabitantSotopretend冒充,onthepretextof。
例8
Directions:SupposeyouareoneoftheorganizersofEnglishevening.Writeanoticeaboutit,whichshouldinclude
sponsorplaceandtheprogram.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2
NOTICE
TheafterclassActivitiesGrouptakespleasureinannouncingthatundertheauspicesofthestudents'unionof
EnglishDepartment,annualEnglisheveningistobeheldinthestudents*activitycenteronSaturday,Aug,23rd,at7:00p.m.
Theprogramincludessongs,dances,recitations,storytelling,skitsandplayswhichareplayedallbystudents.Admission
ticketsmaybeobtainedonapplicationtotheafterclassActivitesGroup,Room205,OfficeBuildingforfree.Itmustbea
goodtimetoenjoyandrelaxyourselves.Allarecordiallywelcometogiveyourencouragementtotheplayersandcheerthem.
*Skepleasureindoingsth.很高興做杲導(dǎo),underiheauspices(復(fù)數(shù))of”由”舉辦,of后跟主辦、贊助的人或單位。
例9
Directions:YouarearesidentinHongKongandneedalargerflat.Writeabulletinincludingfollowingdetails:1)
yourreasonforthelargerflat.2)yourcontactinformation
Youshouldwritenolessthan100words.
DearSir/Madam,
IamapermanentresidentinHongKongandmypresentresidenceisRm206Block8,KaiManEstate.Ihavebeen
livingwithmymother,wife,youngerbrotherandnytwochildrenintheaboveflat.
Notlongago,mybrotherdiedinantrafficaccident.Becauseofthis,hiswifeandhistwochildrenwereallowedto
cometoHongKongfromMainlandChinatolivewithus.Thechangefroma6-memberfamilytoa8-memberonehascreated
averycrowdylivingenvironment.Ithereforewouldliketoapplyforamovetoalargerflatinaccordancewiththehousing
regulationsconcerned.Belowaremypersonalparticularsforyourreference:
IDCardNo.:A306955(1)ContactTelephoneNo.:3568496CorrespondenceAddress:
Yourconsiderationoverthiscasewillbehighlyappreciated.Yoursfaithfully,[signature]
*permanentresident長久公民,inaccordancewith符合,CorrespondenceAddress通訊地址。
三、常用句式
常用的起首語有:
3)AthousandthanksforyourkindletterofJune5,1997.
4)YourkindletterofNovember22tharrivedthismorning.
5)Yourletterwhicharrivedthismominggavemegreatcomfort.
6)Inreplytoyourletterdated4thJuly,!wanttosay”
7)ThankyouverymuchforyourletterofAugust2andthegiftyousentmeonChristmasEve.
8)WhatatreattoreceiveyourkindletterofMay5th!
9)Itisalwaysathrilltoseeyournicehandwriting.
10)FirstofallImustthankyouforyourkindassistanceandhighattentiontome.
11)WithgreatdelightIlearnfromyourletterofthisSundaythat”
14)1amverymuchpleasedtoinformyouthatmyvisittoyourcountryhasbeenapproved.
15)1wishtoapplyforteachingpositionyouareoffering.
16)1amtooexcitedanddelightedatyourgoodnews.
17)1amveryobligedtoyouforyourwarmcongratulations.,,
常用的結(jié)束語有:
1)Awaitingyourgoodnews,
2)Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply,3)Hopingtohearfromyousoon,4)Weawaityourgoodnews.
5)1hopetohearfromyouverysoon.
6)Welookforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.
7)1lookforwardtoournextmeetingthereinLosAngeles.
8)Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.
9)Anyotherparticularswantedweshallbepleasedtosendyou.
10)Thehelpyougivemeissincerelyvalued.
11)1hopeeverythingwillbewellwithyou.
12)Pleaseletusknowifyouwantmoreinformation.
13)1hopeyoualwaysenjoyyourself.
14)1wishyouverysuccessinthecomingyear.
15)Pleaseremembermetoyourfamily.
16)16)Withbestregardstoyourfamily.
17)A11thebest.
18)Withloveandgoodwishes.
5.結(jié)束語(ComplimentaryClose)
結(jié)束語是寫信人表示自己對收信人的一種謙稱,只占一行,低于正文一二行,從信紙的中間或偏右的地方開始寫。
第一個詞的開頭字母要大寫,末尾用逗號。結(jié)束語視寫信人與收信人的關(guān)系而定例如寫給機關(guān)、團體或不相識的人的
信,一般用:
Yours(very)truly,Yours(very)faithfully,Yours(very)sincerely,等等。
寫給上級和長者的信一般可用:
Yours(very)respectfully,Yours(very)obediently,Ybursgratefully,Yoursappreciatively,Yourobedientservant,等等。
寫給同志或同事的信一般可用:
Fraternallyyours,Comradelyyours,等等。
寫給熟人或朋友的信可用:
Yours,Everyours,Yoursaffectionately,Asever,YourssincerelyYoursdevotedly,(Most)Fondlyyours,Yoursexcitedly,
Intimatelyyours,等等。
寫給親屬或摯友的信一般用:
Yours,Everyours,Yoursasever,Asever,Yoursaffectionately,Lovinglyyours,(Much)Love,WithLove,Lovingly,Your
lovingson,Yourmostaffectionate,Yourdevotedfriend,Devotedly,等等,意即:"您的永遠是您的“、“您的親愛的”、
“您的愛子(孩子、姐妹、侄、侄女、祖母)”、“您的摯友”等。寫給摯友的信有時也可用:
Yourshurriedly,Yourshastily,Yoursinhaste,等等。
寫信給摯友,表示歉意時,可用:
Contritelyyours,Regretfullyyours,Yoursin(with)regret,Yoursin(with)deepremorse等。
在歐洲一些國家里,多把Yours放在sincerely等詞的前面。在美國和加拿大等國,則多用,把yours放在Sincerely
等詞之后。Yours一詞有時也可省略。
例4
IgotthenewsfromMikethatyouhavereceivedaDoctorateinliteraturefromTsinghuaUniversity.Icongratulateyoufbr
this.Tbhavereachedthismilestoneinyourscholarshipatayoungageisreallygreat.Itmeans,Ibelieve,yearsofassiduous
studyandhardworkonyourpart.Anditisanachievementyoucanbewellproudof.Asyourbestfriend,Ihopeyoucanreach
higherlevelinyourstudyanddomorecontributiontothesociety.Mybestwishestoyou!
Sincerely,XXX
*朋友年輕有為,獲得博士學位,應(yīng)該祝賀。正如信中所說,這一成就是“多年來刻苦學習和努力工作的結(jié)果”(years
ofassiduousstudyandhardwork)(>英文有一句成語:Nosweetnosweat.世界上不勞有獲的事情是沒有的。
四、短語優(yōu)先原則
寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,
如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,
如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點一精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時刻思維矩路,只有湊字數(shù),怎么辦?用短語
是一個辦法!比如:
Icannotbearit.
可以用短語表達:
Icannotputupwithit.
Iwantit.
可以用短語表達:
Iamlookingforwardtoit.
這樣字數(shù)明顯增加,表達也更準確。
五、多實少虛原則
原因很簡單,寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實
詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的
詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital
之類的形象詞。再比如:走出房間,general的詞是:
walkoutoftheroom
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說:
slipoutoftheroom
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說:
sailoutoftheroom
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說:
danceoutoftheroom
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說:
staggeroutoftheroom
所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎么辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子
之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。
比如說:
Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.
如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:
Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.
其它的短語可以用:
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點,然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可
畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.
Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.
更多的短語:despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding
3)因果(so,so,so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然后我主動搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認識了,
然后我們成為了朋友,,可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。
其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.
更多短語:then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,
sothat
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可
如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不
同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。
舉例:
This
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