高考英語讀后續(xù)寫練習03：女兒離家又回家+講義

03續(xù)寫題目：女兒離家又回家閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Lilywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadjusthadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandhadrunangrilyoutofthehouse.Shecouldn’thelpcryingwhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltahungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.However,thiswasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnomoney.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.Withnomoneyinhand,shesighedanddecidedtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,doyouwanttohavesomenoodles?”“Oh,yes…butIdon’thavemoneyonme...”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoappetizing.Lilythankedthemanandstartedtogobbleup(狼吞虎咽)thedeliciousfoodwithsilenttearsrunningdownhercheeks.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.“Nothing.Iwasjustmovedbyyourkindness!”saidLilyasshewipedawayhertears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomean

and

cruel!”Lilyadded.Hearingthewords,thesellersmiledkindlyandwhispered,“Girl,doyoureallythinksso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyoucountthenumberoftimesthatshehascookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”Lilysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock,rememberinghermother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?”shethoughttoherself.“Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Atthatmoment,Lilyknewthatassoonasshearrivedhome,shewouldgivehermotheranapologyforherterriblerudeness.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡相應位置作答。Para1:Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了Lily與母親發(fā)生爭吵后離家出走的故事。在街頭徘徊數(shù)小時后，饑餓的Lily遇到了一位善良的中年攤販，他免費給了她一碗面條。在攤販的啟發(fā)下，Lily意識到她從未對母親為她所做的一切表示感謝，而對一個陌生人的小小善舉卻感激涕零。她決定回家向母親道歉。回到家后，Lily向母親表達了她的歉意，并感謝母親多年來的養(yǎng)育之恩。母親的寬容和理解讓Lily意識到了家庭的愛和重要性。故事強調(diào)了感恩的重要性以及有時需要外界的觸發(fā)來讓我們認識到身邊人的愛。原文中幾處伏筆及其在續(xù)寫中的回應：1.Lily與母親的爭吵：這是故事的起點，Lily因為爭吵而離家出走，這是她情緒變化的觸發(fā)點?；貞涸诶m(xù)寫中，Lily意識到自己的錯誤，并決定回家向母親道歉。2.Lily的饑餓：Lily在街頭徘徊感到饑餓，這為她接受攤販的好意埋下了伏筆回應：攤販的善舉讓Lily感受到溫暖，也成為她反思自己對母親態(tài)度的契機。3.攤販的善舉：攤販免費給Lily一碗面條，這個行為讓Lily感到感激?；貞篖ily的感激之情促使她反思自己對母親的態(tài)度，意識到自己從未對母親的付出表示過感謝。4.Lily對母親的誤解：Lily認為母親是“meanandcruel”，這為故事的轉(zhuǎn)變埋下了伏筆?；貞豪m(xù)寫中Lily的態(tài)度發(fā)生180度大轉(zhuǎn)變，她意識到母親的愛和犧牲。5.攤販的話語：攤販的話語讓Lily開始反思自己對母親的態(tài)度，這是故事情感轉(zhuǎn)變的關鍵。回應：Lily回到家后，她的行為和言語表明她已經(jīng)理解并感激母親的付出。6.Lily的回家：Lily決定回家并向母親道歉，這是故事的高潮?；貞豪m(xù)寫中詳細描述了Lily回家的場景和她向母親道歉的過程，以及母親寬容的反應。這些伏筆和回應共同構建了故事的情節(jié)，推動了Lily情感的轉(zhuǎn)變，并最終導致了她對母親態(tài)度的改變。參考答案Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.ReadytofaceuptoMom,Lily

pluckedupcourage

and

knockedatthedoor.Nevertheless,nooneanswered.Having

leftthekeyathome,Lily

hadnoalternativebuttositinfrontofthehouse.With

scenesofquarrelingwithhermotheremerginginhermind,soregretfulaboutherterriblerudenesswasLilythat

shefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofguiltmixedwithuneasiness.“Ishouldn’tactinthatway.

Butfor

mom’s

devotionandcare,I

wouldn’thavehad

suchahappylife.”

aninnervoiceremindedher.Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.Uponcatchingsightofthefamiliarfigureofmom,Lily

rosetoherfeet

and

walkedovertoher.“Wheredidyougo?I’vebeenlookingforyou!”

exclaimed

mom,whowerestill

outofbreath,but

letoutasighofrelief

afterseeingherbeloveddaughter.

Mom’slookofexhaustionaddedtoLily’sguilt.Lilycouldn’thelp

throwingherselfintohermother’sarms

and

sobbingbitterly,

expressinghersincereapologyforherpreviousbehaviourandgreatgratitudeforeverythingmomhavedoneforher.Hearingthesewords,mom

strokedLily’shairtenderly,with

herfaceexpandingwithabigsmile.下水文1Para1:Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.Herheartwaspoundingwithamixofanticipationandregret.Sheknewshehadtofacehermotherandapologizeforherbehavior.Assheopenedthedoorslowly,shesawhermotherquietlysweepingthefloor,herbackbentwiththeweightoftheday'schores.Thesightofhermother'stiredfigurefilledLilywithasuddensurgeofloveandremorse.Shesteppedforward,hervoicetremblingasshebegantospeak,"Mom,I'msorry.Ididn'trealizehowmuchyoudoformeeveryday."Para2:Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.Thefamiliarsoundofthedoorclosingandhermother'ssoftfootstepsechoedthroughthehouse,bringingLilybacktothepresent.Shelookedintohermother'seyes,seeingtheunspokenloveandpatiencethathadalwaysbeenthere.Withoutaword,hermotheropenedherarms,andLilyrushedintothem,tearsstreamingdownherface.Inthatembrace,shefoundforgivenessandunderstanding.Thenoodleseller'swordsranginherears,areminderthatsometimesittakesthekindnessofastrangertohelpusseetheloveofthoseclosesttous.Fromthatdayon,Lilyvowedtoshowhergratitudetohermother,notjustwithwords,butwithactionsthatmirroredthelovehermotherhadshownheralltheseyears.下水文2Para1:Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.Theairwasheavywiththeweightofheractionsandtherealizationofhermother'ssacrifices.Herfingerstracedthefamiliarpatternofthedoorbell,hesitatingbeforeshemusteredthecouragetopressit.Thesoundechoedthroughthehouse,asignalofherreturnandapleaforreconciliation.Asthedoorcreakedopen,shewasmetwithhermother'ssurprisedyethopefulgaze."Mom,"Lilybegan,hervoicethickwithemotion,"I'vebeensothoughtless.I