高中英語北師大版選擇性必修四Unit 10 Period 8　Writing-A News Report

Period8Writing—ANewsReportUnit10CONNECTIONS細讀文本寫作指導寫作實踐達標檢測細讀文本ReadthedescriptiononP18andchoosethebestanswer.1.WhoattendedthefirstCommunityStreetFestival?A.Peopleattendingtheeventwereallfamilies.B.Peopleattendingtheeventweremainlychildren.C.Peopleattendingtheeventcamefrom20countries.D.Peopleattendingtheeventwerefromthenearbycommunities.√Activity1

Readforsomedetails.2.Whatcanpeopleenjoyintheevent?A.Watchwonderfulperformances.B.Enjoydeliciousfoodanddrink.C.Communicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcommunities.D.Allthreeoftheabove.√3.Whatwasthemostexcitingpartofthefestival?A.Singinganddancingbytheadults.B.Foodanddrinkservedbyoutlets.C.Performancesbythefamoussingers.D.Musicanddancebyagroupofchildren.√4.Whatispeople’sattitudetowardsthefestival?A.Indifferent. B.Favorable.C.Disapproval. D.Notmentioned.√1.Thenewsreporthasfourparagraphs.Labeleachparagraphwithafunction.Para.1

BodyParas.2&3 Round-upPara.4 LeadActivity2

Readforthestructures.2.AccordingtothenewsreportonP18，wecanlearnwhenwewriteanewsreport,wecanusethefollowingoutline.(寫作模板)

(標題)Inorderto

(事件目的)，ourschoolorganizeda

(活動)on

(時間)at

(地點).Itwasa

day(介紹天氣).Firstofall_______.Then________.Finally，

.(介紹活動的過程)

(報道的活動)benefitedusalot.Notonlydidit

，butitalso

.Whata(n)

activity！(對活動的評價)1.Findouttheintroduction(開頭語)andtheendofthereport(結束語).答案

On21September，thefirstCommunityStreetFestivalinourcitywasheldonRedwoodStreet.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinthecity.Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.2.FindoutsentenceswithAdverbsofDegreeinthenewsreportonP18.答案

(1)Thefestivalwashighlysuccessful...(2)Theperformerswererathergood...(3)Peopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.(4)Theactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularlypopular.返回寫作指導本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇新聞報道。新聞報道是關于最近發(fā)生的重要而新鮮的事情的報道或評述。它一般分為四個部分：標題(headline)、導語(introduction)、主體(body)和結語(end)。每部分特點如下：一、標題是新聞報道的題目，是對最有新聞價值內容的濃縮、概括、提煉和再創(chuàng)造。二、導語是消息開頭的第一段或第一句話，它簡明扼要地揭示出報道的核心內容(包括時間、地點、人物、事件)。三、主體是導語之后對新聞的進一步擴展，補充更加詳實的細節(jié)，使新聞報道內容更加充實。四、結語一般是最后一句話或者一段話，通常對全文內容進行概括性的總結或對新聞事件的發(fā)展趨勢作出預測。五、新聞報道的語言要正式簡潔；

時態(tài)一般是一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時結合。為了讓讀者對整個事件有一個清楚的了解，新聞報道必須包含五個要素，即時間(when)、地點(where)、原因(why)、人物(who)、事件(what)。[常用表達]1.常用開頭語(1)Itisreportedthat...據(jù)報道……(2)Onthemorningof...，Chinasuccessfullysentup...在……早上，中國成功地發(fā)射……(3)WiththerapidincreaseofChina’spopulation，...problemisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.隨著中國人口的快速增加，……問題越來越嚴重。2.主體部分常用表達(1)Witnessessaid...lastedfor...hours.目擊者說……持續(xù)了……個小時。(2)Furtherdetailsofwhathappenedarestillunclear.事件的進一步細節(jié)尚不清楚。(3)Thewholenationwasshockedatthenews.聽到這個消息全國人民很震驚。(4)Theconferenceurgesthegovernmentsofallcountriestotakenecessarymeasurestogetridofpollution.大會敦促各國政府采取必要措施消除污染。3.常用結束語(1)Inmyopinion，measuresshouldbetakenbythegovernment...我認為，政府應該采取措施……(2)Itishightimethattheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolve...有關當局是時候該采取恰當措施來解決……(3)Ibelievewecancertainlyovercomethedisasterwiththepublicandthegovernmentworkingtogether.我相信在公眾和政府的共同努力下我們一定能解決這場災難。返回寫作實踐假設你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華，最近你校組織留學生到敬老院(nursinghome)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(theDoubleNinthFestival)。假設你是校英語報的記者，請按下列要點用英語寫一則新聞報道。1.時間、地點；2.活動內容：打掃衛(wèi)生、表演節(jié)目；3.留學生的體會。注意：可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫作要求是寫一篇新聞報道，報道在敬老院過重陽節(jié)的活動。寫作時應注意下面幾點：1.確定文體：這是一篇新聞報道。寫作時注意新聞報道的寫作特點。2.主體時態(tài)：以一般過去時為主。3.主體人稱：以第三人稱為主。[謀篇]本文是一篇新聞報道，因此要遵循新聞報道的要素。第一段：導語：簡要敘述報道的核心內容；第二段：主體：具體說明活動的細節(jié)；第三段：對該事件作出評價和總結。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯](含本單元詞匯)1.留學生 _______________2.出發(fā) __________3.一到達 _______________4.繼續(xù)做某事 ________________5.打掃房間 _______________6.花費時間做…… _____________________7.表演 ____________foreignstudentssetout/offupon/onarrivalproceedtodosthcleantheroomsspendtime(in)doing...performance8.難忘的 ____________9.吸引某人 ___________10.突然大笑 __________________________________unforgettableappealtosbburstintolaughter/burstoutlaughing[連詞成句]1.OntheDoubleNinthFestival，________________________________________.在重陽節(jié)這一天，六個留學生去拜訪了敬老院。2.Thesixforeignstudents________________________.這六個留學生在我們學校學習。3.They___________________________________________andarrivedanhourlater.他們上午8：30乘公交車出發(fā)去敬老院，一小時后到達。sixforeignstudentsvisitedthenursinghomearestudyinginourschoolsetoutforthenursinghomebybusat8：30am4.________________，theybegantohelptheelderlycleantheirrooms.一到達，他們就開始幫著老人打掃房間。5.Aftereverythingwasdone，they_______________________________________________________.做完這些后，他們一起唱歌，跳舞，表演節(jié)目。6.Theyallfoundthevisit__________________________.他們都覺得這次拜訪是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。On/Uponarrivalspentsometimetogethersinging，dancingandperforminganunforgettableexperience7.Throughtheexperience，_____________________________

andrealizetheelderlyneedtobetreatedwithrespect.通過這次經(jīng)歷，他們對這個節(jié)日有了更多的了解，同時也意識到老人需要得到尊重。theyknowmoreaboutthefestival第三步句式升級1.將句1和句2用定語從句合并。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.將句5改成with復合結構。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OntheDoubleNinthFestival，sixforeignstudentswhoarestudyinginourschoolvisitedthenursinghome.Witheverythingdone，theyspentsometimetogethersinging，dancingandperforming.3.將句6和句7用非限制性定語從句和notonly...butalso...句式合并。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyallfoundthevisitanunforgettableexperience，throughwhichtheynotonlyknowmoreaboutthefestivalbutalsorealizetheelderlyneedtobetreatedwithrespect.第四步組句成篇用適當?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內容，組成一篇英語新聞報道。范文展示ForeignStudentsSpenttheDoubleNinthFestivalwiththeElderlyOntheDoubleNinthFestival，sixforeignstudentswhoarestudyinginourschoolvisitedthenursinghome.Theysetoutforthenursinghomebybusat8：30amandarrivedanhourlater.Upontheirarrival，theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Andthentheyproceededtohelptheelderlycleantheirroomsandsweepthefloors.Witheverythingdone，theyspentsomefuntimetogethersinging，dancingandperforming，whichappealedtothemgreatlyandmadethemburstintolaughter.Theyallfoundthevisitanunforgettableexperience，throughwhichtheynotonlyknowmoreaboutthefestivalbutalsorealizetheelderlyn