譯林牛津版八年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)-Unit-1-Friends-寫(xiě)作書(shū)案-寫(xiě)作書(shū)案

點(diǎn)撥訓(xùn)練課時(shí)作業(yè)本Unit1Friends單元主題寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作方法“五步四要素法”介紹朋友五步：Name第一步：介紹朋友的名字Looks第二步：介紹他/她的外貌特征Personality第三步：他/她的個(gè)人品質(zhì)Futureplan第四步：他/她的未來(lái)計(jì)劃Advice第五步：給他/她一些建議寫(xiě)作書(shū)案四要素：要素一：人物要素二：外貌要素三：性格和品質(zhì)要素四：理想寫(xiě)作書(shū)案1.注意短文的要點(diǎn)：名字、外貌、個(gè)人品質(zhì)、未來(lái)計(jì)劃、建議。2.注意時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.短文有條理。4.通讀檢查全文。不得遺漏題目所給要點(diǎn)。易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)提醒請(qǐng)從外貌、個(gè)人品質(zhì)、未來(lái)計(jì)劃等方面寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹一下你最好的朋友Jim。以下為提示，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需包含所有要點(diǎn)，并請(qǐng)給他一些建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。典例1.高而且壯，英俊;方臉，微笑的眼睛。2.不喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，電腦玩得太多，戴眼鏡。3.樂(lè)于助人，有幽默感。4.想成為歌手。5.建議……要求：語(yǔ)言流暢，條理清晰，不少于80詞。典例Hehas...Hedoesn'tlike...Hewantstobe...whenhegrowsup.單詞tall，strong，square，smiling，helpful，humour，wear，singer，bored，unhappy短語(yǔ)haveasquareface，smilingeyes，wearglasses，becauseof，toomuch，haveagoodsenseofhumour，feelbored，tellfunnyjokes，makesb.laugh，growup，workhard句式Hehas...Hedoesn'tlike...Hewantstobe...whenhegrowsup.MybestfriendisJim.Heistallandstrong.Heisveryhandsome.Hehasasquarefaceandsmilingeyes.Hedoesn‘tlikedoingexercise.Hewearsglassesbecauseheplaysonthecomputertoomuch.Heishelpfulandhehasagoodsenseofhumour.WhenIfeelboredorunhappy,heoftentellsfunnyjokestomakemelaugh.范文欣賞Hewantstobeasingerwhenhegrowsup.Idon'tthinkheshouldplayonthecomputertoomuch.Heshouldreadmanybooks.Heshouldworkhardonhisstudy.Ifhelikessinging，hecan