讀后續(xù)寫+大學錄取：失落與覺醒+講義 高二學下期期末統(tǒng)一考試英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫：IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmylittlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityof

Massachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtomeinherten-year-oldvoice:

“Weregretthatwe

donothaveaplaceforyou.."RejectedfromGeorgetown.

“Youwereoneofmanyqualified

candidates..."RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveat

WilliamandMary.AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.

Ididn'tdigesttherejectionsimmediately.

I

touredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhomeand

wentbacktoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschoolstheyreallywantedto

goto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.lgotgoodgrades,madetheschoolteamandscoredwellonmySATs.lhadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointments

inmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities(鵠齒)even.Sobeingrejectedseemed

disastrous.Ihadalwaysassumed

I'dgotooneof

the

"goodschools."lreallywantedtobechosen:Thisis

theplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheotherhand,hadthereputationofbeing

apartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbeheadedwiththeguvwhosatnexttomein

tenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,lefthisbookopenonthat

floorandturnedthepageswith

hisfeet.IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirstchoice,made

ILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccerballandherscience-fairproject

toshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委員會)exactlywhattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthings

like,

“I'vedecidedtogiveuptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.”

The

subtextinthiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Deeplytouchedbyhiswords,Ibegantoreassessmysituation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________01剖析語篇細節(jié)對提示句P1,P2做逐詞逐句的解讀，理解其背后深意；回溯原文，找到對應(yīng)的文本，確定基本元素，時間，地點，人物，所涉及的物品，細節(jié)等信息；試圖對時間線，地點線結(jié)合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所變化，以確定是否需要展開；構(gòu)思情節(jié)讀懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理結(jié)合生活實際，構(gòu)思文章，并完成confusion，frustration，setback,disappointment,annoyance,worries,成長前的困擾情境描寫+消極情緒的累積→高潮

成長中的蛻變

成長的動機+過程中變化的心情成長后的升華

成長后的收獲+積極情緒(喜悅、滿足和驕傲等)原文梳理

認真梳理原文，增強語料積累I

was

inNewYorkCity

onaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmylittlesister,

Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityof

Massachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtome

inherten-year-oldvoice:

“Weregret

thatwe

donothaveaplaceforyou.."RejectedfromGeorgetown.

“Youwere

oneofmanyqualified

candidates..."RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveat

WilliamandMary.AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.

Ididn't

digest

therejections

immediately.

I

toured

theUnitedNations,

took

trainhomeand

went

backtoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschools

theyreallywantedto

goto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.l

got

goodgrades,made

theschoolteamand

scored

wellonmySATs.

I

hadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointments

inmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities(鵠齒)even.

Sobeingrejectedseemed

disastrous(disaster).Ihadalwaysassumed

I'dgotooneof

the

“"goodschools."

lreallywantedtobechosen:Thisis

theplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheotherhand,hadthereputationofbeing

apartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbeheadedwiththeguy

whosatnexttomein

tenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,lefthisbookopenonthat

floorandturnedthepageswith

hisfeet.IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,

who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirstchoice,

made

ILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccerballandherscience-fairproject

toshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委員會)exactly

whattheywererejecting.

I

simplysaidthings

like,

“I'vedecidedtogiveuptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.”

The

subtextinthiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.短語和生詞

1.beonaschooltrip

be+on+sth處于做某事的過程中；-

近義短語：onafieldtrip,duringaschoolexcursion

-

例句：Wewenttothemuseumonaschooltriplastyear.

2.calledhome

-

近義短語：phonedhome,contactedhome

-

例句：Icalledhometocheckonmyfamily.

3.payphone

-

生詞：付費電話

-

近義詞：publicphone,coin-operatedphone

-

例句：Heusedapayphonetomakeacallsincehiscellphonedied.

4.Weregretthat...

-

近義短語：Wearesorrythat...,Weapologizefor...

-

例句：Weregretthatwecannotofferyouaplaceatthistime.

5.qualifiedcandidates

-

近義短語：eligibleapplicants,suitablecandidates

-

例句：Thereweremanyqualifiedcandidatesfortheposition.

6.safetyschool

-

生詞：保底學校

-

近義短語：backupschool,fallbackoption

-

例句：UMasswashersafetyschool,butshestillappliedtoherdreamcolleges.

7.digesttherejections

-

生詞：消化拒絕

-

近義短語：processtherejections,cometotermswiththerejections

-

例句：Ittookhersometimetodigesttherejectionsfromhertopchoices.

8.madetheschoolteam

-

近義短語：gotintotheschoolteam,wasselectedfortheschoolteam

-

例句：Hemadetheschoolteamafterseveralroundsoftryouts.

9.majordisappointments

-

近義短語：significantsetbacks,bigletdowns

-

例句：Hehadneverfacedanymajordisappointmentsinlifeuntilnow.

10.failedatanything

-

近義短語：experiencedfailure,fallenshort

-

例句：Shehadneverfailedatanythingbefore,sotherejectionwashardtoaccept.

11.oneofthe"goodschools"

-

近義短語：oneoftheprestigiousschools,oneofthetopuniversities

-

例句：Hedreamedofattendingoneofthe"goodschools"hisparentshadmentioned.

12.partyschool

-

生詞：以聚會聞名的學校

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近義短語：schoolwithapartyculture,socialschool

-

例句：Theuniversityhadareputationasapartyschool,buthewasmorefocusedonacademics.

13.getactive

-

近義短語：takeaction,becomeinvolved

-

例句：Insteadoffeelingsorryforherself,shedecidedtogetactiveandpursueotheroptions.

14.firstchoice

-

近義短語：topchoice,preferredoption

-

例句：Dukewasherfirstchoice,butshedidn’tgetin.

15.takeacake-decoratingcourse

-

生詞：學習蛋糕裝飾課程

-

近義短語：enrollinabakingcourse,takeaculinaryclass

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例句：Aftertherejection,shejokedabouttakingacake-decoratingcourseinsteadofgoingtocollege.

16.Theworldisn’tfair

-

近義短語：Lifeisn'tfair,Thingsareunfair

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例句：Afterbeingrejected,hebitterlyremarked,"Theworldisn’tfair."

Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.

Havingnoticedmysadness原因狀語,heasked

whatwastroublingme賓從.

I

opened

myhearttohim,

pouringout

myfrustrationsabouttherejections

andmyfears

forthefuture定語.“I

alwaysthought

I'dgetintooneofthegoodschools,Dad賓從.Now

I

feel

like

afailure,

like

I'mnotgoodenough."

Afterlisteningattentivelyforawhile介詞短語作狀語,myfather

gently

remindedmeofallmyaccomplishments-thecountlessprojects

I

hadexcelledin,

the

teams

I

hadled,

and

theawards

I

had

earned紅色定從，黃色并列，形成排比感.Heconcluded

withareassuringsmile,“I

understand

howpainfultheserejectionsfeel賓從,buttheyarenotareflection

ofyourworth.

I

know

youhavethe

strengthtoovercomethischallenge,

andIwillbeheretosupportyoueverystepoftheway."Deeplytouchedbyhiswords分詞短語做原因狀語,

I

begantoreassess

mysituation.

Myfatherhelpedmerealize

that

dwellingontherejections非謂語動詞短語做主語

wouldonly

hindermefrom

reachingmyfullpotential.賓從

Truesuccess

is

not

definedbyprestige,

but

by

howwerespondtolife'schallenges.

Shiftingmymindsetfrom

self-pitytodetermination分詞短語做伴隨狀語,

I

decided

to

embracetheopportunities

attheUniversityof

Massachusetts,

knowing

myjourneywouldbeshapedbymywillingness

togrow.

Witharenewed

senseofpurpose伴隨狀語with+n.,

I

divedintomystudies,

joined

campusorganizations,

anddiscovered

new

passions

thatenrichedmylifeinways

[Ihadneverimagined]定從套定從.Theinitialdisappointmentsoon

gave

wayto

anticipationandexcitement.

Lookingbacknow非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語,I

amforevergrateful

tomyfather

for

his

unwaveringsupportandwisdom,

whichhavebeeninvaluableinshapingtheperson【I

amtoday】定從套定從

.短語和生詞1.remainedbitter-

生詞：依然苦澀

-

近義短語：stayedresentful,continuedtofeelbitter

-

例句：Heremainedbitteraboutthesituationforalongtime.

2.satmedown-

近義短語：talkedtomeprivately,hadaseriousconversationwithme

-

例句：Mymothersatmedowntodiscussmyfutureplans.

3.openedmyheart-

生詞：敞開心扉

-

近義短語：sharedmyfeelings,confidedin

-

例句：Sheopenedherhearttoherbestfriendaboutherstruggles.

4.pouredoutmyfrustrations-

近義短語：ventedmyfrustrations,expressedmyfrustrations

-

例句：Hepouredouthisfrustrationsafterthedifficultweekatwork.

5.feellikeafailure-

生詞：感覺像個失敗者

-

近義短語：thinkI’mafailure,believeI’vefailed

-

例句：Afterlosingthegame,shefeltlikeafailure.

6.listeningattentively-

生詞：專心聆聽

-

近義短語：payingcloseattention,listeningcarefully

-

例句：Hewaslisteningattentivelytothespeaker’severyword.

7.painfulrejections-

近義短語：hurtfulrejections,difficultrejections

-

例句：Thepainfulrejectionsfromuniversitiesmadehimdoubthisabilities.

8.reflectionofyourworth-

生詞：你價值的反映

-

近義短語：measureofyourvalue,indicationofyourworth

-

例句：Thesesetbacksarenotareflectionofyourworthasaperson.

9.overcomethischallenge-

近義短語：getpastthisobstacle,conquerthisdifficulty

-

例句：Heknewhehadthestrengthtoovercomethischallenge.

10.supportyoueverystepoftheway-

生詞：全程支持你

-

近義短語：bewithyouthroughout,helpyouthrougheverything

-

例句：I’llsupportyoueverystepoftheway,nomatterwhatyoudecide.

11.reassessmysituation-

近義短語：rethinkmyposition,reevaluatemysituation

-

例句：Afterspeakingtohisfather,hebegantoreassesshissituation.

12.dwellingontherejections-

生詞：糾結(jié)于拒絕

-

近義短語：focusingontherejections,obsessingovertherejections

-

例句：Dwellingontherejectionswon’thelpyoumoveforward.

13.reachingmyfullpotential-

生詞：發(fā)揮我全部潛能

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近義短語：rea