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讀后續(xù)寫解讀匯報(bào)人:NIO時(shí)間2020/7/1CONTENTS目錄01讀后續(xù)寫是個(gè)啥?02讀后續(xù)寫實(shí)戰(zhàn)解讀03讀后續(xù)寫如何備戰(zhàn)?01Whatiscontinuationwriting?讀后續(xù)寫是個(gè)啥?讀后續(xù)寫的要求:字?jǐn)?shù)150左右;(130≤x≤180)至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;續(xù)寫分兩段,每段開頭為你寫好(哇哦,好貼心哦);續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語.初識(shí)高考讀后續(xù)寫
02Howtowrite?讀后續(xù)寫實(shí)戰(zhàn)Aftertwodays,theyfoundhim.Paragraph2:"Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Arrivingattheshopwherethepolicemanlostthetheiflasttime,thethiefsaid:“Thereisnodoubtthatwestillneedsomebreadonourway”.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Theybroughthimbacktothepolicestationandcalledthesamepoliceman.出現(xiàn)人物:Thepolice,anewpoliceman,thief,shopkeeper,”thoughtMo.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof
sight.Wehadnoideawherewewereandtheygotdark.seeingIwasokay,hewasquiterelieved.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Whatanamazingride.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina
feed
thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe
sheep
outtograze(吃草).Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.Mowasfeelingterrible.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.2018年浙江卷
Itwassummer,andmy
dad
wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerque(阿爾伯克基)inthelateafternoon.
UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.2018年浙江卷
HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe
farmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe
river
nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina
feed
thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe
sheep
outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.
Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbe
late
forsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothe
track
sothatyoudon’t
getlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof
sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)
blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.第三段:吃飯,睡覺,聽蛙叫,聽潺潺水聲,喂雞,放羊.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Paragraph1:Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Itwasn’tfair!”shethought.Reed?Butitwastoolatenow.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Theylookedreallycool.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.續(xù)寫分兩段,每段開頭為你寫好(哇哦,好貼心哦);Hesaid,“Iamreallyawareofthatneverletthecriminaloutofyoursight.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof
sight.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinsuchadarksituation.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof
sight.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(130≤x≤180)Thepolicebegantolookforthethief.解題步驟第一步:讀懂文章弄清大意第一段:老爹要帶我去西部度假.第二段:老爹的朋友保羅叔叔接我們到他的農(nóng)場第三段:吃飯,睡覺,聽蛙叫,聽潺潺水聲,喂雞,放羊.(這不就是農(nóng)家樂么?)第四段:騎馬入森林第二步:劃出關(guān)鍵人物與事物:dad,UnclePaul,Tina,RyanandKyle,sheep,chicken,horse第三步:結(jié)合提示句,續(xù)寫情節(jié)。(兩個(gè)句子定走向)Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.通讀全文找線索·劃出關(guān)鍵人物與事物·2提示句人物+事物HappyEnding大結(jié)局·讀后續(xù)寫小總結(jié)結(jié)合起來定情節(jié)范文解析
Suddenly,alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitranwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforetheriver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthemoment,mydadalsocameup.
seeingIwasokay,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.
Wehadnoideawherewewereandtheygotdark.Wedidn'tknowwherethefarmhousewas.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinsuchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromthedistance.“ItmustbeUnclePaul,”Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingride.03情節(jié)不會(huì)怎么辦?輕情節(jié)注重人物內(nèi)心,想法描寫。第二篇讀后續(xù)寫:警察抓小偷的故事
Onceuponatime,inasmalltown,amanstolesomemoneyfromahouse.Thepolicebegantolookforthethief.Aftertwodays,theyfoundhim.Theybroughthimtothepolicestationandfoundsomeofthemoneyinhiscoat.Therewasanewpolicemanatthepolicestation,andtheywantedtogivehimsomework. ````````
Allthepolicemeninthetownbegantolookforthethiefagain,andtheysooncaughthim.Theybroughthimbacktothepolicestationandcalledthesamepoliceman.出現(xiàn)人物:Thepolice,anewpoliceman,thief,shopkeeper,出現(xiàn)事物:thepolicestation;train;bread;shop;應(yīng)對策略:情節(jié)不會(huì),感情來湊!?。。。。。?!Paragraph1: Thepoliceofficersatthepolicestationtoldthenewpolicemantotakethethieftothecityagian.Paragraph2: Thepolicemanlostthethiefagian.
Thepoliceofficersatthepolicestationtoldthenewpolicemantotakethethieftothecityagian.Theyheadedforthestationagain.Arrivingattheshopwherethepolicemanlostthetheiflasttime,thethiefsaid:“Thereisnodoubtthatwestillneedsomebreadonourway”.“Noway!Don'ttrytoescapeagain.”“Well,youcanleavemehereandgointotheshopthistime.”“Goodidea!”Thepolicemansaidhappily,thenhewentintotheshop.However,whenhecameback,thethiefdisappeared.
Thepolicemanlostthethiefagian.Atfirst,hewantedtogobacktothepolicestation.However,hecouldn'tbearthethoughtofbeingcriticizedbytheveryangerydirectorofthepolicstation.Sohedeterminedtofindthethiefbyhimself.
Itwasreallyhardforhimtofindthethief,buthedidit.Finallyhesucceededintakingthethieftothecity.Hesaid,“Iamreallyawareofthatneverletthecriminaloutofyoursight.”回頭看看第一篇范文______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thepolicemanlostthethiefagian.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.ReedwantedhertolookathimandnodifshesawthatTerrywascheatingintheexamReed?Butitwastoolatenow.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.(130≤x≤180)Theylookedreallycool.第二步:劃出關(guān)鍵人物與事物:dad,UnclePaul,Tina,RyanandKyle,sheep,chicken,horseHiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Thepolicemanlostthethiefagian.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.seeingIwasokay,hewasquiterelieved.“Terrywasgettinggoodgradesbycheatingallthattime.Atfirst,hewantedtogobacktothepolicestation.Paragraph2:Suddenly,alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina
feed
thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe
sheep
outtograze(吃草).FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.范文解析
Suddenly,alittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitranwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforetheriver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthemoment,mydadalsocameup.
seeingIwasokay,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.
Wehadnoideawherewewereandtheygotdark.Wedidn'tknowwherethefarmhousewas.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinsuchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromthedistance.“ItmustbeUnclePaul,”Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingride.通讀文章定情節(jié)畫個(gè)圈圈定“人”“物”“兩個(gè)句子”定“走向”情節(jié)不會(huì)“感情湊”讀后續(xù)寫思路總結(jié)第三篇讀后續(xù)寫第四段 ····Mowenttothelibrarytostudy,butshecouldn’tconcentrate.Shedidn’tknowwhattodoaboutTerr
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