【讀后續(xù)寫】2022年1月浙江高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文講評(píng) 名師課件-宋浩穎、李曉燕

2022年1月

浙江高考英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文講評(píng)浙江省慈溪中學(xué)宋浩穎李曉燕試題回顧（考生回憶版）

你在中國(guó)-愛(ài)爾蘭文化節(jié)上認(rèn)識(shí)了一個(gè)朋友，名叫Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件：回憶活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷分享個(gè)人收獲希望保持聯(lián)系注意： 1.詞數(shù)80詞左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題

你在中國(guó)-愛(ài)爾蘭文化節(jié)上認(rèn)識(shí)了一個(gè)朋友，名叫Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件：回憶活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷分享個(gè)人收獲希望保持聯(lián)系文體：郵件（分享回憶）交際對(duì)象：朋友主題語(yǔ)境：人與社會(huì)（跨文化交流）框架結(jié)構(gòu)：首段(寫作背景)

中段(要點(diǎn)1+要點(diǎn)2) 尾段(要點(diǎn)3)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：文化節(jié)活動(dòng)+個(gè)人收獲語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格：自然流暢、不應(yīng)過(guò)于正式注意與宣傳稿、報(bào)道等較正式文體風(fēng)格進(jìn)行區(qū)分Greetings&backgroundinformation首段Happytimehaswings!ImisssomuchallthefunwehadintheChina-IrelandCultureFestivallastmonth.I’vemissedyousomuchsinceyouwentbacktoIreland.NeverwillIforgetthewonderfuldayswespentintheChina-Irelandculturefestival.Hopeyouhadasafejourneyhome.I’mstillsavoringthegreatfunwehadintheChina-IrelandCulturalExchangeFestival.tip：以朋友、文化節(jié)為契機(jī)自然引入，語(yǔ)言應(yīng)自然流暢中國(guó)-愛(ài)爾蘭文化節(jié)相關(guān)活動(dòng)ChinesecalligraphydisplaystheexhibitionoftraditionalChineseandIrishartworksmusicperformances/IrelandtraditionalmusicconcertChineseliondance/IrishdanceChineseandIrishliteraturethe

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parade/eveninggala要點(diǎn)1tip：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容可聯(lián)系中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化與愛(ài)爾蘭文化，具體寫作時(shí)可加入細(xì)節(jié)，如MoYan,OscarWilde回憶活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷TogetherweappreciatedthefinestartsfromBeijingOperatotheIrishdance.WeattendedtheliteratureforumwheremanytalentedwriterslikeMoYanandOscarWildewerediscussed.HowImissthesplendidmusicperformancesandthegrandparadewejoinedinournationalcostumes!IstillrememberhowChineseliondanceandIrishmusical

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3:寫作對(duì)象為朋友，語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格應(yīng)與宣傳稿與報(bào)道進(jìn)行區(qū)分Thefestivalincludedvariousactivitiesrangingfromanancientpoetryrecitationcontesttoaweek-longexhibition,wherehundredsofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingandcalligraphyworkswereondisplay.報(bào)道語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格分享個(gè)人收獲要點(diǎn)2ThoseactivitiesgavemearareglimpseofIrelandandfurtheredmyunderstandingofChineseculture,whichwillbeengravedinmymemory.However,itisthepreciousfriendshipwithyouthatItreasuremost.Duringthefestival,Inotonlygainedanoverallviewofculturedifferences,butalsoobtainedwonderfulmemoriesandfriendshipsworthcherishingforever.Thefestivaltrulybroughtuscloserinallaspects.tip：收獲可從文化交流與友誼兩方面展開(kāi)希望保持聯(lián)系尾段Keepintouchandhopetoseeyouagain.Pleasedokeepintouch.Bestwishes!DearChris, Happytimehaswings!ImisssomuchallthefunwehadintheChina-IrelandCultureFestivallastmonth. TogetherweappreciatedthefinestartsfromBeijingOperatotheIrishdance.WeattendedtheliteratureforumwheremanytalentedwriterslikeMoYanandOscarWildewerediscussed.ThoseactivitiesgavemearareglimpseofIrelandandfurtheredmyunderstandingofChineseculture,whichwillbeengravedinmymemory.However,itisthepreciousfriendshipwithyouthatItreasuremost. Pleasedokeepintouch.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuapossibleversionIDearChris, I’vemissedyousomuchsinceyouwentbacktoIreland.WhatwonderfuldayswehadintheChina-IrelandCultureFestival! ItwassomuchfunwhenwetogetherenjoyedthegrandparadewearingournationalcostumesandappreciatedthesplendidChineseliondance.AndIcanstillremembersomemovesyoutaughtmeaboutIrishdance!IwasliterallyfascinatedbythediversityofIrishcultu