2025屆中考英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作培優(yōu)冊（外研版廣西專用）06-人與自我-主題6 促進中學(xué)生“五育并舉”的發(fā)展

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高頻主題三階寫作指導(dǎo)人與自我主題6

促進中學(xué)生“五育并舉”的發(fā)展（德育：樂于助人；智育：創(chuàng)新方式解決；體育：體育運動；美育：美育知識，藝術(shù)課程；勞育：勞動實踐的經(jīng)歷與感受）（2020北部灣經(jīng)濟區(qū)）【教材模塊/單元鏈接】外研版人教版譯林牛津版七（下）M2

討論能力七（下）M12

娛樂：中西方音樂八（上）U8

烹飪八（下）U2

志愿服務(wù)與慈善八（下）U3

家務(wù)和許可七（上）U8

設(shè)計衣服七（下）U7

愛心俱樂部外研版人教版譯林牛津版八（上）M5

娛樂：戲劇&電影八（下）M6

愛好九（上）M3

英雄：有名的人八（下）U8

文學(xué)和音樂九（全）U9

音樂和電影八（上）U4

自己做九（上）U4

對你影響最大的人九（上）U5

藝術(shù)形式續(xù)表一階

素材積累與訓(xùn)練素材積累短語與搭配1.care

for照顧2.clean

up打掃干凈3.sweep

the

floor掃地4.take

out

the

rubbish倒垃圾5.make

the

bed鋪床6.do

the

dishes清洗餐具7.climb

mountains爬山8.enjoy

pop

music喜歡流行音樂9.basic

life

skills基本的生活技能10.keep

healthy/fit保持健康11.develop

an

interest

in在……方面培養(yǎng)興趣12.be

able

to

do

sth.能夠做某事13.make

a

big

difference意義重大；有很大影響14.look

after

oneself照顧某人自己15.develop

one’s

independence培養(yǎng)某人的獨立性16.open

up

one’s

eyes

and

mind開闊某人的眼界和思維開頭句1.To

be

a

better

person,

I

think

I

should

do

the

following

things.2.Life

skills

are

necessary

for

us

teenagers.

To

live

more

healthily

and

happily,

we

are

supposed

to

learn

more

life

skills.3.There

are

all

kinds

of

music

in

the

world.

Music

makes

people

happy.

Good

music

brings

people

comfort

and

peace

of

mind.

Everyone

loves

music,

but

different

people

have

different

tastes.中間句德育1.I

think

Odysseus

is

a

true

hero.

He

is

very

clever

and

has

a

strong

will.

I

also

learn

from

him

that

great

men

never

give

up,

no

matter

what

difficulties

they

face.［外研九（上）M3］2.I

am

outgoing

and

helpful.

As

long

as

someone

is

in

trouble，

I

will

try

my

best

to

help

them.［人教七（下）U1］智育1.Daniel

always

thinks

carefully

when

he

works.

He

plans

everything

well.［譯林牛津七（下）M7］2.We

should

deal

with

the

difficulties

we

meet

wisely.

They

can

help

us

become

better

persons.體育1.After

school,

I

sometimes

play

basketball

for

half

an

hour.［人教七（下）U2］2.Basketball

offers

me

enjoyment,

friendship,

knowledge

and

relaxation.3.Exercising

is

a

good

way

to

keep

us

healthy

and

happy.美育1.I

like

smooth

music

that

helps

me

relax

after

a

long

week

at

work.［人教九（全）U9］2.It’s

our

duty

to

value

and

spread

Chinese

culture.勞育1.I

’d

like

to

be

the

cleaning

monitor.

I

often

help

my

mother

do

cleaning

at

home

and

I

like

a

clean

and

tidy

house.

I’m

sure

everybody

would

like

a

clean

classroom,

just

like

home.

Choose

me

and

we

can

make

our

classroom

beautiful.［外研七（下）M2］2.Students

are

able

to

learn

necessary

life

skills

by

taking

cleaning

or

cooking

lessons

in

school.［人教七（上）U9］3.Doing

chores

helps

to

develop

children’s

independence

and

teaches

them

how

to

look

after

themselves.［人教八（下）U3］4.I

think

it

is

important

for

children

to

learn

how

to

do

chores

and

help

their

parents

with

housework.［人教八（下）U3］結(jié)尾句1.By

learning

to

cook,

we

can

learn

some

cooking

skills.

At

the

same

time,

we

can

share

housework

and

become

more

independent.2.I’m

sure

the

earlier

we

learn

to

be

independent,

the

better

our

future

will

be.3.We

should

not

be

afraid

of

challenge.

Instead,

we

should

try

our

best

to

solve

the

problems

in

our

study

and

life.句型訓(xùn)練1.Running

can

reduce

our

pressure.（用a

good

way

to

do升格句子）_____________________________________________Running

is

a

good

way

to

reduce

our

pressure.2.We

can

show

our

care

to

our

parents.

We

can

cook

a

meal

for

them.（用“by+v.-ing表示通過某種方式”改寫句子）________________________________________________________________We

can

show

our

care

to

our

parents

by

cooking

a

meal

for

them.3.When

I

am

tired,

I

prefer

to

listen

to

the

music.

It

can

make

me

relaxed.（用that

引導(dǎo)的定語從句升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________When

I

am

tired,

I

prefer

to

listen

to

the

music

that

can

make

me

relaxed.4.作為新時代的青少年，向世界介紹中國文化是我們義不容辭的責任。（漢譯英）_____________________________________________________________________________________As

teenagers

in

new

times,

it’s

our

duty

to

introduce

Chinese

culture

to

the

world.5.我們學(xué)校將開設(shè)一些新的課程來幫助學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一些基本的生活技能。（漢譯英）___________________________________________________________________________________Our

school

will

set

up

some

new

courses

to

help

students

learn

some

basic

life

skills.二階

主題典例探究

（2024長沙改編）音樂，一種聽覺藝術(shù)，是直通心靈的藝術(shù)。你校英文報刊正在開展以“What

does

music

bring

to

me?”為題的征文活動,請你用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡?。?nèi)容包括：1.音樂給你帶來的益處（給我?guī)硐Ｍ土α俊㈤_闊我的眼界……）；2.你的希望。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：strength（n.力量），broaden

one’s

horizons

（開闊某人的眼界）What

does

music

bring

to

me?

Music

is

like

a

key,

which

opens

a

door

to

the

world

for

me.______________寫作剖析一、仔細審題1.文體：本文要求介紹音樂帶給自己的益處，是一篇________；2.時態(tài)：介紹音樂帶給自己的益處為一般說明，以____________為主，表達自己的希望時，用____________；3.人稱：介紹音樂的時候用第____人稱，介紹自己的經(jīng)歷、音樂給自己帶來的好處及號召大家怎么做時用第____人稱。說明文一般現(xiàn)在時一般將來時三一二、構(gòu)思框架，列出要點構(gòu)思框架列出要點1.___________________________給我?guī)硐Ｍ土α?._______________彈吉他3.__________處理4.________________在我的日常生活中5.__________________提醒某人某事6.__________總之7._______________________________________________使我的生活更加豐富多彩，更有意義bring

me

hope

and

strengthplay

the

guitardeal

within

my

daily

liferemind

sb.

of

sth.all

in

allmake

my

life

more

colorful

and

more

meaningful三、遣詞造句，連句成文What

does

music

bring

to

me?

Music

is

like

a

key,

which

opens

a

door

to

the

world

for

me.

Music

brings

me

hope

and

strength

during

hard

times.

When

I

was

a

kid,

I

used

to

be

shy.

After

I

took

up

playing

the

guitar

to

deal

with

my

shyness,

I

made

lots

of

friends.

Besides,

music

can

broaden

my

horizons.

I

can

know

something

that

can’t

be

learned

in

my

daily

life

or

from

the

textbooks.

Also,

music

reminds

me

of

some

happy

memories.

It

makes

me

remember

the

love

and

care

my

teachers

and

friends

have

given

me.

All

in

all,

music

makes

my

life

more

colorful

and

more

meaningful.

I

hope

that

all

of

us

will

value

music

and

make

it

a

part

of

our

life.三階

寫作實戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練

（2024玉林一模）為落實國家教育部提出的對中小學(xué)加強勞動教育（labor

education）的實施意見，你們學(xué)校安排了豐富多彩的勞動教育活動。假如你是王濤，請給你的筆友Tony寫一封郵件，談?wù)勀銋⒓訉W(xué)校組織的勞動教育活動的情況。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡單介紹你們學(xué)校開展的勞動教育活動（烹飪、種植……）；2.具體敘述一次你參加勞動教育活動的經(jīng)歷；3.談?wù)勀銋⒓觿趧咏逃顒拥捏w會和收獲。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：different（adj.不同的）,

encourage（v.鼓勵）,

independent（adj.獨立的）Dear

Tony,

How’s

it

going？____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let

me

tell

you

something

about

our

labor

education.

We

have

many

different

labor

education

activities

in

our

school,

such

as

cooking,

cleaning

rooms

and

growing

vegetables.

I’m

interested

in

cooking

best,

so

I

joined

the

cooking

club

last

month.

Miss

Li,

our

cooking

teacher,

is

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________