專題09 書面表達15篇-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（湖北專用）

2023中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（湖北專用）第一期專題09書面表達15篇一、話題作文1．（2022·湖北黃石·統(tǒng)考一模）英語課上，大家針對中學生節(jié)食減肥這一話題進行了討論，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫篇短文，談談自己的看法。提示：1.健康比漂亮更重要；2.學生應該以學習為主，不要過于注重外貌和別人的看法；3.可通過多鍛煉和改變不良飲食習慣保持健康；4.保持健康的心態(tài)。注意：1.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2.80詞左右。（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯：dieting節(jié)食；appearance外貌；stateofmind心態(tài)Quiteafewstudentschoosetoloseweightbydieting.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Quiteafewstudentschoosetoloseweightbydieting.Inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeauty.Forastudent,studyingisalwaysthefirstthingtoconsider.Don’tpaymuchattentiontoyourappearanceanddon’tletothers’opinionsinfluenceyournormallife.However,ifyoureallywanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingyourunhealthyeatinghabits.Youshouldalsokeepahealthystateofmind.Itcannotonlyhelpwithyourstudies,butalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.Sobehappyeveryday,don’tworrytoomuchaboutweight.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇議論文，要求對中學生節(jié)食這一話題談談自己的看法；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章寫作提示已經(jīng)給出，寫作時應包含所給提示，另外可以適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：陳述自己關(guān)于健康，學習，鍛煉及心態(tài)的看法；第二步：文章最后對自己的觀點進行總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①inmyopinion依我看②payattentionto關(guān)注，注意③appearance外表④overcomedifficulties克服困難[高分句型]①However,ifyoureallywanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingyourunhealthyeatinghabits.（用if引導條件狀語從句）②Itcannotonlyhelpwithyourstudies,butalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.（并列連詞notonly...butalso的使用，使文章具有連貫性）二、材料作文2．（2022·湖北襄陽·統(tǒng)考一模）2021年九月，中國正式開始實施（carryout）了“雙減政策”（thedoublereductionpolicy）來減少學生的學習負擔（burden），請根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇文章。1.要點提示：（1）簡述你對“雙減政策”的看法；（2）結(jié)合實際詳細講述下雙減后我們的學習和生活各發(fā)生了哪些變化；（3）簡要談談在減負的大環(huán)境下，我們?nèi)绾纬蔀橐粋€優(yōu)秀的學習者？2.注意事項：（1）90詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）（2）行文應連貫流暢。（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名。TheChinesegovernmenthascarriedouttheso-calleddoublereductionpolicysinceSeptember,2021._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChinesegovernmenthascarriedouttheso-calleddoublereductionpolicysinceSeptember,2021.Ithopestoreduceschoolworkburdenonprimaryandjuniorhighschoolstudents.Thepolicycallsforreducinghomeworkandafter-schoolclasses.Inmyopinion,thepolicyisgoodforus.Ourhomeworkisclearlylessthanbefore,andwehaveenoughtimetoprocessnewknowledgenow.Wehavemorechancestodoexperimentsandlearnfromreallife.Thisisamuchbetterwaytolearnthingsthanjusthittingthebooks.Wecanalsospendmoretimetakingpartinclubsandactivities.Althoughwefeellessstressedthanbefore,self-disciplinebecomesthekey.Weshouldbalancetheschoolworkandafter-schoolactivities.Weshouldalsofinishourhomeworkontime.Moreover,listeningtotheteachercarefullyinclassbecomesmoreimportant.Otherwise,wewillfallbehindotherstudents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡述對該政策的看法；第二步，詳述雙減后我們學習和生活發(fā)生的變化；第三步，介紹在這樣的大環(huán)境下，如何成為一個優(yōu)秀的學習者。[亮點詞匯]①carryout實施②inmyopinion在我看來③begoodfor對……有好處④ontime按時[高分句型]①Althoughwefeellessstressedthanbefore,self-disciplinebecomesthekey.（although引導的讓步狀語從句）②Moreover,listeningtotheteachercarefullyinclassbecomesmoreimportant.（動名詞作主語）3．（2022·湖北十堰·統(tǒng)考一模）4月23日在京召開了為期三天的首屆全民閱讀大會。習主席致信祝賀并強調(diào)，希望全社會都參與到閱讀中來，形成愛讀書、讀好書、善讀書的濃厚氛圍。當前，全市各校正開展好書伴我成長活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格中所給的信息，以“GrowingupwithGoodBooks”為題，英語寫一篇倡議書，向?qū)W校同學發(fā)出倡議。讀書的益處獲取更多的知識，提高我們的寫作，……存在的現(xiàn)象聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)占用了大部分業(yè)余時間。發(fā)出倡議多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書；向世界傳播中國傳統(tǒng)文化；……要求：1.必須包含所給的全部要點及內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名。3.字數(shù)80—100。GrowingupwithGoodBooksDearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantforus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：GrowingupwithGoodBooksDearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantforus.Wecangetmoreknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusclevererandhappier.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifweoftenreadgoodbooks.Themoreweread,themorewewilllearn,andthebrighterourfuturewillbecome.However,somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime.SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicbookssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapartofourlife!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇倡議書，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已給出，按照提示要點逐條闡述，可以適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接文章開頭，主要采用第一人稱來書寫，按照提示闡述讀書的益處；第二步，根據(jù)提示分析讀書在學生中普遍存在的現(xiàn)象，可以采用多種句型進行分析；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，發(fā)出倡議，注意語言的的準確性和連貫性。[亮點詞匯]①notonly…butalso…不但……而且……②themore…themore…andthebrighter…越多……越多……越明朗……③wouldliketodo想要，愿意做某事[高分句型]①Readingisveryimportantforus.(動名詞做主語)②Ourstudycanbeimprovedifweoftenreadgoodbooks.(if引導條件狀語從句)③Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime.(it固定句型)④SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicbookssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.(sothat引導目的狀語從句)4．（2022秋·湖北宜昌·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）發(fā)明改變了世界，改變了我們的生活。比如，電視和自行車給我們的生活帶來了許多變化和便利。請你以“Inventions”為話題，根據(jù)提示寫一份報告，先介紹電視和自行車的用途，說說你想發(fā)明的東西，并說明其用途或發(fā)明的理由。電視機：信息豐富，開闊視野，休閑娛樂自行車：價格便宜，方便出行，有利環(huán)保你的發(fā)明：其用途或發(fā)明的理由。注意：1.報告應包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮；2.發(fā)明的東西可大可小，有其特殊用途即可；3.詞數(shù)不少于80。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。InventionsGoodmorning,everyone!TodayI’mgoingtotalkaboutinventions.Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier.Therearefamousinventionslike_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.That’sall.Thankyouverymuch!【答案】例文：InventionsGoodmorning,everyone!TodayI’mgoingtotalkaboutinventions.Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier.TherearefamousinventionslikeTVandthebicycle.TVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.Wewatchentertainmentprogramstorelaxourselves.Besides,somelearningprogramshelpuswithourstudy.Thebicycleisveryuseful,too.Wegotoschoolorworkbybike.Itmakesnopollution,whichisgoodforourenvironment.What’smore,bicycleridingisquitegoodforourhealth.It’scheap,too.Thoughtherehavebeenmanygreatinventions,Iwishtoinventakindofpentohelpuswritemorequicklyandneatly.Whenwehaveproblemsindoinghomework,itwilltellushowtosolvethem.That’sall.Thankyouverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：要求以“Inventions”為話題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹電視和自行車的用途；第二步，介紹自己想發(fā)明的東西，用途和發(fā)明的理由；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①providesbwithsth提供某人某物②sothat以便，為了③begoodfor對……有好處④haveproblemsindoing做某事有問題[高分句型]①TVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.（sothat引導的目的狀語從句）②Thoughtherehavebeenmanygreatinventions,Iwishtoinventakindofpentohelpuswritemorequicklyandneatly.（Though引導的讓步狀語從句）5．（2022秋·湖北·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）父母給予我們生命，哺育我們成長，用無私的愛溫暖關(guān)懷著我們，請以Dad,Iloveyou或Mom,Iloveyou為標題用英語寫一篇短文，表達對父親或母親的感恩之情。要點提示：1）在你心中父親或母親是怎樣的人；2）父親或母親常常為你和家庭做些什么；3）你將怎樣回報父親或母親的付出。寫作要求：1）詞數(shù)90左右；2）根據(jù)要點提示適當發(fā)揮；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：dohousework,selfless（無私的）,inmyheart（在我心中）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Mom,IloveyouEveryonehasapersonhewantstosaythankyoutoinhisdeepheart.Iowemygreatgratitudetomymother.Mymotherisaprimaryschoolteacherwhograduatedfromanormaluniversity.Sheisadevotedmotheraswellasakindandpatientteacher.Iamattendedconsideratelybyhereveryday,especiallythisyearwhenIaminSenior3.Sheoftencooksdeliciousdishesformeandhelpsmecleanupmyroom.What’smore,sheoftenaccompaniesmedeepintothenighteverytimeIamdoingmyhomework.Inaddition,wheneverIgetupsetorloseheart,shewillcomfortmeandencourageme.Iappreciatehermotto“Heavenwillalwaysleaveadooropen.Aslongasyouworkhard,youwilldefinitelysucceed.”NowIsparenoefforttostudyandfocusallmyattentiononmylessonsinordertobeadmittedtoafamousuniversityinthefuture,soIcanrewardmymother.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：本文以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，寫作時根據(jù)題干中的提示信息向媽媽表達感恩之情，可適當增加細節(jié)，突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示要向媽媽表達感恩之情；第二步，介紹在你心中自己的媽媽是怎樣的人；第三步，詳細介紹媽媽常常為你做什么；第四步，介紹你將怎樣回報媽媽的付出。[亮點詞匯]①inaddition而且②sparenoefforttodosth.不遺余力做某事[高分句型]①Mymotherisaprimaryschoolteacherwhograduatedfromanormaluniversity.(who引導的定語從句)②Aslongasyouworkhard,youwilldefinitelysucceed.(aslongas引導的條件狀語從句)6．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李欣，你們學校即將開展課后社團活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為雙語?？摹皩W生心里話”專欄寫一篇英語短文，說明你的報名意向。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容要點；1.喜歡手工，想加人DIY社團；2.擅長剪紙，利于放松；3.熱愛傳統(tǒng)文化，傳播中國剪紙藝術(shù)；4.希望結(jié)交興趣相同的朋友；5.一至兩點個人信息或想法。注意：1.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù)：60-80；3內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞匯。參考詞匯：handworkn.手工

paper-cuttingartn.剪紙藝術(shù)

spreadv.傳播Iamsohappytolearnthenewsthatwewillhaveclubactivitiesafterclass._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Iamsohappytolearnthenewsthatwewillhaveclubactivitiesafterclass.IdoexpecttojointheDIYclubbecauseIlikedoinghandwork.IamgoodatpapercuttingandIthinkithelpsmetorelaxafterschool.Besidesthat,IalsolovetraditionalChineseculture.Inthefuture,IhopetospreadtheChinesepaper-cuttingart.What’smore,maybeIcanlearntodosomeotherhandwork.IamreallylookingforwardtomeetingmorefriendswhosharethesameinterestsasmeinDIYClub.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，切記不要遺漏寫作要點；特別注意，寫作時要添加一些個人信息或看法。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山寫出你想要加入DIY社團；第二步，根據(jù)所給要點，說明你想加入DIY社團的原因。[亮點詞匯]①begoodat擅長②helpsbtodosth幫助某人做某事③besides除此之外④what’smore而且⑤lookforwardtodoing期待做某事[高分句型]①IdoexpecttojointheDIYclubbecauseIlikedoinghandwork.（because引導的原因狀語從句）②IamreallylookingforwardtomeetingmorefriendswhosharethesameinterestsasmeinDIYClub.（who引導的限制性定語從句）7．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級校聯(lián)考一模）研學旅行是通過集體旅行來開展學習和體驗相結(jié)合的校外教育活動，深受學生的喜愛。請你給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，介紹學校上周組織到產(chǎn)茶名地“杭州”開展的研學活動。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.手工采茶，學習泡茶知識，體驗當?shù)厣睿?.參觀附近歷史古跡，了解城市的歷史文化；3.觀看有教育意義的影片，感受城市的變化與發(fā)展；4.補充一兩點個人看法或感受。注意：1.文中不得透露真實的人名校名；2.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.內(nèi)容連貫得體，不要逐條翻譯。參考詞匯：maketea泡茶；historicalplace歷史古跡；educational有教育意義的Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.OurschoolalsoorganizedastudytriptoHangzhoulastweek.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.OurschoolalsoorganizedastudytriptoHangzhoulastweek.Firstly,wewenttopickteainpersonandmadeteabyhandtoexperiencelife.Secondly,afterwevisitedmuseumsaswellashistoricalplaces,weunderstoodChinesehistoryandculturemoredeeply.Finally,wesawsomeeducationalmoviesandfeltthegreatchangesofourcity.Inmyopinion,thestudytripisveryhelpfulforusandwewillbeabletohavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactivities.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏內(nèi)容要點中的信息，介紹學校組織的到產(chǎn)茶名地“杭州”開展的研學活動。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出這次活動；第二步，介紹活動中做了什么，體驗并學習到了什么；第三步，介紹自己的看法及感受。[亮點詞匯]①inperson親自②byhand用手③inone’sopinion在某人看來④takepartin參加[高分句型]①Secondly,afterwevisitedmuseumsaswellashistoricalplaces,weunderstoodChinesehistoryandculturemoredeeply.（after引導的時間狀語從句）②Inmyopinion,thestudytripisveryhelpfulforusandwewillbeabletohavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactivities.（and連接并列句）8．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）假設你是王明，你最好的朋友李書豪要轉(zhuǎn)入你班。請你將他介紹給同學們認識。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.過去安靜，現(xiàn)在喜歡和人交流；2.過去常擔心考試，害怕讓父母失望，現(xiàn)在考試總得高分；3.課下常和同學練習說英語，擅長用英語講故事；4.對很多高科技產(chǎn)品感興趣：5.愛喝茶，因為有利健康；6.補充一點李書豪的其他愛好。注：1.文中不得透露個人真實姓名和學校；2.詞數(shù)60-80。參考詞匯：practicev.練習；letsbdown讓某人失望；high-technology高科技_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文NowletmeintroducemybestfriendsLiShuhaotoyou.Heusedtobequietbutnowhelikestocommunicatewithothers.Inthepast,heworriedaboutexamsbecausehewasafraidoflettinghisparentsdown.However,healwaysgetshighmarksintheexamsnow.Afterclass,heoftenpracticesspeakingEnglishwithhisclassmates,sohedoeswellintellingstoriesinEnglish.LiShuhaohasmanyhobbies.Heisinterestedinmanyhigh-technologyproducts.Healsolikesdrinkingteabecauseitisgoodforhealth.Besides,helovesChinesecultureandChinesepeople.Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithhim.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”，兼顧“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生根據(jù)提示介紹好朋友李書豪，適當進行發(fā)揮并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明寫作目的；第二步，具體介紹李書豪過去和現(xiàn)在的不同以及他的愛好等；第三步，希望別人也能和他交朋友。[亮點詞匯]①usedtobe過去曾經(jīng)是②communicatewithsb和某人交流③beinterestedin對……感興趣[高分句型]①Inthepast,heworriedaboutexamsbecausehewasafraidoflettinghisparentsdown.（because引導原因狀語從句）②Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithhim.（賓語從句）9．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級武漢武珞路實驗初級中學校考一模）未來充滿無限可能，科技正在改變一切。假如你是李華，你認為未來還會出現(xiàn)什么更智能的高科技產(chǎn)品呢？你夢想中的最新發(fā)明是什么呢？請結(jié)合以下提示以“MyDreamInvention”為題寫一篇英語文章介紹你夢寐以求的發(fā)明——Flyingbicycle。1.飛行自行車由金和橡膠制成，和普通自行車的材料類似；2.可以用于上下班，也可幫助鍛煉身體；3.飛行自行車環(huán)保節(jié)能，安全實惠，但是不足的是空中飛行時間短，速度慢；4.各種創(chuàng)新發(fā)明改變了我們的生活，我們也要為建設更美好的未來努力學習；5.補充一兩點你的看法。注意：文中不得透露個人真實姓名和學校；詞數(shù)60~80；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：mentaln.金advantagen.優(yōu)點saveenergy節(jié)能MyDreamInventionInthefuture,therewillbemanygreatinventionsthatcanchangeourlife.Theflyingbicyclewillbemydreaminvention._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.【答案】例文

MyDreamInvention

Inthefuture,therewillbemanygreatinventionsthatcanchangeourlife.Theflyingbicyclewillbemydreaminvention.

Flyingbicyclesaremadeofgoldandrubber,andaresimilartoordinarybicycles.Itcanbeusedforcommutingandcanalsohelpexercise.Flyingbicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendly,energy-saving,safeandaffordable,butwhatisinsufficientisthattheflighttimeintheairisshortandthespeedisslow.Allkindsofinnovationsandinventionshavechangedourlives,andweshouldalsoworkhardtobuildabetterfuture.I’msuretheflyingbicyclewillgointoeveryhomeinthenearfuture.

Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給中文提示，介紹你夢寐以求的發(fā)明——飛行自行車。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹飛行自行車的材料以及用途；第二步，介紹飛行自行車的優(yōu)點和缺點以及這些發(fā)明對我們生活的改變；第三步，最后表達自己的看法。[亮點詞匯]①bemadeof由……制成②allkindsof各種各樣的③workhard努力工作[高分句型]①Butwhatisinsufficientisthattheflighttimeintheairisshortandthespeedisslow.（that引導的表語從句）②Weshouldalsoworkhardtobuildabetterfuture.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）三、電子郵件10．（2022秋·湖北恩施·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）自從鄉(xiāng)村振興以來，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。某英文報刊近期正在舉辦英語征文競賽，其主題是贊美家鄉(xiāng)。假設你是李明，請你根據(jù)下面的要點提示，寫一篇以MyBeautifulHometown為題的英語短文投稿。提示要點：1.從道路、房屋、教育、醫(yī)療和環(huán)境中，任選三個主題：2.從你選擇的三個主題中，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在；3.談你的感想。參考詞匯：roads；buildings；education；medicalcare；environment.寫作要求：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名及其他相關(guān)的個人信息；2.必須包含所有提示要點，可適當發(fā)揮；3.80詞左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyBeautifulHometownDeareditor,Itismygreathonortotellyousomethingaboutmybeautifulhometown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】[例文]MyBeautifulHometownDeareditor,Itismygreathonortotellyousomethingaboutmybeautifulhometown.Intheolddays,peopleusedtoliveinsmallandbrokenhouses.Butnowmostpeopleliveinapartmentsintallbuildings.Mygrandparentstoldmethattheyhadtotakedesksandchairsfromtheirhomestoschoolandtheclassroomwindowswerebrokenwithnoglass,butnowthemostbeautifulplacesareschools,andtheclassroomsarewideandbright.Theredidn’tusetobeanyhospitalsinthecountryside,andpeoplehadtogoalongwaytoseeadoctor.Nowdoctorscometoeveryfamilytogivephysicalexaminations.Thereisnodoubtthatourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Iamproudofmymotherland.Yours,LiMing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：描述過去的情況用一般過去時，描述現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：從所給的五個主題中選出三個描述即可，可以適當增加情節(jié)使行文連貫，且注意時態(tài)的運用。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，開頭已給出；第二步，從“道路、房屋、教育、醫(yī)療和環(huán)境”中挑選三個主題分別闡述過去與現(xiàn)在的區(qū)別；第三步，發(fā)表感想，家鄉(xiāng)會越來越漂亮，對祖國感到自豪。[亮點詞匯]①usedto過去常常做某事②moreandmorebeautiful越來越漂亮③beproudof對……感到自豪[高分句型]①Mygrandparentstoldmethattheyhadtotakedesksandchairsfromtheirhomestoschool…（that引導賓語從句）②Nowdoctorscometoeveryfamilytogivephysicalexaminations.（不定式作目的狀語）③Thereisnodoubtthatourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（that引導同位語從句）11．（2022秋·湖北荊門·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是黃婷，你的英國筆友Jenny給你發(fā)來一封郵件。在郵件中Jenny提及自己在學習中遇到了一些困難，導致她壓力很大，經(jīng)常和父母發(fā)生爭吵，為此她感到很苦惱。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，給Jenny回復一封郵件，幫助她走出困境。要點：1.和父母進行一次交談；2.做一些放松身心的活動；3.……要求：1.郵件內(nèi)容須包含所給要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2.提出至少一條自己的建議；3.條理清晰，語句通順，行文連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。4.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。DearJenny,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mreallysorrytohearaboutyourproblems.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,HuangTing【答案】例文：DearJenny,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mreallysorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Yousaidyouhadtroublewithyourschoolwork.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutthereasonforitandthenfindthewaytosolveit.Ifyouareslowwhenyoustudy,youcanpracticefinishingthequestionsasmanyasyoucaninanhour.Ifyouhavequestionsyoucan’tunderstand,youmustaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Readingmoreandtakingnotesareallgoodwaystogetgoodgrades.Yousaidyouwerestressed.Relaxyourselfbylisteningtomusicordoingsports.Youcanalsodoanythingyouliketorelax.Sitdownandhaveatalkwithyourparents.Youtellthemyouaretryingyourbesttobebetterandtheyneedn’tworryaboutyou.Ibelievetheycanunderstandyou.Ihopeyoucanbehappysoon.Yours,HuangTing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“要求”中“提出至少一條自己的建議”一項，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，書信問候后，提出聽到對方遇到了一些問題很難過；第二步，具體給出解決問題的建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的祝福。[亮點詞匯]①hadtroublewithsth.在某方面有困難②thinkabout考慮③asksb.forhelp向某人求助④tryone’sbesttodosth.盡最大努力做某事[高分句型]①Ifyouhavequestionsyoucan’tunderstand,youmustaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.（If引導的條件狀語從句中包含省略that的定語從句）②Readingmoreandtakingnotesareallgoodwaystogetgoodgrades.（動名詞作主語）12．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李明，你的外國網(wǎng)友Rachel在網(wǎng)上看到幾幅中國剪紙，對此很感興趣，故發(fā)來郵件詢問有關(guān)中國剪紙的相關(guān)信息，請你根據(jù)以下提示給她回復郵件，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。表達要點如下：1.中國剪紙有著1,500多年的悠久歷史；2.剪紙一般為紅色，有各式各樣的形狀；3.過春節(jié)時人們會把剪紙張貼在門窗上；4.全國各地無論老少都很喜歡，北方人尤其擅長；5.補充一至兩點相關(guān)個人想法。表達要求：書寫整潔、整齊、清晰；語句自然流暢；不得出現(xiàn)真實個人信息；詞數(shù)80左右。提示詞匯：youngorold老少；befondof喜愛；northernpart北方DearRachel,YouwantedtoknowaboutChinesepapercutting.Here,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!LiMing【答案】例文：DearRachel,YouwantedtoknowaboutChinesepapercutting.Here,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.Chinesepapercuttinghasalonghistoryofover1,500years.Chinesepeople,nomatteryoungorold,arefondofit.AndpeopleinnorthernpartofChinaaregoodatmakingpapercutting.Thepaper,usuallyred,iscutintodifferentshapes,likebirds,flowersandsoon.Thentheyareputupondoors,windowsandwallstocelebratesomethinghappy,especiallyduringtheSpringFestival.Ihopeyou’llcometoseeChinesepapercuttinginpersononeday.Bestwishes!LiMing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏給出的要點，發(fā)電子郵件介紹有關(guān)中國剪紙的相相關(guān)信息。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點明主題，介紹關(guān)于中國剪紙的信息；第二步，介紹剪紙的歷史、顏色、形狀、用途及受喜歡程度等。[亮點詞匯]①wanttodosth.想要做某事②befondof喜歡③begoodat擅長[高分句型]Ihopeyou’llcometoseeChinesepapercuttinginpersononeday.（省略that的賓語從句）13．（2022秋·湖北武漢·九年級統(tǒng)考一模）假如你是李明，遠在外地的Jack叔叔及其家人和你約定了元旦期間來武漢游玩。請你給Jack叔叔寫封英文電子郵件，告知你的安排。內(nèi)容要點如下：1.元月1日10:00漢口火車站見；2.酒店已預訂好，做地鐵前往；3.晚上坐長江游輪，賞美麗武漢；4.第二天游黃鶴樓，東湖騎行；5.補充一兩點與旅行有關(guān)的信息和想法。注意：1.文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù)：60-80，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：bookv.預訂YangtzeRiver長江游輪YellowCraneTower黃鶴樓FROM:LiMing