作文17湖南卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀 素材積累

作文17湖南卷2021年湖南中考英語書面表達(dá)最近,你班召開了一次以“WhatAreGoodParentsLike?”為主題的班會。請你綜合以下同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)，并發(fā)表你自己的看法，寫一篇短文，向?qū)W校?？陡濉Ｒ螅?1)80詞左右（標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。SamGoodparentsareunderstanding.Theyneverpushustoohardwhenwegetpoorgrades.Myparentsaresupportive.Theyalwaysbringoutthebestinme.BobAmyGoodparentsarelikestarsinthesky.Sometimeswecan’tseethem,buttheyarealwaysthere.WhatAreGoodParentsLike?Recentlywehavehadalivelydiscussionaboutwhatgoodparentsarelike.Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhatAreGoodParentsLike?Recentlywehavehadalivelydiscussionaboutwhatgoodparentsarelike.Differentstudentshavedifferentideas.Samthinksgoodparentsareunderstanding.Theyneverpushustoohardwhenwegetpoorgrades.Bobsaysgoodparentsalwaysbringoutthebestinus.Amyagreesthatgoodparentsarelikestarsinthesky.Sometimeswecan’tseethem,buttheyarealwaysthere.Inmyopinion,goodparentsshouldbegoodteachersaswellasgoodfriendsofus.Theyshouldalsosetgoodexamplesforus.

【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章要求以“WhatAreGoodParentsLike?”為題寫一篇作文，談?wù)労酶改甘鞘裁礃拥?，綜合已給出的同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱和第一人稱相結(jié)合，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)講述大家的觀點(diǎn)，要做到概括全面、語句通順，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。2020年湖南中考英語書面表達(dá)在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們經(jīng)常需要與人合作（cooperate）。假設(shè)你是李華,請你就如何成為一名優(yōu)秀的合作伙伴寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：（1）合作的技巧（如耐心傾聽,禮貌建議……）；（2）合作的意義（如相互學(xué)習(xí)……）。要求：（1）80詞左右（標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。BeaGreatPartnerHello,everyone!Asweallknow,cooperationisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BeaGreatPartnerHello,everyone!Asweallknow,cooperationisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.Thosewhocancooperatewithotherswellarecalledgreatpartners,sothequestionremains:howcanwebeagreatpartner?

Therearecertaintechniqueswecanlearntohelptobebetter.Firstofall,weshouldalwayslistentootherspatientlyandcarefully.Onlybylisteningcanweunderstandourteammembersandbemoreeffective.Inthemeantime,weshouldalwaysbepolitewhenwegiveadvice.That’showweshowrespectandit’stheonlywaywecanmakeprogress.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanimproveourcommunicationskills.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanlearnaboutnewperspectivestowardsthings.Bycooperatingwithotherpeople,wecanmakeprogressinboththeprojectandself-improvement.Thankyouforyourlistening.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該書面表達(dá)主要圍繞如何成為一名優(yōu)秀的合作伙伴寫一篇英語演講稿。本文已經(jīng)給出了寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。作文的開頭已給出，寫作中，應(yīng)承接短文的開頭，注意描述的全面性，將提示的內(nèi)容全部利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。2.例文點(diǎn)評：本文采用四段式，第一段開篇引出如何成為優(yōu)秀的合作者；第二段是合作的技巧；第三段是合作的意義；第四段以感謝結(jié)尾。整篇例文要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容完整，條例清晰。多種句式交替使用，使文章增色不少。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：asweallknow；beofgreatimportance；cooperatewith；firstofall；listentosb.；inthemeantime；makeprogress；learnabout；both…and…；thanksb.forsth.。句型：as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句；how特殊疑問句；that（可省略）引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句；only位于句首的倒裝句；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句；Bycooperatingwithotherpeople…排比句。2019年湖南中考英語書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊(duì)友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得?duì)友的理解提出建議。要求：（1）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.It'snoteasybeinginyoursituation,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.Anyway,don'tbetoohardonyourself.Youknow,basketballisaboutteameffort.It'sneverjustoneperson'sfault.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.Besides,youneedtothinkabouthowyoucandobetternexttime.Asawhole,teammatesshouldsupportandbelieveineachother.Whydon'tyousitdownandcommunicatewiththem?Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】這是一篇給材料的書信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得?duì)友的理解提出建議。人稱為第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補(bǔ)充兩條個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)并提出建議。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.重要的是你應(yīng)該從比賽中吸取教訓(xùn)，也要從錯(cuò)誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。Whatmattersisthat重要的是，that引導(dǎo)的是表語從句。aswellas常用來連接兩個(gè)并列的成分，作“也，還”講。高分句型二：Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.你可以保證你會不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句，sparenoeffortstodosth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會贏得下一場比賽。此句是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；besuretodosth.必定做某事。2018年湖南中考英語書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，于4月13日星期五這一天參加了學(xué)校組織的郊游活動(dòng).請你以schooltrip為主題，寫一則英文日記，內(nèi)容包括參加活動(dòng)的人員、集合時(shí)間、郊游地點(diǎn)、交通方式、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及個(gè)人感受等.要求:(1)80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)日記中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名.Friday，April13thItwassunnytoday.Wewentonaschooltrip.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowinghisrubbishinthepublicplace.Theotherwomanisstoppinghimandtellinghimtoputitintothedustbin.Thecityisourhome.Weshouldprotectit.Therefore,whenweseesomeonelitterlikethis,weshouldactlikethewoman.Theenvironmentshouldbeprotectedbyeverybody.Weshouldbecivilizedcitizens.【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如inthepicture，inthepublicplace，theotherwoman，putitintothedustbin，likethis。而Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture./Weshouldprotectit./Weshouldbecivilizedcitizens.等多種情態(tài)動(dòng)詞句式itisimportantforeveryonetoprotectthem.的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2017年湖南中考英語書面表達(dá)為了慶祝同學(xué)們順利畢業(yè)和感謝老師的辛勤培育，你班將于下周五晚上在教室舉行畢業(yè)晚會（graduation?party）．假如你是班長李華，請你就晚會的活動(dòng)安排、需要協(xié)助的具體事項(xiàng)等給全班同學(xué)寫一個(gè)邀請函．

要求：

（1）注意邀請函的寫作特點(diǎn)；

（2）80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名．

Dear?classmates,

How?time?flies!It's?time?to?say?good-bye.

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I'm?looking?forward?to?hearing?from?you?all!

Yours,

Li?Hua.Dearclassmates,

Howtimeflies!It'stimetosaygood-bye.Thegraduationdayisjustaroundthecorner.Youknow,wedovalueourschooltime.Wehavehadgreattimeheresharingourjoysandsadness.Inordertocelebrateourgraduationandexpressourheartfeltthankstotheteachers'hardwork,weareplanningtoholda

graduationpartyinourclassroomat7：00p.m.nextFriday.（舉行畢業(yè)派對的原因和時(shí)間地點(diǎn)）【高分句型一】Atthepartywe'lldosomesinging,dancingandguessinggames.Besides,we'lltakesomephotostohelprememberthesweetmoment.（派對內(nèi)容）

Isitpossibleforyoutocometotheparty？Ifyouareavailable,canyouhelpwithanyofthesethings？Pleaseletmeknowassoonasyouhavedecided.【高分句型二】

（1）Thingsofgamestoplay.

（2）Preparethingslikeballoonsweneedforgames.

（3）Buyfoodanddrinks.（需要協(xié)助的具體事項(xiàng)）

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyouall!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Yours,

??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????LiHua.【解析】高分句型：句型一：Inordertocelebrateourgraduationandexpressourheartfeltthankstotheteachers'hardwork,weareplanningtoholdagraduationpartyinourclassroomat7：00p.m.nextFriday.為了慶祝我們的畢業(yè)，并向老師們的辛勤工作表示衷心的感謝．我們計(jì)劃在下周五晚上7點(diǎn)在我們的教室舉行畢業(yè)派對．Inordertodosth為了做某事thankstosb謝謝某人plantodosth計(jì)劃打算做某事句型二：Pleaseletmeknowassoonasyouhavedecided.一旦你決定了，請告訴我．a(chǎn)ssoonas一…就…中考英語背好句計(jì)劃與安排活動(dòng)計(jì)劃與安排Wearegoingtotheoldpeople'shomeonFriday.MyfamilywouldliketogotoBeijingtovisitthePalaceMuseum.Wedecidetoclimbthemountainattheendofthisterm.新學(xué)年計(jì)劃I'lltakepartinsomeafter-classactivitiestomakemorenewfriends.It'simportanttodevelopgoodstudyinghabits.Forexample,wecanaskteachersforhelpifwehaveanyproblemsonoursubjects.I'mgoingtodomoreexercise.Itcanhelpmetogrowstrongerandstayawayfromillness.Iwilllistentotheteacherverycarefullyinclassbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.行為規(guī)范如何做文明中學(xué)生Remembernottothrowrubbishhereandthereindailylife.Suchbadmannersaswastingfoodshouldberemovedfromourschool.You'dbetternottalkbacktoyourparentsandteachers.介紹公共場所的文明行為Wearesupposedtohelpotherswhoareintroubleinsteadoftroublingtheminpublic.Weshouldwaitinlineanddon'tpushwhilewaitingforabus.Whenwegoouttoeatinarestaurant,wearenotexpectedtospeakloudlyorwastefood.We'dbettercommunicatewithotherspolitelyandhelpthosewhoareinneed.It'snecessaryforallofusnottospitanywhere.介紹校規(guī)及對校規(guī)的建議Studentsarenotallowedtospeakloudlyinclass.Wehavetohandinourhomeworkontime.Weshouldfollowtheserules:Don'teatintheclassroom.Don'trunaftereachotherorfightwithothersinandoutsidetheschool.It'sarulethatstudentsshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlytoclassmatesinourschool.Theserulescannotonlymakesureofoursafetybutalsocreateagoodlearningenvironmentforus.節(jié)假日活動(dòng)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日基本信息TheSpringFestival,theChineseNewYear,fallsonthefirstdayofthefirstlunarmonth,andendsonthefifteenthday.TheDragonBoatFestival,alsocalledtheDuanwuFestival,iscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChinesecalendar.Mother'sDayisonthesecondSundayofMay.Itisatimetoshowourlovetoourmothers.TheLanternFestival,atraditionalfestivalinChina,fallsonthefifteenthdayofthefirstmonthoftheChineselunarcalendar.TheDoubleNinthFestival,animportantfestivalinChina,iscelebratedeachyearontheninthdayofSeptemberaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisonthefifteenthdayofAugustinlunarcalendar.Itisatimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebratetheharvest.慶祝傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的方式及活動(dòng)Nomatterwherevertheyare,peoplecomehometocelebratethefestivalwiththeirfamilies.WhentheLanternFestivaldrawsnear,Chinesepeopletakepartinallkindsofactivities,likesinginganddancing.OntheLanternFestival,weoftenwatchlanternshowsanddragondancestomakewishesforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.Amongallthefestivals,theSpringFestivalismyfavouriteone,becauseIcangetluckymoneyfrommyparentsandrelatives.OntheEveoftheNewYear,thewholefamilygettogetherandhaveabigdinnertowelcomethecomingnewyear.談?wù)摴?jié)日的意義及感受TheSpringFestivalisatimeforfamilytostaytogether,whichhasaspecialmeaningtoeveryoneofus.Traditionalfestivalsareapartofculture,soIbelieveitiseveryone'sdutytopassthemon.環(huán)境保護(hù)目前的環(huán)境問題Ourenvironmentischangingfortheworse.Itistimeforustogogreen.Theriverwasreallydirty.Eventhebottomoftheriverwasfullofrubbish.Somepeoplethrowrubbisheverywhere,andwecanevenseerubbishinthesea.如何保護(hù)環(huán)境Tocutdownairpollutionweshouldtakethebusorsubwayinsteadofdriving.Wecanreduceairpollutionbyridingbicycles.Weshouldseparatewasteintodifferentgroupssothatitcanberecycled.It'sbetterforustoputrubbishintorubbishbinssothatwecankeepourcitycleanandtidy.保護(hù)環(huán)境的意義Sotogether,ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.Natureisourgreatesttreasure.Wedependonitsrichresourcestolive,soitisimportantforustoprotectitwisely.Protectingenvironmentwillbenotonlygoodforourhuman'shealth,butalsogoodforanimals.Ifeveryoneplaysapartinprotectingtheenvironment,ouractionscanmakeadifferenceandcreateabetterfuture.中考英語作文分類好詞好句1.學(xué)校生活及學(xué)習(xí)成績putone’sheartinto…一心撲在…上befondof…喜歡/愛好……makeprogressin…在……方面取得進(jìn)步begettingonwellwithone’sstudy（某人）學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)展得很好workhardat…努力學(xué)習(xí)liveuptoone’shope不辜負(fù)某人的期望beactiveinclass（work）在課堂上（工作中）表現(xiàn)積極takeanactivepartin…積極參加……learnsth.byheart諳記某事，牢記在心workoutaproblem解決一個(gè)問題improveoneselfin…在某方面提高自己haveagoodcommandof…精通……layagoodfoundationin（languagestudy）在（語言學(xué)習(xí)）方面奠定一個(gè)好的基礎(chǔ)2.師生關(guān)系getonwellwithsb.與某人相處得很好raiseaquestion提問liketobewithstudents喜歡與學(xué)生相處begentlewithus對我們很友善bestrictwithone’spupils對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格bestrictinwork對工作要求嚴(yán)格helpsb.withsth.用……幫助某人praisesb.forsth.由于某事贊揚(yáng)某人blamesb.forsth.為（某事）責(zé)備某人givesb.adviceonsth.在方面給某人建議besatisfiedwith…對……滿意develo