Unit 1 話題作文8篇-2023-2024學(xué)年英語(yǔ)八年級(jí)上冊(cè)單元沖刺滿分題型訓(xùn)練（人教版）

八年級(jí)上冊(cè)Unit1話題作文8篇1．（2022秋·山東臨沂·八年級(jí)?？茧A段練習(xí)）在新學(xué)期開(kāi)始之際，校英語(yǔ)報(bào)發(fā)起了題為“AWonderfulVacation”的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，介紹你的暑假中一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，向校報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容提示：l.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudothere?3.Howdidyoulikeit?要求：90詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文AWonderfulVacationIwenttoQingdaowithmysisterthissummervacation.Wehadagoodtimethere.Qingdaohasmanyplacesofinterest.First,wewenttothebeach.Theseawasasblueasthesky.Andtherewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.Wealsotookmanyphotosthere.Laterwewenttosealifecenter.Wesawmanyamazingseacreaturesandlearnedmoreaboutthem.Also,Iboughtmanybeautifulsouvenirsformyparentsandfriends.Andmysistertookmetotasteallkindsofdeliciousseafood.Althoughweweretired,wewantedtovisitQingdaoagain.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“去哪度假了，做了什么，有什么感受”的要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容豐富。[寫作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，介紹自己去哪里度假；第二步，具體介紹度假期間都去了哪里，做了什么事情；第三步，表明度假感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①placesofinterest名勝古跡②as…as和……一樣……③allkindsof各種各樣的[高分句型]①Andtherewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）②Althoughweweretired,wewantedtovisitQingdaoagain.（Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）2．（2021秋·八年級(jí)課時(shí)練習(xí)）剛剛過(guò)去的國(guó)慶節(jié)正值新中國(guó)成立70周年。你最想對(duì)祖國(guó)母親說(shuō)什么呢？國(guó)慶節(jié)也是飽覽祖國(guó)大好河山的黃金周，你到了什么地方？請(qǐng)寫下你的旅游經(jīng)歷，參加?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)角”的征文活動(dòng)。要求：60詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Oct1isChineseNationalDay.Thisyearisthe70thbirthdayofourmotherland.Iwanttosay:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Oct1isChineseNationalDay.Thisyearisthe70thbirthdayofourmotherland.Iwanttosay:Iamproudofyouandloveyouforever.IvisitedseveralplacesduringNationalDay.MountTaiwasthemostunforgettableplace.IstillremembermydadandIwenttoclimbitintheearlymorning.Ienjoyedthesunshineandtookinfreshair.Iwassoclosetonatureandlovedit.Seeingthemountainswithlargerocksaroundmeandthewaterfallbelowus,Ismiled.Ienjoyedmysuccessinreachingthetop.AndIwasproudofthegreatriversandmountainsofourcountry.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求考生介紹國(guó)慶節(jié)期間的旅游經(jīng)歷，屬于記敘文寫作，需注意寫清楚游覽經(jīng)過(guò)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為輔來(lái)敘述。寫作時(shí)承接開(kāi)頭，要寫出游覽的地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、經(jīng)過(guò)，最后介紹自己的感受。行文注意主謂一致，保證無(wú)語(yǔ)法和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。3．（2018秋·八年級(jí)單元測(cè)試）書(shū)面表達(dá)。假如你是林濤，去年夏天去北京度假，參觀過(guò)許多地方。以Myvacation為題，寫一篇60詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.旅游景點(diǎn)（theGreatWall,thePalaceMuseum,Tian'anmenSquare,Beijinghutong)；2.天氣、活動(dòng)；3.觀點(diǎn)或感受等。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyvacationLastsummer,IwenttoBeijingonvacationwithmyfather.Theweatherwassunnyandhot.FirstwevisitedtheGreatWall.TherewerealotofpeopleontheGreatWall.Itisreallythelongestwallintheworld.Thenextday,wevisitedthePalaceMuseumandTian'anmenSquare.Wetookmanyphotosthere.WealsovisitedsomeotherinterestingplacesinBeijing.WevisitedBeijinghutong,too.Wehadagreattimethere.Ihopetogothereagain.【詳解】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，結(jié)合所給寫作信息，以“Myvacation”為話題，把“旅游景點(diǎn)、天氣、活動(dòng)以及觀點(diǎn)或感受”等有條理地表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意人稱和一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中使用了onvacation,alotof，intheworld,thenextday，takemanyphotos，and,haveagreattime，hopetodo等詞或固定搭配，使上下文意連接緊密,過(guò)渡自然。同時(shí)，本文最大亮點(diǎn)是敘事條理、表達(dá)清晰；還使用了Itisreallythelongestwallintheworld.最高級(jí)比較的句型，為文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。4．（2018秋·八年級(jí)單元測(cè)試）書(shū)面表達(dá)：介紹剛過(guò)去的暑假中你和家人或朋友的一次旅行。80詞左右。注意時(shí)態(tài)！________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onmyvacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.wewenttherebytrain.westayedthereforaweek.Theweathertherewasveryhotanddry.WewenttotheGreatWall.Thereweresomanypeople.ThenwewenttotheScienceMuseum.Wesawmanyinterestingthings.Theywerewonderful.WealsowenttoaBeijingHutong.Wewentshoppingandhaddeliciousfood.Peoplewereveryfriendly.wehadagoodtimethere.【詳解】介紹剛過(guò)去的暑假中你和家人或朋友的一次旅行。80詞左右。注意時(shí)態(tài)，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)，表達(dá)出旅行中的所見(jiàn)所聞，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文作者其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含表語(yǔ)從句的準(zhǔn)確使用是本文的一大亮點(diǎn).如Thereweresomanypeople.ThenwewenttotheScienceMuseum.Wesawmanyinterestingthings.，學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。5．（2021秋·廣東韶關(guān)·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）以MyVacation為題寫一篇短文，描述你的假期，介紹一下你去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容提示：1.去哪里玩：2.游玩經(jīng)歷：3.談?wù)勀愕母惺堋Ｗ魑囊螅?.

不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.

語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。MyVacation____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lastsummervacation.Iwenttothebeachwithmyparents.Theweatherwassunnyandhot.

Inthemorning,myfatherandIplayedbeachvolleyball.Mymotherreadbooksandrestedonthebeach.Intheafternoon,theseawaterwassowarmthatwecouldswiminthesea.Wefeltcomfortablewhenwewereinthewater.Intheevening,itwascool.Iwentfishingwithmyfather.Itwasinteresting.Ilovedthebeach.Themostunforgettablethingwastheseafood.Itwassodelicious.Iwanttogothereagain.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)提示，介紹一次旅行。內(nèi)容包括游玩地點(diǎn)、游玩經(jīng)歷及感受。首先，我們要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)。然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來(lái)展開(kāi)寫作。時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)相結(jié)合。在敘述旅行的活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描述景點(diǎn)的景色和自己的收獲時(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章要緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，層次要分明，條理要清晰。6．（2021秋·山東青島·八年級(jí)青島市城陽(yáng)第九中學(xué)校考階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，下節(jié)英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)課老師要求你們分享去年暑假是如何度過(guò)的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以MySummerHoliday為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下你的旅行經(jīng)歷，為口語(yǔ)課活動(dòng)做準(zhǔn)備。1.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudo?3.Howdidyoulikethetrip?要求：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順，連貫。3.80詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]MySummerHolidayDuringlastsummerholiday,ItraveledtoBeijingwithmyparents.Westayedthereforfivedays.Welivedinaverybeautifulhotel.WevisitedtheTiananmenSquare,theImperialPalace,theSummerPalaceandtheOldSummerPalace.WealsowenttotheGreatWall.Theweatherwasveryhot,butwewereexciting.Ihadajoyfulsummerholidaytherelastyear.IlikeBeijingverymuch.IhopeIcangothereagain.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為話題作文，要求以“MySummerHoliday”為題寫一篇作文，介紹自己去年暑假的旅行經(jīng)歷。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：以李華的名義敘述自己的旅行經(jīng)歷，人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱，記敘去年發(fā)生的事情時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)，抒發(fā)自己的感想時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章所給三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都要涉及到，要做到思路清晰、層次分明，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤。7．（2022秋·八年級(jí)課時(shí)練習(xí)）提示：假期是我們生活中最快樂(lè)的時(shí)光。在假期里，你做過(guò)什么？有什么收獲？請(qǐng)以“AMeaningfulHoliday”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕囊粋€(gè)有意義的假期。要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。AMeaningfulHoliday_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________