Module 6 Around town-2021-2022學年七年級英語下學期模塊話題滿分寫作（外研版）

2021-2022七年級英語下學期單元話題滿分寫作Module6:Aroundtown單元話題：描述路線范文1觀察下面的地圖，假如你的朋友Jack在圖中的箭頭處，他想去機場接他的叔叔，但是他不認識路。請你根據(jù)地圖用英語給他指出去機場的兩條路線。要求思路清晰、表達正確，不少于60詞。提示：straight筆直地________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jack,there’retwowaystotheairport.Thefirstoneis:goalongHuayuanRoadandturnleftintoZhongshanStreetwhenyouseeacinema.Gostraightandyou’llseetheairportonyourright.Thesecondoneis:walkalongHuayuanRoadandturnleftintoDaqingStreet.GostraightandthenturnrightintoPing’anRoad.Gopastthelibraryandyoucanseetheairport.這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)地圖用英語給杰克指出去機場的兩條路線。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Thefirstoneis:……，Gostraightand……，Gopast……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了有兩條去往機場的路，接下來介紹第一條路線，最后介紹第二條路線。此處goalong,turnleft,gostraight,onone’sright,turnright,gopast等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。范文22．來自英國的Mike和他的父母來濱江旅游，當他父母在友誼賓館休息時，Mike獨自上街游覽，結果在民生街迷路。后來Mike在他父親短信的指引下安全返回。請根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容還原短信，60詞左右。提示內(nèi)容：1.沿民生街走，在第三個路口向右轉(zhuǎn)至東風路；2.沿東風路走，在第二個路口向左轉(zhuǎn)至健康街；3.沿健康街走大約5分鐘，就看到在左邊的友誼賓館。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hey,Mike!Nowyou'reonMinshengStreet.Goalongthisstreetandturnrightatthethirdcrossing.ThenyouareonDongfengRoad.WalkalongDongfengRoadandturnleftatthesecondcrossing.AfterthatyouareonJiankangStreet.WalkforaboutfiveminutesalongthisstreetandyouwillseeYouyiHotelonyourleft.Youcan'tmissit.【解析】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你以Mike父親的身份給在民生街迷路的Mike發(fā)一條短信，指引Mike安全返回友誼賓館。例文點評：本文主要采用第二人稱展開敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。因為是指示性的語言，所以多用祈使句。文章按提示內(nèi)容詳細指導了對方該怎么走。文章條理清晰，語言精煉。高分亮點：短語：goalong；walkalong；turnleft/rightatthe+序數(shù)詞+crossing；onone’sleft/right。句型：①Goalongthisstreetandturnrightatthethirdcrossing.②Youcan'tmissit.范文33．假設你叫李華，下星期六是你的生日。你準備在家開一個生日晚會，并邀請部分同學和朋友參加。晚會7：30開始。你家住在南京路70號，乘1路或34路公共汽車在人民路站下車。你家就在車站的對面。房子是紅色的，門是白色的，很容易找到。請根據(jù)所給信息，給你的好友林莉?qū)懸环獠簧儆?0字的信。要點：1．邀請她參加晚會；

2．晚會的時間和地點；3．你的地址；

4．如何到達；

5．你很希望她來。注意：信的內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，語意連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。（信的格式及句首已給出）70NanjiangRoadJune22,2002DearLinLi,NextSaturdayismybirthday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】0nepossibleversionsDearLinlitNextSaturdayismybirthday.I’mgoingtoholdabirth-daypartyathomeintheevening.Itwillstartat7:30.Wouldyouliketocome?I’vealsoaskedsomeotherclassmatesofoursandsomeofmyfriends.Iliveat70NanjingRoad.YoucantakebusNo.1orNo.34,andgetoffatthestopofRenminRoad.Myhouseisjustontheothersideoftheroad.It’saredhousewithawhitedoor.Youcan’tmissit.Idohopeyouwillcome.Yours,LiHua【解析】本題考查書信的寫作格式，屬于比較容易的作文類型。文章要點已經(jīng)給出，可以根據(jù)要點展開寫作。寫作過程中，注意語句要通順，不要出現(xiàn)拼寫錯誤，正確使用語法知識。范文44．根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。詞數(shù)60～70左右。1．昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。2．在路上我遇到了一個外國人。3．他向我詢問去溫泉飯店(theHotSpringHotel)的路。4．我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個轉(zhuǎn)彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。5．他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。提示詞語：gooutforawalk,ontheroad,thewayto,walkalong,thankfor,behappythat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwentoutforawalkwithmymotheryesterdayevening.Ontheroad,wemetaforeigner.HewantedtogototheHotSpringHotel,buthedidn'tknowtheway.SoheaskedmetotellhimthewaytotheHotSpringHotel.Isaidtohim,“walkalongtheroad,andturnleftatthethirdturning,andyoucanseeit.”Hethankedmeforhelpinghim.IwasveryhappythatIcouldhelpothers.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，要表達我和媽媽去散步，幫一個外國人指路。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。2.例文點評：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如gooutforawalk,with,asksbtodo,thewayto以及thanksbfor等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。范文55．你的英國好朋友Tony要來你的家鄉(xiāng)做客，請你選擇一個自己熟悉的景點，向他介紹一下參觀路線以及沿途的大體風景。（敲黑板：對Tony來說，任何的公園，城市，甚至你們村都是新鮮的哦）要求：

1.詞數(shù)在80個左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。

Welcometoourhometown,Tony!Thisis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Welcometoourhometown,Tony!ThisisBeijing.Itisabeautifulplace.Ilikemyhometownbecausepeoplehereareveryfriendly.Andtherearemanyinterestingplaces,suchastheGreatWall,Bird’sNestandWaterCube.WearegoingtotheGreatWallthisafternoon.Ithasalonghistory.WewilltakethebustotheGreatWall.Duringtheway,wemayseemanybuildingsandabigpark.I’msureyouwilllikeBeijingandcomehereagain.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時應承接作文開頭。第一段介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)；第二段講解家鄉(xiāng)的風景和游玩計劃；第三段總結概述。2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述游玩計劃時用一般將來時；介紹家鄉(xiāng)的人和風景時要敘述完整。范文66．假如你是袁建，因你父母參與鄂州花湖機場建設，本學期你跟隨其搬遷來鄂州。請你根據(jù)以下提示給你的英國筆友Tom寫一封郵件，告訴他你的近況。提示：1.天氣和穿著:hot，wet，T-shirt，shorts2.上學的路線：walkalong，turnleft，crossing3.新交的朋友：tall，shorthair，friendly要求：1.包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.內(nèi)容連貫，邏輯通順，表達清晰；3.60詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。DearTom,Howareyou?NowletmetellyouaboutmylifeinEzhou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________