高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：泳池邊的生命奇跡：救生員的愛心守護(hù)+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)泳池邊的生命奇跡：救生員的愛心守護(hù)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhatshouldhavebeenaregularSundayattheYMCAturnedintoadayoneteenagelifeguardwillneverforget!Eighteen-year-oldNatalieLucashasbeenworkingasalifeguardattheYMCAinLongmont,Colorado,forthepastthreeyears.Recently,acoupleenteredthepoolareawhileshewasonduty.Thewomanwasverypregnant,soNataliekeptacloseeyeonherassheeasedherselfintotheshallowendofthepool.TessaRiderwasninemonthspregnantthatday.Sheandherhusband,MatthewJones,cametothepoolafewtimesthatweektoeasethediscomfortofanervepain.4續(xù)寫原文AsTessawasrestinginthepool,shesuddenlyrealizedsomethingwashappening.NatalienoticedTessaclimbedoutofthepool,soshewentovertocheckonthecouple.“IwalkoverandMatthew,thehusband,saystome,‘We’rehavingthebabyrightnow.’I’mlike,‘OK!’”Natalierecalled.Matthewcalled911,butashespoketotheoperatorheknewitwastoolate.Tessawasalreadypullingherbathingsuitoff.NataliehelpedTessaandMatthewbybringingoverthecenter’smedicalsuppliesandtowels,andcallingformoreassistancefromthefrontdesk.Throughoutitall,shetoldherselftoremaincalmandfocusoncaringforTessa.5續(xù)寫原文“IknewIneededtostaycalm,”Nataliesaid.“SoImadesuretokeepmyheadonandstaywiththem,keepaskingthemquestions,andkeepthemfocusedonthebabyandmadesurethattheywerethemostcomfortable.”Lessthanfiveminuteslater,Matthewcaughthisnewbornsonashewasbornonthepooledge.Afterhelpingclearthebaby’sairwayandensuringhewasbreathing,Natalieusedherbacktosupportthenewmomuntilparamedic(護(hù)理員)arrived.Oncethere,babyTobinThomasRiderreceivedacleanbillofhealth!6段首句Paragraph1:MatthewandTessaarebothgratefulthatNataliewastheretohelpthem.Paragraph2:NataliesaidTobin’sunexpectedbirthwasalljustpartofherjob.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在科羅拉多州朗蒙特的基督教青年會(huì)，18歲的娜塔莉?盧卡斯已擔(dān)任救生員三年。一個(gè)尋常的周日，她正在值班，一對(duì)夫婦走進(jìn)了泳池區(qū)域，其中妻子泰莎已懷孕九個(gè)月。泰莎本周多次來泳池緩解神經(jīng)疼痛帶來的不適。正當(dāng)她在泳池休息時(shí)，突然即將臨盆。娜塔莉察覺到泰莎爬出泳池，立刻上前查看情況。丈夫馬修告知她孩子馬上就要出生了，隨即撥打了911，但意識(shí)到救援來不及趕到。娜塔莉迅速行動(dòng)，拿來了中心的醫(yī)療用品和毛巾，還從前臺(tái)呼叫更多人前來協(xié)助。在整個(gè)過程中，她始終保持冷靜，專注于照顧泰莎。不到五分鐘，馬修在泳池邊順利接住了新生兒。之后，娜塔莉幫忙清理嬰兒的呼吸道，確保其正常呼吸，并一直用自己的背支撐著產(chǎn)婦，直到護(hù)理人員趕到。幸運(yùn)的是，新生兒托賓?托馬斯?里德健康狀況良好。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:MatthewandTessaarebothgratefulthatNataliewastheretohelpthem.馬修和泰莎都非常感激娜塔莉在關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻給予他們的幫助。在護(hù)理人員將他們送往醫(yī)院后，泰莎和馬修一直對(duì)娜塔莉念念不忘。在醫(yī)院里，他們一邊照顧著剛出生的小托賓，一邊商量著要如何感謝這位勇敢又冷靜的救生員。泰莎的身體逐漸恢復(fù)后，她和馬修決定帶著小托賓一起去青年會(huì)，當(dāng)面向娜塔莉表達(dá)他們的感激之情。當(dāng)他們?cè)俅蝸淼角嗄陼?huì)時(shí)，娜塔莉正在泳池邊值班。泰莎推著嬰兒車，和馬修一起走向娜塔莉。娜塔莉看到他們，臉上露出了驚喜的笑容。泰莎走上前，緊緊地握住娜塔莉的手，眼中閃爍著淚花，激動(dòng)地說：“娜塔莉，你就是我們家的大恩人，如果沒有你，真不知道會(huì)發(fā)生什么。是你在我們最無助的時(shí)候，給予了我們幫助和支持，讓我們順利地迎來了小托賓的誕生。”馬修也在一旁附和著，他拿出一個(gè)精心準(zhǔn)備的禮物盒，遞給娜塔莉，說：“這是我們的一點(diǎn)心意，希望你能收下，感謝你為我們所做的一切?！蹦人蚪舆^禮物，有些不好意思地說：“這都是我應(yīng)該做的，看到你們和寶寶都平安健康，我就很開心了。”11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:NataliesaidTobin’sunexpectedbirthwasalljustpartofherjob.娜塔莉說托賓的意外出生不過是她工作的一部分。她認(rèn)為，作為一名救生員，保障每一個(gè)在泳池里的人的安全是她的職責(zé)所在。無論是游泳時(shí)的意外，還是像這樣突發(fā)的緊急情況，她都有責(zé)任和義務(wù)去幫助大家。她覺得自己只是做了分內(nèi)的事情，并不值得大家如此隆重地感謝。這件事情發(fā)生后，青年會(huì)的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和同事們都對(duì)娜塔莉的表現(xiàn)贊不絕口。領(lǐng)導(dǎo)在全體員工大會(huì)上表揚(yáng)了娜塔莉，稱贊她在關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻展現(xiàn)出了專業(yè)的素養(yǎng)和冷靜的態(tài)度，為大家樹立了榜樣。同事們也紛紛向娜塔莉請(qǐng)教經(jīng)驗(yàn)，娜塔莉毫無保留地分享了自己在處理這次緊急情況時(shí)的想法和做法。她說：“當(dāng)遇到緊急情況時(shí)，最重要的就是保持冷靜，只有冷靜下來，才能清晰地思考，做出正確的判斷和行動(dòng)。而且，平時(shí)的培訓(xùn)和積累的經(jīng)驗(yàn)也非常重要，它們能在關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻發(fā)揮作用?！蹦人虻脑捵屚聜兩钍軉l(fā)，大家都表示要向她學(xué)習(xí)，提高自己應(yīng)對(duì)突發(fā)情況的能力。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)MatthewandTessaarebothgratefulthatNataliewastheretohelpthem.Aftertheparamedicstookthemtothehospital,TessaandMatthewcouldn'tstopthinkingaboutNatalie.Inthehospital,whiletheyweretakingcareofthenewbornTobin,theydiscussedhowtoexpresstheirgratitudetothisbraveandcalmlifeguard.WhenTessa'sbodygraduallyrecovered,sheandMatthewdecidedtotakeTobintotheYMCAtothankNatalieinperson.WhentheyarrivedattheYMCAagain,Nataliewasondutybythepool.TessapushedthestrollerandwalkedtowardsNataliewithMatthew.Nataliesawthemandasurprisedsmileappearedonherface.Tessasteppedforward,heldNatalie'shandstightly,withtearsinhereyes,andsaidexcitedly,"Natalie,youarethegreatbenefactorofourfamily.Withoutyou,Ireallydon'tknowwhatwouldhavehappened.YougaveushelpandsupportwhenweweremosthelplessandhelpeduswelcomethebirthoflittleTobinsmoothly."Matthewechoedbesideher.HetookoutacarefullypreparedgiftboxandhandedittoNatalie,saying,"Thisisasmalltokenofourappreciation.Wehopeyoucanacceptitandthankyouforeverythingyou'vedoneforus."Natalietookthegiftandsaidabitshyly,"It'sallIshoulddo.I'mreallyhappytoseethatyouandthebabyaresafeandhealthy."14范文呈現(xiàn)NataliesaidTobin'sunexpectedbirthwasalljustpartofherjob.Shebelievedthatasalifeguard,itwasherresponsibilitytoensurethesafetyofeveryoneinthepool.Whetheritwasanaccidentduringswimmingorsuchanunexpectedemergency,shehadthedutyandobligationtohelpothers.Shethoughtshejustdidwhatshewassupposedtodoanddidn'tdeservesuchagrandthank-you.Afterthisincident,theleadersandcolleaguesoftheYMCAallpraisedNatalie'sperformance.TheleadercommendedNatalieatthestaffmeeting,praisingherforshowingprofessionalqualitiesandcalmnessinthecriticalmomentandsettingagoodexampleforeveryone.ColleaguesalsoaskedNatalieforherexperienceoneafteranother.Nataliesharedwithoutreservationherthoughtsandactionswhendealingwiththisemergency.Shesaid,"Whenfacinganemergency,themostimportantthingistostaycalm.Onlybystayingcalmcanwethinkclearlyandmaketherightjudgmentsandactions.Moreover,thetrainingandaccumulatedexperienceusuallyarealsoveryimportant.Theycanplayaroleincriticalmoments."Natalie'swordsinspiredhercolleaguesdeeply,andeveryonesaidtheywouldlearnfromherandimprovetheirabilitytodealwithemergencies.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)MatthewandTessaarebothdeeplygratefulthatNataliewastheretolendthemahandintheirhourofneed.Afterbeingrushedtothehospitalbytheparamedics,TessaandMatthewfoundthemselvesconstantlythinkingabouttheyounglifeguardwhohadcometotheirrescue.Inthehospitalroom,astheylovinglycaredfortheirnewbornson,Tobin,theyweredeterminedtofindawaytoexpresstheirheartfeltgratitudetoNatalie.OnceTessahadregainedsomeofherstrength,sheandMatthewdecidedtopayavisittotheYMCA,bringinglittleTobinalongwiththem.WhentheyarrivedattheYMCA,Nataliewas,asalways,diligentlyondutybythepoolside.Assoonasshespottedthemapproaching,alookofpleasantsurprisespreadacrossherface.Tessa,pushingthestrollerwithTobininside,quicklysteppedforwardandgraspedNatalie'shandstightly.Withtearsglisteninginhereyes,shesaidwithgreatemotion,"Natalie,you'retrulyourfamily'ssavior.Withoutyou,wedon'tevenwanttoimaginewhatcouldhavehappened.Youwerethereforuswhenwewereatourmostvulnerable,helpinguswelcomeTobinintotheworldsafely."MatthewnoddedinagreementandthenpresentedNataliewithacarefullywrappedgiftbox."Thisisjustasmalltokenofourappreciation,"hesaid."Wehopeyou'llacceptitandknowhowmuchweappreciateeverythingyou'vedoneforus."Natalieacceptedthegiftwithashysmileandreplied,"It'sreallynothing.Iwasjustdoingmyjob.I'mjustsogladtoseethatyouandthebabyarebothdoingwell."16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)NatalieinsiststhatTobin'sunexpectedarrivalwassimplypartandparcelofherjob.Asalifeguard,shefirmlybelievesthatensuringthesafetyofeveryindividualinthepoolareaishersolemnresponsibility.Whetherit'saroutineswimmingaccidentoranextraordinaryemergencylikethisone,shefeelsduty-boundtostepinandofferassistance.Shedoesn'tthinkheractionsdeserveanyspecialrecognition;inherview,shewasmerelyfulfillingherprofessionalobligations.Followingthisincident,boththeleadersandcolleaguesattheYMCAwerefullofpraiseforNatalie'soutstandingperformance.Duringastaffmeeting,theYMCA'sleaderpub