高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+貓與我們的溫暖故事課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)貓與我們的溫暖故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Duringthe25yearswe’velivedinourhome,manycatshaveappearedonmyporch(門廊),gazingthroughtheglassdoor,silentlybeggingforfood.Well,whatcanIdo?Certainlynotignoretheirlovelyfaces.Evenasmyhusbandsays“Don’tfeedthesecats,Caren,”Iamopeningthedoor,withcatfoodbaginhand.Thesecatsusuallystayafewdays,maybeacouplemonthsbeforedisappearingintothewoods.Oneeveningwhilefeedingthehorses,Isawsomethingmove.Iturnedjustintimetoglimpseablacktaildisappearingunderourshed(小棚).Later,Isawaskinnyyoungcatsneakaroundandfinishtheleftovers.ThenexttimeIsawher,shehadacompanion,ablackmalecat.Imadesuretoputoutenoughfoodforthebothofthem.4續(xù)寫原文Prettysoon,theywereappearingatdinnertimewithourothercats.InamedthemMinnieandFreddy.Iwouldgivethemfoodinseparatecontainers,buttheywouldwalkupanddownuntilIwentbackinside.Then,withnohumannear,theywoulddevourtheirmeals.Thiswentonforacoupleofweeks.Oneday,Freddydidn’tshowup.Weneversawhimagain.ButMinniekeptstickingaroundourroom,dividingtimebetweentheshedandtheporch.Shewasnolongerskinnyandlookedquitenicely.Icongratulatedmyselfonhernewfoundhealth.However,shekeptgainingweight—especiallyaroundhermiddle.Yup,shewaspregnant(懷孕的).5段首句Paragraph1：WefixedupasmallplaceintheshedforMinnie.Paragraph2：Fromthatdayon,ourfamilygrewnotonlywithMinniebutalsowithheradorablebabies,creatingaharmoniousandlovingenvironmentforallofustocherish(珍惜).6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了一個(gè)被寵壞的小王子，他擁有一切想要的玩具且獨(dú)占欲極強(qiáng)。一位神奇的玩具制造商來到他的領(lǐng)地，小王子邀請他在宮中制作玩具，承諾給予豐厚報(bào)酬。玩具制造商提出條件，要小王子每天花時(shí)間陪玩具玩耍。隨著玩具數(shù)量不斷增加，小王子難以應(yīng)付，開始忽視部分玩具。夜里被忽視的玩具排隊(duì)要求玩耍，導(dǎo)致他很晚才入睡。之后每天都過得越來越艱難，小王子疲于應(yīng)付玩具。最后小王子意識到自己的行為不對，決定改變，與孩子們分享玩具。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WefixedupasmallplaceintheshedforMinnie.作者為米妮在小棚里準(zhǔn)備了一個(gè)小地方。隨著日子一天天過去，米妮的肚子越來越大。當(dāng)米妮生產(chǎn)那天，作者一家都很緊張，圍在小棚邊看著。小貓們出生了，它們小小的，非?？蓯?。作者和家人一起幫助米妮照顧小貓，給它們準(zhǔn)備食物和溫暖的窩。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Fromthatdayon,ourfamilygrewnotonlywithMinniebutalsowithheradorablebabies,creatingaharmoniousandlovingenvironmentforallofustocherish(珍惜).小貓們慢慢長大，它們在院子里玩耍，給作者一家?guī)砹撕芏鄽g樂。作者和家人看著小貓們一天天長大，心里充滿了喜悅。作者把小貓們當(dāng)作家庭的一部分，給它們關(guān)愛和照顧。一家人與貓一起度過了美好的時(shí)光，共同營造了和諧溫馨的氛圍。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)WefixedupasmallplaceintheshedforMinnie.Sheseemedtoappreciatethecozyspotwepreparedforher.Whenthedaycameforhertogivebirth,wewereallexcitedandabitnervous.Wewatchedoverherasshewelcomedherbabiesintotheworldonebyone.Thelittlekittensweresocute,withtheirtinypawsandsoftmeows.Minnietookgoodcareofthem,andwemadesuretoprovidethemwithenoughfoodandwarmth.13范文呈現(xiàn)Fromthatdayon,ourfamilygrewnotonlywithMinniebutalsowithheradorablebabies,creatingaharmoniousandlovingenvironmentforallofustocherish.Wewerehappytohavethemaround,andthecatsaddedalotofjoytoourlives.Eachdaywasfilledwiththesoundsofmeowingandthesightofthecatsplayingtogether.Wefeltasenseofresponsibilitytowardsthem,andwewoulddoourbesttotakecareofthemandmakethemfeelloved.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WefixedupasmallplaceintheshedforMinnie.Asthedayspassed,Minnieseemedtobemorecomfortableinthespotwepreparedforher.Whenthedayofherdeliveryarrived,wewereallexcitedyetnervous.Wewatchedoverherasshegavebirthtoherkittensonebyone.Thekittens,withtheirtinypawsandsoftmeows,wereextremelycute.Minnietookgoodcareofthem,andwemadesuretoprovideenoughfoodandwarmth.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Fromthatdayon,ourfamilygrewwithMinnieandheradorablekittens.Wewerehappytohavethemaround,andtheybroughtsomuchjoytoourlives.Eachdaywasfilledwiththesoundsofmeowingandthesightofthecatsplayingtogether.Itwasnotuntilthenthatwerealizedhowmuchtheymeanttous.Wefeltasenseofresponsibilitytowardsthemandweredetermined