讀后續(xù)寫+誠實與關(guān)愛：Kitty的善良之舉+講義 高三上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)階段檢測（一）英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OnewindydayinMarch,KittyMillerwasonherwaytoschoolwhensheglancedintoastorewindowandsawagreatpileoflovelyredapples.“Oh!”sheexclaimed(驚叫).“Howlovely!IfonlyMammacouldhaveone!”Immediately,thestoreeownerrecognizedthefamiliargirlandaskedhertopickone.Kittyjustshookherheadandranawayshyly.Kitty’smotherwasextremelypoor.ShehadbeenadressmakereversinceKitty’sfatherdied,andhadtoworkhardtoearnalivingforherselfandKitty.Unfortunately,shehadrecentlybecomeverysickandhadtolieinbedalldaylong.WhenKittywasawayatschool,thehousewasincrediblycoldandcheerless.Shemissedherlittleangel-thatiswhatshecalledKitty.Kittytookgreatcareofhermother.Shecookedherfood,mostlysoup.Theycouldnotaffordfreshfruit.Kittywouldevensingtohermotheratnight.WhenKittyreachedtheschoolthatday,herthoughtswerefullofhersickmotherandthelovelyredapples.Shewasusuallyanexcellentstudent,butthatdayshemadesomanymistakesthattheteacherlookedatherinsurprise.Thelittlegirlcouldonlysitatherdesk,withherbookbeforeher,anddreamofthoseredapples.Whentheclasswasdismissed,Kittystartedhomewardslowly.Shehadwalkedonlyashortdistancewhenshesawamaninfrontofherdrophiswallet.Runningquicklyforward,shepickeditup.ThewalletfeltquiteheavyinKitty’slittlehand.“Theremustbeagooddealofmoneyinit,”thoughtKitty.“HowIwishIcouldkeepit,sothatIwouldthenbeabletopurchasearedappleforMamma,andsomanyotherthingssheneeds.”注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。第一段：Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.第二段：Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.文章大意這篇文章講述了KittyMiller在三月的一個多風(fēng)的日子里，看到商店櫥窗里堆滿的紅蘋果時，想起了生病的母親。Kitty的母親是一位貧窮的裁縫，自從Kitty的父親去世后，她一直努力工作以維持生計。不幸的是，她最近生病了，不得不整天躺在床上。Kitty在學(xué)校時，因為想著生病的母親和紅蘋果而心不在焉，犯了很多錯誤。放學(xué)后，Kitty在路上撿到了一個錢包，盡管她很想用里面的錢為母親買蘋果和其他必需品，但她知道這樣做不對，于是追上失主歸還了錢包。失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元。Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主看到她后，免費給了她一個紅蘋果。Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.這個故事展示了Kitty的善良、誠實和對母親的關(guān)愛，以及善良行為帶來的積極影響.故事山分析引入：Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.上升：Kitty在學(xué)校心不在焉，放學(xué)后撿到了一個錢包，想要用里面的錢為母親買蘋果.高潮：Kitty決定歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.下降：Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果.結(jié)局：Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆感受到了溫暖和幸福.伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Kitty用失主給的一美元去商店買蘋果，最終店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果，實現(xiàn)了她為母親買蘋果的愿望.伏筆：Kitty的母親生病了，家里非常冷清.回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.伏筆：Kitty在學(xué)校心不在焉，犯了很多錯誤.回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Kitty放學(xué)后撿到了錢包，面對金錢的誘惑，她選擇了誠實，體現(xiàn)了她的善良和對母親的關(guān)愛.伏筆：Kitty撿到了一個錢包，里面有很多錢.回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Kitty歸還了錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元，這筆錢幫助她實現(xiàn)了為母親買蘋果的愿望.伏筆：Kitty的母親是一位貧窮的裁縫，家里經(jīng)濟困難.回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，Kitty用失主給的一美元去商店買蘋果，體現(xiàn)了她對母親的關(guān)愛和對家庭的責(zé)任感.續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：Kitty歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.第二段：Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果，她把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興.情感線Kitty對母親的關(guān)愛貫穿整個故事，她看到紅蘋果時，首先想到的是生病的母親，希望能為她買一個。在學(xué)校心不在焉，也是因為擔(dān)心母親。撿到錢包后，盡管她很想用里面的錢為母親買蘋果和其他必需品，但她選擇了誠實，歸還了錢包。失主給的一美元和店主免費給的紅蘋果，讓她實現(xiàn)了為母親買蘋果的愿望，母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福，這種情感的傳遞和回報，展現(xiàn)了善良和愛的力量.故事線Kitty看到商店櫥窗里的紅蘋果，想起了生病的母親.Kitty在學(xué)校心不在焉，放學(xué)后撿到了一個錢包.Kitty歸還錢包，失主為了獎勵她的誠實，給了她一美元.Kitty拿著錢去商店，店主免費給了她一個紅蘋果.Kitty把蘋果帶回家，母親非常高興.母女倆在寒冷的家中感受到了一絲溫暖和幸福.主旨升華句Kindnessandhonestycanbringunexpectedjoyandwarmthtoourlives.Caringforothers,especiallyourlovedones,isapowerfulsourceofhappiness.Smallactsofgoodnesscanhaveasignificantimpactonthosearoundus.Theloveandcompassionweshowtoothersoftencomebacktousinunexpectedways.Indifficulttimes,thesupportandcarefromfamilyandotherscanmakeaworldofdifference.兩篇寫作示范寫作示范一Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Shecaughtupwithhimandsaid,"Sir,youdroppedyourwallet."Themanturnedaround,surprised,andlookedatKitty.Hewastouchedbyherhonestyandsaid,"Thankyou,littlegirl.You'reverykind.Here,takethisdollarasarewardforyourhonesty."Kittysmiledandthankedhim,feelingproudofherselffordoingtherightthing.Shecontinuedonherwayhome,thinkingabouthowshecouldusethedollartobuysomethingforhermother.Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.Hegreetedherwarmlyandasked,"WhatcanIdoforyoutoday,Kitty?"Shereplied,"Ihaveadollar,andI'dliketobuyaredappleformymother."Thestoreownersmiledandsaid,"Ofcourse,youcanhaveoneforfree.I'mgladtoseeyou'resuchacaringandhonestgirl."Hehandedherabeautifulredapple,andKittythankedhimgratefully.Asshewalkedhome,shefelthappyandexcitedtosurprisehermotherwiththeapple.Whenshearrived,shepresentedtheappletohermother,whowasoverjoyedandhuggedKittytightly.Thesimpleactofkindnesshadbroughtamomentofhappinessandwarmthtotheircoldandcheerlesshome.寫作示范二Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Shecaughtupwithhimandsaid,"Sir,youdroppedyourwallet."Themanturnedaround,surprised,andlookedatKitty.Hewasimpressedbyherhonestyandsaid,"Thankyou,littlegirl.You'reverykind.Here,takethisdollarasarewardforyourhonesty."Kittysmiledandthankedhim,feelingproudofherselffordoingtherightthing.Shecontinuedonherwayhome,thinkingabouthowshecouldusethedollartobuysomethingforhermother.Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.Hegreetedherwarmlyandasked,"WhatcanIdoforyoutoday,Kitty?"Shereplied,"Ihaveadollar,andI'dliketobuyaredappleformymother."Thestoreownersmiledandsaid,"Ofcourse,youcanhaveoneforfree.I'mgladtoseeyou'resuchacaringandhonestgirl."Hehandedherabeautifulredapple,andKittythankedhimgratefully.Asshewalkedhome,shefelthappyandexcitedtosurprisehermotherwiththeapple.Whenshearrived,shepresentedtheappletohermother,whowasoverjoyedandhuggedKittytightly.Thesimpleactofkindnesshadbroughtamomentofhappinessandwarmthtotheircoldandcheerlesshome.【參考范文】Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Touchinghimonthearm,

shesaid,“Please,sir.Youdroppedyourwallet.”“Thankyou,dear,”saidthegentleman,takingthewallet.Then,noticinghowpoorlydressedshewas,hesaid,“Whydidn’tyoukeepthewallet,mychild?”“Thatwouldbestealing,”repliedKitty.“But,”shecontinuedhonestly,“beforeIthoughtImustgiveitbacktoyou,IdidwishIcouldkeepit,forthenIcouldbuyMammaaredapple.”Hearingthis,themanhandedheradollarandsaid,“Youareagoodgir