讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+小狗+Spider+歸家記+講義 高三下學(xué)期2月聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwaseightyearsoldwhenmyfamilymovedfromTowoombatoEnglandin1950.MymotherwassufferingfromararediseaseandhadtotaketreatmentinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fathersenthisfive-year-oldredheeler(Australiancattledog),Spider,whowaslovedbyusall,tohisfriendSandy,asSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Wedidn’tknowhowlongmymother’streatmentwouldtakeorhowlongwewouldbeaway.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather’sfaceashereadthisnews.MymotherandItriedtocomforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.Sandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany“sightings”,thedogwasneverfound.ItseemedSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Myfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecrethopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandmyfatherimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Herepeatedcallstothepeoplewhohadsaidtheyhadseenhisdog,butitturnedouttobeclueless.Onecoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning,eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromGinGin,375kilometersfromToowoomba.Anelderlyladylivingonherownwasputtingfoodout“foraveryoldyellowdog”.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.Immediatelywesetoff.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtheoldhousebesidethebush(灌木叢).Sadly,theladytoldmyfatherthatthedoghadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadanupsetlookinhiseyes.HeputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意1950年，作者8歲時(shí)全家從澳大利亞的圖文巴搬去英國(guó)，因母親要在倫敦接受罕見(jiàn)病治療。出發(fā)前，父親把心愛(ài)的5歲紅色牧牛犬Spider交給朋友Sandy照顧。六周后，Sandy來(lái)信告知Spider在他們乘船離開(kāi)兩周后跑丟了。盡管多方尋找，一直無(wú)果。兩年后全家回到澳大利亞，父親立刻開(kāi)始尋找Spider。八個(gè)月后的一個(gè)寒冷冬日，父親接到375公里外金金鎮(zhèn)一位老婦人的電話，說(shuō)有只很老的黃狗來(lái)吃食已有幾周。全家立刻前往，可惜到達(dá)時(shí)老婦人說(shuō)狗已經(jīng)幾天沒(méi)來(lái)了。父親吹起為Spider特制的口哨。故事山分析開(kāi)端：全家因母親治病搬去英國(guó)，Spider被托付給朋友。發(fā)展：Spider跑丟，多方尋找無(wú)果。高潮：全家回國(guó)后父親繼續(xù)尋找，接到老婦人電話前往卻得知狗已幾天未出現(xiàn)，父親吹口哨。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫(xiě)）：期待小狗Spider出現(xiàn)，與家人團(tuán)聚。五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)“Spider,whowaslovedbyusall”——回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中家人對(duì)Spider的關(guān)愛(ài)體現(xiàn)在找到它后的精心照顧，如為它清理、陪伴它恢復(fù)?！癝andyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany‘sightings’,thedogwasneverfound.”——回應(yīng)：暗示小狗一直在流浪尋找主人，續(xù)寫(xiě)中可體現(xiàn)小狗歷經(jīng)艱難最終找到主人?！癕yfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.”——回應(yīng)：找到小狗時(shí)它可能又瘦又虛弱，體現(xiàn)父親之前擔(dān)憂的合理性?！癘necoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning”——回應(yīng)：可描述小狗在寒冷環(huán)境下的狀態(tài)，如瑟瑟發(fā)抖，更凸顯找到它后的溫暖?！癏eputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.”——回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲有反應(yīng)，如從灌木叢中跑出來(lái)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲后的反應(yīng)，從灌木叢中出現(xiàn)的樣子，如身體狀況、動(dòng)作等，以及家人看到小狗時(shí)的激動(dòng)表現(xiàn)。第二段：描述帶小狗回家后的情景，如為它清理、喂食，小狗逐漸恢復(fù)精神，家人與小狗相處的溫馨畫(huà)面，體現(xiàn)團(tuán)聚的喜悅。情感線（150字）開(kāi)始時(shí)家人因可能找不到Spider而失落、擔(dān)憂。當(dāng)聽(tīng)到灌木叢中的聲音，希望瞬間燃起?？吹絊pider出現(xiàn)，激動(dòng)與喜悅涌上心頭。帶它回家后，滿心都是對(duì)它的心疼與關(guān)愛(ài)，在照顧過(guò)程中，家庭的溫暖和對(duì)Spider失而復(fù)得的珍惜之情愈發(fā)濃烈，最終洋溢著幸福與滿足。故事線（6條）小狗聽(tīng)到口哨聲從灌木叢中出現(xiàn)。家人看到小狗，父親沖過(guò)去抱住它。家人發(fā)現(xiàn)小狗的身體狀況很差。帶小狗回家，為它清理身體。給小狗喂食，小狗逐漸恢復(fù)精神。小狗與家人重新建立親密關(guān)系，快樂(lè)生活。主旨升華句5句英文Thisreunionofthedogandourfamilyshowsthatthepowerofloveandloyaltycanovercomeanydistanceandhardship.（小狗與我們家庭的團(tuán)聚表明，愛(ài)與忠誠(chéng)的力量能夠戰(zhàn)勝任何距離和艱難。）Thelong-awaitedreturnofSpiderremindsusthathopeneverfades,nomatterhowdesperatethesituationmayseem.（Spider的遲遲歸來(lái)提醒我們，無(wú)論情況看起來(lái)多么絕望，希望永不消逝。）Throughthisexperience,weunderstandthatthebondsbetweenhumansandanimalsaredeep-rootedandcanwithstandthetestoftime.（通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷，我們明白人類(lèi)與動(dòng)物之間的紐帶是根深蒂固的，能夠經(jīng)受住時(shí)間的考驗(yàn)。）Spider'sjourneybackhomeisabeautifulstoryofperseveranceandtheunbreakableconnectionbetweenfamilymembers,evenifoneofthemisapet.（Spider回家的旅程是一個(gè)關(guān)于堅(jiān)持不懈以及家庭成員之間牢不可破聯(lián)系的美好故事，即使其中一員是寵物。）ThereunionofSpiderandourfamilywarmsourheartsandteachesusthevalueofnevergivinguponthosewelove.（Spider與我們家庭的團(tuán)聚溫暖了我們的心，教會(huì)我們永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄我們所愛(ài)的人的價(jià)值。）寫(xiě)作示范范文一

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Askinny,dirtyfigureemergedslowly.ItwasSpider!Hisfurwasmatted,andhisbodywasshaking,butassoonashesawmyfather,histailbegantowagfeebly.Myfatherrushedtowardshim,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Hekneltdownandopenedhisarmswide.Spiderlimpedintohisembrace,whiningsoftly.Wewerealloverjoyed,huggingeachotherandcryingwithhappiness.

Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Wefilledatubwithwarmwaterandcarefullywashedawaythedirt.Fatherfedhimsmallamountsofsoftfood,andSpidergobbledituphungrily.Overthenextfewdays,Spiderregainedhisstrength.Hefollowedmyfathereverywhere,andourhomewasfilledwithhischeerfulbarksagain.Thisreunionwasatruemiracle,atestamenttotheunbreakablebondbetweenusandourbelovedpet.范文二

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Aweakandragged-lookingSpiderstumbledout.Hiseyeslitupwhenheheardthewhistleandsawmyfather.Hetriedtorunbuthislegsweretooweak.MymotherandIrushedtohim,gentlyliftinghimup.Myfather'shandstrembledashestrokedSpider'shead.Wecouldseethescarsofhislongjourneyonhisbody.

Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Weusedasoftbrushtountanglehismattedfurandappliedointmenttohiswounds.Spideratethefoodweofferedwithgusto.Daybyday,hegrewstronger.Heplayedwithusintheyard,andthelovethathadbeenmissingforsolongwasbackinourhome.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatloveandpatiencecanbringbackwhatseemslostforever.【答案】Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush