河南省周口市鹿邑縣第二高級中學(xué)校高二下學(xué)期4月月考英語試題讀后續(xù)寫-與愛犬的失而復(fù)得講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onawintermorning,wepiledintoourcarandheadedouttothecountykennel(養(yǎng)狗場),Weweregoingtogetadog.Ipressedmynoseagainstthecarwindowandwonderedwhathewouldbelike.Wouldheshakehands,rolloverandrunafterlittleanimalsinthewoods?Eachpassingfencepostdrewmenearertomydreamdog.Asourfamilywalkedintothekennel,amongthechaosandnoise,silencecaughtmyeye.Hewassittingquietlyandconfidentlyinacornercage.WhenIapproached,heliftedoneofhisfeetbetweenthebars,andItoucheditcarefully.Ahandwrittensignatthetopofhiscageread,“Shepherd(牧羊犬)”.Tenminuteslater,hewassittinginthebackseatofourcar.“HisnameisFritz,”mymotherannouncedthatnightasweputadogcollararoundhisneckwithourphonenumberandhisnameonit.Fritzadjustedquicklytolifeinhisnewhome.Wheneverguestsarrived,hewouldrunouttogreetthem.Whenwetookourafternoonwalks,hewasacheerfulpanion.ThehighlightofhisdaywaswhenIcameback,racingthroughthefrontdoorafterschool.Hewouldslidethroughtheentrywayandthenjumpintomyarmsasifhehadjustwonagreatprize.OneFridayafternoon,myfatherdeclaredthatweweregoingoutforthenight.EachyearwetookajourneyacrossthemountainstohishometownofKnoxville,Kentucky,foradayofsightseeing.Asweloadedupthecar,myfathertoldmethatthehotelwherewewouldbestayingdidnotallowdogsin.Therefore,Fritzwasn’tgoingwithus.Asourcarpulledaway,Fritzwatchedfromtheedgeoftheyardwithhistailwavingquickly,asiftosay,“Whyareyouleavingmealone?”Anyway,wesetout.Thenextdaywhenwecamebackhome,itwasalready6pm.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraphl:Nightfell,buttherewasnosignofFritz._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Twoweekslater,acallfromamanbroughtusthegreatnews.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本主旨本文講述了一個(gè)家庭收養(yǎng)了一只名叫Fritz的狗，并與它建立了深厚的感情。然而，在一次外出旅行時(shí)，由于酒店不允許帶狗，F(xiàn)ritz被留在了家中。當(dāng)他們回到家時(shí)，F(xiàn)ritz卻不見了。故事通過Fritz的失蹤和最終的回歸，展現(xiàn)了人與寵物之間深厚的情感紐帶以及家庭成員對寵物的關(guān)愛和擔(dān)憂。二、五要素分析1.

人物（Characters）敘述者（我）：故事的講述者，對Fritz有著深厚的感情。Fritz：一只牧羊犬，家庭的新成員，性格友好且忠誠。母親：給Fritz起名字并為它戴上項(xiàng)圈。父親：決定帶家人去肯塔基州的家鄉(xiāng)旅行。其他家庭成員：未具體提及，但通過敘述可以感受到家庭成員對Fritz的關(guān)心。2.

時(shí)間（Time）時(shí)間背景：冬季的一個(gè)周末，家庭計(jì)劃外出旅行。3.

地點(diǎn)（Place）主要地點(diǎn)：家庭的住所、養(yǎng)狗場、肯塔基州的家鄉(xiāng)、酒店。4.

事件（Event）主要事件：家庭收養(yǎng)了Fritz，F(xiàn)ritz與家庭建立了深厚的感情，但在一次旅行中被留在家中，最終失蹤。5.

原因（Reason）原因：酒店不允許帶狗，所以Fritz被留在家中，導(dǎo)致它失蹤。三、詞匯積累名詞kennel（養(yǎng)狗場）Shepherd（牧羊犬）collar（項(xiàng)圈）phonenumber（號碼）panionship（陪伴）hotel（酒店）hometown（家鄉(xiāng)）prize（獎(jiǎng)品）sign（標(biāo)志）guests（客人）mountains（山脈）sightseeing（觀光）missing（失蹤）call（）reunion（團(tuán)聚）search（搜尋）anxiety（焦慮）relief（寬慰）動(dòng)詞pileinto（擠進(jìn)）approach（靠近）adjust（適應(yīng)）greet（問候）racethrough（快速穿過）slidethrough（滑過）declare（宣布）loadup（裝載）wave（搖擺）disappear（消失）searchfor（尋找）call（打）return（返回）reunite（團(tuán)聚）worry（擔(dān)心）fort（安慰）notice（注意到）realize（意識到）形容詞quietly（安靜地）confidently（自信地）cheerful（愉快的）missing（失蹤的）anxious（焦慮的）relieved（寬慰的）happy（高興的）loyal（忠誠的）friendly（友好的）sad（悲傷的）excited（興奮的）confused（困惑的）safe（安全的）lost（迷失的）found（找到的）secure（安全的）hopeful（充滿希望的）desperate（絕望的）四、續(xù)寫分析（一）銜接句Nightfell,buttherewasnosignofFritz.（夜幕降臨，但Fritz仍然沒有出現(xiàn)。）這句話直接點(diǎn)明了Fritz的失蹤，為續(xù)寫部分設(shè)置了懸念和情感沖突。Twoweekslater,acallfromamanbroughtusthegreatnews.（兩周后，一個(gè)男人的帶來了好消息。）這句話引入了新的情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，為Fritz的回歸提供了希望。（二）情節(jié)合理性Fritz的失蹤：由于Fritz被留在家中，它可能會(huì)因?yàn)榻箲]或?qū)ふ抑魅硕x開家，這種情節(jié)在現(xiàn)實(shí)中是合理的。尋找Fritz：家庭成員會(huì)感到焦慮并開始尋找Fritz，這是自然的情感反應(yīng)。帶來的消息：兩周后接到，說明有人發(fā)現(xiàn)了Fritz并聯(lián)系了家庭，這種情節(jié)合理且符合邏輯。（三）情感鋪墊焦慮與擔(dān)憂：Fritz的失蹤會(huì)讓家庭成員感到焦慮和擔(dān)憂，這種情感需要在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)。希望與寬慰：帶來的消息會(huì)帶來希望和寬慰，這種情感轉(zhuǎn)變需要通過續(xù)寫來合理展開。團(tuán)聚的喜悅：Fritz最終回歸，家庭成員會(huì)感到無比的喜悅和寬慰，這種情感需要在續(xù)寫中達(dá)到高潮。五、情感走向焦慮與擔(dān)憂：Fritz失蹤后，家庭成員感到焦慮和擔(dān)憂。希望與寬慰：接到后，家庭成員感到希望和寬慰。團(tuán)聚的喜悅：Fritz最終回歸，家庭成員感到無比的喜悅和寬慰。六、主題深化人與寵物的情感紐帶：通過Fritz的失蹤和回歸，展現(xiàn)了人與寵物之間深厚的情感紐帶。家庭的關(guān)愛與責(zé)任：家庭成員對Fritz的關(guān)心和尋找體現(xiàn)了家庭的責(zé)任感和關(guān)愛。希望與堅(jiān)持：即使在困難和焦慮的情況下，家庭成員仍然保持希望并堅(jiān)持尋找Fritz，最終得到了回報(bào)。七、下水文（一）版本一Paragraph1:Nightfell,buttherewasnosignofFritz.Wesearchedtheneighborhood,callinghisnameandhopinghewoulderunning.Butasthehourspassed,hopebegantofade.Fritzhadneverbeengonethislongbefore.Myfathertriedtofortus,sayingFritzwasprobablyjustexploringandwouldbebacksoon.Butdeepdown,wewereallworried.Wecouldn'tsleepthatnight,constantlycheckingthefrontdoor,hopingtoseeFritz'sfamiliarface.Paragraph2:Twoweekslater,acallfromamanbroughtusthegreatnews.HehadfoundFritzwanderingnearaparkandrecognizedthephonenumberonhiscollar.Werushedtopickhimup,andthemomentwesawFritz,ourheartsfilledwithreliefandjoy.Helookedabitthinbutwasotherwisefine.Assoonashesawus,heranstraightintomyarms,wagginghistailfuriously.Wewereoverjoyedtohavehimback.Fritz'sreturntaughtustheimportanceofnevergivinguphopeandtheincrediblebondbetweenhumansandtheirpets.（二）版本二Paragraph1:Nightfell,buttherewasnosignofFritz.Wescouredthearea,callingouthisnameandcheckingeverypossiblehidingspot.ButFritzwasnowheretobefound.Thelongerhewasgone,themoreanxiouswebecame.Fritzhadalwaysbeenaloyalandfriendlydog,andwecouldn'timaginewhathadhappenedtohim.Westayeduplate,hopinghewouldfindhiswaybackhome.Butasthenightworeon,wecouldn'tshakethefeelingthatsomethingwaswrong.Paragraph2:Twoweekslater,acallfromamanbroughtusthegreatnews.HehadfoundFritznearabusyroadandhadtakenhimtoanearbyshelter.WhenhesawFritz'scollarwithourphonenumber,hecalledusimmediately.Wewereoverjoyedandcouldn'tthankhimenough.WhenwefinallysawFritzagain,helookedabitscaredbutwasotherwiseokay.Heranstraighttous,andwehuggedhimtightly,tearsofreliefstreamingdownourfaces.Fritz'sreturnwasamiracle,anditremindedusofthepowerofhopeandtheunbreakablebondwesharewithourbelovedpets.讀后續(xù)寫參考答案NightfellbuttherewasstillnosignofFritz.Wewentfromneighbortoneighbor,housetohouse.Eachshakeoftheheaddrovemetodespair.“Please,bringFritzhomesafe,”Iwishedlyin