期中作文合集講解及補(bǔ)全對(duì)話重點(diǎn)句型人教版八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)

八年級(jí)下冊(cè)必背作文（含作文解析）2.用微笑播撒陽(yáng)光，用行動(dòng)踐行夢(mèng)想，用無(wú)形的精神感染身邊的每一個(gè)人——這就是“陽(yáng)光少年”。假如你是李明，你校舉辦“向陽(yáng)光少年學(xué)習(xí)”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以“Asunshineteenager”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹一位你身邊的“陽(yáng)光少年”高飛。

要點(diǎn)：

1.善良友好，樂(lè)于助人，與人相處融洽（如：去敬老院為老人讀報(bào)、打掃房間、洗衣服）；

2.不怕困難，勤奮好學(xué)，喜歡讀書(shū)；

3.性格外向，積極參加各種文體活動(dòng)（如：與同學(xué)踢球、參加各種俱樂(lè)部）。

要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；

2.80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：getonwellwith;takeanactivepartin

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ASunshineTeenager

Hello!I'mLiMing.Ourschoolhadanactivitycalled"Learnfromsunshineteenagers"._________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Hello!I'mLiMing.Ourschoolhadanactivitycalled"Learnfromsunshineteenagers".Therearemanysunshineteenagersaroundus.

GaoFeiisoneofthem.Heisakindandfriendlyboywhogetsonwellwithothers.HeusuallygoestotheOldPeople'sHometoreadsomenewspaperstotheoldpeople,cleantheroomsanddosomewashing.Besides,heisn'tafraidofdifficulties.Wheneverhemeetstroubles,hetriestodealwiththem.Henotonlyworkshardbutalsolikesreading.Also,heissooutgoingthathetakesanactivepartinallkindsofschoolactivities,suchasplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesandjoininglotsofclubs.

GaoFeiisagoodsunshineteenager.Ishouldlearnfromhim.?【解析】【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本文是一篇提綱作文，寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)用第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞過(guò)渡，使文章更有層次，注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和單詞的拼寫(xiě)。

【亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)】

1.oneof……之一

2.dosomewashing洗衣服

3.takesanactivepartin積極參加

【高分句型】

1.?Heisakindandfriendlyboywhogetsonwellwithothers.（who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

2.Also,heissooutgoingthathetakesanactivepartinallkindsofschoolactivities.(so...that...如此……以致于……，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)3.十，一百，一千，一萬(wàn)……即使有再多的零，沒(méi)有了一，一切都?xì)w零。在我們的生活中，如果沒(méi)有了健康，財(cái)富、地位等也都失去了意義。請(qǐng)以“Waystokeephealthy”為題，參照下圖的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章。注意：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、字跡工整、行文流暢、語(yǔ)句通順；(2)詞數(shù)：80左右。Waystokeephealthy_________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WaystokeephealthyAsfarasweknow,itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.Herearesomewaystokeephealthy.Firstly,Ithinkwemusthaveenoughhealthyfood.Breakfastisnecessary.Itgivesenergytoourbodies.Wemustalsohavetherightkindsoffood.Remembertoeatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofjunkfood.Secondly,it?snecessaryforustodoexercise.Ithelpsusbeactiveandstrong.Thirdly,neverstayuplate.Ifwecan?tgetenoughsleep,thewholebodywillworkslowly.Asthesayinggoes,“Earlytobedandearlytorisemakeamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.”Lastly,learningtoreducepressureisalsoimportanttoourhealth.IfinditrelaxingtolistentosomesoftmusicwhenIfeelbad.Followtheways,andyouwillbehealthy!4.假如你校將開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū)，促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。請(qǐng)參考表格內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)。讀書(shū)的意義

1.獲取知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊視野；2.使人愉悅；

3.（自擬一點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)狀

1.作業(yè)多,無(wú)良好讀書(shū)習(xí)慣；2.電視和

網(wǎng)絡(luò)占時(shí)多

倡議

(至少兩點(diǎn))

要求：（1）要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使句子通順、連貫。

（2）正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。

（3）80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends,

Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife.

Asaresult,wecanhaveabetterfuture.【答案】Dearfriends,

Readingisveryimportantinourdailylife.

Firstofall,readingcanhelpusgetknowledgefromallkindsofbooks.Itcanalsohelptoopenupawholenewworldtous.Second,readingcanmakeuscleverandhappy.Itisgoodforourstudyanditcanhelpusgrowup.Third,readingcanhelpusthinkmoreandfurtherandmakeourlifemorecolorful.

However,thereisusuallysomuchhomeworkforustodothatwedon'thaveenoughtimeforreading.Moreover,someofusdon'thaveagoodhabitofreadingandoftenspendtoomuchtimewatchingTVandsurfingtheInternet.

Inmyopinion,ourschoolcanhavea"ReadingWeek"onceaterm.Teachersshouldencouragestudentstoborrowbooksfromthelibrary.Wemustspendmoretimereadingsomeusefulbooks.

???????Asaresult,wecanhaveabetterfuture.

5.健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：健康飲食；早睡早起，不熬夜；參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。參考詞匯：熬夜stayup；增進(jìn)，加強(qiáng)buildup要求：(1)條理清晰，把握要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，卷面整潔；(3)80詞左右。

Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportantforus._________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportantforus.

Allofuswanttobehealthy.First,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,weshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.Weshouldeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeat.Besides,weshoulddrinkalotofwatereveryday.Third,weshoulddomoreexercisetobuildupourbodies.Finally,weshouldwashourhandsbeforemealsandbrushourteethtwiceaday.

Ifwedon?tfeelwell,weshouldgotoseethedoctoratonce.6.請(qǐng)以“Anunforgettableexperience"為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你上個(gè)月去武漢旅行的經(jīng)過(guò)。

???????

要求：80詞左右。

提示：

(1)上個(gè)月，你和父母一起乘火車(chē)去武漢；

(2)火車(chē)上非常舒適，可以看到窗外的美麗景色（scenery).你們一共花了大約三個(gè)小時(shí)到達(dá)武漢；

(3)武漢是中國(guó)最大的城市之一。有許多名勝古跡（placeofinterest)，特別以東湖（EastLake）出名，你們參觀了東湖，湖邊有許多花和樹(shù)，在那里拍了照片；

(4)你的感想。

Anunforgettableexperience

_______________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Anunforgettableexperience

Lastmonth,myparentsandIwenttoWuhanbytrain.Thetrainwasquitefortable.Wecouldseethebeautifulsceneryoutofthewindow.Ittookusabout3hourstoreachWuhan.WuhanisoneofthebiggestcitiesinChina.

TherearemanyplacesofinterestinWuhan,andit'sfamousfortheEastLake.Therearesomanytreesandflowersbythelake.Wevisitedit,andtooksomepicturesthere.WehadawonderfultimeinWuhan.【解析】【思路點(diǎn)撥】

動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，根據(jù)所給漢語(yǔ)提示可知，本文可以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)的句子來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞和句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些連詞、短語(yǔ)和固定句型，使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)】

1.oneofthebiggestcities最大的城市之一；

2.placesofinterest名勝古跡；

3.be

famous

for因……而出名。

【高分句型】

1.Ittookusabout3hourstoreachWuhan.我們花了大約3個(gè)小時(shí)才到達(dá)武漢。It

takes/tooksb.todosth.花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事，基本句型。

2.Therearesomanytreesandflowersbythelake.therebe句型。9.假如你是Jack，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)70左右。提示：你在英國(guó)的朋友Kate發(fā)燒了并且頭疼。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，并告訴她做如下事情：(1)看醫(yī)生；(2)吃健康的食物；(3)多吃水果和蔬菜；(4)有充足的睡眠；(5)保持快樂(lè)?！敬鸢浮緿earKate,Iamsorrytohearthatyouareill.Youhaveafeverandaheadache.Youshouldseeadoctorfirst.Then,youshoulddrinkmorewaterandeathealthyfood,andhavemorefruitandvegetables.Youshouldgetenoughsleepandstayhappy.Youshouldn?tstudywhenyouaretootired.It?snotgoodforyourhealth.Ihopeyou?llbebettersoon.Yours,Jack【解析】[思路點(diǎn)撥](1)時(shí)態(tài)：確定寫(xiě)作所用時(shí)態(tài)，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)為主。(2)人稱(chēng)：用第二人稱(chēng)。[寫(xiě)作提綱]Unit1單元寫(xiě)作練筆2健康的身體是中學(xué)生有效學(xué)習(xí)的保證，但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)搶走了我們的鍛煉時(shí)間，垃圾食品威脅著我們的健康。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，以“HowtoKeepHealthy”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括:1.堅(jiān)持鍛煉;2.健康飲食;3.合理上網(wǎng);4.保證充足的睡眠:保持愉快的心情要求:1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名范文：HowtoKeepHealthyIt'simportantforustokeephealthy.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldhaveahealthylifestyle,Hereissomeadvice.First,weshoulddoexerciseatleastonehouraday,suchasrunningandwalking.Second,haveahealthydiet,Eatmorefruitandvegetables,Trynottoeatjunkfood.Third,weshouldn'tspendtoomuchtimegoingonline.Itisbadforoureyesandstudy.Fourth,gotobedearlyanddon'tstayuptoolate,becauseenoughsleepisgoodforourhealth.Finally,behappyaspossibleaswecan.Learntosmileatourselvesatanytime.Ifwedoso,Ibelievewecankeephealthy.Unit2與志愿者有關(guān)的話題假設(shè)你是李明,本周班會(huì)上,你將代表老師用英語(yǔ)通知同學(xué)們參加一次敬老院的公益活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:1.星期天早上8:30在校門(mén)口集合,乘坐公共汽車(chē)前往;2.給老人們贈(zèng)送禮物;3.打掃衛(wèi)生,整理房間4.唱歌、跳舞、講故事、聊天,給老人們帶快樂(lè);5.活動(dòng)很有意義,希望積極參與公益活司(welfareactivities)要求:1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。范文：Fellowstudents,Wewillpayavisittotheoldpeople'shomethisSunday.We'llhavetomeetattheschoolgateat8:30onSundaymorningandthengotherebybus.Therewewilldosomecleaningandtidytherooms.Afterthatwewillhavemanyactivities,suchassinging,dancing,tellingstoriesandchattingtocheeruptheold.Beforeweleave,we'llgiveourpresentstothem.Ihopeallofuscantakeanactivepartinpublicwelfareactivities.Throughthemeaningfulactivitywecanlearntocarefortheold.That'sall,Thankyou.Unit3與獨(dú)立性有關(guān)的話題Unit3單元寫(xiě)作練筆1下周你們班將舉行一次班會(huì),主題為“如何培養(yǎng)我們的獨(dú)立性”。請(qǐng)你圍繞這一主題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名范文：Hello,everyone!Nowourparentshelpusdotoomanythings.Thatmakesusdependonthemtoomuch,Soitisnecessaryforustodevelopourindependence,Hereissomeadvice.First,doourownthings.Weshouldfinishourhomeworkindependentlyandmakeastudyplancarefully.Second,helpourparentstodochoresathome.Doinghouseworkcanteachushowtolookafterourselves,Third,solvesomeproblemsbyourselves.Wecanalsoimproveourabilitytosolveproblems.Ibelieveifwecandothesethings,wewillbemoreindependent.That'sall.Thankyou!Unit4單元寫(xiě)作練筆2假如你是朱海,你的朋友李然給你發(fā)郵件說(shuō)他最近很不開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的提示給李然回一封電子郵件,并給他提一些建議，內(nèi)容包括.問(wèn)題:家庭作業(yè)多·幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間休息·壓力大·經(jīng)常感到緊張建議:制訂合理的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃·找到適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法·學(xué)會(huì)放松·多與父母、老師或朋友交談范文：Iamsorrytoknowthatyouareunhappythesedays.Yousayyouhavetoomuchhomeworkeverydayandhavelittletimetorest.What'sworse,youoftenfeelnervousbecauseofgreatpressure.Nowletmegiveyousomeadvice.First,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyourstudyandtrytofindyourownwaysofstudying.Second,makethebestuseofyourtimeandtrytofindtimetorelax,suchaslisteningtolightmusicandgoingforawalk.Third,whynotmunicatemorewithyourparents,teachersorfriendswhenyoufeelnervous?Bymunicatingwithothers,wemayfeelbetter.Hopethingsworkout.Yours,ZhuHaiUnit5與曾發(fā)生的經(jīng)歷有關(guān)的話題某英文報(bào)社正在舉辦以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示投稿,講述自己最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷內(nèi)容包括:這件事發(fā)生的時(shí)間和場(chǎng)所;2.當(dāng)時(shí)你在做什么事;3.這件事為什么令你難忘。范文：AnUnforgettableExperienceOnOctoberlst,2023,Iplannedtotakethebustothetrainstation.WhenIwaswaitingforthebusatthebusstop,itbegantorainsuddenly.Unluckily,Iforgottotakemyumbrella.Istoodintherain,withtherainbeatingheavilyagainstmybody.Justatthattime,ataxistoppedandthedriverofferedtotakemetothetrainstation.lwassomovedthatI'llneverforgetthisexperience.Iamalwaysreadytohelpotherslikethatdriverfromthenon.去年期中模擬作文Isolvedthetrouble

Thereisnodoubtthateveryonemeetstroublesinlife.I’mnoexception(例外)\SodoI.WhattroubledmewasthatIusedtobeshy.Ialmostdidn’ttalktoothersinclassandseldomtookpartinafterschoolactivities.

Asaresult,Ihadtoomuchpressureatschool.IrealizedthatIhadtochangesinceIwasunhappyeveryday.SoIbegantomunicatemorewithmyclassmatesandtriedtojointhemafterclass.Ialsodidsportswithmyclassmates.SometimesIwentshoppingwithmyfriends.

Inthisway,IsolvedthetroubleandIbeemoreoutgoing.Isolvedthetrouble

Itgoeswithoutsayingthateveryonemeetstroublesinlife.I’mnoexception(例外)\SodoI.WhattroubledmewasthatmyparentsoftencaredaboutmygradesandIhadmuchpressurefromthem.

Asaresult,IfeltstressedoutandIcouldn’thelparguingwithmyparents.Irealizedtheimportanceofmakingachangesince(因?yàn)?thetroublemadetherelationshipbetweenmyparentsandmedifficult.SoIbegantospendsometimetalkingmoreaboutmystudyandpressurewithmyparentsandtriedtomakethemhaveabetterunderstandingofme.Ialsohelpedmyparentstodosomechores,whichhelpsdevelopmyindependenceandteachesmehowtolookaftermyselfwell.Nothingismoreimportantthanmunicating.IampleasedthatIsolvedthetroubleandnowIcangetalongwellwithmystudyandmyparents.Isolvedthetrouble

Thereisnodenyingthateveryonemeetstroublesinlife.I’mnoexception(例外)\SodoI.WhattroubledmewasthatIusedtoarguewithmyparentsandIcouldn’tgetonwellwiththem.

Asaresult,weoftengotsoangrywitheachotherthatwedidn’ttalktooneanotherforalongtime.IrealizedtheimportanceofchangingmyselfsincemyparentsandIwereunhappyeveryday.SoIbegantospendsometimemunicatingmorewithmyparentsandtriedtohaveabetterunderstandingofthem.Ialsohelpedmyparentstodosomechores,whichmademeindependent.OnlyinthiswaydidIimprovetherelationshipwithmyparents.

IamhappythatIsolvedthetroubleandnowIamgoodwithmyparents.補(bǔ)全對(duì)話考點(diǎn)句型U1What’sthematterwithsb?=What’swrongwithsb?=What’sthetroublewithsb?=Whathappenedtosb?Ihaveacold/haveafever/haveacough/haveaheadache/haveastomachache.Doyouhaveafever?Yes,Ido./No,Idon’t./Idon’tknow.3.Whathappened?4.WhatshouldI/he/shedo?5.ShouldItakemytemperature?/Didyoutakeyourtemperature?6.ShouldIputsomemedicineonit?7.Whatdidyoudoontheweekend?8.Canyougivemesomeadvice?9.Youshouldliedownandhavearest/Youshoulddrinkmorewater.10.OK.I’mgoingtofollowyouradvice.11.Haveagoodrest.12.Hopeyoucanget/feelbettersoon.13.Howlonghaveyoubeenlikethis?14.Iamsorrytohearthat./That’sbad.15.Haveyougotafever?16.HowsoonwillIfeelbetter/bewell?17.HowmanytimesdoItakethemedicineaday?U2WhatcanIdoforyou?/CanIhelpyou?Whatkindofvoluntaryworkwouldyouliketodo?Whatdidtheyaskyoutohelpoutwith?Youcouldhelptocleanupthecityparks.Anythingelse?Wouldyouliketo