2012梅州質(zhì)檢題能否在高三時(shí)期上網(wǎng) 評(píng)講.ppt

1、,Basic Writing,海豐仁榮中學(xué)劉先琴,第一部分 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作的推薦步驟：,一、認(rèn)真審題 二、歸納、整合信息點(diǎn) 三、確定短語(yǔ)和句型 四、連詞成句 五、組句成篇 六、檢查修改,（分配5句話的信息）,議論文,人稱：,時(shí)態(tài),一般過(guò)去時(shí),文體：,第三人稱（Xiao Ming his father）,觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次（三個(gè)層次） 第一：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，點(diǎn)明主題( one sentence) 點(diǎn)明即將要展開(kāi)闡述的話題。 第二：呈現(xiàn)觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明原因(three sentences) 呈現(xiàn)各人的觀點(diǎn)，闡明必要的理由和原因。注意層次。 第三：得出結(jié)論，發(fā)表評(píng)論(one sentence) 最后得出結(jié)論或是發(fā)表個(gè)

2、人看法總結(jié)。,引子,正方觀點(diǎn),反 方 觀 點(diǎn),小結(jié),適用于：不同/正反觀點(diǎn)； 變 化 類(lèi)；,三、確定短語(yǔ)和句型 四、連詞成句,把要點(diǎn)中能夠成完整意義的單個(gè)詞、詞組和重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)及信息作為翻譯或表達(dá)的對(duì)象，盡量用多種表達(dá)形式，激發(fā)思維，產(chǎn)生聯(lián)想，形成知識(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)。,運(yùn)用合適的句式、句型等把所表達(dá)出的信息或詞語(yǔ)組成意義相同或相近的多種語(yǔ)句。,1)小明與他父親就“能否在高三時(shí)期上網(wǎng)”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行討論，并且達(dá)成了協(xié)議。,表 達(dá) 詞 語(yǔ),就.進(jìn)行討論,上網(wǎng),Go online/ surf the internet,達(dá)成協(xié)議,Reach/come to/make an agreement,能否,Whether h

3、e can /can he/could he,連 詞 成 句,Xiaoming , a senior three student, had a discussion with his father on whether or not he could surf the Internet.,discuss sth. have a discussion with. on/about,高三時(shí)期,In/during senior three,1. A discussion about whether. in senior three was held between .,2. About/on the

4、 topic of “whether.”, Xiaoming and his father expressed their own opinions and at last got an agreement.,3. and had a discussion on and their opinions are as follows.,2）小明的觀點(diǎn)是網(wǎng)絡(luò)便于獲得信息，有利于放松心情。,表 達(dá) 詞 語(yǔ),連 詞 成 句,便于,be convenient /make it easy for sb. to,小明的觀點(diǎn)是,.hold the opinion .think/ believe /insist

5、that In ones opinion/viewpoint,獲得,Get/gain information,有利于,Be helpful/of great help to do,放松心情,Relax oneself/release our stress/ease oneself /relax their mind (mood),Xiaoming insisted that surfing the Internet was a convenient way to get information and the rich entertaining contents could bring him

6、 relaxation.,In Xiaomings opinion, it is not onlyfor to get information on the internet but also to relax himself.,2. A senior three student as I am, I insisted that surfing internet , contributing to was a good access to gain,3. Xiaoming would like to go online saying that surfing the internet make

7、s it easy for us to get,(3).但是小明的父親認(rèn)為高三學(xué)生有很多作業(yè)要做，上網(wǎng)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，容易送到不良影響。,表 達(dá) 詞 語(yǔ),連 詞 成 句,但是,But/however/on the contrary/unlike/,浪費(fèi),Waste/a waste of,影響,Effect/influence affect/influence,不良影響,Be harmed/do sb. harm / be affected by something bad online.,However, his father disagree with him because he thought

8、 that surfing the Internet was a complete waste of time and a Senior three student had a lot of homework to do. Furthermore, he was afraid that Xiao ming would be affected by the unhealthy information.,不同意,Disagree with/disapprove of/hold opposite opinion/didnt think so,Furthermore,表示關(guān)系的遞進(jìn),Whats mor

9、e/ in addition/ besides/ apart from /moreover/furthermore/,Compared withhis father held an opposed opinion because it takestime, leaving much fewer time to finish,3. His father considered it a waste of time going surf ,4. Xiaomings father thought there were so much for that they should not waste, wh

10、ich is easily.,2.His father saidand he was likely to be affected byif he spent much time .,4).協(xié)議要求小明平時(shí)不能上網(wǎng)，只能周末上網(wǎng),并且上網(wǎng)只能看新聞，文藝，體育類(lèi)網(wǎng)頁(yè)，不準(zhǔn)玩游戲。,表 達(dá) 詞 語(yǔ),連 詞 成 句,要求 .不能,Be requested/demanded not to,周末,Weekend at/on the weekend,Finally, they reached an agreement that Xiaoming could only surf the Internet a

11、t weekends for news, entertainment and sports programs but not games.,Be not allowed/be not permitted to,weekday,除了,Except/ but,看.網(wǎng)頁(yè),Look through/read through the website of/ .WebPages,不準(zhǔn),Be forbidden/ be not allowed/permitted,1. At last/eventually, they reached the agreement that only at weekend ca

12、n Xiaoming .,3. Xiaoming agreed that he would not play the computer except/but weekend and also promised that he only would read through the WebPages such as,4. The agreement also mentioned/ requested that games is also forbidden/not allowed/not permitted,5. He can only skim the information of news

13、, sports and the arts instead of the games.,2. They both agreed that,五、組句成篇,依據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，適當(dāng)添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞、連句成篇 根據(jù)具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要進(jìn)行語(yǔ)篇理順后，還要根據(jù)上下文、詞語(yǔ)等之間的關(guān)系和特點(diǎn)，添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞(Linking words)，才能完成短文寫(xiě)作。,Please find out the linking words I have used in this passage!,Xiaoming , a senior three student, had a discussion with his father on

14、whether or not he could surf the Internet. Xiaoming insisted that surfing the Internet was a convenient way to get information and the rich entertaining contents could bring him relaxation. However, his father disagree with him because he thought that surfing the Internet was a complete waste of time and a Senior three student had a lot of homework to do. Furthermore, he was afraid that Xiaoming would be affected by the unhealthy information.,Finally, they reached an agreement that Xi